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Posted: 9 years ago

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CHAPTER 5 (b)-

varsha- itni badi baat apne nandini se itne saal chepake rakhi...par kyin???(crying) kya usee appne zindagi ka itna bada saach janneka haq nahi he ???kal ko jab use iss saachai ka pata chalega ke uski bachpan mein he shaddi karwadi gaye thi...child marriage hui thi uspe kya betegi ?? aur agar usse kise aur se pyaar ho gaya toh ?? tab kya hoga aapne kabhi socha hai??kya usse haq nahi ki wo khud apne marzese aapna husband choose kar sake ...???aur yeh sab toh dur ki baat hai pehele toh wo ladka kon hai ,kya karta hai ?mein jitna aapko jante huin aap nandu se toh appne jaan se zada pyaar karti hain ...toh phir aap ne aisa kyun kiya ???(with a helpless expression with tears continously rolling down from her eyes she knees down before amms holding her had and asks helplessly)kuch toh boliye amms mujhe sach janna hai ...

amms- socha tha sahi waqt ayega toh mein sabko sab sach bata dunge lekin kair ek tareh se achha hi hua ke tume pata chal gaya ...mein yeh bojh ab aur apne dil pe lekar nahi rehe sakti...lekin varsha yeh jo bhi sab hua hai iss sab ke piche ek bohut badi wajha hai...baith mein tujhe sab batati huin...

varsha sits beside amms holding her hand

amms- jis din sarika aur rajveer (nandu's parents) ka accident hua uss din shekhar malhotra aur uski family bhi sarika,rajveer,rishab aur nandu ke sath uss gadi mein thee.shekhar malhotra sarika aur rajveer ka childhood best friend tha .bachpan se he unhone har kaam sath mein kiya karte the .shekhar malhotra bahut he rich or elit khandan se belong karta tha ...leken bahut hi seedha sadha aur dil ka bahut achha insan tha...aur appne doston pe toh apne zaan izhar karta tha ... moorty industries ko khada karne mein ussne appne je jaan lagadi thi... sab kuch acha chal raha tha ...uss din wo sab milke holiday manane ke liye goa ja rahe the by road ..aur raste mein unka accident ho gaya ...nandu us shock ke karan accident se pehele ki kuch baatein aur appn zindegi ke kuch pallon ko bhul gaye ,doctor ne kaha ke use partial memory loss ho gaya hai...,sab log bach gaye sivaye sarika aur rajveer ke...(again starts crying)sarika ne hospital aate samaye raaste mein he dum tod diya leekin rajveer ko kisi taraha se hospital laya gaya lekin wo bach nahi paya lekin appne akhri saans lete waqt usne hekhar se nandu aur rishab ka khayal rakhe ko kaha aur usne usse wada kiya ke wo unka khayal rakhega...leekin badkismate se usse din pata chala ke moorty industries ke share gir gaye the aur hum barbad ho chuke thee... humara ghar aur baki sabkuch humse cheen liya gaya...aur tab shekarne humare madad ki aur usn rishab ka sara kharcha uthaya aur usse padhne ke lye bahar bhej diya aur nandu ka futue secure karne ke liye ussne mejhe nandu ka haat appne bete ke liye manga... ussne rajveer se jo wada kiya tha wo nibhaya... ussne mujhse kaha ke ''nandu meri bhi bete hai aur mein cahata hun ki nandini ko mein humesha humesha ke liya appne bete bana kar aapne ghar mein rakhoon...mein cahata hun ki aap nandu ki shaadi mere bete ke sath kar dein...'' uss waqt itna sab kuch ho chuka tha aur ...mein cahate thi ki meri nandu khush rahe usse kabhi koi kammein na ho aur khaas kar apne amma appa ki wo shekhar ke sath bohut khush reheti thi aur wo usse bilkul apne bete ki taraha pyaar karta tha ...balki nandu uske ladli thi ...iss liye meine han kar di...aur usske bete aur usske shaadi karwadi...lekin nandu bahut choti thi isliye unlogon ne kaha k jab nandu bade hojayege tab mein uss yeh sacchai bataun ...aur wo mumbai shift ho gaye...aaj bhi mein unse haar rozz baat ksart huin...

varsha - matlab nandu ko accident se pehele ki kuch chezein yaad hi nahe hai...achha yeh saab toh theek hai leekin wo hai kon jisse nandini ki shaadi hui ??

amms- MANIK MALHOTA...malhota industries and enterprises ke malik shekar malhotra ka beta ...yeh hai usk bachpan ki photo(shows her the photo)

varsha- (seeing it) ...awww kitne cute the jiju...lekin mein pachpan ki poto dekhkar kya karungi ?? abhi ke koi photo dikhaye na pata toh chale ki mere jiju dekhete kaise hain ...

amms- abhi ka photyo toh mere pass nahi hai leekin mere shekar se do din pehele hi baat hui hai wo mujhe kuch dino mein bhej dega ...actually manik kafi sallon se US mein padhai karne rehe aha tha leekin abb wo wapas aa raha hai...achha tu yeh saab chod aur tu nandu yeh saab abhi maat batana ...waqt anne par mein khud usse bata dungi...

varsha- are amms appko to apata hi hai na ki mre peth mein zada deer tak koi baat nahi rehe sakti par phir bhi mein puri koshish karungi...aap tension mat lo...(smils)

amms achha acha bohot sare baatein ho gaye aur vais bhi flight ka time ho raha hai toh jaldi kar warna nandu tujhe kachha chaba jaye gi aagar tu aaj mumbai nahi pahunchi...

