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Shiv ki Gauri

Chapter 8

Recap: night of the wedding, Prateek forces Shiv into having conversation on gauri condition following the incident..prateek hands shiv his mobile phone which shiv seemed desprate to find during his wedding and on prateek asking him the reason for this shiv mentioned important buisness contacts as the excuse. Dadi tells shiv that gauri is staying in the guest room for the night as this will help settle her condition and make her feel comfortable in the house. Shiv enters the guest room to check on gauri to find her sleep..covers her with his shoal and leaves. In the morning gauri finds her self all alone in the house when shiv begins to demand his morning drink. Unknown to what shiv expects and with a fear of having to confront him and possibly his anger for the first time gauri takes up a drink which she finds lying in the kitchen unaware of what it is. Shiv takes advantage of her nervousness for his own pleasure and tells her that if the drink she had bought up for him turned out to be wrong then she would have to suffer the consequences. Shiv takes a sip of the drink when his phone rings and interrupts ..shiv rushes off and gauri is saved from the situation. Later on whilst in her appointment with prateek shiv rings to ask about the therapy session ..and informs gauri that she had served him the wrong drink and therefore she is in trouble and he would inform her of the consequences when he gets home.

4pm in the kapoor house it had been hours since gauri had returned from her appointment with prateek and ever since having returned she had been busy, it was her first day in kapoor house dadi was making her go through all the traditions of a daughter inlaws first day at her new home from…doing very first puja in the house to cooking her very first meal. Dadi was pleasantly surprised by gauri's talents she knew that being aloks daughter she would have great knowledge of tradition and culture, spirituality and faith but she had also inherited his singing talents which dadi discovered when she had asked gauri to so the arti..she was the ideal bahu for the family incredibly innocent, well mannered and rooted. It was her very first day and the family could not stop complementing her……

"khene padeka Krishnaji hamari bahu naa aapse behetar meethai banati hai!"

dada,dadi,mehen and mehen's sister and brother in law (maya and aiyush) just arrived at kapoor house for a visit and were busy catching up in the seating area of the house whilst gauri was surving them the first dish she had made…

Aiyush: kheer!!!! Wah…badi achi hai beta.. he complemented whilst having his mouth full... gauri giggled at the fact maya was scolding him on eating like an ape..

Maya: bilkul janvar ki tare khate ho.. kabhi toe sudhro ge

Ayush: Tum kuch bhi kehlo maya.. mein toe khaaoonga …aur aise hein vaise tum toe aise ache kher to nahi banatatee…

Having served the kheer to each person gauri was standing there waiting for there verdict on how it tasted she couldn't help but laugh at maya and ayiush's bickering.

Maya notices gauri laughing ..Gauri yey toe aise hein hain u'll get used to it…tum vaha kyun khadhi ho..kheer bohot achi hai now..yaha akar hamare saath behto naa aur muje naa tumhe sagun dena hai.

Gauri comes and sits on the sofa next to maya

Maya: yey lo beta, maya opens her purse up and pulls out some money and hands it to gauri.

Gauri: magar is ke kyaa sarurat hai … maya interrupts

Nahi yey naa ek rasam hai..jab bahu peli baad kuch banati hai na toe bade tofa dete hai Sorry hum ne naa shaadhi miss ki woh aiyush ko bemari hone se baje haam travel nahi kar sake. Maya smiles at gauri.

Vaise tum in saab rasmon se thak gayee hogi naa…vaise woh wali rasam ki kya…jab naye dulha dulhan saab ke samne ek dusre ko apni dil ke baat batate hai

Maya: Nahi maa…!

Dadi: aise koi rasam nahi hote maya…

Maya: Hote hai…meine ki thi naa meri shaadhi ke vakt …

Dada: Nahi beta ..hamari ghar mein aise rivas toe nahi hai

Maya: Woh hoti hai !!! aiyush nai mujse…iska maatlab tum ne jooth kaha tha…

Aiyush: hah woh toe meine aise hein jooth muth ke banayeethi..

