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Start ...

First Scene :

A big House is shown. Some lady is doing the Pooja and takes the Aarti and goes towards the bed. Its Nikhila...

Nikhila : Utheyee na.
Mahen : Hmmm
Nikhila : Subhah ho gayee hain.
Mahen turns that side.
Nikhila : Abh Uth Bhi jaaeyee. Aaj humare Shaadi ki dasvi (10th) Saalgirah hain.
Mahen : Arey haan.
Gets up. Half Sleepy. Nikhila gives him the Aarti.
Mahen : Abh kuch Meetha ho jaae.
Nikhila : Kyaa Matlab ?
Mahen : Abh Shaadi ke 10 saal baad bhi tumhey batana padega ,,, Meetha kyaa hain .
Nikhila blushes and Mahen puts the blanket on their top.

Childrens room.

Two kids around 9 years looking similar are painting, one sister is there 5 years. She is also drawing something.
One twin Kabir's painting messes up. Kunal makes a good one.

Kabir thinks ( abh kyaa karon , Kunal ka card to achaa ban gaya ).
Palak (sister) : Bhaiya, mere help karo na.
Kunal goes to help his little sister. Kabir swappes the cover of his card and Kunals.

Children enter the Parents Room.

Children : Papa , Mummy.
Both are under blanket and come out and are embaressed.
Palak : Aap dono blanket ki neeche kyaa kar rahe they.
Nikhila : Beta main woh woh ...
Kabir : Kuch doondh rahe they.
Mahen : Haa haa haa haa.
Kunal : Mil gaya aapko.
Nikhila : Haa mil gaya.
Children : Happy Marriage Aniversery Mummy Papa.

They open the cards. Kunal's card looks quite bad. Kunal comes to know about the swap. Kabir holds his ear and signs him to be quite and Kunal remains quite.

Mahen : Yeh kyaa hain Kunal, tum apne bhai ke tarah a achee painting nahib bana sakte thee kya.
Kunal : Papa woh ..
Nikhila : Abh jaane bhi deejeyee. Usne pyaar se banaya hain.

Next Scene :

Mahen is getting ready for office, Nikhila is puting tie.

Nikila : Aap bhi na Kunal ko.
Mahen : Tum kyaa samjhtee ho, main Kunal se pyaar nahi karta. Woh bhi mujhe Palak aur Kabir jitna hee pyaara hain lekin uska kyaa hoga. Abh Kabir ko he dekh lo...
Nikhila : Har kissi main kuch kame aur kuch khasiayat hoti hain. Waqt rehte sab theek ho jaaega.

Mahen Nikhila goes down towards the House Mandir.

They go and touch feet of two people. Its dada and dadi.

Dada- dadi - Jeete raho, Eeshwar tum dono ki jodi banayee rakhee.

Dadi and Nikhila go towards the kitchen and Mahen , dada towards the dining table.
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Dada : Mahen , woh main.
Mahen ; Kaheeye na papa.
Dada : Woh Mukul ka phone aaya tha. Woh vaapas aana chahata hain. Humare paas.
Mahen : Agar aapko koi aitraaz nahi hain to mujhe bhi nahi hain. Akhir woh mera bhai hain.
Dada : Woh abh badal gaya hoga.
Mahen : Papa woh to Short Cut tareeke se amir banna chahta hain , Gamble bhi karta hain.
Dada : Karta tha beta abh parivaar se door rehkar use bhi ehsaas ho gaya hain.
Mahen : Theek hai papa, jaisa aap theek samjhey.

Dadi and Nikila bring lunch. They have it.

Mahen : Acha ma, main office jaata hoon.
Dadi : Mahen bete , aaj subh din hain , kuch meeta to kha kar jaao.
Mahen : Meeta to maine subha hee kar liyaa.

Nikhila blushes.

Nikhila : Mahen.
Mahen : Pata hain , shaam ko party hain. Waqt par pohonch jaaoga. Byee.

Next Scene.

Somewhere else. Some School Function is going on. And the winner is getting announced.

Teaher : Humare es Dance competition main sabhi ladkiyon ne bahut achaa dance kiya hain lekin winner sirf ek hi ho sakte hain .Aur Winner hain

Before the name is announced an overconfident girl comes forward.
Teacher :"Shaina Singh".

Devyani ( Diya Seth ) is among the audience clapping for her daughter.

Teacher : Aur mujhe yeh batate hue bahut khushi ho rahe hain ki aaj ke es competition main jo second aayee hain woh Shaina ki hi bade behen hain " Sunaina".

Devyani is very happy.

Sunaina ( Overconfident girl ) : Main second prize nahi loongi.
Teacher : Sunaina , behave yourself . Judges ne yeh faisla kiya hain.
Suanina : Judges ka faisla galat hain. Mujhe hi first prize milna chaheyee.
Teacher : Ab zid chod do.
Sunaina : Nahi main nahi loongi second prize.

Shaina gives her the first prize trophy and takes the second prize.

At home. Devyani is taking photo of Sunaina and her trophy. Next Shaina comes.

Shaina : Didi , mujhe yeh trophy do na photo khichwane ke liyee.
Suania : Nahi doonge , yeh mere trophy hain.
Devyani : de do na bete.
Shaina : Akhir jeeta to maine tha na.
Sunaina slaps Shaina : Kyaa tu mujh se jeetege.

Shaina starts crying. Sunaina goes in with the trophy. Devyani is making Shaina quite. Family preist enters. Devyani sends Shaina in.

Devyani : Aaeye panditji.
Pandit : Jeete raho bete. Bache kaise hain.
Devyani : Sab theek hain. Mihir aur Rahul to Summer Camp gaye hain . Sunaina aur Shaina apne kamre main hain.
Pandit : Kyaa baat hain bete tum bahut chintit lag rahe ho.
Devyani : Kuch nahi panditji main bas apne betiyoon ko lekar pareshaan hoon.
Pandit : Haan main jaanta hoon, maine hi to tumhara vivaah Veer se karaya tha. Tumne es nane bachon ki maa bankar jo kiyaa hain.
Devyani : Ehsaan kaisa Panditji. Yeh to mera farz tha akhir Maasi se Maa banna koi mushkil nahi tha mere liyee.
Pandit : Lekin Shaina ke Janam ke baad bhi tumhara pyaar Sunaina aur bake bachon ke liyee nahi badlaa.
Devyani : Shaina aur Sunaina ko lekar bahut pareshaan hoon Panditji, Ek Haar nahi mantee to doosre haarti rehte hain.
Pandit : Yeh dono behne shaadi karke ek hi ghar main jaaege lekin....
Devyani : Lekin kyaa panditji.
Pandit : Lekin SASURAL MAIN AAPKE CHOTI BETI KA AUDA (status) BADE SE JAADA HOGA. Fikar mat karo bete sabh theek ho jaaega. Acha agle haftey aapke swargeeya pata Veer Pratap Singhji ka Shard hain.
Devyani : Haa haan aur main kal ki pooja main koi kame nahi karna chahate hoon. Do saal pehle ek Plane Crash mein woh ...
Pandit : Fikar mat karo , aisa hi hoga. Es baar hum pooja Kashi jaakar karenge.