To be continued in the next chapter...

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CHAPTER 6- JUST A COINCIDENCE OR DESTINEY ? (a)

5:00PM - RESIDENTIAL SOCIETY

nandus prov- finally i reached ...uff what an eventful day it was... any way i am so happy that i am her for a new beginning...

she came ot of the cab and there was a person who was from the company for sure ...

rahul- hi maam ...i am rahul plz to meet u ...(forwarded his hand and i took it)welcome mumbai maam here are your flat keys and as per the notice you will share your flat with anothe intern i.e miss .varsha agnihori...so ...here..

nandini -(taking the keys) thaks...

rahul- its ok maam ...and further if you need anything company has arranged a maid for you so she will get it for you...ok maam so now i have to leave...have a good day ahead..

nandini entered the society and took the life her flat was on the 5th floor...she reached there and opened the door with the keys and she was stunned the flat was huge and lavish after all it was the flat given by the largst company of asia...it was well furnished .after opening the door she entered the coredoor wich directly took to the living are which was decorate vey beautifully in the left there was and open kitchen with dinning table and in the right side it had two bedroom with attached bathroom and if we walk straight there was a huge balcony with a swing attached with the living room which had a flower garden in it...the flat had all te possible things which a person needed ... and even the kitchen was well stocked.

she happily walked inside and went inside a bedroom and settled her things in the cuboard.just then her cell rings

nandini- (picks up)varshu !kahan hai tu ?? tu toh idhar 5:30 pm ko pahunchne wale thi ?

varsha- aree mere maa stop stop todhi saans lele aur han mein pahuchne wali thi but flight delay ho gaye thi so.. anyways mein abhi just airport se nikle ...tu mejhe address de mein pahunch rahi hun ok ... tension mat le...

nandini- ya ...just a min...(and gives her the address )accha jaldi pahunch kitna sara kam hai ,room mein sab kuch set katna hai...

Varsha- ok ok just pahunch ne wali hun ( hangs up)

After a few mins the bell rings.nandini runs and opens the door...

Nandini and varsha both shout in excitement seeing eachother...

Varsha and nandini together- aaa omg omg omg finally...(and hug eachother)

Scene shifts ...

MALHOTRA MANSION-

Manik just enters the house and mukti comes running down ...in excitement

Mukti- bhai...

And hugs manik with so much force that for a moment manik almost looses his balance ...

Manik- aare doll dheere ... abhi gir jati toh bhai ko dekh ke itni khush ho ?(asks cutely)

Mukti- bohooot kush hun !!

Manik- awww...

Suddenly mukti hits manik on his arm...

Manik- arre mar kyun rahi hai ?(surprised)(but she his him again )arre meine kya kiya ?

Mukti- mujhe aapse baat nahi karni (and turns around )

(manik smiles on her cuteness and decides to play along)

Manik- kyun nahi kani? kya doll bhai se gussa hai ?

(she bobs her head cutely)

And manik goes all aww on her cute antics

Mukti - aap bohot late ho bhai ...aapne kaha tha ke aap yesterday aaoge but aap nahi aaye ...this is not fair aap aise kese kar sakte ho and turns around (and suddenly her eyes fall on the small wond on his forehead and she paniks...

Mukti - bhai ye..yeh kaise hua (and she starts crying )aa..aap theek toh ho na mei ..mein bhi kitni pagal hun aapse aapka halchal puche bina meine aapne bakwas chalo kar de ...aa..aap idhar baitho (and drags him to the couch in the living room..

Manik- aare mukti ...doll mere baat toh sun ...(but she was least interested she was more concerned about the fact that his brother was hurt

Mukti- (shouts)ramu kaka...jaldi se firstaid box lekar aayeye..

Manik- aare mukti relax ...mein bilkul theek hun..

Ramu kaka give her the firstaid box

Mukti- chup! ekdum chup!

And manik obeys obediently and puts his finger on his lips and sits quietly...

While mukti aaplies the antiseptic cream on it and blows air on it ...manik just keeps smiling throughout ...

Mukti- dard ho raha hai...(worriedly)

Manik - aab meri doll me medicine lagaya na toh ab yeh bilkul theek ho gaya ...

And suddenly neyonika malhotra enters the room ..

Neyonika- aagar bhai behen ka milap ho gaya ho toh thoda aapme mom ko bhi yaad karlo...

Manik gets up and hugs her ...and they all sit there while he narrates the whole journey to them ofcourse leaving the nandini and soha wala part...

Mukti after hearing every thing says

Mukti- mujhe pata hai bhai aapko dekhte hi unko aapne nani yaad aagaye hoge...(and smiles naughtyly)

But in all this convo mukti was finding something fishy ...like there is a part of the story which was missing...

to be continued...

