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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesumm yaar luved it payal di u r rocking btw A VERY HAPPY B'DAY dear n eagerly waitin 4r pallavi's entryy plz update asap
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Next day :

Wedding day. Everyone excited and busy. Only dada is siting alone and is tensed.
Karan comes.

Kritika : Wow bhaiya aap to lagte hain bade Kool.
Palak : Haa humara yeh haal hain to bhabhi ka kyaa hoga.
Dadi : Lekin Kabir kahan hain.
Mahen : Haan woh humare yahah se nikalne ka waqt ho gaya hai.
Aarti : Kitney der lagayega.
Mukul : Kunal bhi gaayab hain.
Dada : Main aap sab se kuch kehnna chahta hoon ..Woh baat ..

Everyone is tensed. Before dada completes Kunal comes out wearing the Grooms dress. Everyone happy. Dada releived. Kunal does sign that now he will be Kabir.
Puts the Sehra on Kabirs ( Kunals )head. Mukul on Karans.

Mahen: Haa sab hain abh chale.
Palak : papa, woh Kunal Bhaiya kahan hain ?
Dada : Woh business start karne gaya hain.
Mahen : Dekha , paise milte hee chala gaya . Shaadi ke liyee bhi nahi ruka. Kitna Lalchi hain. .
Kunal ( Kabir ) feels bad.
Dada : Mahen hogi uske koi majboori, jaana pada hoga. Hum chalte hain.

Next Scene :

Wedding. Both the couples are getting married . Brides are blushing. Kunal ( Kabir ) is feeling bad seeing Shaina.

Kunal thinking (Kyaa main Shaina ke saath theek kar raha hoon, use dokha de raha hoon )

Pandit : Bete zaara haath aage karna Kanyadaan ke liyee.

Kunal ( Kabir ) hesitates. Dada realises. He signs Kunal to give his hand. Mihir Tulsi does the Kanyadaan.Vidaai also takes place.

Next Scene :

Dadi does the aarti and welcomes the Bride. Sunaina comes ahead.

Dadi : Thehro beti pehle Shaina aur Kunal ko aane do.

Sunaina does feel bad but doesn't show. They do all the Rasams and play the games. They put ring in colored water and Grooms and Brides search.
Sunaina wins.

Kritika : Oh Bhaiya . Aap to ban gaye Joru Ke Gulam.
Mukul : Bilkul apne baap par gaya hain.
Aarti : Kyaa kahan
Mukul : Kuch nahi.

And Kabir (Kunal) wins the round.

Palak : Wow bhabhi u have got a dominating husband.


Next Scene :

Suhaag raat.

Karan goes in. Sunaina is siting, blushing. Suddenly Karan faints and falls. Sunaina is shocked. Karan gets up and says " Kaisa raha mere acting". Sunaina and Karan hug each other.

Kabir ( Kunal ) goes in. Shaina is blushing.

Kabir ( Kunal ) : Woh main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon.
Shaina : Main bhi ...
Kunal ( Kabir ) : Kyaa.
Shaina : Woh main humesha se hi gharelu ladki rahi hoon, didi jaise nahi. Mujhe ghar mein rehna aur ghar ke kaam karna hi acha lagta hain. Lekin agar aap chahe to main ...
Kunal ( Kabir ) : Nahi nahi mujhe bhi gharelu ladkiyan hee pasand hain.
Shaina : Kyaa , aapne us din kahan tha ke ...
Kunal ( Kabir ) : Woh main
Shaina : Aap mere liyee badal rahe hain. Main kitnee Lucky hoon. Acha aap kuch kehna chahte thee.
Kunal ( Kabir ) : Kuch nahi ...

Shaina holds Kunal ( Kabir ) hand and he tries to go near her when his Consious says " yeh kyaa kar raha hain Kunal , yeh tumhare bhai ke hain, tumhare nahi, kaise chu sakta hain tu esse". Kunal ( Kabir ) leaves the room and goes. Shaina is surprised by his behavior.

Next Scene :

Kunal ( Kabir ) comes back. Shaina is getting ready.

Kunal ( Kabir ) : Woh main ...
Shaina : Kyaa.
Kunal ( Kabir ) : Main sorry kehne aaya thaa. Kal raat maine theek nahi kiya. Lekin humare shaadi achanak huee hain Karan aur Sunaina jaise hum ek dosre ko jaante bhi nahi hain aur ,,, Hume pehle dosti karne chaheye aur ek dosre ko jaana chaheyee.
Shaina : Aap bilkul theek keh rahe hain.

