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cuppa_n_cricket

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hello peeps🤗

Before we proceed... The following analysis does NOT consider the MahaEpi 😃 MeeVaan's story stands at the post Jagrata face-off.

So... to shed off some bhootiya blues, I went back to watch the cape drape again. This is where the show had me hooked.

This was a mini training track in itself 😆... However, the entire sequence showcased some palpable attraction between the leads. "Sirf kangan ke liye" was on even then... but that didn't limit the CVs from exploiting the chemistry. Both the leads were affected... and the subtle awareness between them was handled rather sensitively.

This could have been exploited further in track that ran last week. We got an entire week dedicated to the lead couple, but sadly their interactions couldn't rise above the usual banter. CVs focused too much on establishing their respective intentions, underrating their real feelings for each other.

There were moments... like while the Jagrata was going on...but those were few and far in between. Probably, the complete lack of feelings from Vivaan's end was the reason❓ They have certainly warmed up to each other, but looked more like roomies rather than a romantic couple.😆

Meera being stuck with "sirf maa ke liye" and Vivaan with his kangan... these excuses overpowered the romance, which wasn't the case in the engagement track.

That lack of continuity between the cape scene and this track is the glitch... where did the physical tension vanish? All that build-up was for nothing? 😕

Vivaan was patient, then a jerk and finally guilty... Meera was thankful coz maa was happy, then hurt, angry and finally back to square one. But what do they feel for each other? IMO, the CVs have lost an opportunity to build on their previous interactions.

This small moment suggested a lot... this awareness needs to be back.

Some cliches are required to bring out the romance on-screen. Hoping just that from the mehendi track... Portrayal of budding love shouldn't get the treatment of the relationship between a much married couple... or worse, roomies. 😆

Cheers!

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Posted: 7 years ago

Awesome post Sree

Loved reading it<3

Agree on all of your points.

Res as for now to answer it:))

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anjani-pagli

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Posted: 7 years ago

I like the post...

let me put down my POV

Vivaan is a matured individual not naive to love & attraction

Meera is a naive and innocent girl!

In the cape drape scene, Vivaan let his emotion flow, he was plainly attracted to Meera, and he understood. But this whole thing is not correct and Vivaan knows it, as Meera is amanat of somebody else. If he continued on this, he will be doing something very unethical

On the other hand all the experience Meera is having is new to her. She has not fallen for anybody still. Based on her parvarish, she is shy around her would be Sumer, and looks Vivaan in a friendly sort of way. Well in a twisted way of friendship though😆

Now coming to last weeks after cape draping, I can say CVs did moved story forward. Vivaan has already started acting out of his character for so called Kangan.😛

1. Although, he just played a trick with Meera abt high tea, but after the fiasco he held himself responsible which again is out of his character and he agreed to train Meera

2. He agreed to dance with Meera, he could have chosen Silky while let Meera watch and then continue training with Jersey. But he chose her. He plainly told not to look at anybody, and only him, given the whole situation was because Meera wanted to see somebdy dance LIVE😳😆

3. Jagrata track also, the whole convo between Meevan was very subtle and has undercurrent...like holding her hand under the thali😉😆

Also, if they give more physical attraction scenes, it might look repetitive later on😳

Edited by anjani-pagli - 7 years ago

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Kowsi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Good one!! The attraction was so palpable there!

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anjalii123

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Posted: 7 years ago

Durin the Cape scene,there was definitely a physical attraction from Vivaans end,but he himself was unaware of tat for those few secs..He was definitely mesmerized by her for those few seconds,but he was clueless abt it..N meera,my opinion she didnt have anythin,but was jus kinda shy n scared while he was removin the stole and putin the cape around..The way he put his hand over hers to remove the stole,definitely showed his physical attraction for those few mins which he himself didnt know while doin it.N i felt tat scene was required,coz only aft tat she wore tat red dress during the deal wala episode so confidently with out shyin away,even it being an off shoulder dress kinds..She got tat confidence frm him..The concern towards her wil slowly start comin up(the mehendi upcomin where he sees her hand bleed ,and tries to do first aid)..Him cancellin the deal,then the mehendi hand etc is al the concern from him..slowly wil start the mesmerizin physical attraction :)

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cuppa_n_cricket

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anjani-pagli
I like the post...
let me put down my POV

Vivaan is a matured individual not naive to love & attraction
Meera is a naive and innocent girl!