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JUST A COINCIDENC OR DESTINY ??? (B)

after having dinner an a little chit chat with his sister and mom he finally went to his room...meanwhile

MUKTIS ROOM-

MUKTIS PROV-

hmmm...yeh bhai jabse ay hain kitna wierd behav karrahe hain...jaise hi unhone us incidnt ke bareme bola all of a sudden ekk part mein ruk gaye and literally aise lag raha tha jaise bhai kuch chipane ki koshish kar rahe hain hmmm...why i dont know but mujhe aisa lagta hai ke there is more to the story and a part of it is definitely missing which bhai is hiding from me...but bhai aap yeh bhul rahe ho ke mein bh aap hi ki behen hun soo app mujhe itne assane se buddhu nai bana sakte(give a naughty smile)

MANIKS ROOM-

comes out after getting fresh...there is a knock on the door...

mukti- bhai mein andar aajaun???

manik- aree doll tujhe kabse mere room mein anekeliye knock karne ki jarurat padne lagi ...aana..(smiles)

mukti - wo bhai ...abse mein knock karke hi andar aungi...(makes a sad face)

manik becomes worried and keeps the towel on the table and rushes towards her

manik- arree par kyun ??(making her sit on the bed)

mukti stands up facing her back to manik and smiles naughtily...

mukti- aur nahi toh kya ...abb aap mujhpar trust nahi karte app bachpan se mujhese aapne saare tensions saare baatein yaahan tak ki aapni secrets bhi share karte the lekin ab aap mujhse baatein chupane lage ho ...aapne toh mujhe bilkul paraya kar diya ...(starts fake crying)

and as usual our the great manik malhotra cannot stand a single tear in his sisters eyes ...

manik- aare doll plz maat ro tujhe toh pata hai na that i cant see u in tears ...plz plz bhaiya ki jaan maat ro ...ok ok i ll tell u the missing part of the story but promise kar kisiko iss bare mein nahi bataigi ok ??

and our mukti is back in our jovial mood thinking mission muh khulwao successful !!

mukti- shuru hojao...i am listening...

and suddenly maniks face becoms red thinking about the bus incident...

mukti- ooomg bhai !!!!!(stands on the bed with the most shocking exptrssion on her face)

manik - kya hua seeing her reaction(worriedly)

mukti comes down from the bed and drags manik towards his dresser and makes him stand infront of the full lenght mirror..

mukti- hawww bhai look at your face ...pura lal hogaya hai (laughs)i mean mank malhota ,THE MANIK MALHOTRA blush kare hain ...

manik - hidding his blush mukti tu bhi na kuch bhi bolte hai aalj kall tumhare college mein padai wadai nahi hote kya jo tu kuch jada hi yeh sab bakwass karne lasgi hai (holding her ear)

mukti- aaa bhai lagta hai (laughing)

ok ok ok ...on a serious note fine mein aapki taang nai khichungi par baatao toh sahi ke aisa kya hua tha jo aap aise...(manik glairs at he and she tries not to laugh)aaree mera matlab hai ki aap apni bhenen se bhi chipa rahe ho ?

manik- wo..(he narrates the whole story)

mukti-ootere bhai ...matlab aab toh sachimein mujhe door knock karke he aana padega...

manik- kyun ??(confused)

mukti- aree abtoh meri bhabi jaldi hi aane walihain and u know mujhe beech mein gooseberry banne ka koi shock nai (manik was looking at her with utmost shock)aare look kya de rahe ho ...saach hi toh kehe rahi hun pata chala aap dono ka koi...private moment chal rajha ho aur mein uninvited beech mein taapak gayi ...na baba na...itna bafda pap mujhse na hopayego ...(says melodramatically)

manik- aacha ...badmash kahin ki ruk tu abhi batata hun apne bhai ki tang khichti hai ruk ...(they both start running in the whole rume like tom and jerry laughing)

meanwhile ...

NANDINIS APARTMENT-

varsha and nandu after a lot of chit chat and after having dinner come to the room...and sit on the bed..

varsha- waise nandu..

nandini- hmmm

varsha- remember last tune jab call kiya tha tune kuch kehete kehete ruk gaye thi...

nandini -kya ...(confused)

varsha -ke woh mein bas mein ek bacche ki help karahi thi aur...

and all of a sudden nandus face become red

nandini- ab ba ba...ka...kya...kuc..kuch bhi toh nai ...and (turns around remembering the incident)

varsha- achha (naughtily)toh tu yh mun kyun chiparahi hai bata bata aur all of a sudden yeh tera face red kyun ho gaya han ...bol bol...tujhe dekh ke toh tamatar bhi sharma jaye...

nandini-aa..ai..aisa kuch nahi hai wo toh bus mein ...(and stands near the window)

varsha- wo toh bus kya ...aiyoo ab maat bolna ke tune kuch .chi chi chi ...nandu tune ais akiya...

nandini- ar kya bole jarae hai aisa kuch nahi hai wo toh bus mein ek bacche ki help kar rahi the anur suddenly break lag gaya aur mein uske upar gir gaye...(and stops realising what she sai and again her becomes red )

varsha - hawww nandu ..mujhe pata tha tu chiparahi hai ...ooo toh yeh baat thi ..tabhi mein sochu hamari nandu itna blush kyun kar rahi hai ...aur tu best friend se chipayegi chal ab batta ,...ab kuch detail mein bata..

nandu sighs a finally the truth was out and she cant hide it...

after a while...

nandu- toh yh sab hua ...

varsha - oye hoye yar kash mein waha hoti mujhe bhi u know live movie dekhne ka moka milta...

nandu- tu bhi na varshu kuch bhi bolte hai(and again tands near the window watchin the moon)

varsha - par on serious note...kahin tujhe use pyar wayar toh nahi ho gaya ..u know love at first site...(worried)

varshas prov- oh god plz han mat bolna plz plz plz ...nandu tujhe abhi sachai nahi pata ke tu kisi ki already hai...)

nandini- (nandu watching the moon ) pyaar ka toh mujhe pata nahi but thers something...something really different about him...i dont know why but bahut jana pehechana sa hai ais lagta hai ke jaise mein use pehele se janti hun ...par pata nahi hum aur kabhi melenge bhi ya nahi...