Maya looks at him in dis belief and annoyance: "KYA JOOTHI RASAM!"

Aiyush: agar mein yey nahi karta toe tum pyaar ka Ishaar kaise karti!!!!!

Maya: …tum!!!

Dadi tries to brake up the quarrel as the rest of the family sit in ammusment of the conversation, on the other hand gauri is sitting quitly..realeved of the fact that she wouldn't have to do anything of that sort it was bad enough thinking about what happened in the morning at what shiv's response would be to the mistake she made with his drink she hadn't even plucked up the courage to make eye contact with him never mind doing anything like talking to him in front of the whole family..

Dadaji: ok ok, never mind rasam nahi hai toe banalon is mein kaun si badi baat hai…aajse yey Is ghar ka naya rivas hoga. Kush!

Maya: "ok..thanks papa, koi to meri baat soonta hai"

Gauri got her hopes up to high she thought she had escaped…but not yet, she felt nervous.

Dadi noticed gauri's silence and to make her feel better dadi added:

"Magar gauri ko itaraas naa ho toe, gauri ko koi nahi satayega"

A sharp husky voice came from the distance:

"Gauri ko kaun sataraha hai???"

Everyone but gauri turned around to see shiv standing at the entrance of the room.

Hearing his voice put a shiver through gauri she knew it was shiv and as soon he had finished his words gauri got up from her seat to try to make a run for the kitchen to avoid him but..this wasn't good Idea the atmosphere went all quite with everyone seated gauri ended up be caught trying to escape. She was now standing alone amongst the family who were looking at her in question to where she was going and not to menion the presense of shiv who was staring directly at her with a questioning expression on his face

Seeing gauri uncomfortable and overhearing dadi talking about not teasing gauri..Shiv asked again this time aimed the question directly at gauri:

"Tumhe kaun sataraha hai gauri?" shiv asked again in a more serious tone.

Gauri was standing nervously trying to avoid shiv looking everywhere but at shiv fiddling with her sari pallu,

Gauri very quietly replys: "nahi..woh " she struggles to complete her words when dadi jumps in to help.

Dadi:"nahi shiv, gauri ko koy nahi sataraha..woh toe haam rasam ki baat kar rahe the, waise tum aaj early agaye.." dadi gets up from her seat and starts bombarding shiv with the usual stuff. Whilst dadi explains to shiv gauri takes advantage and makes her escape which Shiv does not fail to see but he lets it go.

Shiv: " yey Kaunsi rasam ki baat ho rahi hai??"

Maya: "mein batati hoon shiv" maya smiles at shiv who responds back with a smile.

"is rasam mein naa naye dulha dulhan ek dusre ko sab ke samne samne apni dil ke baat kehni hoti hai, magar lagta hai tumari dulhan toe sharmagaye."

Knowing that gauri is still part way to the kitchen and she can still hear shiv takes advantage.

Shiv: "is mein kaun se badi baat hai bua, agar aap keh rahee hai toe yey rasam bhi puri kardete hai." Shiv watches gauri as he speaks gauri was paused just at the exit of the room on hearing what shiv had said.

Maya: "nahi shiv.. gauri toe chali gayee ab nahi ho sakta" shiv gave a mischievous grin having noticed gauri standing at the doorway of the room listening.

Shiv:toe kya hua, meri girlfriend hai naa.

Maya: Girlfriend! Maya was confused expression on her face. Whilst dadi,mehen and dadaji were smiling as they had clocked on to the fact that gauri was still present in the room and shiv was making an up most effort to tease her.

Gauri overheard was even more shocked. Shiv looked at her grining.. unaware to the fact that shiv was watching her..gauri's confusion became impenint ..she started going pale shock as well as trying to handle her nerves at the same time. She thought to herself: girl friend?? she was stunned.

Shiv stood stud in amusement whilst dadi gave him disapproving looks on how he was teasing gauri.

Shiv: "yey girlfriend, bohot purani girlfriend bua..aap janti hai naa she's drop dead gorgeous"

Maya now gets the jist and joins in "kaun..hai tumari toe itni sari girlfriends hai naa yaad nahi rehta…hame bhi kabhi milaon!"

