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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta6767

Awesome update 👏
Nandini is so cute and innocent too...
Manik is so caring and protective for Nandini...how cute... 😳
Update soon

THANKS...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: niti06

🤣 🤣 🤣 this is all I can do nandhu nandhu what to do with u yaar seriously baby kaise paida karte hai 😆 😆 😆 another bomb fell on manik hamara baby kab ayega 😎 😆 ab iske sage himmat ni he tumhare dono updates ne buri halat kar di meri I so sorry for not a lamba comment but the reason is only u sorry

Haw... 😲😲maine kya kia...😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasniya09

1stly thanks for the pm...
Loved this jealous monster manik & our innocent ka dabba :v
w8ing for maniks answer
plzzz update soon

THANK U DEAR...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bikita

It was just amazing.

And don't worry feel free to update.

We are with you.
Thanks for the update

THANKS DEAR...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Wow...
So Niceee Update. .Totally loved it..

Hayee jealous monster manik
is so much fun..
its so fun to read him...

Nandu ...
someday I'll die wid her cuteness.


Hahaha.
nandu ne end me kya punch mara..
Hmara baby .haww..
manik to gya..
Haha.

Sooo Amazing Update.

Waiting for next update ..
Thanks for pm...

Stay Blessed.
Keep Smiling .

Nandini is really a cute ka dabba...Main to fida hu iss princess par ...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Didiaish

Hey amazing story
I read in one go
Nandu is so cuteee and innocent
And manik is also nice guy
Plzzz keep them together always

And Continue soon

THANKS AND WELCOME DEAR...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Nandini's so adorable...
Caring & protective manik's so adorable...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shaan...

Awesome update...

Nandini's so adorable...
Caring & protective manik's so adorable...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

THANK U DEAR...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 11
Nandu: Hamara baby kab aayega Monster Manik...
She asked and I dropped the plate coughing hard. She made a what look while I almost lost my breathe

Manik: " What..what do you mean hamara baby? 😲
I asked stretching the word Hamara and Baby.

Nandu: Are buddhu humara baby...matlab princess nandini aur manik ka babies...😳

Manik: Baby se babies !!!
Nandu: Ha...babies...woh v bohat sara...jo bilkul mere tarha hoga...aur pata hain manik jab humara babies ayenge na to hum yeh home change kar lenge...

Manik: Home change...kyu...kharabi kya hain iss gharme ???
Nandu: Are...bacche hone k baad main aur humara babies pura din pani main swim karenge aur khelenge...aur iss ghurme utna badha pool v nahi hain...
She said dreamily...

MANIK'S POV:
What...humara babies nandini k tarha hoga...oh no...😲
(pov end)

Manik is imaginig their kids...all r as intelligent as nandini and mostly they all have their tails instead of legs...imaginig this manik freaked out and replied her...

Manik: Nahi...humara baby bilkul nahi ho sakta...
Nandu: Kyu..hum bhi saath saath rehte hai..I like my Monster Manik and Monster Manik also cares about me..toh hamara baby kyu nahi hoh sakta 😉
She was teasing me with smirk and I understand all this while she was teasing me... I folded my arms and told

Manik: " Meoww koh bulau
I smirked while she too smirked back and shrugged making me confuse..she should be scare by the way...😕

Nandu: Haha..Meoww aur maine dosti karli..He won't eat me now...😆
She teased and called up Whiney..my cat and ruffled its hair softly

Manik: " Woh He nahi..She sai..kuch dino mai ushke bhi bacche aa jayenge aur sab milke mera sar pakana
I muttered angrily while she laughed playing with her newly mate Meoww



" 1..2...3...Nandu was counting sitting on back while I was doing push ups. She lied down hugging my neck while I continued building myself up.Once done I thumped on floor while she came down snuggling close to me. With tired body I wrapped my arms around her and dugged my face on her and stayed there for long moment .

