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Next Scene :

Sikand House -

Shaina comes in. Everyone is tensed waiting for them.

Mahen : Shaina , beti kahah they tum dono raat bar.
Dadi : Haan tumne phone karke kahah ke tum dono late ho jaaoge.
Aarti (softly ) : Pata nahi kahah aiyaashi kar rahe they.

Mukul stares at Aarti and she becomes quite.

Shaina : Woh dadi main ...
Mahen : Kyaa hua ? Sab theek to hain na.
Shaina : Woh Kabir ka chota sa accident ho gaya hain.
Dadi : Kyaa .

Kabir comes in a Wheel chair.

Mahen : Kaise ho beta.
Kabir : Theek hoon papa. Papa woh main jis business main paise lagaye theey , sabhi partners ne dhoka diya aur....

Starts crying.

Dadi : Bas beta tum humare liyee un paisoon se jaada keemte ho.
Mahen : Haa haa. Koi baat nahi, Tum humare saath family business join karo bete.
Aarti : ( softly ) Naatak achaa kar leta hain yeh ladka ..
Dadi ; shaina beti tum esey zara andar le jaao.

shaina takes Kabir to the room. Inside Kabir gets up from the wheel chair.

Kabir : Thank God.
Shaina : Maine kahah tha na accident kahenge to koi paisoon ka hisaab nahi maangega.
Kabir : U r Great Darling. Kyun na aaj ...
Shaina : Nahi abh aap aaraam kareyee.
Kabir : Lekin woh main..

Kabir tries to come close. Shaina gets nervous. Dadi comes in. Kabir jumps in bed.

Dadi : Yeh lo bete haldi wala doodh jaldi theek ho jaaoge.
Kabir : Jee dadi.
Dadi ; Waise abh kaisa lag raha hain. Doctor ko bulao.
Kabir ( loudly ) nahi nahi dadi, main bilkul theek hoon. Bas moch aaeye hain pairon main.Theek ho jaaoga.

Next Scene :

Some Resturant. Kunal and Shaina are siting togethere. Shaina is crying.

Shaina : Kunal hume jaldi sab karna hoga , mujhe bahut dar lag raha hain.
Kunal : Main samajh sakta hoon Shaina , tum par kyaa beet rahe hain.
Shaina : tum nahi jaante main kaise apna aapko us Kabir se bacha rahe hoon. Abh aage kyaa karna hoga hume. Kabir ko business join karva diya ...
Kunal : Kuch aisa karna hoga jisse Kabir ka aslee roop sabke samne aa jaae.
Shaina : Woh kaise hoga.
Kunal : Main batata hoon.

He tells everything. Its muted.

Shaina : wow bahut achaa plan hain, kabhi fail nahi ho sakta.

Shaina turns and is shocked to see someone standing there. Its Devyani. Devyani is angry and leaves from there. Shaina and Kunal run behind her.

Shaina : Mama.
Devyani does not respond.
Shaina : Mama , meri baat to suneyee.
Devyani : Mujhe kuch nahi sunna. tum apne pati ke khilaaf saazish kar rahe ho. Sunaina ne jo bhi kahah tha sab sahi tha. tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho.
shaina : Main aap ke diye hue Sanskaar nahi bhooli. Main apna PATI ka hee saath de rahee hoon aur mera pati sachai ke raah par hain mama.
Devyani : Tum kyaa kehna chahtee ho.
Shaina : Mama mera pati Kabir nahi balki Kunal hain. Saath Phere maine Kabir ke saath nahi balki Kunal ke saath liyee thee.
Devyani : Tum jhoot keh rahe ho.

A voice is heard : Woh sach keh rahe hain.

Both turn and see dada is standing there.

Kunal : Arey dadaji aap yahah..
Dada : Haan main wapas aa jayah. Shaina sahi keh rahe hain. Woh Kunal ke patni hain Kabir ke nahi. Eshwar ke yahi marzi thee warna Shaina ke Kundali Kunal se kaise miltee.
Dada tells everything about Kabir running , Kunal marrying Shaina , Shaina realising and accepting Kunal, Kabirs return , helping Kabir and Kabir cheating Kunal and making him get thrown out of the house.

Shaina : Mama aab aap he kaheye. Maine sahi kiyaa ya galat.
Devyani : Bilkul sahi kiya. Mera aashirwaad tumhare saath hain beti. Tum es jung main zarooor jeetoge.

Devyani hugs Shaina and Kunal.

Dada : Mera yahah se jaana bhi us Kabir ke chaal thee. Mera dost bilkul theek tha. Lekin abh main aa gaya hoon, Kabir ko saza milne chaheye.

Next Scene :

Shaina enters her room. Puts on the light. Kabir is siting there.

