SBKuch Pal(nxt part updtd-(starfan.shrk)P32 - Page 6

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Ok I am back .....

Scene continues where Reeno left.

Rohit: Acha chalo khana kha lete hain,
Catherin: Haan tum kha lo, mujhe friend ki ghar jaana hain.
Rohit : Es waqt.
catherin : Oh stop it , Abhi to tum mere husband bhi nahi ho aur abhi se, mujhe azaadi se jine ki aadat hain , Plzz. Khana Dining table par hain garam karke kha lena, Mujhe der ho jaaege. Tum so jaana, Byee.

Rohit feels bad but doesn't say anything. He serves himself and eats alone remembering how he used to eat with his family in the house togethere laughing and joking and he coughs in his ( Flash Back )and his mom gives him water saying "Sambhalkar Rohit" and he really coughs while Disha at home takes water and turns towards Rohits seat. Finds it empty without Rohit.She feels bad and goes off to her room withour eating.

Next Scene.

Karan comes to the room.

Karan : Kya hua Disha ? Tum chale kyun aayee ?
Disha : Mujhe Bhook nahi hain.
Karan : Rohit ki wajay se.
Disha : Kaise baap hain aap, aapko chinta nahi hai.
Karan : Chinta hain, par main yeh bhi jaanta hoon ki main 6 bachon ka baap hon lekin shaayad tum yeh bhool gayee ho.
Disha : yeh aap kya keh rahe hain , mere liyee sabhi ek jaise hain.
Karan : tumne khana nahi khaya to bachon ne bhi nahi khaya.
Disha : Kyaa ?

We see Rahul, Ronit, Esha and Nisha standing at the door.

Nisha : Haan ma aapke bina khana kaise kha sakte they.
Rahul : ma humare liye kha leejeeyee.
Esha : varna hum bhi nahi khaege.
Ronit : plzz ma.

Disha goes with them and eats.

Next scene

K House.

shiv is unable to sleep

M House

Nisha also unable to sleep

Nisha calls Shiv( not mobile) .

Shiv picks the phone : Hello Nish
Nisha: Tumhe kaise pata chala ki main hoon.
Shiv: Bas mujhe pata tha ki tumara phone hain, mere bare main sooch rahe thee na,
Nisha blushes.
Suddenly Esha comes to her room. And Nisha is shocked.

Nisha : Acha acha Shivangi, bolo.
Shiv ( surprised ) : Shivangi, kya hua tumhey ? Main Shiv hu ?
Nisha: pata hain pata hain bolo bolo.
Shiv : Acha koi aya hain kya.
Nisha : haa haa Shivangi , kal paanch baje class khatam hoga to miltey hain. Bye Good Nite.
Shiv : Good Nite.

Esha gives naughty smile.

Nisha : Aise kya dekh rahe ho ?
Esha : kuch nahi. Lagta hain tum bhi jaldi hi Trisha didi ki paas jaane wale ho.
Nisha blushes.

Next Scene.

M House.

Everyone at breakfast table. Disha is bringing Break fast, Suddenly she faints. All run towards her and take her to hospital.

NExt Hospital Scene.

Esha , Nisha, Rahul, Ronit and Karan are there. Trisha , Samar and Nikhila come.

Trisha: Kyaa hua ?
Esha: Didi ma achaanak behosh ho gayee.
Nisha: doc abhi tak nahi bata rahe hain

Doc comes : Bahut stress liya , esse ki karan behosh ho gayee hain. Abhi sab theek hain , enka khayal rakha keejeeye. Yeh behoshi main Rohit ka naam le rahe thee.

Next Scene

Trisha calls Rohit.

Rohit:Trisha , kaise ho ? Sabh kaise hain ?
Trisha: Aapko kya, hum hain kaun aapke liye.
Rohit : Aisa mat bolo.
Trisha : To kya bolon , ma ki tabhiyaat kharab hain aur aap...
Rohit : Maa, kya hua ma ko, sabh theek to hain na.
Trisha : Maa hospital main hain .and tells him everything.

