SBKuch Pal(nxt part updtd-(starfan.shrk)P32 - Page 7

actually...dis miss attitude iz ma czn

The birthday of Shreyas its better if u continue ... I will write the story after that. This story of mine is after Shreya birthday is over.

guys I have decided to unite Rohit-Diya now .... we start another twist later.

Scene.

Rohit has come back from office early. He sees Catherin with another man.

Catherin: Oh Robie , Main kyaa bataoo. Us bewakoof ko maine esliyee phasaya tha ki wo amir hain lekin woh to sabh kuch chodkar aayaa hain. Humara saara plan fail ho gaya.
Robbie: Darling to use chod kyun nahi dete.
Catherin : Main bhi yehi soch rahe hoon.

Rohit enters the room. Both are shocked.

Rohit ( shouts ): Catherin. U main tumhey zinda nahi chodonga.
Robie comes and holds him
Robie : Don't u dare
Rohit : Maine tumhare liyee etna sab kiya aur tum
Catherin : Tumhare parivaar ne tumhare liye etna sab kiya aur tum un sab ko chodkar aaye.

Rohit is stunned to hear that.
Rohit: Haa tum theek keh rahe ho , mere saath to yeh hona hee tha.

Rohit just leaves the place.

Next Scene :

Rohit walking on the Road thinking about the good times with family and about Diya.

Rohit (thinking )Maine acha nahi kiya .... apne parivaar ko chod diya ... Diya ke sache pyaar ko thukraya ... abh main unke paas nahi jaa sakta.

While walking he comes under a car. Its Mahen's car.Mahen comes out and sees Rohit and is shocked.

Next Scene:

Hospital scene:

Rohit gets up.

Mahen: Sambhal kar bete, kaise ho ?
Rohit: Main yahan kaise ?
Mahen: Tum raaste main behosh ho gayee they kya hua. bahut kaam kartey ho kyaa.
Rohit: Hosh main to main abh aaya hoon.
Mahen: Kya Matlab ?

Rohit tells him everything about Catherin, Robie.

Rohit: Abh main ghar kaise jaao, kiss muh se jaao ?

We hear a Chorus voice " Jaise Chodkar gayee they waise hi waapas aa jaao "

Ronit, Esha, Nisha and Rahul are there. All come and hug Rohit. Disha has also come.

Rohit : Maa.
Disha comes and hugs him

Next Scene:

Malhotra house.

Everyone come with Rohit. Karan is siting. He stares at Rohit. Rohit goes towards him.

Rohit: papa main
Karan hugs him.
Karan : Welcome back Son, Tum vaapas aa gaye bas itna hi kafi humare liyee.

Karan also has tears and scene is emotional.

Ronit : Bas bahut hua, abh aur aasoon nahi.
Nisha : Abh to party honi chaheyee
Esha : yes u r rite.
Disha : Party to hogi he , us main Rohit aur Diya ki sagaai bhi kara denge.
Rahul : Wow matlab abh humey bhabhi milege.

Next Scene:

The Party.

Rohit and Diya exchange rings. Everyone clapp. Everyone is there except Samar. Samar had a important meeting so is on the way.

Trisha calling Samar.
Trisha: Samar tum kahan ho. Tumhare behen ki sagaai hain aur tum,
Samar: Arey mujhe kya pata ki meeting etna waqt lega. Aaj hi ense milna jaroore tha varna yeh kal Germony chale jaate.
Trisha: Mahurat par function to ho gaya. tum jaldi aao.
Samar: Bas nikil raha hoon. 15 min mein pohoch jaaoga.

Everyone is dancing and enjoying. Rohit takes Diya aside.

Rohit : Diya maine tumhare saath jo kuch bhi kiya, Plzz mujhe Maaaf
Diya : Bas Rohit , abh tum vapas aa gayee, mere liyee bhi yehi kafi hain.
Rohit : Aaj se mere zindagi aur mere dil par sirf tumhara haq hain.
Diya : Mere Zindagi tu tumhare hain Rohit.

Rahul, Esha and Nisha come there.