Next Scene

Dining Table, Everyone having Breakfast. Shaina comes.

Palak : Arey bhabhi aap , bhaiya kahah hain ?
Shaina : Woh office ke liyee nikal gayee.
Kritika : Aaj office , bahut jaldi uth gayee kyaa.
Palak: Arey soi hi nahi hongee.

Shaina blushes and girls laugh. Karan and Sunaina come.

Kritika : Good morning bhiaya bhabhi.
Palak : Kaise raha raat ...
Sunaina blushes.

Dadi comes.

Dadi : Baas bahut hua chalo breakfast karlo. Aaj Phagphere ki rasam hain Karan aur Kabir tumh dono ko kal jaakar bahuon ko lana hain.
Palak : Aree lekin aaj ki raat kaise kategee dadi.

Karan also leaves for office.

Next Scene :

Brides have come home for the Phagpheras. Everyone is happy. Devyani realises that Shaina is not as happy as Sunaina. When Shaina is alone.

Devyani : Shaina.
Shaina : Haa ma.
Devyani : Kyaa baat hain bete , tum khus to ho.
Shaina : Haa ma main bahut khus hoon, sabhi bahut achee hain
Devyani : Aur Kabir ???
Shaina : Kabirr haa haa woh bhi bahut achee hain.
Devyani : Sach keh rahe ho , apne ma se kuch chupa to nahi rahe ho na.
Shaina : Nahi ma woh thode se badle hue lag rahe hain .
Devyani : Nayee nayee rishtee main bande ho tum dono , dekhna waqt ke saath sab theek ho jaaega.

Next Scene :

Office. Kunal (Kabir) is siting reading a file. Dada comes in.

Dada : Kunal.
Kunal doesn't answer.
Dada : Kunal.
Kunal (Kabir) : Haa, haa dadaji.
Dada : Busy ho.
Kunal (Kabir) : Nahi woh main kuch pad raha tha.
Dada : file ULTE hain.
Kunal (Kabir) : Oh woh main...
Dada : Kyaa baat hain bete , aaj tum office jaldi aa gaye , maine kal raat tumhey Balcony main dekha ...
Kunal (Kabir ): Dada main woh ...
Dada : Tum Shaina ke saath aisa nainsaafi kyun kar rahe ho. Uske kyaa galtee hain.
Kunal (Kabir) : Dadaji, main Shaina ke Kareeb esliyee nahi jaa sakta kyunki mujhe aisa lagta hain ki woh mere bhai ke amanant hain esliyee,,,,
Dada : Shaina tere hain. Sirf tere . Shaadi tune ki thee uske saath.
Kunal (Kabir) : Lekin woh mujhe Kabir hee samajhte hain. Dadaji hume sabko sach bata dena chaheyee.
Dada : Bataiyege lekin sahi waqt aane par. Filhaal tu Shaina ko khus rakh aur haa kal use lene jaana hain tumhey.
Kunal (Kabir) : Jee dadaji.

Next Scene :

Singh House. Karan has come.

Rahul : Arey jeeju aap aaeye na.
Karan : Hi woh Sunaina.
Mihir : Aate hogi, aate hogi.

Sunaina and Shaina come.

Devyani : Woh Kabir nahi aaya.
Karan : Main factory gaya tha , kuch kaam tha , wahi se aaya hoon. Kabir aata hee hoga.

Just then Kunal also comes. Shaina was tensed , she feels releived.

Rahul : Lo dosre jeeju bhi aa gaye.
Devyani : Aao Kabir, kaise ho.
Kabir ( KUnal ): Theek hoon maji.

Next Scene :

Sikand house. After dinner. Everyone is siting togethere.

Palak : Waise bhailog aap dono Honeymoon par kaha jaane ke soch rahe hain.
Kritika : Main bataoo London jaana.
Palak : Nahi nahi Swizerland.
Dada : Haa abh tum charo kahen ghoom kar aao.
Karan : Dada , maine aur Kabir bhaiya ne yeh tai kiyaa tha ke hum sab jhoomne saath main jaaege taki parivaar ka saath ghomne ka maza ho. Hai na Kabir.
Kabir (Kunal) : Haa haa humsab ko saath main jaana chaheyee.
Karan : Arey humare Farm House hain na , Wahi chalte hain.
Palak : Dekh Lejeye bhabhi hum nahi chal rahe hain.
Kritika : Haa yeh hume le ja rahe hain.
Dada : To kaun kaun chalega.
Palak : Main
kritika : Main.
Mukul : Main.
Aarti : Aap bhi na ,
Karan : Nahi ma aapko bhi chalna hain.
Dadi : To theek hain kal subah, hum sab niklenge.