Its all getting too much for gauri now she cant belive what shes hearing and now maya bua was also talking.. unki girlfriend…aur ghar wale jante hai.???.

Everyone is now staring at keeping quite watching gauri 's reaction who is unaware of the situation

Shiv "aap jantee hai use bua..us din hum date pein gaye the..you met her remember?"

Maya: "Kaun shiv??"

Date pein?? Gauri thinks to herself...gauri cant handle it any more and tears start forming in her eyes and she starts to walk out of the room.

Shiv: dadi of course!, sab jante hai mera pehla aur akhree pyaar dadi hai. Shiv smiles at dadi and then complements her "looking stunning as always"and then looks towards gauri who just as she is about to walk out realises what shiv said pauses and as she takes it all in feels relieved smiles when she sees the light side of it and leaves for the kitchen.

Dadi:"dekha tum ne kya kiya..bichari..masak ki bhi koi haad hoti hai shiv..har vakt to tum kafi serious rehte ho.. aaj kya hua..gauri ke halat jante ho aur hame pooch rahe the naa Gauri ko kaun sataraha hai.. aur khud!... jab dekho sab pein kusha karte ho use toe chordo..."

Shiv smiles at dadi "I know..kya karoon dadi shiv kapoor aisa hein hu…i.couldn't resist.."

Dadi: use satauo maat…woh bohot bholi hai shiv!

Shiv leaves to head for his room to freshen up but diverts at the thought and heads towards the kitchen instead He stands behind gauri in silence watching her every move which she fails to notice as she is busy clearing up dishes in the kitchen thinking about what had happened a few minuets ago and she was getting all worked up over nothing… The more she thought about it the situation seemed humorous.

Shiv calls her from behind "Gauri"

Hearing shiv gauri drops her thoughts leaves what she Is doing and turns around. Shiv is standing leaning on the door frame with his arms folded. He notices that gauri's eyes had gone red and his teasing her was a bit too much..she had been crying? Having noticed this the expression on shiv's face softens as he smiles at her.

Shiv: "im sorry gauri "

Gauri looks up at shiv with misplaced eye contact, shocked at his apology she nods negatively as a gesture to ask him not to apologise she didn't want him to apploligise, she felt it was her stupidity that she couldn't take a joke.

Shiv smiled at Gauri's reaction Gauri was really bholi bhali as well as sidhi saadhi to the extent that she didn't want her husband to apologise to her even though he was the reason she was upset ...shiv got the impression that gauri would be like one of them really traditional indian wives the ones who believe their husbands can do no wrong.

Shiv: "muje dekho gauri… Gauri makes and effort to look up at him but soon as she makes eye contact lowers her head again.

Shiv: "agar mere masak ne tume kuch dard pochaiaya ho toe..please muje maaf…"

Gauri: nahi aap….please, this time she was actually looking at directly at shiv and for the first time she cut him off whilst talking, shiv was pleased at least she was making more of an interaction now…just as this thought went through his mind..gauri again went back to her usual nervous posture of looking at the floor and fiddling with her saari to which shiv gave a sigh.

Shiv:"huuum, viase tum janti ho naa hamari ek rasam aur baki hai "

Gauri looked worried at shiv's comment

Shiv: Woh subhe tea or coffee wali baat, yaad hai??? Shiv started walking towards gauri at this point

Gauri feels anxiety within her erupt as she sees shiv approaching she starts to feel tense and all the fear and nervousness comes back to her.

Shiv: "meine kaha tha..ghar ake tumari saza kya hogi woh bataoonga"

Gauri nodded a yes and when she looks up sees that shiv has left a considerable amount of space between them which makes her feel a little more relaxed he leans over towards her slightly and wispers in her ear:

"tumhari saza yey hai ke….." he paused

Shiv pauses and keeps his eyes fixed on gauri, shiv can see gauri's anxiety clearly, gauri started to tremble as shiv whispered…he could hear her heart beat thudding as he spoke

Tumhe aaj raat … he pauses again

Gauri's nerves were over flowing as she could feel shiv's breath on her skin, Sweat beads began to form on her forhead as shiv continued:

Mere saath ….