MANIKS ROOM-

mukti- bas bas bhai aur nahi daud sakti bas hogaya ...p(panting heavily)

mukti and manik both together fall on the bed ...

mukti- waise bhai..

manik- hmmm..

mukti- kahin apko use pyaar toh nahi ho gaya...

manik gets up and stands near the window and looks toward the moon...

manik- pyaar ka toh i dont know but thers something special about her ... pata nahi kyun but uske saat un kuch moments mein mujhe ek ajeebsa sookoon mehesus hua ..aisa laga ke mein use pehele se janta hun...pata nanhi hum phir mill payenge bhi ya nahi...

the screen divides into two both nandini and manik watching the moon at the same time...

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JUST A COINCIDENC OR DESTINY ???(c)

nandini- varshu mein ek call karke aate hun ...

varsha -ok

MANIKS ROOM-

muktis phone rings ...

mukti bhai mein call attend kar ke ati hun ok...

manik - ok

after sometime...

mukti -bhai bhai bhai i am so happy...(and twirls manik)

manik- are mra doll itna happy..kya mein wajah jann sakta hun...

mukti - bhai apko yaad hai mein once ek musical camp ke liye masoori gay thi...

manik- han woh mein kaise bhul sakta hun first time mere doll mujhse itna duur gayi thi that to for 4 days i was vry worried... aur tu bohot buri tarah se bimar ho gaye hi...(had tear in his eyes)

mukti - oho bhai aap bhi kya emotional ho jate ho ..mere puri baat toh suno...han toh mein keherahi thi ki remember mene aapko meri ek friend ke bare mein bataya tha jisne mere help ki thi ...jab meri tabiyat kharab o gai thi..

manik - han ...

mukti- bhai wo yahan hai mumbai mein ...yh i am sooo happy ...aur kal ham milne wale hain...

manik- arre tabtoh mujhe bhi usse milna hai aur usse thank u bhi bolna hai...

mukti - ok fine aap bhi mere sath chalna ...

manik- acha sun raat bohot ho gaye hai and mein bhi bahut thak gaya hun toh tu soja aur mein bhi sojata hun vais bhi kal se office bhi jana hai...

mukti-ok gud night bhai ...luv u

manik- (kisses her on her forehead)gudnight mera doll and luv u too ...

NEXT MORNING...

NANDINIS PLACE-

nandini- varsu uth na jalde se ...ajj office ka pehela din hai aur aaj hi late...

varsha- 5 min yaar...(sleepily)

nandini- no no 5 mins abhi ke abhi uth aur jaldi se ready ho ja...

varsha- ufff kya yaar nandu abhi mein aur shahid kiss karne hi wale the...tu kabhi mea sapna pura hone he nahi dete...(irritated)

nandini- tu aur tera shahid kapoor...ufff is mahine mein this is the 17th time jab tera aur tere shahid ki kiss hot hote rehe gaye...(laughs)tera kuch nahi ho sakta

varsha- he he he...bahut hasi aarahi hai ruk tu jab tra aisa koi private mooment chal raha hoga na apne husband ke saath dekhna how i will barge in from nowhere phir kaisa feel hota hai...

nandu- aab issme mera husband kahan se aagaya ...(laughs)anyways sun tu ready hoke aaja mein jate hun office aaj mre shift pehele haina and patanahi boss kaise honge...bye...see u in the office

varsha - bye(shouts as nandini run out of their flat)

MALHOTRA INDUSTRIES-

shekhar malhotra along with manik enter te office...

shekhar- gud morning everyone...

employes- gud morning sir...

shekhar - guys ...jaisa ki aap saab jante hain yeh mera beta manik hai aur bhaut saloon baad abroad se padhai kar k lauta hai...and aajj se yeh mere jagha iss company ko sambhalnge...so ajj se yeh hain aapke nai boss...

everybody clap...

employe1- welcome sir

employe 2- pleasure to have u here sir...

manik- thank u everyone ...(full attitude) plz continu with your work...

MANIKS CABINE-

manik enters ...and sees cabir...

cabir - aaja mere sher finallly u r back gud to haave u back bro(hugs him)

manik- (hugs him back) kaisa hai tu sale...(hits him)

cabir abe maar kyun raha hai???

maink- cause u deserve it (hits him again)

cabir- abe par maine kya kiya...

maink - kaminey ...us kya chala gaye tu toh mujhe bhul hi gaya ...na koi call na kai message...

cabir - abbe waise baat nahi hai ...

manik - achha wo sab chor yeh bata ki tu toh yahan ka manager hai toh tune mere liye koi ps appiont ke ya nahi...

cabir - han han ki hai na buss aate hi hogi ...uska bhi aaj first day hi hai...

manik- its already 8:50 am where is she... anyways i am going to m cabin just send her as soon a he comes..

cabir- sure dude...yeh lee yeh kuch album s releted file hain inhe padh lena..unce ne mujhe diye the tujhe dene ke liye...

at that moment nandini cames running and opens the door of the cabine at that time manik was also leaving the cabin with some files and bam!!!and the file falls on the floor scattering al th papers in the air and the apere starts to fall above them...

manik-wath the hell ...(and looks at her and stays still and keeps looking at her)

nandini - im sorry im sorry ...so sorry wo mene janbujh kar nahi kaya mein late ho gaye thi na islie ...(and looks up)

nandini- aap?

manik-tum?

cabir- arre tumdono ekk dusre ko pehele se jante ho !!that fantastic matlab abb kaam karnemein koi dekkat nahi aye gi...by the way nadini yeh hai tiumhare boss aur manik yeh hai tumhari nayi peronal secretary ...