A voice is heard "Kahan jaane ki taiyaari ho rahe hain". All turn. Its Gauri (Pallavi for all Pallavi fans ).

Dadi : Arey Gauri bete tum yahah.

Gauri touches Dadis feet.

Dadi : Kaise ho,
Gauri : Theek ho dadi.
Dada: Shaadi main kyun nahi aaye.
Gauri : Woh mere exams thee.
Dadi : Woh rahe tumhare bhabhiya. Shaina , Sunaina yeh hain Gauri mere behen Gaytri ke bete. Fashion Designing seek rahe hain.
Gauri : Dadi mujhe yehi ke college main admission lena hain, Its the BEST, To main aaj se yahee rahoonge.
Palak : Yeh to bahut achee baat hain Gauri.
Kritika : Tum bilkul sahi waqt par aaye ho, hum sab kal picnic jaa rahe hain.
Dada: Haa Kahin bahar jaae to shaayad doori khatam ho jaae aur rishta naya roop le le.

He looks at Kabir (Kunal) and Shaina.

Thats all for now.

I have introduced Pallavi here., Will introduce Iqbal as Shiv for her as well.


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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
aawwww!!! thnk u soooo much
gr8 u introducd pallavi...was waitin!
thnx! gr8 updt....shaina nd kunal(kabir) r really cute!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesummm update u r 2 gud di thnxx a ton 4r introducing pallavi n soon u will introduce iqbal wowwwww plz do giv dem importance as u r givin kunal-shaina n karan-sunaina it's a request yaar n ur updatee excellent as alwayzzzz waitin 4r more plz do update asap
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
aw wow your updates are fab!! loved them..soo good, aw kunal and shainas releationship..bless them soo cute. but he knows he loves her really and gauri...kool introduced her.. being a kkr fan i love the concept and characters..thanks looking forward to your upcoming chapters.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey peepo ....that was fab. ....i mean it .... really good job done.....
continue asap....
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Next :

Everyone getting ready for picnic. Everyone is dressed in casuals - jeans , salwaars. Dada comes out wearing jeans and T shirt and cap.

Palak : Wow dadu aap to ...
Kritika : Kamal lagte hain.
Dada : Woh to main hoon.
Dadi : Aap bhi na yeh kyaa pehenkar aa gaye. Kuch to umar ka lihaaz karna chaheyee thaa.
Dada : Aree hum to abhi bhi jawaan hain.

Looks at Kabir ( Kunal ). He is dressed in pant shirt (formally ).

Dada ; Yeh kyaa tum aise jaakar kuch casual pehenkar aao.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Nahi nahi dadaji.
Dada : Aree jab yeh Budha pehen sakta hain to phir tum to
Karan : Haa Kabir , tumhey kyaa ho gaya hain. Pehle to tum jeans sab pehnte thee us boring Kunal jaise nahi thee.

Kabir ( Kunal ) goes in and changes and comes. Everyone leave for Farm House. All have gathered in garden and are playing Volley ball.Karan and Sunaina try to go somewhere.

Gauri : Kahah jaa rahe ho ?
Karan (embaressed ) : Woh main , aise hee Sunaina ko Farm House dikha raha tha.
Gauri : Hmmm ha ha jaao . Achee tarah se dekha dena.

Gauri goes towards Kabir ( Kunal ) and Shaina.

Gauri : Kyun aap nahi dekhaiyege bhabhi ko yeh jagah. Yaah par bheed bahut hain na.
Dada comes.
Dada : Haa haa bete jaao tum bhi ghoom aao Shaina ke saath.

They also leave.

Karan and Sunaina are roaming somewhere so are Kabir ( Kunal ) and Shaina. Kabir ( Kunal ) thinks a song " Mera dil bhi kitna pagal hain yeh pyaar to tumse karta hain from the movie ' Saajan' ).
Karan and Sunaina sing song 'Likha hain yeh en hawao main tu hain mere liyee , main hoon tere liyee from the movie Darr'. Kabir ( Kunal ) and Shaina are going. Shaina sees Bhuta ( corn fried and eaten ). She wants but hesitates. Kabir ( Kunal ) understands and buys.

Shaina : Aapko to yeh sab pasand nahi tha na.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Nahi nahi mujhe yeh sab bahut pasand hain.
Shaina: Lekin us din to...

