|MaNanBir Joint FF| - DREAMERS (Chap 10 by Prats Pg 34) , 24 August - Page 6

Originally posted by: Mr_Rahul

GOOD WORK Teju 😊
Seriously i didn't expect this concept is this much interesting
now i m waiting for next writer what she will do in her turn
everyone is giving amazing updates

serious teju
u r mind blowing
now next is prats
so all the best prats
we will see what u have in your EVIL MIND😛

Originally posted by: niti06

🤣 🤣 it was completely funny update dear manik in lingerie shop 😆 😆 😆 oohhh god dear come soon with another fab update 😃

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

awesome update😆

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Oh god man..
Manik acting all gay types hahah...
Nandu like him aww..
Manik was running away from bira hahah..
Manan in changing room oh god..
This is getting too interesting..
Luved it..
Waiting for next...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon..

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Hahaha.. what was that 😆 Manik is seriously acting type gay. hahaha.. Awww .. so sweet na... He is running away from cabiraa. 😆 Haww. nandu likes him 😳 That was so so amazing. hahaha... Manan in changing room. hawww 😲 They are so amazing. kash kuch or bhi dekhne ko mil jaye 😉 WILL WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE. !! Stay blessed !! !! Keep Smiling !!

Originally posted by: shaan...

Amazing update...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

Originally posted by: nirvisha

Hey teju.. .
This is amazing bacha.. .
Very very good work chhoti.. .
It's perfectly fits in this new concept dear.. .
Nd funny. ..

Keep it up dear


Love,
NISHU

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Ok so as I've already told that I'm super late sorry for that first n now comingg to the prologue... That was so damn Intresting

Love triangle I've Manik between Nandu n cabir Hahahahahahahah...can't stop laughing...

This is going to be one hell of amazing story.. So many creative Bahrain working together no actually not together but Yaa.. For every update a new twist..

Really looking Frwd to read the storyALL THE BEST FOR THIS NEW JOURNEY

N THANK U FOR THE PM

now off to read part one

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

It was so good... N u r surly not bad with humour darling.. The update was a gully very funny... N perfect fit extremely excited for the next part

Plz Conti soon

:)

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

First part by nishu was a game changer I think.. Totally diffrent... Loving this concept... N great work done nishu

Thank u for the PM