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HUM TUM EK STORE ROOM MEIN BAND HO ...AUR COCKROCH DEKH JAYE...(A)

they r still in shock and looking at eachother.cabir first looks at manik then at nandini and again at manik...

cabir prov- yeh ho kya raha hai ...ye ek dusre ko aise kyun dekhrahe hain ...ek dum tipical leela majnu wali feeling aarahi hai...ha ha aisa lagaha hai koi romantic movie ka scene chal raha hai aur mein kabab mein haddi bankar inke bech mein kahn se tapak gaya hun ...hmmm something is deffinitely fishy ...pata lagana padega...

cabir- aaa ...sorry to disturb u guys but yeh look look baad mein khelna abhi kuch kaam karlein...

manik- aaummm ...ahmmm(clears his throat) um you come to my cabin aur cabir isse saxenas ke files ddwe dena...

nandini- ye..yes sir...(comming back to her senses)

MANIKS CABINE-

maniks prov- oh god yeh yahan aur wo bhi eing my ps shit...no manik you cant get carried away ...you have show that you can never be affected by anything...wait ...does she actually affect me???

there is a knock on the door ...

nandini-may i come in sir...

manik- (comming out of his thoughts and acting as a tough boss)yes come in...

nandini- sir woh files...

manik- ya keep it on the desk ...

nandini was about to leave...

manik- oh hello ...(nandini turned around)kahan ...did i ask u to leave (shouted on her rudely and nandu got scared)

nandini- wo mujhe laga..

manik- kya laga han ...dont use your brains unnecesarily..abb khadi kyun ho ..(nandini gave a confussed look)go and get a black coffee for me wityhout sugar fast ...(shouted scaring her)

nandini runs out of the cabin..

manik prov- what tyhe hell mank... tu aise kyun behave kar raha hai and wo uss ladki ke liye jisse tusirf ek baar mila hai...and ek bar mein he usne essa kya effect kar duiya tujhpar ki you have to show all ths fake anger ...kya mein usse like...?? no no aise thodi hota hai aur mein toh usse janta bhi nahi...uuuhh oh god!!!

IN THE CANTEEN-

nandini-(talking to herself) aiyaapa kitnehadus hain ...kya bigada hai mine unka ...uff kitna cilate hain ussdin toh bus mein kitne acche se baat kar rahe the par abb dekho blkul monster hhmm... inka naam manik nahi monster manik hona chaiye...pata nahi all of a sudden kya hogaya...pa mujhe unke baaton se itna kyun farak padraha hai...mein toh sirf unse ek hi baar mili hun ...

maniks cabin -

nandini enters with the coffe-

nandini- may i come in sir ...aapke coffee

manik- areee itni jaldi waapas aagaye ...(giving a sarcastic smile) mujhe toh laga tum coffee ugaoge phoir unh roast karoge aur phir mre liye banake leke aaoge...(nanidi made a frown)

aab yeh frowns dena band karo aur pichle saal ke progress files store room se lekar aaoo ...

nandini- ys sir-...hunh..monster kahinka(said slowly but still a little audiable)

manik- kya kaha...

nandini-v vo ..vooo ku... kuch nahi mein jaate hun (and leaves)

STORE ROOM-

nandini finding the files from past 1 hr...but still notv getting it...

nandini- aaa ache (snezzes) aaa ache(again sneezzes)aiyappa ... aise kyun behave karte hain mere saath ... pata nahi kis janam ka badla nikal rahe hain...

just ten manik enters the srote room fumming in anger and bangs the door close sue to which the door lock gets jammed and manik doesnot realie it...

manik - oh god ..u still couldnt find it ...total useless ..

nandini- sir wo i am..

mank- wo sir kya han ek file tumse dunde nahi jaate ... hato tum uss side dhundo...

nandini nods and stars searching for the file and manik tooo...and in the pocessess nandini keeps on snezzing continously...which is noticed by manik...

manik- kya hua tum theek toh ho ...why r u snezzing so much??(worried)

nandini- wo sir mujhe ...mujhe dust se allergy hai ...aaache (and snezzes again)

manik (now stats feeling guilty) wo i ...i am sorry mujhe pata nah tha ..

nandini- its ok sir.. (and smiles assuring him)

after soome time...

nandini- sir mujhe file mil gaye ...

manik- cool ..now lets leave aur wise bhi its already 5:00pm and office band hone ka time bhi ho gaya hai...

nandini nods manik goes and pulss the door but the door doesnot open he again tries by pulling it but it doesnot open...

manik - what the hell... lagta hai yeh door jam ho gaya hai ...

nandini- what!! ab hum kya karenge sir ?? aiyooo...(stats to pray) aiyappa ...plz help uss..

seeing her this cute act brings a sudden smile on maniks face ...

manik- wait mein call karta hun kisiko...(search his pocket but does not find his phone then he remembers his phone is still on the deak in his cabine)shit wo toh cabin mein he rehe gaya ...aur ab tak toh sab log jaa bhi chuke honge ..lagta hai ajj raat yahin rehena pade ga ... damn it !!!

nandini prov- aiyappa what will happen now ??

spelling mistakes ho toh plz maff kar dena ... and do like and comment waiting egarly...😳😳😳

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jaykavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awesome plz send next part