Suddenly few children come running calling "bhaiya bhaiya".

Kabir ( Kunal ): Arey tum sab yahah.
Boy 1 : Haa woh hum sab yehi khel rahe thee aapko dekha aur.
Boy 2 : Yeh aapke biwi hain.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Haan woh yaahah par dadaji ne ek Anaath Ashram khola tha yeh sab wahi ke bacche hain.
Girl 1: Namastey, yeh bhaiya humesha humare liyee chocolate aur khilone laate hain.
Girl 2: Aur humare saath khelte bhi hain.
Boy 3 : Inke jo bhai hai na woh to kabhi kuch nahi late thee.
Girl 3 : Woh to khelte bhi nahi thee.
Boy 4 : Humeshaa dadte rehte thee.

Kabir ( Kunal ) : Achaa achaa chalo, Kyaa chaheyee aaj tum sabko.

All "Ice Cream".

He calls the ice cream seller ( selling in the cart ).

Kabir ( Kunal ) : En sab ko ek ek Ice Cream do.

He gives the money and gets two ice creams for himself and Shaina. Shaina is impressed with him.

Shaina : Tumhara bhai tumse alag kyun hain ?
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Pata nahi. Shayad Bhagwaan ne humare Shakal ek de lekin fitrat alag alag.
Shaina : Main kitne Khus Kismat hu ke mujhe aap jaisa koi mila.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Sach.
She hugs him . Kabir ( Kunal ) is about to hug her ...
Shaina : Main aapke jaisa he pati chahte thee Kabir.
----- Kabir ( Kunal ) removes the hand and feels bad.

Children all come back. Kunal and Shaina are embarresed.

Boy 1 : Aap kyaa kar rahe thee.
Girl 1 : Buddhu , tune filmo main nahi dekha. Abh yeh dono gana gaane wale thee. Hain na ...
Kabir ( Kunal ) : tum sab yaha kaise.
All : Ice cream Kha liyaa.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Abh kyaa.
All : Cricket.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Cricket.
Boy 3 ; Haan bhaiya , chaleyee na Cricket kheleyee na.
Boy 4 : Haan please.

Kabir ( Kunal ) looks at Shaina and she signs lets play. They play Cricket with the boys. Shaina is trying to catch the ball and Kabir ( Kunal ) is running for runs. Both dash and fall. Match goes on for sometime. suddenly the Head of Anaath Ashram comes there.

Head : Arey sir aap yaahah.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Haa woh poora parivaar aaya hain.
Head : Chalo bacho , bahut hua khel .
Children all run inside.
Head : Acha Kunal main bhi chalta hoon.
Shaina : Aap dokha kha gayee. Yeh to Kabir hain.
Head : Lekin bachon se saath to humesha ...
Kabir ( Kunal ) is thinking what to say when a child comes running.

Boy : Sir Woh muniya nahi hain.
Head master : Dekha sir, Sabh jagah dekha.
Shaina: Yeh Muniya kaun hain.
Head : Woh sab se choti. Use kahi par bhi jaaker sone ke aadat hain. Pata nahi kahah gayee hogi.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Arre abhi to raat bhi hone wale hain. Chalo Shaina hum muniya ko wahah dondte hain.

They go in search of Muniya. After sometime a boy comes carrying half asleep Muniya.

Boy : Dekhiyee masterji , Muniya to andar kamre main so rahe hain.
Head : Acha hua, chalo main Kunal ko bhi bata deta hoon. Lekin kaise.. haa phone karke.

Kabir ( Kunal ) and Shaina are walking on an old bridge. Mobile rings.

Kabir ( Kunal ): Hello.
Head : Woh Muniya mil gayee. Yahi par thee.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Acha hua.
Head : Aap dono wapas aaeye.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : theek hain.

The side of the bridge breaks , Shaina loses balance and falls down. Kabir ( Kunal ) jumps into the water to save her. He saves her. And takes her to a house. She has fever so he puts cold cloth on her forhead and applies oil on her feet whole night.
Shaina gets up next day.

Shaina : Woh main yahah.
Lady : Aap theek hain. Kal raat aapke husband aapko yahah laee thee.
Man : Sach main poori raat unhone aapke seva ki hain. Subah aapka bukhar utar gaya tab jaaker woh soi.
Lady : Bahut bhagyashale ho jo aisa pati mila hain.

Shaina blushes and looks at Kabir ( Kunal ) sleeping.

Next Scene:

Everyone tensed. Police has come.