Mere kamre mein…

Raat gusarni hogi"

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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

there you go guys updated.😊....ive updated and added chapter 8...and 9 as well but er sorry for the huge recap...

i wasnt ment to post that that was just for me..reminding myself when i was writing...ok hope you all like the updates.
please let me know what you think of them..wen i read the comments (thanks for all the lovely comments)on the last chapter i found that some people wanted to read more and shiv and gauri and some were likin the suspence..so i decided to double update....u'll see wen you read 😉..sorry if there are any mistakes ...
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Edited by jagrutid - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93

Shiv ki gauri

Chapter 9

Gauri's nerves were over flowing as she could feel shiv's breath on her skin, Sweat beads began to form on her forhead as shiv continued:

Mere saath ….

Mere kamre mein…

Raat gusarni hogi"

Shiv smiles at Gauri and notices how Gauri had closed her eyes even after he had finished. He moved away folded his arms back and waited for her a few seconds in silence with a grin on his face.

A minuet or so later Gauri relaxes and hearing very little noise she assumes that Shiv had left and opens her eyes to see shiv standing it front of her…with a rather serious look on his face which he tried to amend just a second before gauri looked at him. Seeing shiv staring at her with a rather serious look she diverts her sight.

"mein tumara intasaar karoonga …. Mere I mean hamare kamre mein" Shiv turns around to walk out of the door and just as he does Gauri feels relieved and relaxes her self. When shiv turns around.. "aur ek baat aur gauri" gauri straightens her self back just as he turns to face her and up looks away from him.

Shiv pauses like he was about to say something but changes his mind…you could see a thought process was going through his head, he was about to say something much changed his mind………….. "mere leiye ek coffee bhijwana…nahi aise karon tea kuyn ki subhe coffee pilayee thi naa..Shiv smiles at gauri.

Gauri feels embarrassed at the fact that shiv was reminding her of her mistake, gauri nods a yes and with that shiv leaves.

A few hours later..10pm, Shiv sits in his room working on his laptop when his phone rings…the phone displays:

Unknown Number calling….

"How many times do I have to tell you do you even understand!!!"...you are not to ring me, Shiv puts the phone down.

The phone rings again

Unknown Number calling….

Shiv picks up again in double the frustration "Do not ring me while I am at home…I'm warning you for the last time." He puts the phone down and carries on working; he was getting incredibly stressed at this point if he could very well kill someone right that minuet it was lucky that no one was around other wise they would have been the victim of Shiv's exploding anger. Taking out his anger on the keyboard tapping on the keys harder and harder when his phone buzzes. He picks up the phone off the desk and is just about to throw it off the desk when he sees…. Displayed:

One new text message

He opens the message and reads:

I need to see you…its important…please don't say no

Blue diamond hotel…tonight. xxxx

Shiv reads the message deletes it and writes his own:

Ok..i will try but cant promise anything, Take care

He pauses to look at the message and then sends it. Shiv checks the time on his watch switches his laptop off gets up to heads for his cupboard for a change of clothes as he was still in the same shirt he had been wearing all day Just as he opens the cupboard there is a knock at the door.

Rather irritated from people disturbing him shiv shouts in an irritated tone.

Shiv: "Come in!"

The door opens slowly and shiv sees gauri standing at the entrance of his room.

Shiv: "andar aajao gauri…"

Gauri walks in reluctantly looking around the room.

Shiv: Shiv stops rustling through his wardrobe to invite gauri into the room. "betho… he gestures Gauri to sit on the bed whilst gauri makes her way closer and sits on the edge of the bed nervously. She closes the wardrobe door checks the time on his watch and then looks at Gauri who looks anxious.

Shiv"tum theek ho naa gauri?"

Gauri extremely terrified look on her face, she did not know what to expect shiv had called into his room…and she would have to stay there the night…she felt frighted at the possibilities and that was clearly shown on her face..as she nodded a yes.

