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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shaan...

Excellent update...

Manan's bond is so adorable...
Manik's way of punishing d doc was superb...
Manik's suppressing so much pain...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

THANK U SO MUCH...😃😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

awesome update
the doc got his punishment 👍🏼
manik had a little bro
but he died😭
nandu has the healing power wow
cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasniya09

Waiting for next update..
& this update was awesome

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

The story is so cute... So so so awesome... Small moments but worth a thousand words..

Beautifully written
Loved the update
Thank u for the pm
:)

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Swarna17

First of all! sry fr cmntng so late i was stucked wid smthng. ahh! SWARNA loved loved the cncpt really diffrent cncpt. Princess nandini so cute she is! yeah! continue soon! waiting fr the next chap.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

It ok dear... N seriously about the bashing thing ... It is beyond weird ur story ur wish.. Where is the point to msg u or anything on this matter...

N all the best for ur exams...

Will be waiting for u

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

it's ok dear
take ur time

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Posted: 9 years ago
" Aaachhhuuu! She sneezed hard clutching her blanket and rubbed her tiny nose ready to sneeze again.

Manik: Ab chup chap..drink this..
I said and started feeding her hot soup. Once done I cleaned her lips and went to wash away the dish.When I returned she was giggling staring at my albums. I smirked and started cleaning her messy room.

Nandu: Ohh..Shaan kai lambe lambe baal..ohh teri..Shaan in underwear
She exclaimed and I smiled shortly adjusting her clothes

Nandu: Hawww..mickey mouse wala underwear hehehe
She giggled and I widened my eyes in shock. Shaan hated mickey mouse that means..the pic was of...shit...it was me...!!!

Manik: Nandu...dekho meowww
I shouted and she threwd away the album jumping in bed. I quickly took out that pic and sighen in relief

Nandu: Monster Manik..kaha hai meoww
She asked and I showed my teeths

Manik: " He's gone..gone gone..yeh loh album
I handed her the album and wiped away my sweat

Nandu: Aayi..Mickey mouse underwear wala Shaan kidhar gaya..
She asked searching the album and I made a innocent look shrugging at her.Cabir and I were almost arguing over a topic while Nandu was sitting crossing her legs and staring at us

Manik: " Kya zaroorat hai party ki..I mean..chuck it off
I mumbled and he made a horrible face glaring at me

Cabir: CEO of the year bana hai itne saal baad..phirse..party is compulsory dude..drinks..music..hot chicks
He exclaimed and I nodded in complete no. And suddenly our princess nandini asked one of her question...

Nandu: Hot Chicks matlab kya hota Monster Manik
She asked playing with hair and I shooted glares at Cabir who mumbled sorry to me

Manik: " Hot Chicks..umm..chicken..chicken kai chote chote bache..garam garam khaate hai hum
I said and she made O face and then suddenly started crying

Nandu: Haww..chote chote bacho ko khaate hoh..gande kahike
She cried and I cupped her face wiping away her tears

Manik: " Don't cry..no hot chicks okk..Cabir. Party hogi..lekin no hot chicks and no cold chicks
I warned and he nodded smiling at me


BEFORE PARTY:

Manik: " Nandu..ish party mai gown mat pehno..disney cartoon lagti hoh..try something else
I said and she made a disgusting look at me

Nandu: Tum kehna kya chahte hoh huh..
She groaned and I laughed shortly at her

Manik: " Are don't be ghussa. Don't worry..monster Manik nai designers bulaye hai..they'll handle you..if they can
I mumbled shortly scratching my head and she made a whatever look.

I made a blank face as I saw her in that nevy blue mermaid gown with shinig diamond earing ang a black gold ring adorning her. A shiny hair pin tucked inside her hair with her most cute smile. Nevertheless she was looking breath taking

Nandini's gown

Hair pin

earing

Black gold ring


Manik: " What's this
I asked glaring at the designers and they shrugged at us

Designer: " She only insisted. Aur wese bhi..yeh look inpar jyada suit karta hai..why not aap party ka theme fairy tale kardo
They suggested and I nodded as that made the sense.I adjusted by prince black tuxedo and gelled my hair perfectly. A pair of small hands covered my eyes and dragged me away with her. When it got opened I saw us standing infront of full length mirror.