Next Scene :

Kapoor House:

Party is going on. Mukul and family also there. Mahen comes..

Mukul : Bhaiya , mujhe maaf kar do. Aapne sach kahan tha " there is no Short cut to Sucess ".
Mahen : Acha hua tumhey pata chal gaya.
Dada : Aaj main bahut khus hoon. Mere dono bete abh ek saath hain. Mahen kal se Mukul bhi office join kar raha hain.
Mukul : Main apna hissa lekar , use kho chuka hoon. Esliyee mujhe koi bhi choti moti naukari hi de dena aur ghar main bhi main kissi kaune main pada rahoonga.
Mahen : Mukul tum mere bahi ho aise baate mat karo.

Aarti comes with a daughter.
Mukul : Yeh Kritika hain, meri bete aur Arti Karan kahan hain.
Karan comes ( small boy of 7 yearS )
Mukul : Yeh Karan hain mera beta, Chalo bacho apne bade papa ke pair chuoo.

Kids touch the feet. Nikila and dadi comes with Kunal, Kabir and Palak.
Dadi : Chalo bachoon.

Mahen sings a song " Ek Raja hain , Ek Raani hai , Paas Paisa hain Aur jawani hain, aur kyaa zindagani hain " ( from movie Ek Rishta the Bond of Love )

Next Scene :

Mukuls room.

Aarti : Mukul, mujhe Nikhila bhabhi jaisa haar la dooge.
Mukul : Pagal ho gayee ho, etni mushkil se to es ghar main aa payee hain varna.
Aarti : To kyaa hum saare zindagi essi tarah rahenge.
Mukul : Mauke ke nazakat ko samjho ... hum ek din es ghar par raaj jaroor karenge.

Mahens room :

Nikila comes in.

Mahen ; Bahut thak gayee ho.
Nikila : haan woh to hain.
Mahen : Mera Aniversary gift kahan hain .
Nikhila : Kyaa chaheeyee aapko.
Mahen : Mujhe nahi Palak ko chaheyee.
Nikhila : Palak ko kyaa ?
Mahen : Woh kehte hain ke Kunal aur Kabir apas main hi khelte rehte hain. Woh akele reh jaate hain to usse ek choti behen.
Nikhila (blushes ): Chaleyee hateeyee.

Nikhila is going.

Mahen : Kahan jaa rahe ho ?
Nikhila : Main zaara bachon ko dekh kar aate hoon.
Mahen : Mat jaao na. Mera kyaa hoga.
Nikhila : Tum to aise keh rahe ho jaise MAIN WAAPAS HI NAHI AAONGI.

NExt Scene :

Kabir is playing with the lights ( for party ). Kunal comes there.

Kunal : Kabir , aisa mat karo. Shock lag jaaega.
Kabir : Mujhe kuch nahi hoga, dekhon ( the sparks come as he brings two wire close ).
Kunal : Kabir , papa dadetengi.
Kabir : Tu jaa.

Kabir brings the wire closer to Kunal.Nikhila comes and sees and is shocked to see the wire in Kabirs hand. She comes runing pushes Kunal and pulls the wire from Kabirs hand and gets the SHOCK.

Kunal - Kabir : Maa.

Everyone come runing to the room.

Mahen : Nikilaaaaa.
Dada : Koi main switch off karo.

Mahen goes and helps Nikila.

Nikhila : ( shivering ) Kkkkunaaaalll and she breathes her last.

Next Scene :

Nikhila's funeral.

A sad song is played ( sad version of the same Party song from Risthey the bond of Love which is "Tinka Tinka Bhikra , Luta Mera Aashiana " ).

Home : Night.

Mahen thinking about Nikhila. He goes to the room. sees the lights there and the cut wire. Calls the servant.

Mahen : Us raat es kamre mein Nikhila kaise aayee .
Servant : Sir shaayad bachon ko ...
Mahen : Bache es kamre main kyaa kar rahe thee. Kaun tha yahan.
Servant : Mujhe theek se nahi pata sir . Kabir ya Kunal baba ko maine wire ke saath dekha thaa, fir Nikila madam.....

Suddenly he thinks Nikhila said Kuunaal before dieing.

Mahen : ( yells ) Kunaal.

Everone come running.
Mahen : Kyaa tum es kamre main aaye they.
Kunal : papa woh.
Mahen : Mere mana karne ki bavajud tum yaha aaye thee.
Kunal doesn't answer.

Mahen starts slapping him. Dada comes and stops him.

Dada : Yeh kyaa kar rahe ho.
Mahen : esne. Eski karan maine apne Nikhila ko kho diya. Main eska gala ghot dunga.

As he is about to Nikhilas photo falls down and he goes to pick it up.

Mahen : Aaj ke baad mere sirf do Bachee hain.
Dada : Mahen , tu yeh kyaa keh raha hain.
Mahen : Kunal es ghar mein reh sakta hain lekin usey mere aakhon ki door rakhna. Use jo chaheyee woh milega lekin. ...

Kunal ( crying ) : papa lekin main.
Mahen : ( shows his hand) Baas.

Mahen goes off to his room. Dada hugs crying Kunal.

Next Scene :

Karan goes to Kabir.

Karan : Kabir bhaiya, aap bhi na. Kunal bhaiya ke karan aapko kitna faida hota hain.
Kabir : Kyaa matlab.
Karan : Varnaa aaj Kunal ke jagah bade papa aapko ...
Kabir : Tum kehna kyaa chahtey ho.
Karan : Main us kamre main tha aur main jaanta hoon, kiski haath main wire tha aur bade ma ki maut ki liyee kaun Zimedaar hain.
Kabir ( nervous ): Kyaa chaheyee tumhey.
Karan : Filhaal tumhare aade Pocket Money se kaam chal jaaega.


Few days have passed . Childrens result are out.

Kabir : Papa main paas ho gaya 40% marks se , beemar tha na.
Mahen : Koi baat nahi agle saal first aa jaana ,paas to ho gaye na.
Palak : papa main 5th aayee.
Mahen : Good.
Dada : Yeh dekho Mahen, Kunal poore class main First aaya hain.
Mahen : Just gets up and goes.