Rohit comes to hospital. Karan stares at him but leaves, Rohit goes to his mothers cabin. Mother is happy to see him

Disha: Rohit tum aa gayee.
Rohit: haa maa.
Disha : Kitney dubley ho gayee ho.
Rohit : Kahan maa, tumhe to main humesha dubla dikhta hoon.
Disha has tears and Rohit wipes them. A

Disha : Tum Catherin ke saath khus to ho na.
Rohit : haa ma bahut khus hoon, aap aisa kyun pooch rahe ho.
Disha : Mujhe to sirf tumhare khusi chaheeyee beta. Catherin nahi aayee.
Rohit : AAte hogi , Maine us phone to kiya tha ki woh bhi hospital aayee lekin ....
Karan comes in and Rohit goes out.

Rohit tries Catherin's phone but its switched off. Gets irritated and leaves.

Next Scene.

Rohit is waiting for Catherin. Catherin comes late.
catherin: Hi darling, howz mom ?
Rohit : Tum hospital kyun nahi aayee.
Catherin : Woh main aa rahe they, mere ek aunty ko heart attack aaya to main usse dekhne chalegayee, Main wahee thee.

Catherin moves some bill falls from her purse. Its Beauty Parlor bill, Rohit sees that and.

Rohit: To yeah hain tumhare bemaar aunty.
Catherin: Haa main beauty parlor main the to, tumhare ma ko kuch hua to nahi na. Aur waise bhi mujhe yeh rishteey pasand nahi.
Rohit : Catherin ( angrily )
Catherin: Tum apne ma se abh apna hisaa maang lo. Agar use kuch ho gaya to tumhara baap tumhe kuch nahi dega. Acha hota agar ma ki jagah tumhare papa ko kuch ho jaata.
Rohit tries to slaap and Catherin holds his hand.

Catherin : Mujh par haat mat uthana, Main un ladkiyon ki tarah nahi hoon, us Diya ki tarah.
Rohit : Khabardar agar Diya ki khilaf kuch kahan to.
Catherin: Kyun tumhey kyun takaleef ho rahe hain.
Rohit: kitna farak hain tum dono main. Usne humeshaa meri madat ki aur tum, Maine tumhare liee apna sab kuch choda aur tumne.
Catherin: Maine nahi kahan tha tumse sab kuch chodne ki liyee.
Rohit : Haan galat kiya maine jo tumse pyaar kiya aur usse bhi badi galti ki ki Diya ko thokraya tum jaise ladki ki liyee.
Catherin : Mujh jaise ladki, tum khud kyaa ho aur woh Diya
Rohit ; Stop it
Catherin : Kya rishtaa hain tumhara Diya se. Pyaar Karte ho kya usse.
Rohit : Haa haa haan main Diya se pyaar karta hoon, Bahut pyaar karta hoon.

Rohit turns towards the door and is stunned to see Diya there.

aaaaaaa.......

I am back here goes.

Scene
Its the Music Company Office, some clients have come. Ronit and Ria are talking to them.

Rohit; Sir yeh music , India aur India ke bahar dhoom macha dega.
Client : Mujhe nahi lagta.
Client 2 : Haan, aisa music to sirf youngsters hi sun sakte hain , hume to sab ke liyee chaheyee.
Ria : To sir es music ki bare main kya khayal hain, es main humne young or old sabhi generation ki pasand ks khayal rakha hain.
Client 1 : Wow , es kehte hain music.
cleint 2: Waakai main.

Ronitn feels insulted but doesn't say anything.

Client: Aage se aisa music hi suna deejee, woh pehla to KABAD tha. Hum apna contract cancel karne ki sooch rahe they/
Client 2 : Riaji aapko ES COMPANY CHALANA chaheeyee. ha ha ha ha ha

Clients leave.