Shaina : Arey aap yahah.
Kabir : Haan main. Mere kamre main mujhe dekhar tum chuk kyun rahe ho.
Shaina : Nahi woh main ...
Kabir : Ek aur contract mere haaton se chala gaya.
Shaina : Oh achaa.
Kabir : Pechle kuch dino se aisa ho raha hain mere saath. Koi contract nahi milta, partners dhoka de rahe hain. Sab galat ho raha hain mere saath . Pata nahi kyun ...
Shaina is standing quitely. Kabir SLAPS her.
Kabir : Tumhare wajayse Shaina. tumne kyaa samjha tha Tum aur woh Kunal chaal chaloge aur mujhe pata nahi chalega. Main sab jaan gaya hoon. Mere business main loss karvaya ,aaj ghar main koi nahi hain. Sabhi Farm house gayee hain picnic ke liyee. Aaj tumhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta.

Shaina is scared. Dada comes.

Dada : Kabir chod de Shaina ko.
Kabir : Dadaji maine bachpan se aapke koi baat mane hain jo aaj manoga.
Dada : Haan achaae ka mukhota to sirf apne pita ke saamne pehnta tha . Warna tu to ...
Kabir : Haan maine jua khelta hoon, aawara hoon aapke chahete pote Kunal jaisa seeda saada nahi hoon.
Dada : Kabir...
Kabir : Koi faida nahi dadaji Papa nahi manege. Aap kitne saalonse koshish kar rahe hain mera aslee roop dekhane ki lekin.

Kabir grabs Shaina.

Dada : Kabir, chod do Shaina ko. Woh tumhare bhai ke patne hain.
Kabir : Mere liye sab kuch paisa hain. Koi Rishtaa nahi maanta hoon main.

Kunal runs in.

Shaina : Kunal, mujhe bachao.
Kabir: YEh tumhe kyaa bachaeyega.
Kunal : aap Shaina ko chod deejeye.
Kabir : Achaa to theek hain tum humesha humesha ke liyee es ghar se nahi es sheher se chale jaao.
Kunal : Chala jaaoga. aap ghar ka khayal rakhna dadaji, papa ko dawaeya waqt par dena aur unka khayal rakhna ...
Kabir : Bas bas yeh natak band karo . Bachpan se papa ka khayal rakta aaya hain lekin papa humesha yehi samjhte rahe ki maina unke liyee kiyaa hain. Tumhe to woh pyaar nahi karte hain na..Kunal : Lekin main unse bahut pyaar karta hoon. Aur karta rahonga ...
Kabir : Wow abh jaao , tumhare jaane ka muharat niklaa jaa raha hain.

A voice is heard " Mera beta kahee nahi jaaega ". Its Mahen standing there. All are shocked. Kabir is shocked. Shaina moves away. Mahen goes towards him.

Kabir : Papa.
Mahen slaps.
Kabir : Lekin main
Mahen slaps again.
Kabir : Dekheeye.
Mahen again raises his hand. Kabir holds Mahens hand. Everyone stunned.
Kabir : Bas bahut ho gaya. Main Kunal nahi hoon jo aapke maar kha loonga.
Mahen : Haan theek kahah tune , Tum Kunal nahi ho. Woh Kunal jisse 15 saalon se main bahut nafrat karta raha. Kitne baar maine use maara, use data lekin ek baar bhi usne mere khilaf kuch nahi kiyaa. Aaj mujhe aisas hua , papa aap sahi keh rahe thee. Ek din yeh Kabir mujhe khoon ke asson rulaaega. Aaj dekon. Abh es ghar se Kunal nahi balke tum jaaoge. Chale jaao es ghar se.
Kabir : Chala jaaoga. Pehle mera hissa to mujhe de do.
Dada : Kaisa hissa.
Kabir : Es jaayadat par mera bhi haq hain. Mujhe mera hissa de deejeye.
Mahen : Koi hissa nahi hain tumhara, Tum seeda jail jaaoge.
Dada : Kyaa matlab.
Mahen : Haan Police ne mujhe bataya ki London main bahut sare fraud cases ke liyee Kabir ke zaroorat hain plus ek accident main bhi esne do logon ko apne car se kuchal diya. Yehi sunkar main Kabir se poochne aaya tha. Acha hua jo main yahah esse waqt aa gaya warna yeh Kunal ko fasakar khud baag jaata.

Kabir suddenly pulls out a gun and points at Shaina.

Kabir : Koi apne jagah se nahi hilega.
MAhen : Yeh kyaa kar rahe ho Kabir.
Kabir pulls Shaina and takes her in a car. Dada Kunal and Mahen run towards the car. Kunal takes a bike and chases him. Mahen calls police. Here Kunal is chasing Kabir. They reach a forest. A tree is fallen on the way car cannot go further. He pulls Shaina and starts walking while Kunal comes in front.

Kunal : Kabir aapne aap ko Kannon ke hawale kar do.
Kabir : Kabhi nahi.
Kabir points the gun towards Kunal. Shaina tries to stop. He pushes Shaina. Shaina falls gets hurt on her head and faints. Kunal jumps towards Kabir. Both start fighting. Kabir takes his gun out . Kunal tries to stop it. They both struggle. A Gun Shot is heard. Both are stunned.

