SBKuch Pal(nxt part updtd-(starfan.shrk)P32 - Page 8

shaleen or shabbir as v want da eldest son hmmm

ryt den....by the tym u gyz choose mahen's son...

Good one Reeno, Who is the guy ? the story sounds interesting. Better u continue from there. I will continue the Samar's story . And Shabir will be the perfect for the role. As he does look Yash's age. Also he will look good as negative and positive. His char name will be Milind ( cannot think of any else name) who will be negative at first and then change and become positive.

Scene

Kapoor Office. In Mahens cabin, Samar comes. Mahen is in deep thoughts.

Samar: Papa.
Mahen doesn't answer
Samar: Papa.
Mahen : haah, kuch kahan ?
Samar : Kyaa bat hain papa , aap bahut pareyshaan lag rahe hain.
Mahen : nahi nahi kuch nahi hain. Kya hua ? Kuch kaam thaa.
Samar : Mujhe es Project ke bare main aapse baat karne thee.

As they start talking the phone rings.

Mahen : Hello.
Mukul : Hello Brother.
Mahen : Aap.

Sees Samar in front and doesn't react.

Mahen : Samar, Mujhe kuch jaroore kaam hain. Hum yeh baad main discuss kare.
Samar: No problem papa. Main baad main aata hoon.

Samar leaves the room

Mahen : Aapko mere office ke number kaise mila.
Mukul : Bade loogon ka number pata lagana koi mushil nahi hain.
Mahen : Kyaa chahta hain aap ?
Mukul : Tumhey yeh batana chahta hoon ki agle haftey tumhara beta India aa raha hain.
Mahen : Mera beta.
Samar: Lekin aap kahan jaa rahey hain.
Mahen : Woh Mr Bhatiya ? Unse milkar aata hoon, main aata hoon.

Samar goes in thinking about his papa. While a manager comes.

Manager : Sir woh Mahen sir, receipt lena aur sign karna bhool gayee.
Samar : Kya matlab ?
Manager : Arey Mahen Sir abhi abhi 5 crore Rupess draw kar gayee.
Samar : Kyaa 5 crore Rs ?
Manager : jee
Samar: theek hain kal unse sign le lena aur yeh receipt mujhe do.

Next Scene :

K House. Late night, everyone else asleep.Only Samar is waiting for Mahen. Mahen comes late.

Mahen ; Arey Samar tum soi nahi.
Samar : Nahi woh main. Aapne 5 crore Rs nikale company ke account se,
Mahen shocked
Mahen : haa woh Bhatiya ko jarrorat thee, unke business main loss ho gaya than to ... maine.
Samar : aapnee bilkul theek kiya dad, I am proud of u, hume hamare doston ki madat karne chaheyee.
Mahen : Ok bete main bahut tha hua hu. Good Night.
Samar : Good Night.

Samar goes to his room. Phone rings.

Samar: Hello.
Caller: Hey Samar, its Raj ( Bhatiya's son).
Samar: Hi Raj. Kaise ho.
Raj: theek hoon, Aur tu suna bhabhi se kabh milaega.
Samar: Arey to ghar aana uncle ke saath.
Raj : Dad ke saath , fir to 2 haftey lagenge. Dad to mom ke saath World tour par gayee hain.
Samar : World tour ??
Raj : haan, yaar woh chocolate ki factory main humey bahut faida hua to Dad Mom ke saath ghoomne chakey gaye.
Samar: Lekin maine tu suna tha ki tumhara business main loss hua hain.
Raj : Kya ? Kisne kahan ? Aise afayee aur rumors par yakeen mat karna.
Samar : haa shaayad rumor hi tha.
Raj : ok yaar bye.
Samar : bye.

Next Scene. Library.Mahen is siting and thinking... Samar comes. Mahen pretends to read.

Samar: Papa aap yahan es waqt kya kar rahe hain.
Mahen : Woh mujhe need nahi aa rahe hain. to main kitaab pad raha hoon.
Samar: Kitaab ulti hain dad.

Mahen realises he was reading the book upside down.

Samar : Kyaa baat hain dad ? Aap kuch chepa rahe hain.
Mahen : Kya matlab.
Samar : Main jaanta hoon ki aapne woh 5 crore Rs Bhatiya uncle ko nahi deye, Woh to World tour par gayee hain.
Mahen is shocked.
Samar: papa aapne woh rs kisey diyee.
Mahen : Woh mera personal kharch tha.
Samar: Kaisa personal kharch papa.
Mahen Shouts Samar Maint tumhara baap ho.
Samar : Lekin papa aap yeh galat kar rahey hain. Kyun kar rahe hain aap aisa

Mahen lifts his hand on Samar. Nikhila comes.