Rahul : Bas bas bahut hua, ab hum aap dono ko nahi chodenge.
Esha : Haan chaleyee.

they take them to dance and they also dance.

Samar is driving very fast to reach the place and suddenly meets with an accident.
While dancing, Mahen gets a call. And he gets tensed. Nikhila sees him and goes to him.

Nikhila: Kya hua ?
Mahen : kuch nahi, mujhe jaana hoga.
Nikhila : aap kaise jaa sakte hain.
Mahen : Bahut zaroori hain.
Nikhila : Aisa kya zaroori kaam hain tumhey ?
Mahen: Nikhila , woh Samar
Nikhila : Samar ?? kya hua Samar ko ?
Mahen : Samar ka accident ho gaya hain.
Nikhila : Kyaa
Mahen: Dekhon kissi aur ko mat bataao, sabhi pareyshaan hoonge. Main hospital jaakar dekhta hoon.
Nikhila: Main bhi chalte hoon.

Both leave. everyone is busy dancing and enjoying so no one sees them go.

Next Scene:
Hospital. doc comes out.

Nikhila: Doc, Kaisa hain humara beta ?
Doctor: Dekhiyee Khoon bahut beh gaya hain, Khoon ki zaroorat hain.
Mahen: Humara Khoon le leejeeye.

Doctor takes them both for test.

After sometime doctor calls Mahen inside.

Doctor: Mr Kapoor , Samar aapka apna beta hain ?
Mahen ( irritated ) Yeh aap kyaa pooch rahey hain , of course Samar mera beta hain.
Doctor : Dekhiyee, Samar ka Blood Grp aapse aur apki patni dono se match nahi kar raha hain esliyee maine socha ki ...
Mahen : Esey kaise ho sakta hain.
Doctor : Don't worry aapka beta abh Khatrey se bahar hain , use khoon mil gaya. Actually jo unhe Hospital layee they unka khoon ki match kar gaya. Unhone Khoon dekhar aapke bete ko bachaya.
Mahen: Main usse milna chahta hoon.
Doctor : Lo woh aa gayee.
Mahen turns back. And is shocked to see a man standing behind him.

Its Mukul ( Mukul Dev plays the role ) Mahens older brother standing there.

continuing here.

Mahen is stunned to see Mukul here.Doc leaves the room.

Mahen: Aap
Mukul: Haan main tumhey kya laga main kabhi waapas nahi aaoga. Bahut purana hisaab lena hain tujhse.
Mahen : Kyaa matlab ??
Mukul : Bahut jald samajh jaaogee. Samar tumhara beta ...
Mahen ; Samar mera beta hain, mera beta samjhe ...
Mukul : Apne aap se kabh tak jhoot bolenge.

Mahen leaves the room and goes to Samar's room and Nikhila is siting beside unconsious Samar.

Next Scene:
Next Day :

Everone in the K house. Trisha is weeping.

Karan: Mujhe kyun nahi batayaa
Nikhila: Hum sab ko pareyshaan nahi karna chahatey they.
Nisha : Lekin yeh achanak kaise hua.
Rahul: Haan bhagwaan ka shukar hain sab theek hain.
Esha: Haan

Mahen and Shiv bring Samar back. They take Samar to his room.

Trisha comes.

Samar: Kya hua naraaz ho ?
Trisha : haan main bahut naaraz ho, aapko kya jaroorat the itne tez gadi chalane ki.
Samar: Lekin main.
Trisha : Mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Main aapse baat nahi karonge
Samar : To main accident se to bach gaya lekin abh nahi bachoonga,

Trisha holds his mouth and they both hug.

Mahen in the room thinking Mukul waapas aa gaya. Itney sallon baad. Ghar main Nikhila ke elawa koi nahi jaanta ki woh mera bhai hai.

Mukul also drinking and thinking Bhai , bhai nahi mera sabse bada dushman hain yeh, jab se paida hua mera sab kuch cheen lia. Papa bhi use Ram aur muje Ravan Samjhtey they.

Flash back

Their papa yelling at Mukul before Mahen.

