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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
2 different poles manik and nandini

lovely story

plz update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: KYYian

2 different poles manik and nandini

lovely story

plz update

Will update soon...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

Nandini: Im Nandini..Nandini Murthy..wese tuhmari utni badi fan toh nahi hu..par haa tumse dosti zaroor karna chahti hu..banoge mere dost
she asked softly and forwarded her hand. He angrily shoved away her hand making her gasp but she again forwarded back making him more angry..he again shoved away her hand yet she again and again placed in front of him.

Nandini: Ziddi hoh tum bahut..are haath bada rahi hu..maang thodi rahi hu
she giggled looking at him and he looked at her with little soft look. She smiled and gestured towards her hand. Hesitantly he hold her fingers and shake them while she laughed leaving him with blank expression.




Manik was shouting and pacing here and there. He threw all the things breaking into pieces while the servants were standing numb gulping their saliva. Meanwhile his father came and tried calming him down but he literally pushed him away harshly.

Manik: Mujhe bahar kyu jane nahi dete..Im a criminal or what!
he shouted clutching his hair while his father nodded in no and tried to cup his face but he again pushed him away showing off his hand with serious look.

Manik: Mujhe..mujhe bahar jana hai..it suffocates here..dum ghut tah hai samjhe
he mumbled rubbing his nose and glaring at him while in mean time Nandini came and stood infront of him with her all time smile.

Nandini: har baat,,har cheez mai sirf ghussa aur ghussa hi karte hoh..ek baar thoda pyaar sai baat karo hmm..
she said and he glared at her. She knew what was coming next but then also she stood with calm and smiley face while he thumped his feet and left kicking the table away. She sighed and turned back to his father who was looking down with hope less expression.

Nandini: Itna ghussa kyu aur kaise...!!!
she asked looking at him and he sat in nearby chair rubbing his temple. He walked towards his study while she followed him. He took out a novel to distract his tension while she waited to him to speak up.


Mr.Malhotra: Manik kaafi chota thaa..jab ushki maa ki death hoh gayi thi..itna bada empire mera..I had to handle alone toh usshe jyada waqt nahi deh paya resulting ek rich spoilt brat ban gaya woh..itna carefree ki kisiki chinta nahi..not even of his Dad..ek badtameez but famous Rockstar..aaj bhi log mere bete kai gaane nahi bhool paye..I assure that..
he said the last line with a proud look and Nandini smiled at him.

Mr.Malhotra: kamse kam 28 baar ladkiya badly hogi ushne..Im afraid 28 bhi kam hi bol raha hu..phir ek din ek ladki aayi ushki life mai..I thought yeh bhi change hoh jayegi..par mera beta pyaar mai pad gaya thaa ushke..he was serious about her..kya kuch nahi kiya mere bete nai ushke liye..par woh sirf ushke naam kai peeche thi..kisine sahi kaha hai..aaurat sirf taakat sai pyaar karti hai..
he chuckled saying this and turned over the page of his novel.

Mr.Malhotra: Manik koh jab pata chala..toh bacha khucha dil bhi tut gaya ushka..phir bhi ek hope leke ushe baat karna chahta thaa..she was with him in his car..he was drunk and they were arguing like anything..ghusse mai ushne apna balance khoh diya..woh toh bach gaya par woh ladki..chali gayi ish duniya sai aur ushke zindagi sai..aur zindagi bhar kai liye dard aur nafrat bhi bharkar chali gayi..bahut koshis ki ushke dosto nai Cabir and all par nahi
he said taking deep breathes and she was looking at with sad looks in her face.

Mr.Malhotra: trauma chad gaya ushe..janwar thaa ab toh aur junglee hoh gaya..dil toh hai..par kisiki liye dhadakta nahi..5 saal hoh gaye..guiter koh haath tak nahi lagaya..stadiums khaali hote hai ushke concerts kai bina..his fans misses him..and me too
he said closing the novel and placing it back to the selves and gave a weak smile to her.
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Do hit likes aur COMMENTS...
Note:
Would u guys mind if I strech this story...may b it will take 7 to 8 chapter to finish...r u guys okay with it...???
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
make the story as ss

its superb

sad history of manik

really it will be a long journey of manan


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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Nice update..
Nandini nandini forward her hand to make frienship with maan..
But maan shoved away her hand..
Nandini didn't lose hope nd tried..
Manik became wild again.. He felt sufficated in this room..
Mr malhotra tried to stop him but couldn't..
Nandini asked mr malhotra what happend to manik..
He told nandini everything..
Manik is in trauma..hope he get well soon by nandini's care..
Loved the update very much..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Woow awesome story

Too good
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
wow..

amazing update.
manik poor baby 😭

Poor baby h has to tolerate
so much.

ahhh...
but nandu h na..
she is gonna make him smile...

Yesh mmore than happiee.
if u stretch this story 😃


Waiting for next update.
Thanks for pm.


Keep Smiling.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Amazing start
Pls update soon
Pls pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Itna gussa...he has bad experience in love ad trust...but nandu wld definitely change him..let's c how...wld b waiting..and wld no mind if u stretch it into ff too...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Feeling sooo sad for Manik yaar

Continue soon

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