#2 Manan- Unacceptable Relation(Chapter 104 on pg no.42)(23-8-2017)

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Hot hot update.. ofcourse uve written it beautifully... u r an amazing writer girl peefectly penned

N u can take a break.. it will only nurish the story more.. so as u deem fit

Thanxx for the update

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Sarahpeyton

@Sarahpeyton

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Hi guys ...

I am back with another update.

CHAPTER -68

Manik woke up the next morning and saw Nandini sleeping peacefully in his arms with a cute pout.

A smile crept on his face seeing the love of his life in his arms.

Manik caressed Nandini's cheek with one hand and kissed her hair.

Nandini moved a bit in her sleep and snuggled more into Manik's arms.

Manik hugged her tightly and let her sleep in the same position as he didn't want to get up and disturb Nandini's sleep.

He just kept admiring Nandini .

Nandini woke up after almost an hour and found Manik awake.

Nandini realised her position and tried to get up immediately but Manik stopped her and pulled her more close to him.

Nandini - Manik please chodiye na. Kya kar rahe ho aap?

Manik - Kya kar raha hoon mai. Kuch bhi to nahi.

Saying this he switched their positions and came above Nandini.

Manik nuzzled into the crook of Nandini's neck and this created a tickling sensation in Nandini.

Nandini - Manik stop it na. Please get up.

Manik - No... I don't want to get up from the bed. Feeling too lazy.

Saying this Manik kissed Nandini's shoulder and then moved down a bit and gave feather kisses on her cleavage .

Nandini tightened her grip in Manik's hair.

Manik took Nandini's lips for a passionate kiss and Nandini responded to it equally.

The love birds were busy in their romance.

But before things heated up , Manik's mobile rang.

Manik didn't pay attention to it but Nandini said - Manik your phone... It may be something important.

Manik - Nothing is more important than this right now.

And he again bend down to capture Nandini's lips for a kiss.

But Nandini kept her hand on her lips .

Manik - Comeon Nandini this is not fair.

Nandini - Mr. Malhotra we have all the time in the world for this. But right now you need to attend the call.

Manik sighed and said- As you say Mrs.Malhotra. But you have to pay real hard for stopping me.

So prepare yourself.

Manik said this in a husky voice over Nandini's lips.

Nandini looked into Manik's intense eyes and could figure out a glint of naughtiness in his eyes .

Nandini immediately understood that she herself had invited trouble on her.

But right now she had to escape from Manik so she said - Jo hoga Dekha jayega. But now lemme go.

She pushed Manik a bit and got up from the bed and went to the washroom.

Manik smiled at Nandini's statement and ruffled his hair.

Then he attended the call.

It was from his P.A. who had called him for some important office work.

Nandini went to the washroom and took a shower and got dressed.

She came out and saw Manik working on his laptop.

Nandini - Kiska call tha Manik? Aur aap itni subah subah kya kar rahe ho laptop pe?

Manik without looking at Nandini said - Office se call tha. Have to send some mails.

Nandini - Ok.

And she was combing her hair when there was a knock on the door.

Nandini went and opened the door.

There stood Aarav-Khushi with sad faces.

Nandini bent down to their height and said- Kya hua my babies, aap dono itne sad kyu lag rahe ho?

Aarav-Khushi - Mumma we want to see waterfalls.

Nandini - Waterfalls???

Aarav-Khushi - Yes waterfalls.

It hashh this much water.

Both the kids widened their tiny arms to show the amount of water.

Nandini smiled on the cute antics of the kids.

Nandini - Ok Aaru Khush, we will go to the waterfalls today.

Aarav-Khushi - PLOMISH...

Nandini - Yes Pakka promise . But first we have to ask Dadoo.

Aarav-Khushi - Yayyy... Dadooo...

The kids ran upto Manik and climbed onto the bed.

By then Manik had finished his work.

He shut down the laptop and kept it aside.

The kids jumped onto Manik's lap and said-

Dadooo. We want to see waterfalls.

Manik - Waterfalls... Ok bachcho. We will spend the whole day at the waterfalls.

Aarav-Khushi got excited on hearing this.

Manik then looked at Nandini who was searching something in the cupboard and a smile appeared on his face.

Manik - Aarav-Khushi aap log ready hojao jaldi se. Then we will leave.