Nandu: Monster Manik..
She muttered breaking the long silence while I just hummed responding back

Nandu: There is a ghost standing on a door
She muttered hiding more inside while with a scared look I rolled up my eyes and looked towards the door and there was no one

Manik: " Door mai koi nahi hai Nandu
I whispered and she clutched my black Vest tightly

Nandu: Nahi..wahi hai..dhyaan sai dekho..I'm scared
She whispered while I frowned as there was no one..Is she hallucinating or something

Manik: " Are waha..
I was about to speak when actually I too saw a glimpse of something or someone trying to peep through the door

Manik: " Actually..sachme koi hai..
I whispered lowly while she let out a crying voice and closed her eyes tightly

Manik: " Who's there
I acted brave glaring at the shadow while it didn't moved a inch

Nandu: Puch kyu rahe hoh..itna body banaya abhi..jaake dhisoom dhisoom karo
She whispered still eyes closed while I took a breathe and stood up clutching my fist hard .I grabbed the dumble from beside and took form ready to attack it while she hid behind. I laughed like a idiot as it felt some kind of war going to be placed.

The shadow turned and entered inside while I banged the dumble on its head. I palmed my face as I saw Cabir lying on floor with birds and stars flowing around his head. I frowned as he was dressed up as you know Sholay ka Gabbar Singh..or I don't know...🤣



Cabir was sitting with horrible face with a huge potatoe on his forehead. I tried to suppress my laugh but in vain
Manik: " Abe..darwaze kai peeche kya kar raha thaa..aur jab pucha kaun hai toh wapas bola kyu nahi
I asked and he showed off his mobile with head phone glaring at me

Cabir: Gane sun raha thaa..pehle aane wala thaa..lekin tum dono chipak kai soye hue thai..toh wahi side mai ruk gaya..aur jab wapas aaya andar toh tune thok diya
He said and I mumbled a sorry

Nandu: Haww..mujhe laga tum ghost hoh..tum toh gore thai..phir kale kaise hoh gaye..aur tuhmare daat
She said and he showed his teeths which were eww..what to say

Cabir: Dhruv nai bacha aane kai khushi mai party ki theme fancy dress rakhi thi..toh socha..Gabbar Singh ban jata hu
He smirked and I nodded in disbelief.



I was sitting on her bed while she was lying on my lap and staring at me. I made a what look and she placed my hands around her caressing it softly
Nandu: I know..tum hamesha raat mai mujhe chodkar apne room mai jate hoh..please mat jaya karo
She whispered and I leaned towards her

Nandu: Beech beech mai aankh khul jati hai..lights bhi nahi hote..tum bhi nahi hote..then I feel so scary..Kal toh mai theek sai soh bhi nahi payi
She complaint and I mumbled sorry ruffling her hair

Manik: " Okay..ab Monster Manik kahi nahi jayega hmm..
I said and lyed down beside her while she happily snuggled closed me. I didn't wanted to leave her alone but Im scared..it feels like I'm taking her advantage..and I'm really not doing that

Nandu: Tuhme pata hai..Monty nai ek story bhi sunai..real wali..jou ushne dekha
She said and once again that Fatty..I glared at her and shutted her mouth

Manik: " No Monty Sonty..sleep
I groaned hugging her tight while she wrapped her arms around me. Monty the fatty's topic boils me..so I tightened my grip around her

Nandu: Monster Manik..I can't breathe
She mumbled on my chest while I loosened the grip and she punched me hard trying to ease her breathe

Nandu: Gande Monster Manik..
She pouted and I whispered sorry caressing her face while she snuggled and drifted to sleep. That's the thing I was afraid about..I doubt..with every moments..I'm becoming possessive about her..I'm afraid to loose her and that's scaring the hell out of me.
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I know chotu but u guys r responsible for it...Evry day I got so many buddy request but response was so low as usual...If u silent readers don't take any step to trust me I will DO it.
Regualr readers don't worry main story band nahi karungi...aur aap logo ko v update mil jayega...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hayo rabba it was sooo cute. ..
I just love princess nandini a lot. ..she is too cute. ..
The update was just too much amazing
Loved it too much. ...
That children imagining time ..uff It really made me laugh ...
And cabir. ..hehehe. ..gabbar. ..uff. ..
Continue soonish plz. ...
Take care ...
Keep smiling ..
God bless you. ..
Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago

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