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

HUM TUM EK KAMRE MEIN BAND HO AUR COCKROCH DEKH JAYE...(B)

store room-

manik- (just to reduce the akwardness)ok koi nai atleast abb store room mein band ho he gaye hain toh lets not waste time come files bhi yahin hai so lets finish of the pending work...

nandini just stares at him in total shock...

nandini prov- aiyappa yeh kaise insaan hai...insan hai bhi ki nahi...yahan hum store room mein lock ho gaye hain aur inhe kaam ki padi hai...

manik- aise ghoor kya rahi ho ...(nandini gestures a no moving her head)jao wahan se wo files lekar aao ...fast(pointing towards some files kept on the self)

nandini without saying anything nodes and moves towards the shelf ...but stops in the mid ...suddenly her expressions become scared and she starts to breath heavily...she wants to scream but it seems her vocal chords are not allowing her to ...

manik- kya hua ab kya kisi invitation ka wait kar rahi ho ya sahi mahurat ka...

nandini -(finally screames to her loudest)aaa...(closing her eyes and putting hands on her ears)

manik -kya hua pagalon ki tarah kyun chilla rahi ho(freaking out)

nandini-(starts jumping on her place in the same posture)aaa...ahannn...cockroach...

as soon as manik hears the word cockroach he also sreams like an idiot...

manik- aaa...cockroach kahan hai ...ka ka kahan hai...(looks here ant there to find the cockroach)

while all this drama the cockroach even gets scared listening to their screams...and freaks out and not knowing where to go starts coming towards nandu...

watching the cockroach coming towards her she screams even louder and runs towards manik and hides behind him...

nandini- sirr...sir plz save me ...mujhe cockroach se bahut dar lagta hai...plzzz...(and starts jumping on her place)

manik- nandini...u r a brave girl right ...so tum bhagao iss cockroach ko...haina...aur waise bhi tumne toh un terorists ko bhi bus mein dhool chata diya tha to..toh yeh cock..cockroach kya cheez hai...hai na sooo go for it...

nandini- sirmere chodiye aapne toh akele un terorists ki kya dhulai ki thi na ...toh yeh cockroach kya chzz hai...jaye na bhagayna isss(says while clutching his shirt tightly from his back)

manik-aree nandini...tumne toh sunna hi hoga ki ladies first...so tum shuru karo i will also join you.(scared trying to ignore the sitiuation)

nandini- arre sir jayena ...aap kaise mard hain jo cock...cockroach dekhke darrahe hain..

manik- mein...mein koi darta warta nahi teek hai...(scared but still with attitude)mei..mein bhagata hun na cockroach ko ...

manik bends a little in his place ...

manik- cock..cockroach...chu chu chu chu...ja...are jaa na shu...shu... aare mere baap jaaa yahan seee...(Literaly pleads to the cockroach)

nanini- sir aap cockroach ko dara rahe ho yaa ussse patane ki koshish kar rahe ho...

but finally seeing their condition the cockroch decides to leave ...and give them some peace...so he leaves...

and both manik and nandini sigh in relief...

nandini- sir aap toh dekhate the ki aapko kisi chezz se dar nahi lagta...(naughtily)

manik-(again back to his bosy attitude)ha..han toh nahi lagta ...

nandini- aise lag toh nahi raha...(teasingly)

manik looks here and there...

after some time...

nandini- thand bohot bad rahi hai...

manik- hmm...aisa karo wahan shelf mein kuch useless paper rakhe hain go and bring them we can burn fire...

nandini nodes and goes towards the shelf but her height is not enough to reach the papaers...hence she brings an old stool from one corner and stands on it unaware of the fack that the stool is very weak...after climbing on it she tries to reach the paper but before her hand reaches it due to the weak stool and its wobbely movment she looses her balance and was about to fall when manik reaches in correct time to catch her but during falling she doesnot realise but her dres gets torn out from the back because of getting stuck in the nail which was comming out a little off the shelf...

nandini closes her eyes tightly and waits that any moment she will hit the ground but instead she feels a warm touch and a strong arm holding her close to his chest...she opens her eyes slowly only to find manik holding her actually carrying her close to his chest in his protctive arms...and the moment their eyes meet their world stops right their..

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sham bhi koi jais hai nadi

lehar lehar jaise beh rahi hai

koi ankahi,koi ansuni

baat deemi dheemi keh rahi hai

kahin na kahin jaagi hui hai koi aarzoo

kahin na kahin khoye hua se hain main aur tu

ke boom boom boom para para

hai khamosh dono...

ke boom boom boom para para

hai khamosh dono...

jo gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein

jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahein

gummsum gumsum hai yeh fizayein hai na...

after a long eye lock they come out of their la la land only to fell awkward...when nandini realiss that her dress is torned from the back...so she literally chipko fies with the shelf after manik puts her down...blushing profusely...not wanting to make it more awkward ...

manik- ummhmm(clears his throat and walk back to the table again in his bossy andazz)

maniks pov-

what the hell !! manik yeh kya ho raha hai tere saath ...jab bhi tu uski ankhoon mein dekhta hai ...why u get lost ?? no no no ...this cant be happening ..u r the manik malhotra...u have to get a grip of yourself...

manik- ooo hello!! why u standing there like a statue...come here and help me with this ...tumhara nokar nahi hun...(pointing towards the papers to light fire)

nandini is still thinking what to do ...when

manik- oo...behere ho sunai nahi deta kya ...

nandini- si..si..sir ...mein wahan nahi aa sakti...i cant come their...

manik- why why cant u come here ...tum kya koi queen victoria ho jo tumhare liye red carpet bichaunga to tab jakar maadam padharengi ..(sarcasticly)

nandini- wo.. wo.. mei..mein..

manik- yeh bakre ki tarah mein mein kya kar rahi ho ... sedhe seedhe batao ki kya problem hai...

nanidi- sir ...wo ...wo na meri top peeche se shayad shef ke nail mein atak kar phat gai hai..(hesitantly)

manik again softens hearing that she is again facing problem...he may not realise it but he definitely has some soft corner in his heart for her...so a situation was already awkward he walks towards her with blank expression and removes his coat...seeing this nandu starts freaking out...