Aarav-Khushi - Ok Dadoo...

And the kids ran away to get ready.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

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Rashmi2

@Rashmi2

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Awesome...can't wait for next update ...soon plzzz...muaaa

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Arunima

@jesse93

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Love it dear,
it was awesome.

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anum_6

@anum_6

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Awww too cute
Update
Great
Update soon

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Sarahpeyton

@Sarahpeyton

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Hey guys...

I present you with another update of this story.

CHAPTER -69

Manik got up and went straight towards Nandini and hugged her from backside.

He bent down and kissed the tattoo which was visible through her dress as it was transparent at the shoulder.

Manik - Nandini Waise to I don't mind seeing my name on your body 24*7 but I guess you don't want others to know about it.

Nandini in a confused tone - Huh... Matlab.

Manik - Matlab ye ke the tattoo is visible through this transparent fabric.

Nandini -

OMG. Mai to bhool hi gayi thi.

So stupid of me. Mai abhi change karke aati hoon.

Nandini was about to go when Manik stopped her and said- YOU can change here if you want.

Washroom Jane ki kya zarurat hai.

I will help you out in getting your dress changed.

Saying this Manik pretended to unzip Nandini's dress.

Nandini - Nooo... Stop.

Manik - Nandini relax. Mai to bas mazak kar raha tha.

Nandini - Aap bahut bure ho Manik. I hate you.

Nandini turned her face to another direction.

Manik - You know what Nandini. You look too cute whenever you get angry.

Nandini - Apko maza aata hai na Mujhe tease karne me.

Manik - Well...

Manik scratched his forehead and pretended to think.

Nandini punched Manik on his stomach lightly and said- Manik...

Manik - Acha theek hai. I won't tease you but on one condition.

Nandini - What condition?

Manik pulled Nandini closer to him and held her by the waist.

Manik -

Whenever I wake up every morning the first thing I want to see is your smiling face.

Bolo manzoor hai...

Nandini smiled and said- Yes.

Manik - Okayy... So...

Manik eyed Nandini's lips and reduced the gap between both their lips when Nandini again stopped him.

Manik - Shayad aap bhool rahe ho ki Bachche wait kar rahe hai hamara.

Jaldi se ready hojaiye warna wo log wapas aajayenge.

Manik - Arey yaar Nandini tum meri wife ho ya dushman.

Har baar mujhe rok deti ho.

Nandini - Manik this is not the Time for romance. Ab jaiye jaldi se nahane.

Saying this she pushed Manik towards the washroom.

Manik - Okay fine...

And he went to have bath and Nandini went down to the kitchen after changing her dress.

Pia was already present there.

Nandini - Di kya bana rahi ho breakfast ke liye?

Pia- Aaj Maine South Indian breakfast banaya hai. Specially for Appa.

Nandini - Wow Di. It's great. Mai Kuch help kardu?

Pia - Nahi I am almost done. Tu jab tak table set karde.

Nandini - Okay Di...

Pia - Waise Nandu... Kal to tune kamal hi kar diya. Matlab mujhe to vishwas hi nahi ho raha hai.

Nandini - Diii... Stop teasing me.

Pia - Acha Ok. But ye to bata kal raat Kuch hua tum dono ke beech. Tu samajh rahi hai na kya puch rahi hoon.

On hearing this,Nandini blushed remembering last night and turned towards the other side.

But Pia noticed this and said- Oh My god Nandu, R u serious? Matlab kal raat...

Pia turned Nandini to face her and hugged her.

Pia - I am so happy for you Nandini. Finally you have accepted Manik wholeheartedly.

Nandini -

Yes Di...

I feel so blessed to have Manik as my life partner.

He is so caring and understanding.

Pia - Hmm. Wo to hai.

Then both the sisters set the breakfast table.

In the meantime, everyone came and occupied their respective seats.

Everyone was eating silently when Manik started the conversation.

Manik -

Appa aaj Shaam ko we have invitation to attend a birthday party of Mr. Khurana's daughter.

Aap free to ho na .

Vishnu - Nahi Beta actually I have a meeting tonight.

So mai nahi aa paunga.

Tum log jao enjoy karo.

Manik - Ok Appa as you say.

Then Manik turned towards Nandini Pia and Arjun and said- Tum log to aarahe ho na?