"Waise…don't worry when I said tumhe raat gusari ni hogi I didn't mean… but agar tum..aisa chahtee ho toe…."

hearing his comment Gauri's face amounted to tremendous anxiety.. never mind the overflowing fear inside her as she looked up at shiv who was standing with his hands tucked in his pockets….

Having witnessed gauri's reaction shiv smiled " don't worry I'm just joking"

Gauri felt relieved, only she knew how she was feeling inside..shiv's comment had relaxed a worldwind of feelings inside her.

"dekho gauri mein janta hoon ke hamari shaadi kaise halat mein hue hai..hum ek dusre ke leiye anjaan hai…Aur use badkar jo tumare saath hua …."

Looking at gauri shiv could see tears forming in her eyes which she was trying to hide from him.

mein samajsakta hoon, mein janta hoon ke tum mujse darti ho, yey chehra tumhe taklif pochata hai magar tumhe is ka saamna kar na padgea. Viase your stuck with me for life now anyway.. u'll have to get used to it. Shiv smiles at gauri trying to lighten the mood, he knew talking to gauri about what shed been through was going to be hard but he was trying his best.

I know tumhe vakt lagega aur is leiye mein chahta tha ke tum muje janon mujse baate karon apna dard mujse baton, I know your not ready and I wont push, tum jo chahe kar sakti ho mujse jitna darna hai darlo but someone has to take the first step or you will never recover is leyie meine decide kiya hai from now on this room will be our room, aur tum yaha rahogi. And vaise mere paas doctor ki permission hai so no complaining to prateek, usne bhi yey recommend kiya hai….

Just as shiv was talking his phone rings. He digs it out of his touser pocket with an extremely irritated expression on his face. "ise bhi abhi bajna tha…"

Shiv picks up the call and talks to the caller on the other side:

"yey don't worry im on my way now…. bye" he puts the phone down and looks at gauri who is still sitting their her eyes wondering around the room looking at everything.

Shiv: Gauri, muje jana hoga, I know mene kaha tha ke mein tumse baat karna cahta hoon but muje jana hoga. Gauri nods a yes and gets up to leave while shiv turns around to pick out clothing from the ward drobe noticing gauri about to leave the room shiv grabs her wrist which made gauri miss a heartbeat.

Shiv: tum kaha jarahi ho???, mein kuch der keliye bahar jaraha hoon iska matlab yey nahi hai ke tum yaha se bhaglogi. Tumhe ab yaha rehna hai

Shiv noted how his touch was making her feel extremely uncomfortable to the extent that she was trembling and in response he released his grip and gauri relaxed.

shiv took his clothes and went into the rest room to get changed just as he opened the door and was about to walk in he turned around to look at gauri who was looking around the room helplessly where he had left her.

"tumhe darne ki koi sururat nahi hai gauri….mein shiv hoon samar nahi..hah agar tum abhi bhi jana chatee ho toe ja sakti ho mein tumhe roku ga nahi" he gave gauri a smile and went into the restroom.

Gauri couldn't believe what she had just experienced, she had the best feeling she had in days..shiv seemed so understanding he cared for her so much…all these thoughts were filling gauri with sense of satisfaction even if all the fear was still existent… she had been thinking about all the interactions she had with she…she shyed away at the thought of each incident but thinking about them made her smile….she knew amongst all the harshness of marriage there was something special…gauri became lost In her thoughts.

It had been around half an hour since shiv had gone to get dressed and gauri had explored the whole room and was now looking out the window at the night sky…when shiv walks in. gauri heres the door opening and turns around. Shiv is stood in a black shirt and blazer with a smile on his face…which gauri failed to see as she tried to avoid looking at him.

Shiv: How to I look?

Gauri looks up at him and nods negatively which shiv is totally taken back by…

Shiv: Kya??

Gauri: "Nahi woh…" gauri was unable to process her words she was too overwhelmed by shiv's presence.

Gauri: woh….

Shiv: woh kya???

