MaNan FF:Musicana Night..Begining of Change!!!(Chapter 11-page 31) - Page 3

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

loved the prologue
waiting
cont soon

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Originally posted by: Mr_Rahul

Don ne ek aur BOMB plant kr diya

Aur es Bomb ka natije kuch dino me hi hi India forum me dikhne start ho jayneg

Btw

Nice Concept Swarna

Waiting for update

ALL THE BEST

Thanks rahul...😳..will update soon...😃

Originally posted by: riyaparo

nice start
continue soon

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Originally posted by: shweta6767

Nice concept..
Continue.

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Originally posted by: Archana_Vinod

Aha! So here we are. With a different version of season 1's most interesting conflict. The break up.

There were places in this phase which I felt was not satisfactory. For instance, Manik losing his cool and forcing Nandini into accepting his apology. Well. That's Manik. 😆 He gets desperate at times. Enough to kidnap and blackmail. 😆😆

But you know what I like about your story? That Manik will pay the proper price for his actions without getting too bull-headed. That for a moment, he's going to keep aside his arrogance and ego whatever. At least, that's what I feel from the prologue. I really feel that he deserves more punches from Nandini than he actually got in the show. 😆 What say?

But whatever you've got up your sleeve, I'm game. The ending itself is promising. That Manik will need to try harder to win her back. 😆

All in all, this looks very interesting. I'd love to see how they finally bury the hatchet and gel with each other once again. Do continue soon and please do PM me 😉

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Waiting for story to read further
Thanks for the story plzzz Continue nd update soon dear
nd pm also
Bye Take care

Originally posted by: Angelic_Doll

Interesting prologue

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Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Amazing topic post musician.. Nice decision ...

Will definable love to read this Tory

Thanxx for starting

N all the best for the new journey

:)

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Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Interesting one...
Looking forward to it...
Update soon..
Thnx for pm...

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