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saba

@luv_pavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

oh god wht type of man he is feelin bad 4r gauri very confuse yaaar kapoor singhania n all well nice update plz do update asap

saba

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

hey saba..aw thanks for reading ..yey.. as i sort of carry on with the story you will understand...trust me on this one... it will all make sense later on.. thanks for commenting make next update so it becomes clearer... jagruti

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sonia

@Mrs.soniayk6

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

wowwwwwwwwwwww no words jagruti.once again u rocked with

" ansooni dastaan"

👏

👏.

the way u potraited shiv's role is simply superb.the way u described his disgusting nature n at the same time discribing his loving side with that small flashback is soooooooo nice.u balanced it very well.👏👏👏 👏. but yaar i hate shiv right now.sooooooo disgusting🤢 but i know u will again make us fall for our shiv kapoor.😆.a i loved gauri's role.gauri seems like typical indian bahu😕😕😕 .i pity her how she is able to handle her heartless husband😭.but loved her role.👏

once again a wonderfull begining n n a wonderfull track 👏n yaar concentrate on ur exams n do well in ur exams all the very best 4r ur exams

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

The story seems interesting but this shiv appears to be a casanova , poor gauri . But very eager to know how shiv kapoor changed into singhania. Waiting for the next update.

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saba

@luv_pavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: jagrutid
hey saba..aw thanks for reading ..yey.. as i sort of carry on with the story you will understand...trust me on this one... it will all make sense later on.. thanks for commenting make next update so it becomes clearer... jagruti

no need to b thnxx dear yeshh emm waitin 4r ur nxt update so dat i can understand😳

saba

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

wow jagruti!

u kno u roq yaar!!!!

bht acha conept hai as i told u well

thnx fr da pm darlin luvd it

bst of luk fr xamz!

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starfan.shrk

@starfan.shrk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

HEY!!!! tht ws such a sad part! but rlly likd it.da words u used n all, naerly made me cry u no, it ws so effective. i feel sorry 4 gauri n nasty shiv, alwayz hurtin hr n den wen itz 2 l8 he cumz 2 make up. but den thts wot its all bout aint it??!! well, con sooooooooon dear.👍🏼