Papa: Kab apne zimaydari samjhey ga. Yeh sharab aur juaa. Apne chote bhai ko dekh abhi se kaam main mera haath bata raha hain.
Mukul : papa main kaam nahi sakta. AAp mujhe mera hiss de digeye

Papa is about to slap him, Mahen stops.
Papa : Kaisa hissa. Tumhara koi hissa nahi hain yahan, Get out chale jaao yahan se.

Next Scene:

after few months.

Nikhila is in hospital for delivery.

Papa is at home. Talking to some friend.

Papa: haa bhai mera pota aa raha hain, sab kuch useka hain. Main aaj bahut khus hoon.
turns back and is surprised to see Mukul there.

Mukul : papa aap dada ban gayee. Yeh dekhiyee aapka pota.
Papa: yeh , yeh mera pota nahi hain, tumhare aur us Nachney wale ka bacha mera pota kabhi nahi ho sakta.
Mukul : Aisa mat kaheye papa, eski ma abh es duniya main nahi rahe, kal ese janam dekar.
Papa : Chale jaao yahan se,

As Mukul is leaving. Phone rings.

Papa: hello.
Mahen: Papa . beta hua.
Papa : Mujhe pata tha. Main aa raha hoon.

Next Scene in hospital .

Papa is giving money to all the nurses and workers in hospital. Mukul goes to the childrens ward, sees Mahens baby there. And thinks " Sab kuch mere bete ka hoga " and he swaps the kids.
Turns towards the door and is shocked to see Mahen there,

Mahen : Bhaiya aap yeh kya kar rahey hain.
Mukul runs from there . Mahen runs behind him but Mukul is too fast for him. Mahen comes back thinking " How will I tell this to Nikhila "

Mahen comes back and sees Nikhila with a baby ( Mukuls ) and papaji is also there.

Nikhila: aayee na , dekhiyee bilkul aap ki tarah dekhta hain , hain na.
Mahen Smiles and thinks :yeh sahi waqt nahi hain Nikhila ko bataney ka, Sai Waqt aane par bata doonga.

Flash Back ends

Mahen is thinking " Sahi Waqt to pechley 25 saloon ki bad bhi nahi aaya . Maine Mukul bhaiya ko dhoondne ki bahut koshish ki lekin woh nahi miley. Sirf woh jaante hain ki mera beta kahan hai. Ghar main yeah baat kissiko nahi maloom hain ki Samar mera beta nahi, Aur main chahata bhi nahi hoon ki kissi ko pata chaley. Aur Samar mera hi beta hain, Sirf mera , Lekin kya mera woh beta , kaisa hain , kya karoon main )

He sees Samar standing at the Mahen surprised.

Mahen: Bete tum yahan.
Samar: Papa aap pareshaan lag rahe hain. Kya baat hain /
Mahen : Kuch nahi woh main
Samar : Mere baare main soch rahey they na.
Mahen : Haan woh.
Samar : papa main bilkul theek hoon, fikar mat kareyee.

Samar and Mahen hug each other.

End for now.

who can play Mahens real sons role ? shud he be a positive or a negative char . I think Negative. Enough of good people here. And I think Mosh of KAA will suit the role. We can have the name Mosh as well. What do u think ?

Originally posted by: Peepo

who can play Mahens real sons role ? shud he be a positive or a negative char . I think Negative. Enough of good people here. And I think Mosh of KAA will suit the role. We can have the name Mosh as well. What do u think ?

Is anyother way u wud like the story do let me know here or thru PMs as well >

Originally posted by: Peepo

who can play Mahens real sons role ? shud he be a positive or a negative char . I think Negative. Enough of good people here. And I think Mosh of KAA will suit the role. We can have the name Mosh as well. What do u think ?

Is anyother way u wud like the story do let me know here or thru PMs as well >

how can I decide negative or positive now ? I think negative at first then changes to positive. but who can play the role ,. Any one else suggest , So far its a tie ...

Originally posted by: Peepo

how can I decide negative or positive now ? I think negative at first then changes to positive. but who can play the role ,. Any one else suggest , So far its a tie ...

ill decyd out of dese choices nd tell u gyz soon yaar!

ok....v have choices 4.....