In the cape drape scene, Vivaan let his emotion flow, he was plainly attracted to Meera, and he understood. But this whole thing is not correct and Vivaan knows it, as Meera is amanat of somebody else. If he continued on this, he will be doing something very unethical

On the other hand all the experience Meera is having is new to her. She has not fallen for anybody still. Based on her parvarish, she is shy around her would be Sumer, and looks Vivaan in a friendly sort of way. Well in a twisted way of friendship though😆

Now coming to last weeks after cape draping, I can say CVs did moved story forward. Vivaan has already started acting out of his character for so called Kangan.😛

1. Although, he just played a trick with Meera abt high tea, but after the fiasco he held himself responsible which again is out of his character and he agreed to train Meera

2. He agreed to dance with Meera, he could have chosen Silky while let Meera watch and then continue training with Jersey. But he chose her. He plainly told not to look at anybody, and only him, given the whole situation was because Meera wanted to see somebdy dance LIVE😳😆

3. Jagrata track also, the whole convo between Meevan was very subtle and has undercurrent...like holding her hand under the thali😉😆

Also, if they give more physical attraction scenes, it might look repetitive later on😳

I get what you are saying. I know that she's engaged and there are limitations on what they can show. However, I'm not suggesting for out and out romantic scenes. Not just Vivaan, I also understand that whatever we fault SilMer for shouldn't be happening with MeeVaan.😆

What i'm saying is... along with scenes and monologues focusing on their respective intentions for being with each other, CVs can also give scenes where they CLARIFY what the leads feel for each other.

Subtlety is charming... but too much of underrating would be plain confusing.

If he knows that interfering too much with her is unethical... then SHOW that in the screenplay. Some flashbacks, some introspection... anything? I liked that particular scene where he reminisces on Dimitri's lines. More such "farak nahi padta" sort of confusion is required IMO.

yeah... like I have already mentioned... they have had their moments but those were few and far in between. I have hopes from this week's track tho..

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anjani-pagli

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cuppa_n_cricket

I get what you are saying. I know that she's engaged and there are limitations on what they can show. However, I'm not suggesting for out and out romantic scenes. Not just Vivaan, I also understand that whatever we fault SilMer for shouldn't be happening with MeeVaan.😆
What i'm saying is... along with scenes and monologues focusing on their respective intentions for being with each other, CVs can also give scenes where they CLARIFY what the leads feel for each other.

Subtlety is charming... but too much of underrating would be plain confusing.

If he knows that interfering too much with her is unethical... then SHOW that in the screenplay. Some flashbacks, some introspection... anything? I liked that particular scene where he reminisces on Dimitri's lines. More such "farak nahi padta" sort of confusion is required IMO.

yeah... like I have already mentioned... they have had their moments but those were few and far in between. I have hopes from this week's track tho..

yes true, but CVs r not yet ready to show that leads have fallen for each other...If u remember the monologue after the couple ball dance, even as per screenplay they r suggesting its not time yet...

we r overjoycing and analysing for no reason...😉😆

regarding satday ME, its an April Fool epi and we can conviniently overlook😆

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cuppa_n_cricket

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anjani-pagli

yes true, but CVs r not yet ready to show that leads have fallen for each other...If u remember the monologue after the couple ball dance, even as per screenplay they r suggesting its not time yet...

we r overjoycing and analysing for no reason...😉😆
regarding satday ME, its an April Fool epi and we can conviniently overlook😆

ME yaad mat dilao Plz 🤣

those two were MiRah and WheWhan, the whacko couple... jo bhi the iss duniya ke nahi the 😕

Meera and Vivaan are subdued saints in front of them.

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anjani-pagli

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cuppa_n_cricket

ME yaad mat dilao Plz 🤣
those two were MiRah and WheWhan, the whacko couple... jo bhi the iss duniya ke nahi the 😕

Meera and Vivaan are subdued saints in front of them.

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Hey dnt forget our Vivaan during Jagraata...he looked right, left, saw necessary pplz r closing their eyes, swiftly he moved towards Meera...itna bhi saint nahi hai😆😉

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cuppa_n_cricket

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: anjani-pagli

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Hey dnt forget our Vivaan during Jagraata...he looked right, left, saw necessary pplz r closing their eyes, swiftly he moved towards Meera...itna bhi saint nahi hai😆😉

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But tell me yaara... WHAT was that in front "mood aashikana hai..."? 😳🤣

P.S. That scene was so cute😳 He knows people shouldn't be seeing them together often.

I want a reprise of those Jagrata scenes when they are actually in love but haven't confessed.