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Suhani suhani hai yeh kahani

Jo khamoshi sunaati hai

Jise tune chaha hoga woh tera

Mujhe woh yeh batati hai

Main magan hoon par na jaanu

Kab aane wala hai woh pal

Jab haule haule dheere dheere

Khilega dil ka yeh kamal

Ke boom boom boom para para

Hai khaamosh dono

Ke boom boom boom para para

Hai madhosh dono

Jo gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein

Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahein

Gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein hai na...

nandini- (widening her eyes) si..sir yeh yh aa...aap ky..kya kar rahe hain...

manik walks towards her straight looking in her eyeys while she also looks into his yes...

manik- (stands infront of her) just shut up ...films kam dekha karo ...jo bhi soch rahe ho theres nothing like that...ok so stop using your pea sized brains...jop bhi bacha kucha hai wo bhi khatam ho jayega...(nandini fowns)mein bus tume yeh coat dene aya tha..(throws it on her face nandini holds it and again frowns) ab yeh shaklein banana band karo au chup chap isse pehenlo...manik checked out the room and found a couch in the corner of the room

manik- uum nandini come lets sit...

nandini-huh?(confusd)

manik-ab yeh huh kya hota hai ...i think it will take some time for someone to figure out that we are missing so come lets sit yahan khade rehene ka koi faida nahi...

both of them settle in the couch ...and suddenly the light goes off..

nandini- aiyappa...!!ye..yeh ..kya..hu..hua...lights ...why did they go off...(scared)

manik- chill its just lights yaar...abhi aajayega...lagta hai power cut hua hai...

thre is no light in the room excepet the moon light which is comming into the room through a sky light...

after a few mins manik notices her shivering and sitting by closing her eyes tightly...

manik- um nandini...r u alright...tum theek ho na ...

nandini- ha..han...mu ...mu..mujhe kya hoga..i am...fi...fine

seeing her geeting worst with each passing minute manik started to get worried...

manik- nandini are u nyctophobic?

nandini-(not able to hold back any more)yes..yes sir...plz sir mujhe bohot dar lagraha hai...pl..plz help me...(she starts sweating and shevering even more badly...)

seeing her like this why dont know but manik feels sting pain in his heart and he without thinking twice goes near her...

manik- nandini...(cuppling her pace )hey...look at me ...you are fine tum theek ho ...see i am with you..

nandini- sir mein saanss..saanss nahi lee paa rahi...plz sir ...mujhe bacha lee jiye ...

without wasting a moment manik takes her in and bone crashing hug forgeting everything around...he has no idea why but still there is some force ...some connection that pulls him towards her...but what is it...

nandini- sir plz i will plz mujhe...mujhe andehere se bahut dar lagta haii ...plz manik min mar rahi hun plz mujhe bacha lijeye...(unintentionaly she calls him manik instead of sir)

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Yeh kaisa samay hai, kaisa sama hai

Ke shaam hai pighal rahi

Yeh sab kuch haseen hai, sab kuch jawan hai

Hai zindagi machal rahi, jagmagati jilmilati

Palak palak pe khwaab hai

Sun yeh hawayein gungunaye

Jo geet lajawab hai

Ke boom boom boom para para

Hai khaamosh dono

Ke boom boom boom para para

Hai madhosh dono

Jo gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein

Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahein

Gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein hai na..

manik -(hearing this why he doesnt know but he feels very happy )nandini...shant ho jao see i am here with u ...mein tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga... nandu ..plz calm down..

hearing him call nandu she instantly cams down why she doent know but she feels some kind of a peace in his arms...

to be continued...

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abhilashaS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

HUM TUM EK KAMRE MEIN BAND HO AUR COCKROCH DEKH JAYE...( C)

Meanwhile at cabirs place...

Cabir-yeh dono subha se office mein nahi dekhrahe hain...gaye toh gaye kahan...aur subha manik bhi itna weird behave karraha rha...hmmm kuch toh gadbad hai...pata laga na padega...donon ek dusre ko aise dekh rahe the jaise long lost lovers ho...(laughs naughtily)kuch toh locha hai boss...mukti ko call karta hun usse sab pata hota hai...just then his phone rings...

He picks it up...

Cabir- haye mere behena tu sau saal jiyegi...abhi mein tujhe hi call karne wala tha ...

Mukti- (panicked)cabir bhaiyu...wo sab chodiye yeh bataeye kya bhai aapke saath hain??

Cabir- nahi toh meine toh usse sbha ke baad se nahi dekha...par tu kyun puch rahi hai...?

Mukti- cabir bhaiyu...bhai kabhi bhi bina mujhe batae kahin nahi jate aur late honge toh bhi mujhe batate hain and din mein ek bari toh mujhe zarur call karte hain par aaj nothing like that...pata nahi bhai kahan par hai...unhonne kuch khaya bhi hai ya nahi...(almost on the verge of crying)

Cabir- arre chutki tu ro mat...ruk mein check karta hun aur...(just then he sees another call coming on his phone so thinking may be it can be manik)aaa muku ek minute hold kar ek aur call aaraha hai...shayad manik ka hosakta hai...