Ronit: Mil gayee tasalee tumhe mujhe neecha dekhakar.
Ria: Ronit, tumhey aisa kyun lagta hain, kya problem hai.
Ronit: Mujhe kya problem hain ? tumhare kyaa problem hai ?
Ria : Oh stop it Ronit u r overreacting.
Ronit : Maine papa ke kehne par tumhey yahan kaam diya aur tum ....
Ria : To maine bhi mehnat aur lagan se es Company ka faida kiya hain , tumne koi ehsaan nahi kiya.
Ronit : Shut Up and Get Lost.
Ria : U get lost.

Ria leaves and Ronit bangs the table.

K House.

Trisha is standing on a stool trying to hang a picture frame of Her and Samar in her room. Sam comes suddenly and Trisha slips and falls on Sam's arm ... And he carries her.

Trisha ( blushes ): Aap, aap itni jaldi kaise aayee.
Sam: Bas uhi.
Trisha ( blushes ): Main aapke liye chai laate hoon.
Sam: hmmmm
Trisha ( blushes ) Mujhe neechey to utariyee ( he is still carrying her )
Sam: Ek shart par.
Trisha : Kaise shart .
Sam : Tum aage se es tarah circus nahi karogee.
Trisha: Main circus nahi kar rahe thee yeh pic laga rahe thee.
Sam : ohhh acha.
Trisha: BAs bahut hua.Abh mujhe neechey utaryee . Koi aa jaaega.

Suddenly Sumit comes.

Sumit: Bhaiyaa , main woh

Sees Sam carrying Trisha. Sam leaves Trisha down.
Sumit : Oh sorry main baad main aata hoon ap apne WEIGHT LIFTING exercise karte raheyee.

Trisha blushes and goes out.

Sumit : Waise Bhaiya aapne kabhi mujhe to Goode main nahi uthaya.
Samar: Acha , aaja uthata hoon.
Sumit: Really

Goes to Samar. Samar lifts his hand ( jokingly trying to beat him) and Sumit runs out.

Next Scene.

Rohit unable to sleep.

Rohit thinking .Main Diya ki bare main etna kyun soochta hoon, kya woh sirf mere dost hain yahan kuch aur.

M House.

Diya also is thinking about Rohit.

Next scene.

Resturant.

Shiv and Nisha are togethere.
Shiv : To tumhare classes kaise chal rahe hain ?
Nisha : Theek aur tum kaam kar rahey ho na yaa Samar jeeju hi sara kaam karte hain aur tum ....
Shiv : Very funny.

Shivs mobile rings .... its Samar.

Shiv : Arey baap re bhaiya mar gayee. Hello bhaiya.
Sam: Shiv kahan ho tum.
Shiv : Woh main client ke saath... ek bahut imp client hain, usse ki saath deal kar raha hoon.

Sam is also in the same resturant with Trisha. Sam comes behind Shiv and Nisha sees but Sam signes her to be quite.

Sam: Kaunse client.
Shiv : Bhaiya naya client hai.
Trisha laughs silently.

Sam: Achaa deal karna ha.
Shiv: Haa bhaiya, aap fikar mat karo . Main yeh deal bahut achee tarah se kar loonga.

Sam keeps is hand on Shivs shoulder and Shiv turns back.

Shiv: app yahan , bhabhi bhi.... app yahan kya kar rahey hain ?
Samar: Aur tum dono yahan kya kar rahey ho, yeh mujhe pochne ki zaroorat nahi.
Trisha: Lagta hain abh ghar main jald hi Shahnaee bajne wale hain.
Shiv blushes : Kyaa bhabhi aap bhi.
Nisha : blushes and runs from there so does Shiv.

Samar and Trisha laugh/

awwwwwww...i love where this story is going =) shiv-nisha, samar-trisha and rohit-diya's stories are just perfectttt :] u guys are doing an amazing job...ill try and see when i get the time to fill in..lets seee :)

yup loveabletwinz (annet nd janet) giv it a try......v'll all b really happy nd supportive!