Gauri points out that his shirt collar is out of place but instead of using words she interacted it using her hands. Shiv gets the jist and amends it..

Shiv smiles at gauri: "ab theek hai?"

Gauri: "jee" gauri also responds with a smile which shiv did not expect at all. It looked like gauri was much more comfortable now..shiv's experiment had work, even though it was only minor…it was an improvement which she was overjoyed to see.

"ok im off now..i will be back soon..abhi toe hamari bate adhoori hai..baad mein baat karte hai, make your self comfortable.

Gauri: "jee"

With that shiv leaves.

It was 1am as shiv walked into his room…he was exhausted he looked around the room in search of gauri when he sees the bed emptly he thinks to himself: gauri should be sleeping, kaha gayee, shayad guest room mein chali gaye hogi." Shiv tired…drops his blazer on the bed, removes his shoes and heads for the rest room. Just as he walks past the bed he sees gauri curled sleeping on the floor beside the bed in a pink nightgown.

Floor pein so gayee??? Shiv Is overwellmed my the fact that gauri was sleeping on the floor when she could have taken the bed..she had left the bed for him to sleep in Or maybe it was just the fact that she wasn't comfortable with the idea of sharing a room with him. What ever it was shiv stood watching and found the sight adorable.

……………………..

In the morning shiv awoke in his bed looked around to see the room empty..he looked down beside his bed where gauri was sleeping to see the area had been cleared of bedding and gauri had gone. it was 6 am he was awake on the dot like usual and headed for the shower..half an hour later shiv moring anger routine took course.

Shiv: "kaka!!!"………"kaka!!!!"

Rammu kaka enters shiv's room

Kaka: "kuch kaam tha beta"

Shiv: " Meri chai kaha hai..mein aapko abhi se kehraha hoon kuyn ki ke muje woh mere office jane se phele chaeeye….! Aur ek baat aur aapne gauri ko dekha???

Kaka: " appki chai toe kabki vaha rakhee hai , Gauri ne banayee thi…aur patanahi subhe se kahi chali gayee, shayad mandir gayee hogi."

Shiv turns around to look at his bed side table where he sees a tray containing a cup and by the side of it was stuck what looked like a note.. "theek hai, ab aap ja sakte hai" Kaka leaves.

Shiv walks towards the table to see a cup filled with what looked like tea as Gauri had made it he couldn't be to sure, he picked up the note stuck to the tray and read:

Yey aapke leiye…agar phir se koi galti hogaye toe I'm sorry… Gauri

Shiv gave an amused grin at gauri's tact, she managed to avoid him as well as keep him happy.

Meanwhile…city hospital in prateeks office…

Gauri: "Mein nahi janti par kal raat ko mein bohot dar gayee thi.."

Prateek: kuyn tumne shiv ko nahi bataya????

Gauri: une kaise batati….

Prateek: "But you now gauri, your just worrying too much…sirf prank calls hoga that's it..log aise cheap harkate karte hai…"

Gauri: nahi. "There was an incredibly confused look on gauri's face."

Prateek: "ok toe bataoon exactly kya hua."

Gauri: "kal raat ko jab woh ghar se nikla..uske baad…phone calls shuru ho gayee, mein pani leiyene neeche gayee thi aur call aya… koi aadmi tha...ajeeb se bate kar raha tha.. magar usne kuch khaz nahi kaha, sirf baar baar phone kar ke kaat diya."

Prateek: "meine kaha tha naa gauri..prank calls that's it. Gauri still wasn't satisfied; she still had a concered expresstion on her face."

Prateek: "ok tell me tumara depresstion looks like it fading away… kal meine hein recommend kiya tha shiv ko uske saath aur vakt gusarna, it was ok, koi problem toe nahi hue."

Gauri: "nahi"

Prateek: "Good that's very good I was afraid ke tum shiv ke presence mein phirse tumari condition, par aise kuch hua flashbacks aisa kuch."

Gauri : "Nahi magar …abhi bhi daar … prateek noticed that gauri was lost in her thought maybe she was still thinking about those prank calls."

