FF~just hold onto me-II series~part 7-page17 - Page 4

hey nihita great FF it's soo interesting poor gauri hate shiv for doing this to her continue soon

gr8 part...

awesome part hun!! man shiv is tooooooo much! shiv and gauri r too extremes!! dying to read wht happens when they meet! i really hope Shiv is too ashamed me even look into her eyes!pls continue soon

Originally posted by: nihita

Abe kya khA kar reply kAr rahi ho....bAdA emotionAl hai yAara...kAfi tareef ki hAi badiya lag rahA hAi baAr-2 padne mein........😆

i m happy i could really influence you....😳😉

yA i'll most probably be quick in updating if i dont hv some errands to take care of.......

love

nihitA

hehe kuch nhai sweety....just had some veggies and rice ....my reply is not more emotional than u're update.......oye hoye toh maine kab baar-2 padhne se mana kiya hai.......
awww yeshh do it wenever u have time okies...i'll be waiting....
wasie this is a small gesture frm ma side to a great writer like u who's written an exceptional piece of work.....
luv u sweety,
luv atop

hmmm jaans yeh kya kar rahi ho....wasie shud haev been prepared for all this frm u're side./.....but kya karoon..u noe sweety u haev touched my most favourite style of writing..i mean watever pain u have depicted i adore such writings in which the kind of pain is depicted with conviction..tumhari shaan mein kehne ke liye humesha mere paan words kam hi hote hyain yaar,,,,...ufff tum humesha kamal karti ho...and i truly frm the bottom of my heart am touched by this change in u7're ff,,..u noe i think ek writer jahan khushi depict kar sakta hai wahan pain bhi..being myself a tiny winy writer of poems..it's just my hobby and fav pastime i rteally adore pains..kyunki mujhe apni poems mein bhi yeh depict karna accha lagta hai.,..and u're parts is just ufffffffff hai mashallah..muahhhhhhhhhhhh babes...........


luv atop

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

ohh goshhh emotionall updatee dudee well shivvv he iz gettingg on my nervess nihi plzz make him positivee yaarr plzzz well now i m eagerlyy waitinnn 4r shivz reactionnn i meann how he will reacttt watchingg gauri witt baby aditii waitinn updatee asap plzzz

saba

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

gr8 part...

am ahting shiv right now;.

feel so sorry for gauri..

pllz cont soon...

Sonia

Originally posted by: shivgauri

awesome part hun!! man shiv is tooooooo much! shiv and gauri r too extremes!! dying to read wht happens when they meet! i really hope Shiv is too ashamed me even look into her eyes!pls continue soon

Originally posted by: atop

hehe kuch nhai sweety....just had some veggies and rice ....my reply is not more emotional than u're update.......oye hoye toh maine kab baar-2 padhne se mana kiya hai.......
awww yeshh do it wenever u have time okies...i'll be waiting....
wasie this is a small gesture frm ma side to a great writer like u who's written an ?exceptional piece of work.....
luv u sweety,
?luv atop

Originally posted by: atop

hmmm jaans yeh kya kar rahi ho....wasie shud haev been prepared for all this frm u're side./.....but kya karoon..u noe sweety u haev touched my most favourite style of writing..i mean watever pain u have depicted i adore such writings in which the kind of pain is depicted with conviction..tumhari shaan mein kehne ke liye humesha mere paan words kam hi hote hyain yaar,,,,...ufff tum humesha kamal karti ho...and i truly frm the bottom of my heart am touched by this change in u7're ff,,..u noe i think ek writer jahan khushi depict kar sakta hai wahan pain bhi..being myself a tiny winy writer of poems..it's just my hobby and fav pastime i rteally adore pains..kyunki mujhe apni poems mein bhi yeh depict karna accha lagta hai.,..and u're parts is just ufffffffff hai mashallah..muahhhhhhhhhhhh babes...........


luv atop