Ravika OS : hum tum ek kamre mein band ho ( part 2 ,page 2 ) Updated !

hi guys, i have written something on ravika , hope you ejoy it and please hit like and leav eyour feedback , hsould i continue with the next part or not , ? hope you enjoy it 😃😃



Part 1

After marriage, ravika in office,
devika was walking towards the store room for some old files, and ravi was walking behind her , inorder to take some important files from that room. they entered the room , and the door got locked by mistake. Devika looked back ,
it was ravi .
D. ravi !!!! what r u doing in here?
R. im here only to take some important files , ill just take themn and go .
D. ohh...

And he took those files and then when he tried to open the door , it wasnt opening
R. devika the door ... its not openning...
D. what !!!!???? ravi you closed the door, the door lock was broken now... uggh!!!!!!!

R. so i didnt know that na...

D. now what?
R. kuch nahi ab wait karein ki koi bahar se darwazaa khole.

And ravi went towarsds the chair and sat down there , out of helplessness.

devika came towarss the chair which was right next to where ravi was sitting and while going there, she stumbled and fell on ravis lap. And ravi held her waist, tight, devika got lost in his chocolate brown eyes, and he looking at her , lovingly , few stands of her hair come in front of her face, and ravi , gently tuckes them behind her ear , in that rpocess he touches her forehead soflty and devika closes her eyes, in shyness.

When they come back to thier senses, devika gets up from his lap ,and walks towards the window , it was night , and the window was open, soon it started to rain, heavily. And she saw thunder and lightning as well, soon , the light went off and she turned around to see ravi was standing right behind her and she hugged him tightly as she was really afraid of dark , ravi hugged her back , carresing her back softly in order ot calm her down,

D. ravi!
R. devika , main hoon tumhare saath ! tumhe darne kin koi baat nahi hai ...

She broke the hug slowly looking at ravi who was looking at her and , the very next moment ravi cupped her face, and leaned forward , devika got completely lost in his touch , she could feel his breath , warm breath and their noses were almost touching , with only few mm of didtance

part 2

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SUPER 😊 What imagination you have dear, i like it . hopefully your imagination will be used in the show itself.

Good one keep coming with this kind of fantastic ideas 😉

Originally posted by: Asheley

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Nice OS

How could you stop there😡

Continue it soon or i will haunt you in your dreams

Well written👏

Thanks dear , this one i had to stop here and upload because my mobile battery was showing 5% so i had to upload it before i lost my work 😆 😆 😆

I wil continue soonish 😃

Thank you so much ⭐️

Originally posted by: mariamalar24

SUPER😊 What imagination you have dear, i like it . hopefully your imagination will be used in the show itself.

Good one keep coming with this kind of fantastic ideas 😉

Thank you so much 😃 ⭐️

Im glad you liked it ⭐️ 😃

Thanks a lot for the encouragement ⭐️ 😃

superb update loved it, plz continue soon

Originally posted by: shreepatil.

superb update loved it, plz continue soon

thanks a lot !😃😃⭐️

im glad you liked it ⭐️⭐️😃😃

i will try to update tomorrow 😃

I like ur idea of locked them up in one rooma lot..
That is the only way left I guess this two wil talk like mature ppl.. 😉
Keep it coming dear.. wud love to read further. .

Originally posted by: NusiSg

I like ur idea of locked them up in one rooma lot..
That is the only way left I guess this two wil talk like mature ppl.. 😉
Keep it coming dear.. wud love to read further. .

i really want in this show also they get locked in one room and spend time alone !😳😳😳😳 onle ravika 😳😳😳😳in the room. 😃😃

thanks a lot 😃😃⭐️⭐️

just gonna update the next part today 😃😃⭐️⭐️with losts of romance 😃😃⭐️⭐️