Kabir falls on the ground and Kunal is stunned.

Kunal : Kabir , Kabir yeh maine kyaa kar diyaa.

Kunal cries loudly.

The END ( for now will continue soon, end this part and bring some happiness ).

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thankx luv but sorry all is not fine still. I will make it fine now ... ( 2 postings more )


Next Scene ;

Kunal in lock up. Hawaldar comes.

Hawaldar : Chalo, aapko ghar jaana hain. Aapke bhai ka funeral hain.Chalo chalo.

Next Scene :

Sikand House. Everyone in white mourning and crying. Kunal goes accompanied by police man. Mahen is siting near the body.

Mahen : Bete mujhe maaf kar dena. Maine to socha tha ke tujhe etna pyaar doonga lekin tune to mujhe muh fer liya. Aisa kyun kiyaa....

Mahen sees Kunal.

Mahen : Esssey kyun laae ho yahah.
Dada : Maine kahah tha .
Mahen : Kyun papa kyun, Mere bete ke jaan lekar tujhe chain nahi aayaa.
Kunal : papa woh galtee se. Main aisa karna nahi chahta tha .
Mahen slaps Kunal ...

Mahen : Jaan buchkar tune kiya. Shaina ko le gaya aur jab Kunal ne tujhe rokne ke koshish kee to tune MERE BETE KUNAL ko maar diya.

Kunal is shocked. Kunal sees Shaina without Magalsutra and sindoor.

Kunal : Papa main Kunal hoon.
Dada : Bas Kabir bahut hua , abh bas bhi karo.

Kunal goes towards dadi, she moves away. Kunal goes to Shaina. Yeh dekho humare Shaadi ke Angoti. There is no ring on his hand.
Kunal : Angoti kahah gayee ? Mere chain dekho dadi ne hum dono ko apne NAAM se Chain banwakar diya tha. Dekho. ( But the chain has Kabir writen instead of Kunal).
Kunal : Shaina , Shaina main kunal hoon tumhara pati. Tum widwa nahi ho. Mera yakeen karo.Yeh Kabir hain ...
Mahen : Police le jaaeye esse yahah se.

Police drag Kunal away. Shaina faints.

Next Scene :

Shaina Bedroom, Doctor has come.

Dadi : kya hua doctor ?
Doc : Gabarane wale baat nahi hain. Ma banne wali hain.

Shaina gets up,

Dadi : Beti abh tumhey apna khayal rakhna chaheye. Apne aane wale bache ke liye to jeena chaheye. Chalo khana kha lo.

Dadi hugs Shaina.

Next Scene :

Lock Up.Kunal thinking " Aisa kyaa ho gaya, Sab mujhe Kabir kyun samajhtey hain , Shaina bhi, Us raat ... "

FLASHBACK .

Kabir gets shot.

Kunal : Kabir , Kabir yeh maine kyaa kar diyaa.

Kunal cries loudly. Suddenly Kunal is hit on his head from back. And he faints. After sometime water is put on his face and he gains consious in police station.

Kunal : Haan main kahah hoon. Yeh sab kyaa hain. Kabir ...
Hawaldar : Wah apne bhai ko markar aisa bhola ban raha hain.
Hawaldar : Chal chal hosh main aa, waise yahah par to sab log hosh main aate hain.

Flash Back Ends.

Kunal thinking " Kyaa wahah koi aur bhi tha , jisne yeh sab kiya tha.Pata nahi kyaa hoga ".

Hawaldar comes.

Hawaldar :Chalo chalo,tumhey es jail se shift karna hain.

Next Scene :

Kunal going in the Jeep. Through a remote place no crowd.A tree is fallen on the way. Two halwaldars go and push it away. Kunal hits one hawaldar seated next to him and runs away.

NExt Scene :

Mahen on the phone : Kyaa woh baag gaya. Use pakad leejeeye. Usne mere bete ko mara hain. Use saza milne hee chaheyee.

Next Scene :

Shaina's room.Sunaina enters with food.

Sunaina : Yeh lo Shaina Khana kha lo.
Shaina :Bhook nahi hain didi.
Sunaina :Dekho aise haalat main tumhara bhooka rehna thek nahi hain.
Shaina :Par didi.
Sunaina : Dekho yeh tumhare DIDI ka humkum hain. DEVRANI ka nahi .

Shaina hugs Sunainaand cries.

Shaina : Kahan chale gayee the aap didi mujhe aapke bahut zaroorat hain.
Sunaina :Devrani ke parchai main kho gayee thee. Lekin abh wapas aa gaye hoon apne BEHEN ke paas.Kabhi nahi jaooge apne behen ko chodkar. Ma ne theek kahah the hum Behney hee rahenge... chahey aage kitney aur rishtoon main band jaae.

Sunaina feeds Shaina.

Next Scene :

Shaina alone in her room. Talking to Kunals photo.