Kunal feels bad.

Dada : Koi baat nahi bete , Main hoon na.


In school.

Kabir : ( to friends ) yaar yeh har hafte sau rupee pocket money bahut kam hain. Upar se us Karan ko bhi aada dena padta hain.

Karan comes there. Pocket money ko double karna hain to mere saath chalo. Kabir takes him to a place where on the road where they are gambeling with cards. Kabir wins gets 200 Rs.

Karan : Dekha.
Kabir : Haa yaar es tarah se hum dono ka faida hoga.
Karan : Lekin sirf 100 Rupee.
Kabir : Pocket money to intne hi milte hain na.
Karan : To kyaa , pocket money ke elawa bhi ... papa ka purse hain, mummy ke jwellery hain , bade papa to etne busy hain ki woh to dhyaan nahi deenge.

Kunal comes there.

Kunal : Karan , aisa mat kaho, Chalo Kabir yaha se.
Kabir : Arey Ponga Pandit, tumhare tarah mujhe dar dar ke main nahi jee sakta. Chalo Karan ..
Kunal : Main papa ko sab bata doonga.
Kabir : Papa tumhare baat par yakeen nahi karenge.

And Karan and Kabir go off leaving Kunal alone.


Thats all for now ..

This is just the introduction of the story, Next will be a 15 years leap and all grown up.

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Next Scene:

Mahen looking at Nikhila's photo : Aaj hume alag huee 15 saal ho gayee Nikhila , lekin en 15 saalon mein ek bhi aisa din nahi gaya jab maine tumhe yaad na kiyaa ho.

Dada comes there. Mahen wipes his tears.

Dada : Tumhare bete ka phone aaya thaa.
Mahen : Kyaa kahan Kabir ne ..
Dada : Kabir nahi Kunal ne London se phone kiyaa thaa...
Mahen doesn't show any interest...
Dada : Mahen bete abh us haadse ko 15 saal ho gayee hain.
Mahen : kyaa kahah usnee.
Dada : Kunal apne MBA ke exam main sabse pehle number se paas hua hain.
Mahen doesn't react.
Dada : Mujhe tujhse Kabir ke bare main baat karne hain ..
Mahen : Kyaa baat hain.
Dada : Mujhe uske bahut fikar ho rahe hain. Lagta hain woh galat raah par chalkar hum sab se door jaaega,
Mahen : Aisa kuch nahi hoga papa, Dekhiyee na Kabir bhi to es saal First aaya hain.
Dada : Pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun lagta hain.

Next Scene :

A motor bike race is going on. Its a neck to neck competition but one bike races ahead and wins the race. Everyone yells " Kabir Kabir". The person removes the helmet. Its Kabir ( Yash ).

Kabir ( to the loser ) ; Bachee agle baar challenge kissi aur ko dena , To shart ke anusaar mere dus hazaar.

He takes the money and starts counting . A hand comes and takes some money. Its Karan.

Kabir : tum yahah.
Karan : Haa apna share lene aaya hoon.
Kabir : Abh tak Black Mail kar rahe ho.
Karan : Chodna yaar, Lets have a party tonite...

Party in some Disco. Everyone dancing and drinking....

Karan : Wow Kabir kitna maza aa raha hain.
Kabir : Arey Kabir Sikand jab party deta hain to mazza to aayega hi.
Other Friend 1: Lekin yeh party kis khusi main hain.
Kabir : Kabir first aaya hain na.
Other Friend 2: Really.
Other Friend 3 : Haan , Kabir ne bahut mehnat ki hain..
Other Friend 1 : Aur bahut paise bhi kharche hain NAKALI MARKSHEET KI LIYEE.
All Friends laugh togethere. They dance to the song " Tere Ishq ki deewangi sar par chad kar bole from Kuch to hain movie ".

Other Friend 2: Kabir yaar agar tu first nahi aaya to kyaa tumhare papa tujhse naaraz ho jaaege.
Karan : Nahi nahi bade papa to Kabir se bahut pyaar karte hain, Kunal se bhi jaada.
Other Friend 3 : Yeh Kunal kaun hain
Kabir : Hai mere Twin Brother. Bewakoof. Hamare saath maze lene ki wajai. Sholarship lekar London gaya hain MBA karne. Abh dekho woh bhi First aaya mehnat karke aur main bhi bina koi tension aur mehnat ke.
Karan : Come on Friends lets enjoy .

Next Scene :

London. Some last day of final day students. Principal in announcing : Friends I am really pleased to announce the Student of the year its Kunal Sikand.Kunal ( Yash ) goes and takes the Trophy. He takes the trophy to his room and keeps it before his parents Picture.

Kunal : Maa, aap yeh jaante hain na ki main aapke maut ki liyee zimedaar nahi hoon. Lekin papa ... 15 saal main bhi unka gussa shant nahi hua, Pata nahi woh din kabh aayega jab papa mujhe Beta kahengee.

Next Scene :

Someone is applying the make ups.. Eye shadows , Eyeliner, Kajal ,Blush , Lipstick. They show us the face its Sunaina ( Raymon ). Shaina ( Mouli ) comes in.

Shaina : Didi , tum abhi tak taiyaar nahi hue. Jaldi kareeye der ho jaaege. Picture Khatam ho jaaege.
Sunaina : Shaina zara bahar to dekho , Suraj hain yaa baadal chaya hain.
Shaina : Kyun ?
Sunaina : Aree Buddhu , agar Suraj nikla hain to main yeh Red dress pehenoogi , aur badal hain to yeh Blue dress.
Shaina : Oh no matlab aaj bi late ho jaaege. Didi hum waha picture dekhne jaa rahe hain . Aapko dekhne koi nahi aa raha hain.
Sunaina : Oh Shut up. Bas do min main hi aate hoon.
Shaina : Aapka do min pechle 2 gante se chal raha hain. Main to jaa rahe hoon. Saheliyaa wait kar rahe hogi, tum taiyaar hokar aa jaana.
Sunaina : Theek hain.

Next Scene :

Sunaina goes to a garden. Someone is waiting for her. Its Karan.

Karan ; Aaj bhi late.
Sunaina : sorry darling tumse milne ke liyee roz nayee nayee bahane banane padte hain.
Shaina : Aaj bhi mere behen aur saheliyaan picture dekhne gayee hain aur main ...

they both hug each other.

Next scene :

Kunal comes back home. Dada comes and hugs him.
Dada : Kaise ho bete.
Kunal : Theek hue bade papa ,aur dadi kahan hain ?
Dadi comes.

