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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: swetha10
OMG shiv is too much........he is so rude n arrogant.. my curiosity is mounting... very eager to knw wht happened in the past............ Anupam as usual is very sweet n caring.. PLzz continue soon............

hey, thank you so much for commenting..really do appreicate your feedback😊

yey your right there shivs all those things...good cuz thats how i wanted him to be..well for now anyway.. and as for the past..u'll have to wait and read my upcoming chapters..😉😊 thanks again..will try to update soon jagruti

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saba

@luv_pavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

oh god wht type of man he is ewwwwwwwwwww 😲well da way u r writtin n hav portrayed all da characters awesummmm i luved it still waitin to know dat y he has changed a lotttt gud going jagu plz do update asap n 4r u 👏well yesh i hate evil shiv but i know u willl make better everythingggg n will make us understand dat y shiv is doing all dat

saba😛

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Rose

@stranger2rose

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

the story is very interesting but this shiv is so evil and cheap , i knew he would ask for nisha ........ God knows what will gauri do now???????? Anyways thanks this part was long and satisfying. All the best for your remaining exams. Looking forward to your upcoming updates.

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

luv u jaanu

super updte!!!!

luv

reeno

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

bt shiv pe ghussa ata hai...par its interesting...nd shivz behaviour dz keep uz in2 reading

watever it iz luvd it!

reeno

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139271

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#46

finally caught up!! maan what is up with Shiv??🤢🤢🤢 he is so @#$@%#@$@#$@#%@# but more than Shiv i am pissed with Gauri for a putting up with a man like him no matter how much she loves him or how he loved her or how good he had been in the past! is it because of his hand?
why Kapoor and Singhania? why did he change his surname? did Kapoor's adopt him when he was small or the flash back Shiv is totally some other man?😕
ur fanfic is intruging and really nice...pls continue soon😃

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: luv_pavi
oh god wht type of man he is ewwwwwwwwwww 😲well da way u r writtin n hav portrayed all da characters awesummmm i luved it still waitin to know dat y he has changed a lotttt gud going jagu plz do update asap n 4r u 👏well yesh i hate evil shiv but i know u willl make better everythingggg n will make us understand dat y shiv is doing all dat

saba😛

hey! lol yey 😊 really really not a nice one..evil but apart from that glad you liked the update

cuz you are ment to be hating it so far..well shiv anyway.. 😊will try to updates soon thanks for your feedback saba jagruti

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: stranger in us
the story is very interesting but this shiv is so evil and cheap , i knew he would ask for nisha ........ God knows what will gauri do now???????? Anyways thanks this part was long and satisfying. All the best for your remaining exams. Looking forward to your upcoming updates.

hey u ok, good got the reaction i wanted..shiv really evil an all..but things will change..and yey gauri i know its tight on her but..u know..going with the concept..it will get better. thank you very much for your comment..and what will happen to gauri...u'll have to wait and find out...thank again. thankfully all exams are over with so going to relax for a bit.😊 will try to update soon jagruti

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!
bt shiv pe ghussa ata hai...par its interesting...nd shivz behaviour dz keep uz in2 reading
watever it iz luvd it!

reeno

hiya, sorry i think i sent you like multiple pms by mistake sorry.. but thank

you so much for reading..yey like ive said to everyone else...i want you to hate shiv in this ff..lol so that means ive mean succesful in writing his character then... but yey as the story goes on u'll see. thanks again really appreciate your feedback... jagruti 😊

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sonia

@Mrs.soniayk6

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Posted: 16 years ago

#50

yaar u made me hate shiv kapoor to death today😭.what type of human he is..so digustingggggggggggg🤢.ohhhhhhhhhh god shiv😲.n gauri feel sorry 4r her.poor girl going through so much n still loves him.hope she gets her love back😭.

n yaar no words.simply rocking.u proved a gud writer once again.the way u made us fall in love with in shiv ki gauri n the way u made us hate him to death proves ur talent yaar.keep up the gud work yaar.👏.

being soooo busy with studies n still made update that to a very intresting update.i really apprecaite ur work yaar👏