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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just read tge first chp.. it was intresring. Im suoer sure this story . Ok in ur words the simple story is going to win all the hearts with only one thing.. its simplicity
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ofcourse u can rxtrnd it.. loved the update it was perfect
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I will...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Just read tge first chp.. it was intresring. Im suoer sure this story . Ok in ur words the simple story is going to win all the hearts with only one thing.. its simplicity

U r right..simple is best..👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Ofcourse u can rxtrnd it.. loved the update it was perfect

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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

Nandini saw Manik angrily punching the punching bags and muttering something. She glanced at his awards and pics hung on the wall which were not dusted from ages. Adjusting his bed she picked up the medicines and tapped his shoulder only to get pushed away from him. She again tapped and he angrily turned and punched her hard resulting she collapsed on floor.

Nandini: baap reh..itna ghussa..Ayyapa bhi dar jaye tumse
she giggled wiping her bleeds from her soft lips and stood up while he stared at her with shock face. She raised her eyebrows and placed the medicine in front of him

Manik: nahi khana..bahut..bahut kadwa hota hai
he mumbled looking away and she made O face. She crumbled the tablet and mixed with orange juice and handed to him with wide smile. He stared at the juice and she gestured to gulped it down. Holding his nose..he gulped down it once and she laughed softly while he was looking at her wounded lips. Not able to utter sorry he landed on bed and closed his eyes

Manik: lights off kardo..mujhe nafrat hai roshni sai..andhere mai chain milta hai
he groaned and she nodded in no making him angry. He widened his eyes while she still nodded in no and adjusted herself in couch placing the blanket over her.

Nandini: Roshni nai kya bigada hai tuhmara..ab mujhe to aese hi sona hai..tum bhi soh jao warna raat bhar bol bol kai tuhme tang karungi..
she said and closed her eyes while he angrily turned away and tried sleeping muttering curse on her.



On Nandini's insist Mr.Malhotra had allowed her to take Manik with her. She took him to roam the parks while he was just walking blankly. She talked about random things and giggled at her own jokes while he was deaf and mute to respond her back to any. Time passed like this only..she used to talk and he used to lost on his world


Doctor: Ushne apne jeene ki makshad hi khoh di hai..aur naah hi marne ka koi makhsad hai..he just living through his breathes..trauma kai wajah sai kabhi ghussa ana..irritation and kabhi apni hi duniya mai khona..he has left with nothing..
Doctor said shrugging while Nandini sighed and looked at Manik who was blankly staring at the aquarium

Doctor: Ushe jeene ki makshad doh..kuch toh hoga..some where he would find peace..some time for also..he will forget his tensions and some one..who would be always there for him..koi hoh jishke upar Manik believe karne lage..apne zindagi ka makshad ush insaan koh banaye
Doctor's words echoed in Nandini's ear and she thought of something.



Manik fumed in anger as he saw her playing his guitar and humming a song. He rushed to her pulled away his guitar from her and banged it on floor making her scared like hell. He angrily crushed the guitar and started to throw away all his awards shouting like anything..

Manik: I hate this..I just hate all this..kisne kaha tuhme yeh sab chune kai liye huh! Jake phek doh inhe warna tuhme uthake kahi phek dunga..kisi koh pata bhi nahi chalega samjhi!
he said and left while she tried to even her breathes as she was hell scared. She thumped on the bed and stared at his guitar which was broked by now.



He thrashed away his meal and glared at the servants. He checked out the dishes one by one and thrashed them away in irritation while Mr.Malhotra chewed his meal nodding in disbelief. He angrily left kicking the table away making his father sighed in tension. Reaching up to the balcony he tried to control his anger and clutched the railing hard while Nandini stepped with tray of food in her hands.

Nandini: Sahi kaha hai logo nai..shaitan hoh tum..bichare khaane nai tuhmara kya bigada hai..yeshe koi phekta hai khane koh bhala
she scolded placing the tray at floor and glared at him gesturing to sit down

Manik: tuhmari tarah nahi hu mai..Im Manik Malhotra..you seriously think..mai neeche baith kai khaunga
he groaned looking at her while she shrugged and forcefully pulled him down. He tried to stood up but she held him tight and made a puppy face while he turned away muttering in anger.

Nandini: Ab neeche baithkai khao yaa upar..jana toh pet kai andar hi haina..ab jaldi khao baba..yeh special daal apne hatho sai banaya hai..
she exclaimed and he made a whatever look. She insisted to eat and he picked up the bowl making her smile. But very next moment he poured the whole daal upon her and she closed her eyes in bit shock..her skin burned as the daal was still hot in bowl.


Manik: Bola naa nahi khana toh kyu zid kar rahi hoh..Mujhe kisi ka jhoota care nahi chahiye..jab zindagi bhar kisine parwah nahi ki then why this drama and all now huh
He groaned in anger while she opened her eyes and glared at him she picked up a spoon of morsel and forcefully stuffed inside his mouth but he spitted that out too..she again fed him and he again spitted out wiping his lips.


Nandini: ziddi toh tum hoh samjhe..jab dekho ghussa ghussa..dekho chup chap khao..khane ki insult nahi karte samjhe
she scolded like a mother and he looked at with blank expression and she picked up another spoon of morsel and placed infront of his mouth.


Nandini: Ab jaldi mooh kholo
she muttered and he quietly opened while she started to feed with short smile. All this was watched by Mr.Malhotra from behind. He smiled in relief as at least his son was eating properly and most importantly there some one to feed and scold him on his mistake which was actually should have done by him long back.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Omg!! Manik punched nandu! He spat on nandu! And nandu is so understanding and patient!!!!!!! Humans ka naya species hai kya nandu??
This is gonna be remembered swarna.. Atleast main toh yeh story ko yaad rakhungi :)
Loved it..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update well done loved it thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
Awesome update dear.. Loved it
The story is very Intresting..
Will there be nandinis past as wel.? Like how she landed here?
Thank u for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
Awesomee amazingg update
Thnx for pm me

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