Shaina : Kunal , tum bhi na bahut bewafa ho, Mujhe beech safar main chod kar chale gaye. Aur apne ansh mere kokh main chod gaye. Lekin main abh tumhare paas aa bhi nahi sakte. Bahut bure ho tum.Suna tumne ...

Suddenly we see Kunals image on his picture, Shaina turns back Kunal is standing there tearfully.

Shaina : Tum yahah kyaa kar rahe ho. Chale jaao yahah se.Polcie tumhe doond rahe hain.
Kunal :Shaina main Kunal hoon.
Shaina :Bas bahtu hua, tumhey sharam nahi aate hain Kabir ...
Kunal : Kabir bhaiya mere haaton mare gaye. Tum to mera yakeen karo.
Shaina : Kyun karo main tumhara yakeen. Agar tum bekasoor ho to police se kyun bag gaye. Adalat main apne aap ko bekasoor sabit karne se pehle kyun ...
Kunal :Kyunki MERE ADALAT TUM Ho. Agar tum mujhe galat samjhtee ho to main apne aap ko police ke hwale kar doonga. Main Kali Madir main tumhare intezaar karonga. Agar tumhey mujhpar yakeen hain to SURAJ nikalne se pehle yahah aa jaana. Agar tum nahi aayee to main samajh joonga.Aur apne aap ko police ke hawale kar doonga, Chahey mujhe phaasi ho jaae.

Kunal leaves and Shaina is standing there.Shaina is thinking what to do so is not sleeping the whole night. Suddenly phone rings and she picks up the phone.Cross Connection. Somebody has picked the call from Sikand House.

Somebody : Tumhare himaat kaise hue yahah landline par phone karne kee.
Caller : Aapka mobile off tha to.
Somebody : Acha acha kyaa chaheye.

Shaina wants to cut but still listens to the conversation.

Caller : kuch Paise.
Somebody : Mere paas abh tumhey dene ke liyee kuch nahi hain.
Caller ; Main to aap ko achee tarah jaanta hoon. Aaphi ne Kabir ko marwaya thaa aur Kunal ko Kabir banaya tha.Maine yeh sab aap he ke kehne par kiya tha na.

Shaina is shocked to hear that.

Somebody : Bas muh band rakho apna..
Caller : Itna hee nahi 15 saal pehle Nikila Sikand ko bhi aaphe ne raaste se hataya tha, Main yeh bhi jaanta hoon.
Somebody : Lagta hain koi humare bate sun raha hain. Mujhe kal milna Kalarghat ke gufa main.
Caller : Ok.

Shaina wipes her tears : Main Suhagan ho, Mera Kunal Zinda hain. Mujhe uske paas jaana hoga. Use sab kuch batana hoga.

NExt Scene :

Kunal waiting. Sun Rised.

Kunal thinking : Main samjh gaya Shaina . Tumbhi mujhe galat samajh rahe ho.

Kunal goes towards a police man standing on the road. As he goes towards them a hand pulls him and takes him hiding from police. Its Shaina.

Kunal : Shaina tum yahah.
Shaina : HAan Kunal.
Kunal :Kya kahah.
Shaina : Haa Kunal , mujhe maaf kar do. MAine tumhey galat samjha.
Kunal :Lekin yeh sab hua kaise. Jab Kabir bhaiya mere hatoon mare gaye...
Shaina : Kabir ko tumne nahi mara tha.
Kunal : Kyaa. Kya keh rahe ho tum.
Shaina : Haan . Maine aaj sab suna hain. Kabir ko hee nahi balki tumhare maa ka bhi accident nahi tha murder tha.
Kunal : What ???
Shaina tells everything. Its Mutes.

Kunal : woh humare ghar ka hain. Kaun ho sakta hain.
Shaina : Woh phone kissene humare second floor ke coridore se liya tha. Wahah to Karan jeeju, Sunaina didi, Mahen papa, Mukul papa, Aarti ma, Palak aur Kritika ka kamre hain. Aur kuch spare rooms bhi thee jahah mehmaan ruke the. To ....
Kunal : Lekin phone par uske awaaz to sune hogi.
Shaina : Kunal woh bahut chaalak hain. Usne muh main kuch rakha tha aur shaayad Phone par kapda rakhar baat kar raha tha take awaaz pehchaan main na ayee.
Shaina : Woh jo bhi hain Kalhar ghat main kal jaaega. Wahee hume pata chalega.
Kunal : Haan mere maa aur bhai ka katil abh main use pakad loonga. Zaroor pakadooga.

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Next Scene :

Sikand House. Breakfast table. Everyone is dull, Mukul is tensed. his mobile rings. Mukul takes it and goes to a corner.

Mukul : Maine kahah na mujhe phone mat karna. Main paise bejh doonga.
Gauri hears everything.

Next Scene :

Kuanl and Shiv are waiting at Shivs place. Shaina and Gauri go there.