Dadi : Kunal , tum kab aaye ?
Kunal : Abhi abhi dadi.

Goes and hugs her as well. Mahen is coming down sees and Kunal.

Mahen : Bete tum aa gayee. Tumhey dekhne ki liyee aanken taras gayee. Aa mere seene se lag ja.

Kunal is tearful. Mahen comes towardsn him .....but goes beyond him. Behind him is Kabir also standing. Mahen goes and hugs him.

Kabir : hi dad . How are you ?
Mahen : Abh tum aa gaye ho to main bilkul theek hoon.

Next Scene :

Its a Girls Hostel. Two girls are shown sleeping. They get up and start singing a song " Piya Piya oh Piya Piya " . Its Palak and Kritika.

Next Scene :

Sunaina reaches home. Shaina comes.

Shaina : Didi aap picture dekhne nahi aayee.
Sunaina : Nahi , actually main nikle thee lekin bahut der ho gayee to mujhe laga ab picture dekhar kyaa faida. Esliyee main kahe aur chale gayee.
Shaina : Kahan ...
Sunaina : Mind your own business.
Both turn and see Mihir and Tulsi (Rohit and Smriti) standing there.

Shaina : Bhaiya , bhabhi aap kab aaye.
Bhabhi : Bas abhi abhi.
Mihir : Choti Ma kab aaeygee Canada se.
Sunaina : kal aane wale hain.
Shaina : Aur Palak aur Rohan kaise hain bhabhi.
Tulsi : theek hain.
Sunaina : Unhe itnee choti umar main wahah Dehradun main kyun rakha hain.
Mihir : Aree Boarding school mein rehne se bache zimedar ban jaate hain , hum bhi to boarding school main rahe hain.
Tulsi : Haa aur mummy , papa ( Tulsi's ) bhi wahi hain.
Shaina : Waise vaccation main unhe yahah lana. Aunty , Uncle bhi na unhe apne ghar le jaate hain. Woh to har weekend main jaaker mil lete hain phir bhi.
sunaina : Haan bilkul.
Mikhir : Waise Rahul kahan hai?
Shaina : Rahul Bhaiya ... Wahi hongee.

Next Scene :

Boxing Ring .Some person gets the Final Punch and is flat on the ground. Announce " Aur humare es saal ke Boxing Champion hain Rahul. They show Rahul ( Rohit Roy ).

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wow kool just read your ff its brilliant..loving it.. your slection of characters is fab!!! loved the introduction and the stroyline is brilliant...must say i feel sorry for kunal...being all neglected. thanks for starting a new ff loved your updates and concept... jagruti 😊

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Next Scene :

Kunal alone in room looking at his mothers Picture. Dada comes in.

Kunal : Dadaji aap aaeye na.
Dada : To bete kaisa raha London.
Kunal : Theek raha.
Dada : Koi Girl Friend Girl Friend.
Kunal : Kyaa dadaji aap bhi.
Dada : Kyun koi ladki pasand nahi aayee.
Kunal : Dadaji maine kabhi eski baare main socha hee nahi.
Dada : Kaise ladki chaheyee tumhey.
Kunal blushes.
Dada : Dekhna Bhagwaan ne tumhare liye aise ladki banayee hogi jo tumhey bahut bahut pyaar kareege, jis pyaar ke liyee tu saare zindagi tarasta raha woh pyaar tujhe mil jaaega.
Kunal : Lekin dadaji mujhe pata kaise chalega ki woh ladki kaun hain.
Dada : Dil eshaara dega aur kahega " Thats My Girl" tumhare dadi ko dekhar mera yehi haal hua thaa.

Next Scene :

Sunaina's room. Shaina comes.

Sunaina: Arey Shaina tum yaahan , yeh dress tum rakh lo. Abh main esse nahi pehenoogi.
Shaina : thankx didi . Waise kal aap kyaa bahana baneegee unse milne ki liyee.
Sunaina : Kyaa matlab.
Shaina : Didi aapke kitaab se yeh photo mila ( Raahils ).
Sunaia : Yeh woh ...
Shaina : Mere hone wale jeeju hain na
Sunaina blushes.
Shaina : didi kab se chal raha hain yeh chakkar , bateyee na.
Sunaina : Do saal pehle hum ek friend ke Birthday Party main mile thee. Aur ...
Shaina : Wow matlab 2 saal se aap...
Sunaina : Achaa yeh bata tujhe kissi se ..
Shaina : Nahi didi yeh aap kyaa keh rahe hain.
Shaina and Sunaina laugh.

Next Scene:

Shaina is walking on the road. Its raining heavily. Suddenly when she is crossing the road. A car somes and she is scared that she will be run over and her umbrella flies away but the car stops and the man comes out. Its Kunal. Kunal looks at her and remembers his dada's saying " Thats My Girl". Shaina and Kunal look at each other for a moment. Other car starts honking so Kunal gets into the car to move it and Shaina runs away.

Next Scene :

Rahul is in the Boxing Ring. Karan and Kabir are also there.

Announcer " Humare Champion Rahul ko jo bhi haaraeega use inaam milega hain koi challenger ". Kabir comes forward. Kabir and Rahul fight. They go on fighting. End both stop and get tired - its a tie.After fight ...

Rahul : Hi i am Rahul , Rahul Pratap Singh.
Kabir : Kabir Sikand.
Rahul : Bahut achaa fight kar lete ho.
Kabir : Main har cheej achaa karta hoon.
Rahul : I like that. Mujhse dosti karogee.
Kabir thinks and shakes hand with Rahul.

Next Scene :

Devyani comes back home, Daughters go and hug her.

Mihir: Choti ma kaisa raha aapka Trip . how was the Meeting ?
Devyani : theek thaa .
Tulsi : Maaji aapko abh etna kaam nahi karna chaheyee.
Devyani : Arey nahi , ab Mihir to Business sambhal hi leta hain . Rahul,bhi use join kar le . Abh to bas mujhe apne dono betiyoon ki shaadi karne hain.

Shaina and Sunaiana blush and run inside. Rahul comes.

Rahul : Arey Choti Maa aap kab aayee. Main aapko lene airport aa jata.
Devyani : Mujhe aaj hi Ghar aana tha bete..
Everyone laugh.
Rahul : Kyaa Choti maa aap bhi ...
Devyani : Waise tum kahan thee . Aur yeh sab kyaa hain .
Rahul : Ma woh Boxing main Zabarast thakar ka koi mila to .
Devyani : Beta Etna boxing mat kiyaa karo, varna pehchana mushkil ho jaaega.


Next Scene :

Mihir and Tulsi comes into Devyani's room.