Prateek: "gauri tum sun rahi ho naa??"

As soon as she hears prateek questioning her gauri pulls her self out from her thoughts "sun rahi hoon. "

Prateek: "use vakt doe..aur baat hai gauri tumhe kabhi naa khabhi toe who hadse ke bare mein baat karni hogi, use situation go dorana hoga kyun ki, wohi ek problem hai tumare daar ka..but its ok we will work on it. Anyways gauri dekho im sorry mere next appointment ka vakt ho gaya hai…aur dekho don't worry everything will be ok."

Gauri: "Ok thanks" with that gauri leaves prateek makes a note of how disturbed gauri looks and as gauri gets up to leave he reassures her

Prateek "gauri, don't worry, sab kuch deekh hojayega" gauri smiles showing a disturbed epresstion and leaves.

Back at the kapoor mansion Gauri walks in to find that there is no one around expect ramu kaka.

Gauri: "Kaka ghar mein saab kaha gaye???"

Kaka: "woh beta sab shopping kar ne gaye hai..woh maya mem saab ayee hai naa is leiye ghum ne gaye hai.."

Gauri: "theek hai, aur Kapoor sahaab?"

Kaka: "woh toe kab ke office chale gaye.., hah woh kuch message ki baat kar rahe the shyaad apke room mein."

Gauri, smiles at kaka, as he leaves..she thinks to her self "message…???"

Gauri makes her way into the bedroom to see the cup of tea she had left sitting in the same place she had left it… except at gauri's relief the cup was empty which meant shiv had drank it. Accompanying the empty cup was a note stuck to It :

Jab aapki galti hein itni sweet hai..toe hame apka yey galti baar baar karna mansoor hai….Shiv

That's when Gauri realised she had done it again, "O no..meine phir se.." when the phone rang….hai bhagvan yey inka hein phone hoga, ab kya kahoogi. Gauri started to worry as she walked to the phone…what If shiv questions her again about the whole drink thing what would she do.

Gauri: "hello"

Caller on the other end: "Mein shiv se baat kar sakti hoon please. It was a female voice."

Gauri: "Sorry woh abhi ghar pein nahi hai, kya mein message …" just as gauri was about to finish talking the woman on the other end put the phone down.

Gauri: "Ajeeb, aise hein phone kaat diya?"

The phone rang again gauri picks it up.

Gauri:"meine aapse kaha woh nahi hai…aap message"

Caller: "mein shiv se nahi tumse baat karna chahta hoon gauri"

Gauri: "mujse???, aap kaun bolrahe hai."

Caller: "tume is se koi lena nahi hai, jo mein tumhe kehne jaraha hoon woh dhyan se suno, mein janta hoon tumare saath kya hua… aur yey bhi janta hoon ke tum jise apna pati hai woh hein tumara gunegar hai…"

Having heard enough gauri decides to put the phone down "apni bakwas band karon, tum kya janoge.."

"Phone maat rakhna gauri kuyn ke mein bohot kuch janta hoon, bohot sare raaz janta hoon mein. Vaise tumare pati ko puchon ke woh adhi raat ko kise milne jata hai…."

Gauri: "agar tumne phone nahi rakha toe mein police mein complaint likhvaoongi!"

"Pochon shiv ko voh blue diamond hotel mein kya kar raha tha voh bhi ek ladki ke saath apni shaadhi ke ek raat pehele …Tum bhi kitni bevakoof ko..jis insaan ne tumara balatkar kiya us hein insaan se shaadhi karli."

Gauri: Kya???

"Hah...satchayee toe yahi hai…aur saboot bhi hai, tumara ohm pendent jo us haadse mein ghum hogaya tha..woh shiv ke paas kaise???? Iska matlab wohi hai naa."

Gauri: "Tum kaun hote ho yey sab kehne wale, jisne yey kiya woh salakho ke piche hai."