Shaina : Shiv tumne Kunal ko apne ghar mein chupakar mujhpar bahut bada ehsaan kiya hain.
Shiv : Ehsaan kaisa bhabhi, aapke tarah mujhe bhi Kunal bhaiya ke bekasoor hone par yakeen hain.
Gauri : Kunal bhaiya maine aaj Mukul chachu ke bate sune woh phone par kisse ko paise dene ke baat kar rahe thee.
Shaina : Haan aur maine check kiya Bank main Mukul chachu ne 25 lakhs Rs nikale thee.
Shiv : Eska matlab Mukul chachu ...
Kunal : Mujhe yakeen nahi hota,
Gauri : Humey Kalharghat jaana chaheyee.
Kunal : tum nahi chalogee Shaina.
Shaina : Kyun nahi.
Gauri : Haa didi aise haalat main aapko aise khatarnaak jagah par nahi jaana chaheyee.
Shiv : Haan main hoon na Kunal bhaiya ke saath.

Next Scene :

Shaina in her room and Gauri enters.

Gauri : Yeh leejeeye doodh pe leejeye.
Shaina : thank u pata nahi Gauri kyaa hoga aaj. Mujhe bahut chinta ho rahe hain.
Gauri : Mujhe bhi Shiv ke ahhh mera matlab hain Kunal bahiya ke
Shaina : Main Samajh gayee . don't worry es matter ke solve hote hee main tumhare es ghar se jaane ke entezaam kar dongee.
Gauri blushes.

Gauri: Chalo terrece par chalte hain.
Shaina : Haan lets go.

Both are going up suddenly they see Mukul chachu in a corner.

Gauri : Arey yeh yahah. Enhe to Kalharghat jaana chaheye tha.
Shaina : Shhh chalo dekhe yeh kyaa baat kar rahe hain.

Both hide and hear Mukul on phone.

Mukul : Maine 25 THOUSAND bej deyee na jo main haar gaya tha Jue main. Abh eska zikar kisse mat karna varna humare badnami hogi. Vaise bhi Kunal ke jaane se hum sab bahut pareshaan hain.

Both go into the room.

Shaina : Eska matlab Mukul chachu ne kuch nahi kiyaa.
Gauri : To fir kaun ho sakta hain.


Next Scene :

Kalharghat. Kunal and Shiv are waiting there in a car. Two police men come there. Kunal goes and hided behind the trees.

Hawaldar 1: Yahah kyaa kar rahe ho.
Shiv : Woh main woh meri gaadi kharab ho gayee hain to ..
Hawaldar 2: Achaa to main dekhta hoon ...

Suddenly Shiv starts the car and police is surprised.

Hawaldar 1: Arey tumhare ghaadi to theek hain.
Shiv : Haa woh CHAMATKAR CHAMATKAR ho gaya.
Hawaldar 2 : Lekin yeh kaise ho gaya.
Hawaldar 1 : Kaise bhi hua ho aabh yahah se jaao yeh sunsaan elaka hain khatarnaak bhi, Hum dono bhi ghar jaa rahe hain. Hume ghar chod dena.
Shiv : Lekin woh main...

Kunal signs him to go and take the police men with him. so he leaves with the police. Kunal alone there. Suddenly sees a man waiting there. A car comes and we see the man go towards the car.

Man ; Mere paise laaye ho na.
.
The person gets down from the car and shots the man. Kunal is shocked and shouts Ohhh. A man comes and shows gun to Kunal.

Man : Chal, Tu ...
Man : Yeh aapko chupkar dekh raha tha. Kyaa karo eska.

The person turns and Kunal is stunned to see. Its Aarti.

Kunal : Chachi aap.
Aarti : Kunal tum yahah.
Kunal ; Aap jaante hain ke main Kunal hoon Kabir nahi.
Aarti : Haan maine hee to tumhay Kabir banaya eske maddat se.
Kunal ; Kyun kiya aapne aisa chachi.
Aarti : Paison ke liyee . Main to humeshaa se ameer hona chahte Thee. Esliyee maine us bewakoof Mukul se shaadi ke thee lekin woh bewakoof humeshaa haarta raha. Us din humne Sikand house main entry le le thee. Dada ke kehne par Mahen bhaiya ne hume apna liya thaa.Aur Mukul ko bewakoof bana kar main abhi dekho na woh sirf 25 thousand ke check cash karana chahte the lekin main 25 lakh nikale aur bake ke paise. Lekin tumhare ma. Ghar main to usee ka raaj tha. Bade bahu thee na..
Kunal : To esliyee aapne mere ma ko.
Aarti : Nahi nahi maine ma ko nahi balke tum dono ko maarna chahtee thee. Us din ...

FLASH BACK...

After party Kabir ( small one ) is siting there. Aarti goes there.