Mihir: Maa apne kyaa socha hain Sunaina ke bare main ..
Devyani : Haan woh maine Panditji se kahan thaa. Main Kundaliyaan milakar hi Shaadi Karvaongi main apne betiyon ki. Varna Didi ki tarah ...
Mihir : Maa ki maut ek hadsaa thee us main Kundaliyon ka kyaa dosh choti ma.
Devyani : Maine dono ki Kundaliyan de hain Panditji ko.
Tulsi : Lekin Shaina ke kyun , woh to Sunaina se 3 saal choti hain.
Devyani : Barso pehle en dono ki Kundaliyaan dekhar panditji ne mujhe kahan tha ki yeh dono behney ek hi ghar main jaaege.
Mihir : Yeh to bahut achee baat hain.

they leave.

Phone Rings.

Devyani picks up.

Pandit: Hello. ( its some other Pandit ).
Devyani: Namastey Panditji ,
Pandit : Jeete raho bete. Mubarak ho aapke bete ki Kundali ek bahut achee ghar ke bete se mil gayee hain.
Devyani : Sach ,
Pandit : Haan 36 ke 36 gun mil rahe hain.
Devyani : kaun hain ladka panditji.
Pandit : Arey apne Kapoor Industries ki maalik Mahen Kapoor ke bare main suna to hoga.
Devyani : haa haa Panditji.
Pandit : Uhee ke bade bete se. Jodi bahut achee rahegee.
Devyani : Aapne mere chinta hi door kar de.

Next Scene :

Dada comes into Mahens room.

Dada : Mahen kyaa main andar ...
Mahen : aaye na papa.
Dada : Bete mujhe lagta hain es ghar main bahut jaldi bahu lana chaheyee.
Mahen : Kyaa matlab.
Dada : Arey abh beto ne Padai khatam kar le hain to abh dono ki shaadiyan kara dete hain. Maine esliyee dono ki Kundaliyan Panditji ko de dee hain aur Panditji ne ek Ladki bhi dood le hain.
Mahen : Etni jaldi kaun hain ?
Dada : Aree woh Veer Pratap Singh thee na unke bete. Kaisa rahega.
Mahen : Mujhe koi aitraaz nahi. Main aaj shaam ko hi Kabir se baat karonga.

Sunaina takes Shaina to a party.

Shaina : didi aap mujhe yaha kyun laae hain.
Sunaina : Apne liyee Ladka pasand kar lee.
Shaina : Kyaa.
Sunaina : Mazak kar rahe hoon, arey yeh ghar main rehkar bore nahi hoti ho kyaa. Aise parties main jaao logon se milo.


Same party Karan and Kabir have come.

Kabir : Main chalta hoon.
Karan ; Arey yaar kuch der to ruk jaao.
Kabir : I am getting bored here.
Karan : Kam se Kam usse to milo ...
Kabir : Oh u mean
Karan blushes and goes to find Sunaina .

Shaina is drinking a soft drink and standing alone. A drunk boy comes.

Drunk : Hey baby akele ho, dance karogi mere saath.
Shaina ignores him.
Drunk : Kyaa hua ?
Shaina : Plzz leave me alone. Akele chod do mujhe.
Drunk : Arey tumhare jaise cheez ko akele kaise chod do.

He touches her and Shaina struggles. Suddenly a hand comes and hits the man. Sunaina comes running. Shaina hugs Sunaina and cries. Its Kabir who hit the man. Karan also comes. Drunk man goes away.

Karan : Kaun tha yeh ?
Kabir : Pata nahi.
Shaina : Didi main ghar jaate hoon.
Sunaina : Es waqt tum akele kaise jaaoge.
Karan : Arey Kabir Bhaiya chod denge.
Kabir: Kyaa

Karan makes sign that if Shaina goes, Sunaina will also go so plzzz ...

Kabir : Theek hain.

Next Scene:

Shaina and Kabir are going in his car.

Kabir : Aap pehle baar aise party main aaye thee.
Shaina : Haa didi ne force kiya tha esliyee. Aise parties mujhe achee nahi lagte.
Kabir ; Kyun ? Aapne kabhi ek achee party nahi dekhee.

He turns the car back and again takes her to the party.

Sunaina : Shaina tum waapas.
Shaina : Woh yeh ...
Kabir : Mujhe enhe ek achee party dekhani hain.
Kabir (loudly ) : Stop the Music.
Kabir starts singing "Hum hain nayee andaaz kyun ho purana from Dil chahta hain movie". Karan and everyone join him so does Sunaina and Shaina. All enjoy themselves.

Kabir and Karun drop the girls home.

Kabir : Abh to next time aise party main jaaogee na.
Shaina smiles.
Karan : Byee Su ..
Sunaina: Bye Karan.

Next Scene :

Singh house : Dining table. Everyone there.

Devyani : Sunaina , maine tumhare shaadi fix kar de hain.
Sunaina : Ma main yeh shaadi nahi karoonge.
Devyani : Kyun nahi.
Sunaina : Main kissi aur ko pasand karte hoon.
Devyani : tumhare shaadi wahi hogi jahah maine tai ke hain samjhee.
Sunaina : Lekin ..
Devyani : Bahut achee log hain. Tumhare kundaliyan bhi mil rahe hain. Yeh dekhon photo. Kitna achaa ladka hain ( Yash's ).

Sunaina throws the pic without seeing.

Sunaina : Oh ma , yeh Kundaliyan bhi na sab bakwaas hain.
Devyani : Chup raho aur andar jaao.

Sunaina runs inside her room.

Next Scene :

Kabirs room.

Mahen : Bete maine tumhare liyee ladki dek le hain.
Kabir : Kya matlap dad.
Mahen : Abh es ghar mein bahu laa do.
Kabir : Bahu , u mean shaadi no way dad.
Mahen : Kyun , kyaa tu kissi aur ko .
Kabir : Aise baat nahi hain lekin .
Mahen : Tujhe naya business start karne ke liyee paisa chaheyee the na , Shaadi ke baad main business aur Paison ka batwaara kar doonga aur ...
Kabir ( thinks ) Agar maine mana kar diya to mujhe kuch nahi milega. Maine jo karzdaaro se udhar leye thee woh .... esliyee chup chaap maan jaata hoon.
Kabir : Theek hain papa jaise aap theek samjhe.
Mahen : Oh bete mujhe tumse aise hi umeed thee.

Mahen hugs Kabir , Kunal sees them hug and is feeling bad.

Kunal goes in and is trying to sleep. He is thinking about the girl Shaina.

While Shaina is also thinking about Kabir. She is impressed with Kabir. Both dream a song " Mere Khwabo main tu from the movie Gupt".