"Galat…galat insaan gauri galat insaan …..

saboot hein kya tha..doctor prateek?? woh toe shiv ka dost hai obviously woh shiv ka hein saath dega. Aur tum can you really be sure you picked the right person. Asli proof toe woh pendent hai..jo shiv ke paas hai, toe nikla naa woh asli gunegar. Yey saab uski chal hai, usne tumare rape kiya, saab chupa kar tumse shaadhi ki aur ab acha hone ka natak kar raha hai. Pyaar toe woh kisi aur se karta hai…woh blue diamond hotel wali…tumne notice kiya, jo baar baar phone call ate hai shiv par…nahi tum toe ise itni der se toe nahi janti..shayad tumhe nahi pata…."

Gauri: "Kaun ho tum, tum.."

Gauri is totally stunned by what she hears, what was he talking about, who was he and how did he know all this: "Kaun ho tum!!!"

After a short pause she gets a reply

"Samar kapoor"

Gauri is shocked and drops the phone; she couldn't believe what she was hearing. "yey saab uski chaal hai aisa kuch nahi hai….ladki..blue diamond hotel, yey saab muje kuch samaj nahi aaraha. " Gauri was going all read in frustration she had the shock of her life. Mera pendent..??? gauri looks around the room, yey sab ek plan hai..mera pendent yaha nahi hoga, inke paas nahi hoga. She frantically started searching the room. Draws, desks pratically everywhere she feels relived when she doesn't find it the only place she hadn't looked was shiv's wardrobe..she couldn't do that..looking at samars words go through her head "woh pendent shiv ke paas hai..aur jiske paas yey hai woh tumara gunegar.." she knew going though his cupboard was wrong but she had to do it to re asure her self. She opened the cupboard looked at the array of clothing; she opened the lower level drawers to find nothing but business files the rest was just other normal things. Gauri was reliefed there was nothing of the sort until incidentally one of shiv's shirts clinged to her saari as she was about to close the wardrobe, she pulled the shirt out to straighten it up on its hanger when something fell out of the shirt pocket onto the floor. She lent down to pick it up and saw lying there her pendent. As she picked it up she couldn't believe her own eyes tears rolled down her face, she couldn't take the shock

"is ka matlab????......"

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there you are ...chapter 9 added as well hope you like it😊..pls do let me know what you....think good or bad let me know.. jagruti
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awesome parts!!! loved how their relation is shaping up! dying to read abt the whole mystery regardin the woman and shiv! pls continue soon
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"awesome parts!!! loved how their relation is shaping up! dying to read abt the whole mystery regardin the woman and shiv! pls continue soon"

thanks for reading, appreciate the feeback… pleased that you liked the updates!!!! and yey about the mystry person I thought it had been going on for a while…so thought of revealing a bit…

will update soon and yey..u'll find out more in the upcoming chapters…and as for shiv and gauri's relationship..i'd been thinking about that for ages before writing it… glad your liking it.

Thanks again for reading and commenting, will try to update soon….jagruti

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Posted: 16 years ago
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great part sweetie...its beAutiful how you portrAyed it just keep up d gud work.....
love
nihita...
p.s:THANX fr pm....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ahhh really sorry hav'nt read yet yaara 2day is eid n i m buzy whenever will get tymm will defo readdd sorry again :(((((((
saba
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesumm partzzz yaar luved dem waiseeee missunderstandingzzz ki shuuwat ho hi gaii goddd noww plzzz just reveal dat phone mam plzzzzz n do gauri make sure k sam had rapedddd plzzzzz once again simplyy superbbbbbbbbb :)))))))))))))

saba
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awww dear the part was beautifuly scripted liked the way you are developing their relation par yaar plz am really dying of this mystery and u sort the truth out fast..don;t want gauri to think bad of shiv wen the real culprit is samar...plz in the next part u sort this out and make this misunderstanding a storng point to bring shiv-gauri more closer..really appreciated the effort of writing 2 parts and if possible next time try updating 2 parts.....i enjoyed myself..but that mystery calls and this turn plz jaldi sort out karo adn shib-gauri ko milwa do....hehe am just aiting for it..
abh u better update the next part jaldi say..am getting restless now....

P.S.thnxs for the pm....
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