Aarti : Arey Kunal bete tum yahah kyaa kar rahe ho. Bore ho rahe ho kyaa ?
Kabir : (thinks ) zarror ma ne Kunal ke liyee cake bheja hoga main do piece kha chuka hoon agar maine bataya ke main Kabir hoon to mujhe cake nahi milega.
Aarti : Khelna chahte ho. Us kamre main dekhon Party ke Sajavat ke liyee saara saman hain wahah jaakar khelo.
Kabir : Lekin chachi wahah.
Aarti : Kyun dar gaye kyaa.
Kabir ; Nahi main kissese nahi darta.

Kabir goes inside Aarti leaves and Kunal goes in and tries to stop him ( written before ).


Nikhila is leaving the room and coming down. Nikhila hears Aarti talking to a man ( whom she shot now ).

Aarti : Kaam ho gaya.
Man : Haan madam. Woh maine un wires ko connect kar liyaa hain. Shock lagega aur mar jaaege. Main On karne jaa raha hoon.
Aarti : Pehle Kunal , phir en sab ko main upar pahocha doonge. Sab kuch mera hoga.

Man leaves. Aarti is shocked to see Nikhila standing there. Nikhila slaps Aarti.

Nikhila : Mere bacho ko marge tu. Main tujhe.

Suddenly she remembers to save her son. She runs towards the room. Sees Kunal with the wire ( he had snached from Kabir ). She runs and takes the wire and pushed her sons away, Man ons the Switch and she gets the shock.

FLASH BACK ends.

Kunal tearful.
Aarti : Main to pehle dar gayee the ke agar sabko pata chala to. Lekin Babhi sirf Kunaaal bolkar chale gayee. Woh kehna chahte the Kunal ko bachao aur Mahen bhaiya ne kyaa samajh liyaa. Phir mujhe laga ke ghar ke baag door mere haat main aayege lekin maji se sambhal liaa. Fir mere Bahu bhi aap he ke pasand ke aaye tumhare biwi ke behen. Socha tha en dono behno ko alag kar doonge to mera faida hoga lekin yeh dono to phir ek ho gaye to ..
Kunal : Aapko eske saza milege.
Aarti : Kaun dega saza tu Kunal oh I am sorry Kabir. Us din maine tum dono bhaiyon ko ladte hue dekha aur main goli chalayee aur tum yeh sochte rahe ke tumne ..

Again FLASH BACK.

Kunal Kabir fighting. Aarti shots and Kabir gets shot and dies. Kunal is crying. Man goes and hits Kunal on the head and he falls unconsious.

Man : Esse bhi maar daalon madam.'
Aarti : Idot, agar yeh mar gaya to pata chal jaaega ke koi teesra hain.
Man : To kyaa kare.
Aarti : En dono ke kapde badal do. Es Lash ko Kunal bana do aur esey Kabir.
Man : Kyun.
Aarti : Arey bewakoof , Mahen bhaiya Kunal ko bachayege Kabir ko nahi aur Police bhi Kabir ko doond rahe hogi. Humare raaste ko dono pattar hat jaaege.

Flash back ends.

Aarti : Abh mujhe tumhey bhi maarna hoga.

Man hits Kunal and throws him on the ground.Aarti shows gun towards Kunal. But no bullets. Police Siren rings.

Man : Chaleye madam. Jaldi Police esse pakad lege aur yeh sabit nahi kar paaeyga.

Both go off. Shiv comes there runing.

Shiv : Bhaiya aap theek to hain na.
Kunal : Aaj sab kuch samjh main aa gaya. Lekin essey sabit kaise karonga main.
Shiv : Main hoon na. Maine sab kuch Record kiya hain apne mobile par dekheye. Aur woh Police Siren ke aawaaz bhi maine hee..
Kunal : Kyaa.
Shiv : Main jab vaapas aaya to maine dekha ke aapko woh aadmi pakad kar le gaya us Katil ke paas. Mujhe Gauri ka phone aaya tha na Mukul chachu ghar par hain kehkar to ...
Kunal : Abh tum dekhna Shiv main Es Aarti se apne ma , bhai ka badla kaise leta hoon.

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Next Scene ;

Sikand house. Everyone gathered there.

Dada : Yeh tum kyaa keh rahi ho Shaina.
Shaina : Main sach keh rahe hoo. Kunal zinda hain , Kabir mar chuka hai.
Gauri : Mara nahi unhe mara gaya hain.Aarti chachi ne.. Aur Nikhila Aunty ko bhi unhone hee.
Mahen : Gauri yeh tum kyaa keh rahe ho.
Shaina ; Gauri sach keh rahe hain.

Aarti comes bringing Puja ke Thali.

Dadi : Aarti beti tum es waqt kahah se aa rahe ho.
Aarti : Main Kali Ma ke pooja karne mandir gayee thee take humare Kunal ke aatma ko shanti mile.
Shaina : Band kareyee apna natak.
Aarti : (inocently ) Natak yeh tum kyaa keh rahe ho beti.
Gauri : AApne es ghar ke badi bahu aur bete ko mara hain aur.
Aarti : Kyaa ( starts crying ). Yeh tum dono kyaa keh rahe ho.Main asia karoonge.