Next day :

Shaina enters Sunaina's room.

Shaina is shocked and yells : Didi.

Everyone come running and are shocked. Sunaina has cut her wrists. Doctor comes.

Next Scene :

Devyani : Doc kaise hain mere bete.
Doc : Abh to theek hain.
Mihir : Doc yeh Suicide wale baat.
Doc : Don't worry Mihir. What are friends for ? Fikar mat karo main kissi ko nahi batoga.
Devyani : Rahul , Doc ko zaara ..

Rahul takes the doctor out. Devyani goes in.

Devyani : Sunaina , yeh tumne kyaa kiya bete.
Sunaina : Ma main Karan ke bagair nahi jee paonge.
Devyani : Theek hain, to tumhare shaadi Karan se hi hogi.
Sunaina : Sach mama.
Devyani : Lekin aage se aisa mat karna. Agar aaj tumhey kuch ho jaata to main ...

She hugs Sunaina.

Devyani comes down. Tulsi is there.

Devyani : Tulsi. Mihir kahan hain.
Tulsi : Woh office se phone aaya, zarrore kaam hain esliyee chale gayee aur Rahul bhi gaya.
Devyani : Maine Sunaina ki shaadi usse ladke se karne ka faisla kar diya hain . Abh Panditji se phone par keh dete hain ki baat aage na badaeyee.

Panditji is standing there at the enterence.

Pandit : Lekin main baat age bada chuka hoon.
Devyani and Tulsi both are shocked.
Devyani : aayeye Panditji.
Pandit comes in and sits.
Pandit: Maine tumhare bete ki photo bhi aaj bej de unko.
Tulsi : Lekin Pandit ji ... woh.
Pandit : Dekhon bete , yeh Rishtaa bahut achaa hain . Tumhare bete bahut Khus rahegee. Woh log bahut achee aur sanskari log hain. Aur unka Khandaan bhi ..
Devyani is trying to say something.
Pandit : Sach main aise Kundaliyan bahut mushkil se milte hain. Bahut takdeerwali hain aapke bete.
Devyani : Lekin mere bete kissi aur ko pasand karte hain.
Tulsi : Aur aap to jaante hain na Sunaina ki Zid ko.
Devyani : Haan esliyee abh humare Kapoor parivar se rishta nahi jud sakta . Maine Sunaina ke khushi ke liyee uske shaadi use ladke se karane ka faisla kyaa hain.

Pandit : Lekin fir bhi us parivar se aapka rishta jud sakta hain.
Tulsi and Devyani surprised.
Tulsi : Kyaa matlab.
Pandit : Acha hua jo Sunaina ke liyee Rishta mil gaya varna main Sunaina ke liyee Ladka doonda chahta tha jald se jald taki yeh Shaadi jaldi ho jaayee.
Devyani : Main kuch samjhee nahi.
Pandit : Arey Mahen Kapoor ke bete ki Kundali aapke Choti Beti SHAINA se miltee hain.
Devyani : Happy ) kyaa,
Pandit : Main to kehta hoon dono betiyon ke shaadi ek hi din kara do.

Shaina is listening to everything.

Next Scene :

Devyani goes to Shaina's room.

Devyani : Beti , tumne sunaa na. Panditji ne kyaa kahan.
Shaina : Maa main.
Devyani : Kyaa tum bhi kissi aur se...
Shaina doesn't react.
Devyani : Dekho Photo dekho, bahut acha ladka hain. Baad main batana, Main jaante hoon zindagi ke faisle achanak nahi le sakte hain.

Shaina sees Yashs photo though its Kunal she thinks its Kabir.

Shaina: Mummy woh main...
Devyani turns back : Kyaa , Pasand hain.
Shaina blushes and hugs her mother.

Next Scene;

Kunal is getting ready. Dada comes.

Dada ; Bete yeh photo dekhon, eska naam Shaina hai. Kitni Khoobsurat hain na.
Kunal : dadaji main jaldi main hoon.

Kunal leaves without seeing the photo.

Next Scene:

Kunal goes to some Resturant. Shaina also there. She thinks its Kabir and goes to him.

Shaina : Hi.

Kunal is pleasently surprised.
Shaina : Pehchana , us din woh.
Kunal : Haa aap yahah kaise.
Shaina: Well main aaphi se milna chahte thee.
Kunal ( happy ) baiteyee na.
Shaina : Woh humare rishtey ki baat kar rahe the na humare gharwale.
Kunal : To aap Shaina Singh hain.
Shaina : Haan aap mera naam bhi bhool gaye.
Kunal thinks what his dada told him "Ek ladki tumhare zindagi main bahut pyaar leke aaeyege.

Shaina: Mujhe yakeen nahi hota hain ki aapki aur mere shaadi ho rahe hain.
Kunal smiles.
Shaina : Aapse milne ke baad main aaphe ki bare main sochte thee.
Kunal thinks ( main bhi ).
Shaina : Main aapko bahut pasand karte hoo.
Kunal thinks ( Me 2).
Shaina : I think I love U. I love.
Kunal blushes.
Shaina : I love u KABIR.

Kunal is shocked. Like a ballon which is punctured.

Shaina : Haa jaise aapne Party main raunak dal dee thee waise hee.
Kunal : Party main.
Shaina : Haan party main , aapko yaad nahi .
Kunal : haa haa yaad aaya.
Shaina : Aap to etney party main jaate hain ki aapko yaad hi nahi hoga.
Shaina : Acha main chalte hoon, Byeee.
Kunal : Byee.

Kunal is tearful. Kunal comes home. Dada is scolding the servant.

Dada : Jaao yahan se. Aage se mere cheezon ko haath mat lagana.
Kunal : Kyaa hua dadaji.
Dada: Kyaa bataoo. Esne Safai karte waqt tumhare aur Kabir ke Kundaliyon ke cover change kar diyee. Esliyee Tumahare Kundali Shaina se miltee hain lekin sab yehi samjhate hain ke Shaina ke kundali Kabir se milte hain.
Kunal : Kundaliyan kissi se bhi mile lekin. Shaina ka dil Kabir se hi miltaa hain.
Dada : Kyaa matlab.
Kunal tells him everything.
Kunal : Dada aap uske shaadi Kabir se hi kara deejeyee.
Dada : Lekin bete.
Kunal : haan dadaji , esse main sabki bhalaayee hain.

End for Today ...