Mahen : Dekho mere bete aur bahu ko dhoond kar lana hain.
Mukul : Mujhe lagta hain aisa kuch nahi hua hoga.
Dada : Lekin Kunal ka mobile kyun off hain. Mera matlab hain Kabir ka.
Dada : Pata nahi mere bachee kahah hongee. Kis haal main hongee.

Suddenly Kabir ( Kunal ) and Shaina come back. All are releived.

Mahen goes and hug Kabir ( Kunal ) : Kahah the tum beta , mere to jaan nikal gayee thee.
Shaina tells what happend.

Dadi : Abh to theek ho na.
Shaina : Haa dadi main bilkul theek hoon.
Dadi : chalo wapas chalte hain.
Dada : Haa abh ghar jana chaheyee.

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hmm gud updateee continue asap plzzz
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Next Scene :

Everyone back home. Devyani calls Shaina.

Devyani : Beti tum theek to ho na.
Shaina : Haa mama main bilkul theek hoon, aap fikar mat kareye.

Next Morning :

A friend of Aarti has come.

Aarti : Tum shaadi main kyun nahi aayee.
Friend : Aree yaar mere kuch aur appointments thee, Tum bhi na achanak fix kar diya bete ki shaadi.
Aarti : Haan waise shaadi kafi jaldi fix ho gayee.

Sunaina comes there with Tea.

Aarti: Yeh hain meri bahu.
Sunaina : Hello.
Friend : Hello. Waise manna padega AArti tumhare choice ke jawab nahi.
Aarti : Mere choice .... waise bahu sirf chai. Aur kuch ...

Shaina comes in with busicuits and pakodas.

Shaina : Yeh leejeye Chachi.
Aarti : Yeh Shaina hain. Kabir ki biwi aur Sunaina ke behen.
Friend : Oh hello.

Sunaina and Shaina leave. Karan comes there.

Karan : Hi mom, Hello aunty.
Friend : Hello Karan kaise ho.
Karan : theek hoon ok bye.
Aarti : Aree itni jaldi kyaa hain.
Karan : Mom Kabir wait kar raha hoga, Office jaana hain.
Aarti : Leki woh...
Karan : Byee mom.

Friend : Ha ha ha tera beta tu humeshaa se he gulam tha aur rahega lekin tumne apne bahu ke behen ko Kabir ki biwi kyun banne diya. Abh to bahu bhi tumhare haat main nahi rehegee.
Aarti : Mujhe poochkar yeh shaadiyan nahi huee thee.
Friend : Dekh agar tujhe es ghar par raaj karna hain to sabse pehle en dono beheno ko alag kar do.
Aarti : Kyaa matlab.
Friend ;Enhi devrani jethani bana de. Jab yeh dono alag ho jaaege tab enki pati bhi ... aur phir Karan apna hissa maang sakega.

Aarti starts thinking.

Next office : Board meeting.

Mahen : Friends Aaj mere liyee bahut bada aur khusi ka din hain kyunki mera beta aaj se mere saath office main kaam karega.
Kunal ( Kabir ) feels happy.
Mahen : Aaj se humare es nayee Project ko mere beta hi dekhega, jis tarah aapne mujhe humesha support kiya hain waise hi mere bete ka saath bhi dena.
Mukul : Bhaiya , Karan ko bhi kaam deejeyee.
Mahen : Karan bhi Kabir ke help karega.
Karan does feel bad but doesn't show.

Next Scene :

Singh House :

Everyone having Dinner. Rahul comes and sits on Shaina's seat.

Devyani : Arey Rahul tum yahan kyun bait gayee. Yeh to Shaina ke jagah hain. Woh naaraz ho jaaege.

Suddenly she realises that the daughters are in their house.

Tulsi : Ma , AApko to khus hona chaheyee ki dono betiyaan achee ghar main gayee hain , sukhi hain.
Rahul : Haa aur aap unse kabhi bh mil sakte hain. Akhir dono esse sheher main hain na warna jaise Babhi yahan apne mummy , papa se door hai waise.
Mihir : Aree ma kal hee main dono ko bula loonga.

Next Scene :

Kabir ( Kunal )'s bedroom. He comes from work. She has styled her hair.

Shaina : Kaisa raha aapka din office.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Theek tha, Yeh kyaa,
Shaina : Woh didi ke saath main Beauty Parlor gayee thee to unhone mera yeh hair style kar diyaa. Kyun acha nahi hain.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Nahi nahi achaa hain. Pehle bhi achaa hee tha.
Shaina : Khana Laga doon.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Haa main abi fresh hokar aata hoon.