Shiv and Kunal also come.

Shaina : Kunal dekha do en sab ko saboot.
Kunal : Saboot kaisa saboot. Mere paas koi saboot nahi hain Shaina Bhabhi.
Gauri : Yeh aap kyaa keh rahe hain Kunal bhaiya.
Kunal : Kunal nahi main to Kabir hoon.
Shiv : Kyaa aap yeh ..
Kunal : Aur Aarti chachi aisa kyun karege.

Police comes there. Take Kunal away. Everyone leaves and Aarti grinns.

Aarti calls someone.

Aarti : Kaam ho gaya ?
Man : Haan madam. Maine jaise aapne kahah waise hee kiyaa.
Aarti : Good.

Next Scene:

Police Station. Shaina, Gauri and Shiv have gone to meet him.

Shaina : Yeh tumne kyaa kiya Kunal ?
Gauri : Aisa kyun kiyaa apne ?
Shiv : Haan aapne mujhe Saboot dekhane se mana kyun .
Kunal : Agar aisa karta to Palak ko humeshaa ke liyee kho deta.
Shaina : Kyaa Palak ko.
Kunal : Haan mujhe Aarti chachi ka phone aaya tha.

FLASH BACK :

Kunals phone rings.

Kunal : Hello.
Aarti : Kunal tum to bahut chalak aur samajhdar ho lekin main akhir tumhare chachi hoon aur yeh khel tumse pehle khel rahe hoon.
Kunal : Kyaa matlab ?
Aarti : Agar tum chaho to woh recording sabko dekha do lekin fir apne pyaare behen Palak ke lash lene aa jaao.
kunal : Kyaa Palak aapke saath hain.
Aarti : Haan abh tumhey faisala karna hain. Ma aur bhai ko kho chuke ho abh kyaa apne behen ko bhi.

FLASH BACK ends.

Shaina : Lekin Kunal.
Kunal : Main Palak ko nahi khona chahta hoon.
Gauri : Pata nahi ache logo ke saath bura kyun hota hain.
Kunal : Shiv yeh CD ko Aarti chahi ke hawale karke Palak ko wahah se chuda kar le aao.
Shiv : Ok bhaiya.

Next Scene :

Aarti is talking to the man.

Man : Madam jaise aapne kahah waise hee kiya. Main Hostel gaya aur maine kahah kee Mr Kapoor ka accident hua hain aur apne beti se milna chahte hain aur esey le aaya.

He shows her someone tied to a chair.

Aarti: Suno jaise Kunal ya uske sathi saboot leker aaye en dono ko khatam kar do.
Man : Ok Madam. Aisa hee hoga. Main en dono ko khatam kar donga. Koi sabot nahi chodonga.
Aarti : Good.

Next Scene :

Aarti is coming into the Sikand house.

Aarti thinking " Aaj mera sapna poora ho gaya, sab kuch mera hoga , sirf mera, mere raaste ke sabhi pattar hat gaye ".

shaina comes.

Aarti : Aao Shaina beti , Kyaa hua soi nahi tum.
Shaina ; Yeh aapne theek nahi kiya chachi. Bhagwaan aapko kabhi maaf nahi karega.
Aarti : Bhagwaan kyaa karega tumhara bhagwaan. Kuch nahi kar sakta.

Aarti is laughing. Suddenly she sees someone at the door and is shocked. Its Palak.

Aarti : Palak tum yahah ?
Palak : Haan chachi woh maia.
Shaina : Tum yahah kab aayee.
Palak : Abhi abhi. Aaj subah main apne saheli se milne gayee the. Wapas aaye to pata chala Mukul chachu ko heart attak aaya hain.
Aarti : Kyaa.Mukul ko heart attak.
Palak : haan Principal ne kahah ke ...

SCENE :

Man goes to meet principal.

Man : Madam woh Mr Kapoor ko heart attak aaya hain. Apne beti se milna chahte hain.
Principal : Kaunse Mr Kapoor ?
Man : (softly ) Arey saala poora naam poochna bhool gaya.
Principal : jee.
Man : Arey woh woh. Arey Delhi ke business man Mr Kapoor.
Kritika comes there.
Principal : Kyaa aap enke papa ke baat kar rahe hain - Mr Mukul Kapoor Delhi ke Kapoor industries ke.
Man : Haan haan wohi.
Kritika : Kyaa papa ko. Pata nahi humare parivaar ko kiske nazar lag gayee hain. Pehle Kunal Bhaia aur abh ..
Man : Chalo beti papa tumhey yaad kar rahe hain.

SCENE ends

Palak : Esliyee to Kritika ko koi le aaya. Woh ghar main nahin hai. Aur Mukul chachu kaise hain.

Gauri comes with Shiv. Shivs hand is bandaged.