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wowwwwwwwwww peepo no words yaar,simply rocking but where is pallavi yaar.yash is missing in reeno's ff n pallavi in ur ff 😆😆😆.anyway fabulous work yaar.keep up the gud work peepo.i just r ead all the parts n its simply rocking👏.
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thankx soni ... I will introduce pallavi soon in the story.
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Originally posted by: soniayk6

wowwwwwwwwww peepo no words yaar,simply rocking but where is pallavi yaar.yash is missing in reeno's ff n pallavi in ur ff 😆😆😆.anyway fabulous work yaar.keep up the gud work peepo.i just r ead all the parts n its simply rocking👏.

aawwww hey sonia....i told u YASH IS DERE in ma ff yaar...bt jst cudnt fit him him in bros nd sis so....he will have an entry shortly
keep readin hun!!!!!!......(reenos ff widout yash????nana...nt possible)<-------he is my jaanu!😉😛😃
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Next Scene :

Dada has come to Singh House. Everyone Welcome them ..

Devyani : Baitiyee na.
Dada dadi sit.
Devyani : Mahenji nahi ayee.
Dada : Woh unhe kuch zaroori kaam tha esliyee.
Dadi : Hume aapke bete Shaina bahut pasand hain. Hum usse apne ghar ki bahu banana chahtey hain.
Devyani : Hume bhi yeh Rishtaa Manzoor hain lekin...
Dadi : Lekin kyaa.
Devyani : Mere bade beti Sunaina , uske shaadi bhi agar fix kar do to main apne choti beti Shaina ki Shaadi kara doo.
Dadi : Aapke bade beti Sunaina ke liyee rishtaa nahi mila.
Tulsi : Woh darasal Sunaina kissise pyaar karte hain aur vahi shaadi karna chahte hain.
Mihir : Aaj kal to Modern zamana hain to kabhi bachee apna humsafar khud hi chunte hain.
Dada : Bilkul sahi arey agar bachon ne apne Humsafar chun liyaa hain to Zabardasti unke shaadi hum kahe aur kyun kare. Aap bilkul sahe kar rahe hain.
Dadi : Waise Ladka kaun hain ? Kyaa aap jaante hain ?
Devyani : Ladke ka naam Karan hain , Karan Sikand. Uske papa aur mummy London se Agle hafte aa rahe hain. Phir unse baat karenge.

Dada , dadi look at each other and smile.

Dada : Phir to aapko agle hafte tak intezaar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi . Jald hi ache Mahurat par apke dono Betiyon ki sagai karvani ke taiyaari kar ligeye.
Everyone is surprised.
Dadi : Haan kyunki Karan mere dosre bete Mukul ka Beta hain. Aur hume Sunaina bhi Karan ke liyee manzoor hain.
Everyone is happy.
Dadi : Acha main jaane se pehley apne dono bahuo se milna chahatee hoon.

Tulsi brings both the girls and they touch dada dadi's feet. They bless them.Dadi takes out an Jwellery Set from her bag. And is going to give. Sunaina likes it and puts her hand forward. She gives it to Shaina's hand.
Shaina : Jee main woh,
Dadi : Haa tum , tumhee abh us ghar ke bade bahu ho. Mere bade pote ki biwi. Yeh humare Khandani haar hain , Humeshaa Badi bahuon ko diya jaata hain.

Devyani signs Shaina to take the Haar. And she takes it.Sunaina feels little jealous. Devyani remembers the Pandits saying that "Apke Choti beti ka auda sasuraal main jyaada hoga ".

Next :

Mukul and Aarti have come back.

Mahen : Mukul , kaisa raha wahah.
Mukul : Theek,
Mahen : Acha tumne kyaa socha thaa.
Mukul : Kis bare main.
Mahen : Aree London tum kissi Mr Max se milkar koi deal karna chahtee thee na to...
Mukul : haa haa nahi woh deal nahi ho payeege.
Mahen looks at him.
Mukul : Maine bahut koshish ki thee. Bahut Mehnant ki thee. Lekin ....
Mahen : Koi baat nahi.

They show us Mukul was actually enjoying in London so was Aarti.

Mukul- Aarti's room :
Aarti comes in angry.

Mukul : Kyaa hua ? Bahut upset lag rahe ho ?
Aarti : Humare bete ki saghai agle hafte hain , aur yeh hume pooncha nahi balki bataya gaya hain.
Mukul : Haa pata hain to.
Arti : To kyaa Karan mera beta hain , to bahu bhi to mere pasand ki hone chaheyee na.
Mukul : Etni saalon main tumne kabhi apne bachon ki liyee kuch nahi kiyaa aur abh..
Aarti : Kyaa matlab.
Mukul : Kuch nahi. Arey jaan, ladki Karan ke pasand ki hain. To tum bhi jaara apne chehre ka geography theek kar lo..


Next : Its the Engagement day.

Both the families are gathered togethere in Singh House. The ring ceremony takes place. Suddenly Shaina sees Kunal standing in some corner. She is surprised. Kabir realises.

Kabir : Yeh Kunal hain ,mera judwaa bhai.
Shaina : Oh. Hello.'
Kunal : Hello.
Kabir : Kunal tum enjoy nahi kar rahe ho.
Kunal : Main theek ho

Kunal goes off in some corner.

Kabir : Yeh mera bhai hain na. Bilkul alag hain mujhse , esse tarah seriously jeeta rehta hain. kuch enjoyment nahi hain, Thank God main Kabir hoon Kunal nahi.

Others come and pull them and Karan and Sunaina on the dancing floor. All of them also dance togethere.

Next Scene : Kabir alone in room.

Kabir : Off oh yeh kyaa musibat hain. Abh sagai main yeh haal hain to pata nahi shaadi main kyaa hoga. Main es shaadi ke musibat se kaise bacho.

Next Scene :

Dada comes to Mahens room.

Dada : Mahen tumne mujhe bulaaya.
Mahen : Haa papa yeh dekhiyee. 10 Crore Rs.
Dada : Yeh kyaa hain.
Mahen : papa woh Kabir naya business shuru karna chahta hain esliyee uske liyee 5 Crore Rs taiyaar kiya hain use dene ki liyee.
Dada : Aur bake 5 crore.
Mahen : Kunal ki liyee. Aap use de dena.
Dada looks at Mahen.
Mahen : Yeh sab main Nikhila ke liyee kar raha hoon, Woh Kunal se bahut pyaar karte thee. Aur waise bhi jitna Kabir ka hain utna hee Kunal ka bhi hain. Aap use de dena.
Dada : theek hain lekin pehle shaadi to ho jaane do. Panditji ne 10 din baad ka Mahurat bataya hain. Varna 8 maheney baad ka muharat hain. Esliyee main 10 din baad hi Shaadi karane ka faisla kiya. Ladki walon ko bhi Manzoor hain aur tum..
Mahen : Mujhe kyaa itraaz ho sakta hain papa.

