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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja
Amazing update
It was so damn cute
Loved it
Sooo much...
Nandu ki dress was so good... Great choice..

Thank u for the lovly update and coming back finally
And also thank u for the PM

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
:)

Thanks dear...😳

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: rockstarlover
awesome update
too cute & adorable
the hot chic oops chicken part was hilarious😆😆
pics r beautiful
cont soon

Thanks dear...😳

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: shweta6767
Amazing update...👏

Thanks dear...😳

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Tasniya09
Awww such a cute update...
plzzz dear try to update soon...
& thanks 4 the pm

Thanks dear...😳 and I will try...can't promise...😊

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: riyaparo
awesome

😳😃

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: gtilwani45
Wow.. u updated .. so missed it yr... just amazing that was.. Finally u back.. Beautiful update... 😛 Awww. nandu n manik ka starting scene was super cute... Spider man underwear .. hahaha.. manik k chakke chut gye 😆 Aww Manik ne kyaa meaning samjhaya hot chick ka.. Cute. poor nandu kitni innocent h na. rone lg gyi.. But manik is there baby 😛 Nandu phir se gown... haha. but that was pretty look up again... Everything was beautiful ... Manik ne to sara credit apni nandu ko de diya.. aww sbke samnee kissy de di 😳 aww cutiepy.. Ye Trisha na.. how cheap .. huh.. accha jawab diya manik ne. aww nicee that was... Seriously a amazing update. End wala scene. ohh I was likee awww 😳 Cute that was. Amazing Update. Waiting for next update eagerly .. Thanks for pm... Stay blessed. keep smiling ..

Thanks dear...😳 and nandini is really a cutie pie...☺️...feeling like gobble her up...😆

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: megha94kumari
amazing update dear... BT y u r not updating on Fb??

Thanks dear...😳 and WTH Maine update kia hain...have a look on it...😃

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Swarna17
Awesome!!!
LoVED IT!!
CONTINUE SOON Swarna!!
your name reminds me myself LOL

Thank u swarna...😉

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

CHAPTER 10

I woke up yawning hard and rubbing my eyes. I straightly went to freshen up and came out after 20 minutes of hot shower. I gelled up my hair lightly and spreaded my favorite chocolaty cologne around and came out taking last glance of myself in the mirror.

Manik: " Nandu..Nandu

I called her out but no response. I shrugged and went towards her room but it was empty. I scratched my head and came downstairs. To my relief I saw her coming from outside humming a song and with lots of flower in her hands.

Manik: " Nandu..kitni baar mana kiya hai bina bataye idhar udhar mat jaya karo..kyu gayi phir

I scolded and she holded her ears sadly mumbling a sorry

Nandu: I went to meet Shaan...

She whispered and my face softened a bit. I turned away and she came infront of me.

Nandu: Mujhe Shaan ki yaad rahi thi..upar sai pata hai..ushke grave par rakhe flowers bhi sookh gaye thai..toh maine apne flowers mai sai aadhe flowers..ushke upar rakh diye.

She twinkled her eyes and I cupped her face lightly.

Manik: " So much of care..Agar Shaan kai grave ka itna care kar sakti hoh..toh khud Shaan ki kitni care karti

I mumbled and she made a confused look..clearly not understanding what I was saying

Manik: " Kuch nahi..chalo let's eat something..tuhmara aaj ad shoot bhi haina

I said and dragged her away with me to feed her.

My mood was bit pissed off as I saw a random fatty guy as partner of Nandu. He was showing off his acting skills and trying to flirt with her. Ohh I wish to break his nose and fatty tummy right there.I controlled myself until they finished their shoot. I tried to divert my mind..but no..that fatty was continuesly flirting out with her and she was giving in..princess Nandini ki bas koi tarif kardo..madam blushy blushy hoh jati hain...!!!

Manik: " Nandu...😡

I groaned once the shoot got finished and she ran upto me hugging me tightly while the fatty followed her.

" Ohh Hi..I'm Monty..the famous actor and model..ahh naam toh suna hoga"...He said proudly..flowing his hair while I gave a serious blank expression.

Nandu: Monster Manik..tuhme pata hai..Monty kitna hasata hai mujhe..he is so cute...😳

With she pulled his cheeks making him blush and I wanted to tear away his cheeks.

Manik: " Haa..really.. He's too cute...😡😡

I said and almost tored away his cheeks pulling it harder while he shouted in pain.

Monty: Lagta..roz gym sym jate hoh...

He mumbled caressing his swollen cheeks while I gave a faint smile and left cursing him beneath my breathe.

I took her back to mansion and she hopped out rushing inside. I followed her and maid handed me an envelope.

" Hi buddy..as you know..Alya was pregnant..so..so it's a baby girl and ushka name ceremony hai parso..you've to come and no bahana..as I was busy toh phone nahi kar paya..toh kuch gifts kai saath yeh invitation bhi bhej raha hu..take care and see you real soon."

Dhruv ".

I smiled happily as my best buddy was a father now..and obviously oldy than me. I smirked and went towards my room to keep that envelope.

I was feeding her quietly while she was checking out the gifts which Dhruv had sent specially for me. She pouted as she found no items for her

Nandu: Yeh kya..mere liye kuch bhi nahi hai..How mean...😒

she pouted crossing her arms and I chuckled a bit.

Manik: " Woh ishliye..kyuki ushe pata nahi naa..you're staying with me..tum log abhi tak mile kaha hoh

I said and she made a O face.

Nandu: Dhruv nai bola ushka baby hua hai..ushne paida kiya..kaise...😕

She asked and I stared at her with wide eye's. Meanwhile I silently prayed to GOD that nandini won't ask me any stupid question regarding it cause I really can't explain it to her or more so she won't understand that. So before any thought again appear to her brain I replied her.

Manik:" Ushne nahi..Ushki wife..Alya nai diya baba

I said feeding her another morshel and she smiled and began to think something.She snugled close to me and ask me with a puppy voice

Nandu: Accha hamara baby kab aayega Monster Manik...😳😃

She asked and I dropped the plate coughing hard.

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Don't skip it!!!

Ok guys u all konw main humesha chapter post karne main irregular ho jati hu...due to my own reason...so I wanna tell u guys k main aab se regular hon k try karungi...if u guys co operate.

So here is the scedule of my updates...plz have a look on it

1. Wajah tum,mermaid doll,ajab manik ki gazab kahani main 10 or 12 days alter post karungi with long updates

2.Hubby and wifey main 5 days alter post karungi but with short update

Hope u guys r ok with it...agar fir v koi fermayish ho to tell me in ur comments.