Shaina : Arey Shiv tum yahah. Yeh kyaa hua.
Shiv : Woh chota sa accident ho gaya. Lekin mera ek dost CD dene aur Palak ko lane gaya hain.
Shaina : Kaunsa dost.
Shiv : Mera ek purana dost hain hum Canada main miley thee. Uska naam hain Karan.


FLASH BACK :

Shiv is going on a bike. Bike dashes some car. And he falls down. The Car driver comes out. Its Karan ( Raahil).

Karan : Sorry sorry aapko chot to nahi lagi.
Shiv : AAh shayad haath toot gaya.
suddenly he recognises Karan as his old friend.
Shiv : Arey Karan tum yahah. Pehchana nahi mujhe. Main Shiv woh hum mile thee na Canada main 5 saal pehle.
Karan : Haa haa main tumhey kaise bhool sakta hoon. Tumne to meri kitna help kiya thaa us angaane sheher main. Tum es sheher main rehte ho kyaa ?
Shiv : Haan kuch hee din pehle aaya hoon. Dad ke death ke baad India hee aakar settle ho gaya hoon aur tum ?
Karan : Main to yahee ka hoon. Kuch dino ke liyee London gaya tha. Aaj vapas aaya hoon. Tum bahut pareshaan lag rahe ho. Kyaa baat hain. hai
Shiv : Woh mujhe yeh CD kisse ko dena hain.
Karan : To esmain etna pareshaan hone ke kyaa zaroorat hain. CD hee to hain.
Shiv : Yeh CD nahi hain. Esmain kisse ke zurmo ka saboot hain esmain mere ek dost ke begunai ka saboot tha lekin .., mujhe eseey use mujrim ke hawale karna hain.
Karan : Kyaa aisa kyun.
Shiv : Woh mere dost ke behen uske kabse main hain.
Karan : Main pehle tumhey hospital lee jaata hu.
Shiv : Lekin ...
Karan : Main CD le jaata hoon. Jaana kahah hain.

FLASH BACK ends.

Aarti : Karan ? kahee woh Karan Kapoor to nahi. Yeh to nahi.

Shows Karans picture.

Shiv : Arey haan yehi to hain Karan mera dost kyun.

AArti remembers her telling " Dono ko khatam kar do ".Aarti calls that man.

Man : Hello.
Aarti : Hello main bol rahe hoon.
Man : Haan madam woh saboot mil gaya. Aur maine us ladke ko bhi bandh diya hain. Dono ko khatam kar donga.
Aarti : Nahi nahi tum aisa nahi karogee.

Suddenly battery of her mobile becomes low and she is unable to contact him. Car also breaks down. Aarti gets up and runs. She reaches the place. Man comes out.

Aarti : Woh un dono ko.
Man : Maine un dono ko khatam kar diya.
Aarti : Kyaa. Slapps the man. Yeh tumne kyaa kiya mere bacho ko maar diya.
Man : Arey etne khoon kar chuke hain aap, kitne apno ko maara hain aapne lekin aaj.
Aarti : Haan maine mara tha Nikhila bhabhi ko, Kabir ko aur maine hee Kunal ko Kabir banaya. Lekin yeh sab maine apne liye kiya apne bachon ke liyee. Abh jab woh hee nahi rahenge to main es daulat ka kyaa karo.

Suddenly lights on. Police comes there. So does Mahen,Dada, Dadi, Karan and Kritikka.

Aarti : Aap sab yahah.
Mahen slaps Aarti.
Dada : Aarti tumne aisa kiyaa kyun ?
Mahen : Jab Police ko Kunal le gayee to maine uska peecha kiya. Wahah maine Kunal, Shaina , Gauri aur Shiv ke bate sun lee.
Dada : Jab humne Pricipal ko phone kiya to pata chala Palak ke jagah woh Kritika ko le aaya. Hum samajh gaye.
Mahen : Humne polcie ke help se tumhare phone ko trace kiya aur yahah ka pata chala.
Man : Haan enhone mujhe kahah tha jhoot bolne ke Karan Krittika ko khatam kar diya aur sarkare gawah banne ke liyee.
Police : U are under arrest Aarti Kapoor. Aapko Nikhila aur Kabir Kapoor ke katal ke elzaam main giraftaar kiyaa jaata hain.
Karan : Kyun kiya aapne aisa mom.
Kritikka : Kya mila aapko yeh sab karke.

Suddenly Aarti pulls the gun from police. Shoots the Man.

AArti : Koi aage nahi aaye warna eske tarah goli maar doongi.

Gun shot is heard. Aarti falls on ground. Mukul has shot her.

Dada : Mukul yeh tumne kyaa kiyaa ?
Mukul : Maine jo galtee kee the uska praychit kiyaa hain.
Dadi : Kyaa matlab.
Mukul : Maine ese shaadi karke Kapoor House le aaya. USe galti ko aaj sudhara hain maine.

END FOR NOW ....

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thnx!!

MUKUL KILLD AARTI??

ufff

btw where r u polly????

updt asap!!

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