Dining Table :

Shaina is serving Kabir ( Kunal ).

Shaina : Yeh leejeye, Maine khud bana hain. Aapko bahut pasand hain na. Aapko teeka khana pasand hain esliyee maine jaada mirch aur masala dalkar banaya hain.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Tumse kisne kahan.
Shaina : Palak se maine aapke favorite khana pooncha.
Kabir ( Kunal ) thinks ( Arey Kabir ko teeka khana pasand hain aur mujhe jaada teeka nahi lekin Shaina ne itney pyaar se banaya hain to khaa leta hoon ).
Shaina : Kaisa hain.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Bahut acha hain.

Dada comes and sees them togethere and feels happy.

Next Scene :

Shaina and Kabir ( Kunal ) are sleeping. Shaina puts her hand on Kabir ( Kunal ). He moves it away slowly and gets up.

Shaina : Kyaa hua ?
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Woh need nahi aa rahe thee zara library main jaaker kuch padkar aata hoon.
Shaina : Aap mujhse door kyun jaa rahe hain. Mujhse naaraaz hain.
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Nahi nahi aise koi baat nahi hain.
Shaina : Aap es shaadi se khus to hain na. Kyaa yeh Shaadi aapke marzi se nahi ... Main aapko pasand to hoon na, main jaante hoon ke main vaise nahi hoon jaisa aap chahte hain lekin main vaisa banne ko koshish...
Kabir ( Kunal ) : Nahi nahi aise koi baat nahi hain. Tum so jaao main abhi aata hoon.

Kabir ( Kunal ) leaves and Shaina sleeps. Kabir ( Kunal ) thinks ( Main bhi tumhse bahut pyaar karta hoon Shaina , tum bilkul waise ho jaise mujhe chaheyee tha lekin main mazboor hoon chahkar bhi tumhare kareeb nahi aa sakta ).

Next Morning :

Kapoor house. Everyone having breakfast togethere. Gauri comes.

Dadi : Aao Gauri breakfast kar lo.
Gauri : Nahi nahi Dadi mujhe late ho raha hain. Mujhe us College main admission lena hain. Aaj hee jana hain ...
Dada : Sambhalkar jaana ... All the best.
Gauri : Thanks Dadaji.

Gauri goes to a college and fills the forums and gives her marksheets etc etc. She goes to a temple to pray to get the admissions. We see Iqbal Khan there. Gauri sees him and leaves. It starts raining. Gauri picks her umbrella left outside the temple and starts walking towards home. Iqbal follows her. She gets scared and walks faster, he too walks faster. She runs Iqbal too runs. She runs and reaches home. Iqbal rings the bell. Gauri is scared. Dada comes.

Dada : Kyaa hua beti.
Gauri : Woh dadaji ek ladka mera peecha karte karte yahah tak aa gaya.
Dada : Kyaa uske itnee himaat, aaj kal ke ladke bhi na , abhi dekta hoon use.

Dada opens the door.

Dada : Tum ladkon ko sharam nahi aate.
Iqbal surprised.
Dada : Pehle to sadak par chedte thee abh ghar tak pahoch gayee.
Iqbal : Lekin ...
Dada : Chup chaap chale jaao warna main
Iqbal : Meri baat to suniyee. Main jaan buchkar enka peecha nahi kar raha tha.
Gauri is behind dadaji.

Gauri : To ...
Iqbal : Aap wahah se mera chata le aayee hain, Yeh dekhiyee. Main to aapko apka chata dekar, apna wapas lena chahta thaa lekin aap bhagne lag gayee.
Gauri and Dada : KYAaa..

Dada : of ohh ha ha ha ha aao bete aao. Andar aao, barish tam jaae tab chale jaana, chai peekar jaao.

Next Scene :

They are having Tea togethere.

Dada : Waise tumhara naam kyaa hain ?
Iqbal : Shiv, Shiv Kapoor.
Dada ; tumh yahah nayee ho.
Shiv : Jee woh main yahah MBA karne aaya hoon, Green Field College main addmission mile eski tammana hain. Esliyee to mandir gaya thaa.
Gauri : Are main bhi usse college main admission pane ki koshsish kar rahe hoon.
Dada : Bhagwaan kare tum dono ko admission mile.
shiv : Acha dadaji main chalta hoon.
Dada : aate rehna.
Shiv : Jaroor. Bye.

looks at Gauri.
Shiv : Byee.
Gauri : Bye.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice work dear....
i loved it...
continue soon....👏👏

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