Arjun - Ofcourse count us in.

Till then Vishnu finished his breakfast and left for his office.

Pia and Arjun were about to leave when Nandini asked - Di hum log waterfalls dekhne jarahe hai.

Aap dono aarahe ho na.

Pia looked at Arjun and then at Nandini and said- Nandu actually Hume ek function attend karna tha.

Wo Arjun ke friend ki marriage hai toh...

Nandini - But Di...

Manik understood that Pia and Arjun were making excuses as they want to spend some alone time.

Manik - Nandini its ok. Let them go.

Nandini - Ok.As you say.

Pia - Thanks Jiju. Bye Nandu. See you in the evening.

With this Pia and Arjun left.

Nandini - Manik Agar Di aur Jiju bhi sath me aate to kitna Acha hota. Par apne unhe roka kyu nahi. Aur mujhe bhi rokne nahi dia.

Manik - Oh God Nandini.

Tum bhi na. Kuch samajhti nahi ho.

Didn't you Notice that they wanted to spend time with each other alone.

Aur jabse hum yahan aaye hain, they are not getting time. So let them enjoy.

Aur Waise bhi tumhe mere sath Time spend nahi karna tumhe.

Manik held Nandini by her waist and pulled her close to him.

Manik - Just you and me. Alone. What say?

Saying this Manik tightened his grip on Nandini's waist to which Nandini gasped.

Nandini got lost in Manik's intense eyes which were speaking volumes of his intentions.

Manik reduced the distance between their lips and Nandini closed her eyes in anticipation.

Manik traced his finger over Nandini's bare arm and shoulder and then her cheek.

Manik then kept his index finger under Nandini's chin and gently rubbed her soft lips.

Nandini held Manik's shirt tightly and parted her lips and a moan escaped her mouth .

Manik who was eyeing her lips smirked and kissed her cheek instead of her lips.

To this Nandini opened her eyes and looked at Manik.

Manik - What??? Aise kyu dekh rahi ho. Were you expecting something else?

Nandini blushed hard and lowered her head.

Manik -

Bolo na. Chup kyu ho. Kuch aur expect kar rahi thi Kya tum.

Were you expecting a kiss on your lips? Waise I don't mind doing that.

Nandini - Nahi. I wasn't expecting it. Wo to bas...

Manik -

Bas kya... I know you were expecting it.

You know what Nandini you are simply irresistible.

I just can't get enough of you.

But I don't think this is the right place for romance.

Nandini - Mai bachcho ko dekhkar aati hoon.

Nandini tried to get away from Manik's grip but he tightened his grip.

Manik - Nandini wait...

Nandini - Kya hua Manik?

Manik - Wo ... The kiss is still pending.

Nandini felt shy and said- Manik aap bhi na.

Manik - What mai bhi na... I m serious.

And I want you to initiate the kiss whenever that happens.

Nandini -Huh...

Manik - Yes. By the end of the day you have to do that warna mai naraz hojaunga.

Nandini - But Manik how will I?

Manik - Ab ye to tumhe sochna hoga ke how will you.

But you have to. There is no other option.

Before Nandini could say anything, Aarav-Khushi came running to them and said -

Mumma... Dadooo... we are ready. Letshh go...

Manik left Nandini and said still looking at her- Ok my babies. Let's go and have some fun.

Saying this he picked them in his arms.

Manik - Aarav-Khushi I want a kiss.

Manik said this by placing his finger on his cheeks.

Aarav-Khushi kissed Manik's cheeks one by one .

And Manik kissed them back.

Then he looked towards Nandini with a smirk and said- Nandini chalein...

Nandini nodded in nervousness.

And they left to visit the waterfalls.

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

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RainFlies

@RainFlies

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

commenting for last 2 chapters

they were lovely

lovely

and sooo lovely

too good

romantic

manik ka teasing and naughtiness..omg sooo cute

poor nandu got carried away

loved d both chapters

and thank u for back to back updates of 2 stories..

thank u

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ROOP0605

@ROOP0605

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Awsm

Cute

Eagerly waiting for next part

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

wow you are back wid the amazing update. ..

both update Are very awesome. ...

and manan romance It's amazing. ..

all scene was nicee...

waiting for next update eagerly..

Edited by gtilwani45 - 8 years ago