Nikhila : Kya hua ?
Samar leaves the library.
Nikhila : Kya hua ? Mere aankh khule to mujhe pata chala ki aap aa gayee. Esliyee main... Khana laga doon.
Mahen : Mujhe bhook nahi.

Next Scene :

Samar's room. Samar is feeling bad. Trisha is consolling him.

Trisha : Samar Plzz papa pareyshaan honge.
Samar: Mujhe yakeen nahi hota hain Trish, pechleay 25 saloon main papa ne mujhe kabhi data bhi bahi aur aaj.
Trisha : Fikar mat karo Samar, sabh theek ho jaaega.
Samar : Kuch to baat hain , par kyaa ?

Next scene :

K House.

Phone rings. Nikhila picks and is shocked to hear...

Mahen goes to meet Mukul.

Mahen: Bhaiya , maine aapko 5 crore deeye. Abh to bataeyee mera beta kaahan hain.
Mukul : Maine kabh kahan main sirf 5 crore main bataooga tumhara beta kahan hain. Abhi to aur bhi ....
Mahen : Yeh Dhoka hain. Aapne mujhe dhoka diya.
Mukul : Aur tum, Tumne kya kiya ? tumne bhi to dhoka diya tha apne patni ko , woh aaj bhi Samar ko apna beta maante hain. Jab use pata chalega ki Samar uska beta nahi aur tum yeh jaante thay to ...

Mahen holds Mukuls collar then is stunned to see the door, Nikhila standing there. She has heard everything.

WAT?????? SHe'z heard evrything...?????????

okz...........frst of all ill cont da shreya thing....nd den cont da other MAIN story....i added dis bday thing so tht da drama wz a bit lyt....bt since a tension has already come in2 being...y try n hyd it??😉 btw..saba..sweety u askd us 2 keep dis positive...bt wat 2 do...no chancs of dis being gud gud nd +ve cz already many TWISTS hve been decided by me nd polly!😕😳😆 (actually most credt 2 polly)...(im a source...she is the mastermynd!!!!!)😳⭐️

gyz.... i really cant think of anything fr the shreya thing cuz da presnt thing ie samar/mukul/mahen thing is revolvin in my mynd...so il jst brief up tht

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

okz...........frst of all ill cont da shreya thing....nd den cont da other MAIN story....i added dis bday thing so tht da drama wz a bit lyt....bt since a tension has already come in2 being...y try n hyd it??😉 btw..saba..sweety u askd us 2 keep dis positive...bt wat 2 do...no chancs of dis being gud gud nd +ve cz already many TWISTS hve been decided by me nd polly!😕😳😆 (actually most credt 2 polly)...(im a source...she is the mastermynd!!!!!)😳⭐️

bt i promise...the day i start my FF, i wont disappoint u nd will cm up wid ideas which will hopefully interest u nd wont b hrtbreaking...nd widout major tensions...bt sum tensions r needed na?..2 keep da readrs involvd?😃

so..................... dunno well many FFs r goin on nd dere is simply no need fr myFF plus jagruti jst startd an awesum 1 so... im a typical noone hre...bt letz c wat happnz in the near future!

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

gyz.... i really cant think of anything fr the shreya thing cuz da presnt thing ie samar/mukul/mahen thing is revolvin in my mynd...so il jst brief up tht

....the man wz mukul

....he wz talkin 2 his partner...his frn...who is mohnish behl

....he 2 wantz da barbaadi of kapoorz

....he helpd him swap da kids

....bt he is nt as bad as mukul

................................................so now no prev continuations....the bday thing is over

now all of us will concentrate on mms (short fr da samar/mukul/mahen tragedy!)

i dnt really hve tym ryt now

gotta rush bt i hve sumthing in mynd 2 ryt which i will bt wen i gt tym...itz 11:30 nyt hre...bt im really sleepy!🥱so ill catch up wid da story aftr cmin frm skool

gyz...im jst about 2 hve ma board examz..in jan...plz PRAY 4 ME!😳😕

LUV

reeno

yup thnx fr ur support nd ceautiful cmnts saba...luv u dear.....thnx on polly's behalf also (payal)

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

yup thnx fr ur support nd ceautiful cmnts saba...luv u dear.....thnx on polly's behalf also (payal)

i really want 2 start a new FF bt i dont kno whether ppl will read it or nt nd plus.... mayb kuch pal will bcum neglectd i hve all da story wagaira in mynd...bt even polly insists tht v conc. on kuch pal.......is KP gettin borin??

well....ltz c if i will hve a gud amnt of readers following..... i m sure 2 start it...bt u gyz will hve 2 spport me.... A LOTTT!!!

da update will b hre.....in no tym!!!