Singh House :

Everyone is busy for wedding preparations. And its done. Devyani calls both the daughters to her room.

Shaina: Ma aapne bulaaya.
Sunaina : Kuch kaam tha.
Devyani : Haa do din baad tum dono ki shaadi ho jaaege. Aur apne apne ghar chale jaaoge. Lekin meri ek baat humeshaa yaad rakhna. Tum dono behne ho aur aage bhi apne es ristey to humeshaa nibhana. Aage chal kar tum dono ko aur bahut saare Rishtey Nibhaney hongee Biwi ka, Bhabhi ka , Bahu ka lekin apne maa ke yeh baat mat bhoolna.

Takes out a jwellery set and gives to Sunaina.
Sunaina : Wow , ma lekin.
Devyani : Un logon ne Shaina ko Jwellery set diya kyun ke woh abh us ghar ki bade bahu hain lekin es ghar ke bade bete hone ke nate main tumhey yeh dete hoon.

She gives two idols of Goddess Laxmi to her daughters.

Devyani: Main saare zindagi tum dono ke saath nahi hone wale hoon. Agar kabhi bavish main tum dono main se kissi ko aisa laga ki tum dono ke behno ka rishteey main koi darrar ya man mutav aaya hain to es murti ko dekh lena, Sabhi galat fame door ho jaaege.

Both the girls hug their ma.

Devyani : Acha jaao so jaao, kal Mehandi ki ceremony hain.

They leave and Devyani sees a picture of Sunaina and Shaina when small.

Next Scene :

Mehandi Ceremony is going on. Even the ladies of Kapoor House have come. Suddenly two girls wearing Ghugat come in. Everuone surprised to see them.

Girls to the Brides : Dekhon bhale hee aap dono un dono se shaadi kar rahe ho lekin woh dono hum dono se hi pyaar karte hain.
Both the brides are shocked.
Dadi : Kaun hain yeh dono ?
Aarti : Pata nahi.
Dadi : kaun ho tum .
Girls wohi jisse apke pote Kabir aur Karan sabse jyaada pyaar karte hain.
Aarti : Lekin Karan to Sunaina se ...
Dadi goes towards the girls and pulls their Ghugat . Its Palak and Kritika. Aarti hugs Kritika.

Dadi : Tum dono bhi na.
Kritika : Aajhe socha Mehindi main sab ko surprise de dee.
Palak : aur bhabhiyon se milee.
Dadi : Haan chalo milatee hoon.

Palak ; Namastey bhabhi umeed hain aap apne nanad ke mazak maaf karenge.
Kritika : Waise humne jhoot nahi kahan tha. Humare bhai humse bahut pyaar karte hain.

Next Scene :

Dada goes to Kunals Room. Kunal is tearful but wipes tears when sees dada.

Kunal : Arey dada aap yahah kya kar rahe hain ? Kal aapke dono poto ki shaadi hain aur aap ...
Dada : Bete sab se chupa , lekin mujhse.
Kunal : Nahi dadaji main theek hoon.

Dada gives him a bag ( with 5 crores ).
Kunal : Yeh kyaa hain.
Dada : Bete tum es paise se koi apna business shuru kar do.
Kunal ; Lekin dadaji.
Dada : Beta main bhi chahta tha ki sabhi pote ek saath business kare lekin Mahen ka jo tere prate bartav hain ... esliyee maine socha ki abh tum sab alag alag apna apna business kar lo.

Kabir sees dada giving the money. He does know that the same amount Mahen is planning to give him after wedding. He gets a call.

Kabir : Hello.
Caller : Arey Kabir babu mere paise kab doge. Ya main Mahen Kapoor se baat ...
Kabir : Main aapke paise aaj hi donga.
Caller : Agar aaj tak paise nahi deeye to kal main aa jaaoga paise lekar.

Next Scene :

Kunal is sleeping. Some hand is shown taking the money out of his cupboard and running, Kunal wakes up and follows him. Its Kabir.

Kunal : Kabir , Kahan jaa rahe ho.
Kabir : Main bhaag raha hoon, mujhe yeh shaadi nahi karne.
Kunal : Yeh aap kyaa keh rahe hain.
Kabir : Theek keh raha hoon, mujhe paison ki zaroorat thee esliyee maine natak kiya tha lekin abh paise mil gayee hain to ,,,
Kunal is shocked to hear Kabir's words. Kabir runs away. Dada has also seen and heard everything.

Next Scene :

In dada s room.

Dada : Main jaanta tha yeh ladka galat raho par chal raha hain, Mahen ko samjhaya tha lekin ...
Kunal : Abh kyaa kare. Sabko kaise batayege. Kal Shaadi hain aur ..
Dada : Sabko batane ki kyaa zaroorat hain ...
Kunal : Kyaa matlabe?
Dada : Shaayad Eshwar ko yehi manzoor hain . Varna tumhare Kundali Shaina se kaise milte.
Kunal : Aap kehna kyaa chahte hain.
Dada : bete Tum Shaina se shaadi kar lo.
Kunal : Kyaa yeh aap kyaa keh rahe hain.
Dada : theek keh raha hoon, Esse main sab ke bhalaee hain. Varna dono kandano ke izzat. Aur tu Shaina ko pasand bhi karta tha na.
Kunal : Woh baat purane hain ab woh mere Bhai ke hone wale patni hain.
Dada : Dekhon ghar main sab kitnee Khus hain .Kyaa tum yeh chahte ho ki .. Soch lo bete.

Dada leaves the room.Kunal is thinking what to do when Mahen comes in. He is shocked.Mahen comes and hugs Kunal.

Mahen : Kabir bete, aaj main bahut khus hoon, Aaj se tumhare Zimedari aur badegee. Vaise to maine tumhare alag business ki liyee paise nikalkar rakhe thee lekin main chahta tha ke hum dono saath main kaam kare.
Kunal : Papa main woh
Mahen : Nahi nahi bete koi zabardasti nahi hain. Jaise tum karna chaho. Aur Jawaab bhi mujhe aaram se sochkar dena.

Mahen kisses Kunal on the forehead and goes.

Kunal thinks ( Jis pyaar ke liyee main saare zindagi tarasta raha woh pyaar mujhe aaj mila , agar maine sach kaha to papa ese bardast nahi kar paaege , Woh to Kabir se bahut pyaar karte hain, nahi nahi main papa ko kuch nahi hone doonga. Abh es ghar ke khushi esse main hain ki main kabir ban jaao . Haa yehi theek hain AAJ SE MAIN KABIR HOON ).

End for today ...

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