Nandu: So..ready monster Manik
She wrapped her arms around me and I nodded in yes walking away with her.

Manik's suit

I saw spot light falled on us as we walked downstairs. Everyone were smiling and congratulating me while I gently nodded back

Manik: " All credits goes to Nandu..cheers
I said and waved them with my drink and they cheered me back. I looked at Nandu who was busy gossiping with Cabir and all and smiled to myself." Mr.Malhotra can we have a talk please...Mr.Raichand the namely tycoon of Europe was smiling at me. I nodded he shaked my hands.

Mr.Raichand: " Aapke bare mai kaafi suna thaa..you were the one..phir beech mai achanak..you're name started to declined. Lekin aaj wapas ushi place mai..fantastic
He praised and I smiled biting my lips and he nodded

Mr.Raichand: " If you don't mind..aapke itne bade empire mai..hame bhi kaam karne koh mauka mile then..you know
He said and instantly my smile widened

Manik: " Of course..It will be pleasure working with you
I said and he hugged me like a true gentle man.I went to Nandini and without caring about surrounding kissed her cheecks making her blush hard while Cabir dropped his ice cream.

Nandu: Haww..kya hua Monster Manik
She asked and I mumbled nothing pulling her cheecks. She shrugged and continued eating her ice cream while I thanked her inwardly. " Manik..kya hum baat kar sakte hain...I turned and saw Trishna looking at me. I rolled my eyes and turned to her while Nandu was lost in her own.

Manik: " Bolo..
I said with cold voice and she held my hands close to hers

Trishna: See..I'm sorry..ush waqt mai naraz thi tumse..aur tuhme pata haina..jab mai naraz hoti hu toh ulta seedha kar deti hu
She said softly and I nodded waiting for her another nonsense

Trishna: Can't we just you know be together again.. I'll motivate and love you like always..sab kuch acha hoga..phirse
She whispered and I laughed making her frown

Manik: " Same dialogue jaake kisi aur sai kehna..jab mujhse jyada koi aur powerful banda mile toh
I said and pulled away my hands from her. She pleaded and I pulled Nandu close to me

Manik: " You know..ishe koi farak nahi padta..ishka Monster Manik..kitna bada hai..chota hai..ishe sirf apne Monster Manik ki zaroorat padti hai..and there are lot's of difference between her and you..but mujhe abhi apna time waste nahi karna
I said and left while she made a real bad face

Manik: " Sab..sab matlabi hote hai..jab man kiya chod diya..jab man kiya wapas
I gritted my teeths angrily while she stared at me licking her ice cream.

Manik: " Bas Nandu..tuhmara fever theek hua ab tak..aur kitna khaogi
I scolded and she made a puppy face at me

Nandu: Thoda sa aur..kuch nahi hoga..Aaachhhuu
with that she sneezed and I threwd a sharp glare at her. She placed the box near me and holded her ears with sad face.

Manik: " Chalo..ab..ek mota sai injection marunga aur meoww kai saath room mai band kar dunga
I teased her and she started crying badly.

Manik: " Ohhooo..I'm joking yaar..no injection..no meoww
I cupped her face and she hid in my embrace.

Nandu: Sacchi?
She asked and I just hmmd calming her down.

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Posted: 9 years ago
I just commented on wajah tum ho and then I'm here wapas a jao naa yaar I'm missing my tapori nandhu and princess nandini pls na dear tussi as bhi jao na 😭 😒 😒

This was my first comment before ur update toda aur wait kar leti u know mene comment post kiya or tumhara muje pm mila
chalo koi ni an chapy I baat karte he hot chicks kya he, chote chote bachhon ko Kateine he ,and then no hot chicks and cold chicks this was highlight of the chapy manik ne bohat hi achhe se hot chicks ko define kiya,this trishna now wants to be with him again how dare she but but but our monster manik ne karara ans diya chaa gaye monster manik aap
lovely chapy dear come back soon and luv u
Edited by niti06 - 9 years ago

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