Mukti- ok bhai...plz jaldi...

Cabir keep mukti on hold and answers the other call ...

Cabir- hello...

Girl- ummm cabir sir..?

Cabir- yes speaking...

Girl- sir mein varsha remember aapne mangalore se do ladkiyon ko appoint kiya tha ?

Cabir- ooh yes yes...

Vasha- sir actually...mein aur nandini ek saath rehete hain and aaj uska office ka pehela din tha but wo mujhe subha se nahi dikhi phir meine socha shayad busy hogi but sir...wo ab tak ghar waapas nahi aaye...plz sir I don't know anyone here...sir plz can you help me...

Cabirs provo-

Hain?ab nandini bhi gayab hai...yeh chal kya raha hai...kahin in dono ka koi scene toh nahi ban gaya...

Varsha-sir?are u there?

Cabir- ya ya...don't worry mujhe jaise he kuch pata chalta hai mein tumhe inform karta hun...

Varsha - ok...thanx sir...(still tensed)

Call dissconnects...

Mukti-bhaiyu kuch pata chala...

Cabir- achha muku...manik ne tujhe kuch aisa bataya hai jo mujhe nahi pata??(suspiciously)

On that very moment mukti remembers her and maniks conversation and starts stammering...

Mukti- ummm...na... nahi toh...ai..aisa toh kuch bhi nahi kaha unhonne...

Mukti prov-

Shit!ab kya karun...ab toh phass gaye ...bhaiyu se jhut bhi nahi bol sakte...

Cabir-tu sach bol rahe hai na ...dekh tune mujhse promise kiya tha that tu mujhse kabhi jhoot nahi bolegi...

Mukti prov-

kya karun??

Cabir- muku??

Mukti- ha...haan...actually bhaiyu...han aisa kuch hai jo bhai ne mujhe bataya hai aur aapko nahi pata but bhaiyu mein aapse wo baat abhi philhal share nahi kar sakte as meine bhai ko promise kiya hai plz understand...

Cabir- achha theek hai...but is it about a girl??

Mukti- aapko kaise pata??(confused)

Cabir provo-

Yes!!!i knew it !!i knew it kuch na kuch kichdi pak rahi hai in donon mein...jis tarah manik majnu ki tarah usse ghoor ghoor ke office mein dekh raha tha...I am sure this what ever thingy he has told to mukti is definitely related to nandini in some way...ho ho ha ha ha...(laughing like a mad person in his thoughts)mere majnu manik ab kahan bachke jayega mere chill jaise nazroon se...

Mukti- bhaiyu kuch toh boliye??

Cabir- abb...kuch nahi...sun...tu ready ho I am coming to pick you up..!!i think humein ekaur bari office mein check karna chahiye...may be wo abhibhi wahin ho...

Mukti- ok bhaiyu...!!

Cabir dissconnects the call and calls back varsha and she picks up in a single ring...

Varsha- yes sir...!!!

Cabir- umm miss varsha...I think humein aik bar office jake check karna chahiye so give me your address I will pick you uo...

Varsha- ji sir...

Soon cabir picks up varsha and then mukti...

IN THE CAR-

Mukti- hi Im mukti...

Varsha- I' m varsha...

Mukti- tum bhi kisi ko dhund rahe ho...???

Varsha- han...meri best friend ko...usne aaj hi office join kiya tha par ab tak ghar nahi aye...

Mukti- strange!!mere bhai bhi abhi tak ghar nahi aye and he is also missing...

Soon they reach the parking of the office building...

Cabir- yeh dekho!!manik ki gadi toh abhi bhi yahin hai...iska matlab he hasn't left the building till yet...chalo lets check inside...

Meanwhile ...

IN THE STORE ROOM-

Its been a while but still both are in the same position manik continously stroking her hair to calm her down...and slowly she is trying to get a grip of herself but still her fear for darkness keeps winning...

Manik- miss.murthy...u ok??(concerned)(still hugging her)

Nandini- ha...han...(stammering trying to control herself)

Mank- no u r not...(calmly)just relax I am here with you...shhh everything is fine...(her grip on the back of his shirt becomes more stong)

Nandini provo-

Aiyappa!!yeh...what is happening to me...??why?kyun I fell so much secure in his arms...it fells as if mein pehele se unhe janti hun...but how is it possible??mein toh kabhi pehele manik sir se mili bhi nahi...what is this feeling??kyun jab mein unke saath hote hun toh mano jaise koi invisible dor hum dono ko bandh ke rakhti ho, jaise...mein unhe barsoon se janti hun,unpe ankh bandd karke kar sakte hun...aakhir kya rishta hai humara??

Manik prov-

Pata nahi yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai...oh god I shouldnot be behaving like this...and that to usske liye jisse mein theek se janta tak nahi...but jab bhi usske saath hota hun...why I feel a strong pull towards her...as if I can rely on her for anything...jaise...bohut purana rishta ho humara...what is all this?i have never felt this before...

Just then the door opens and in the same time the power comes back and wallah!!!the most shocking surprise for the most important two people in maniks life and the biggest heart attack for varsha as they see manan hugging each other...

Mukti- bhai...(shocked)

Cabir is standing with wide eyes totally expressionless...

They break the hug realising their situation...and akward...but now its already done...and they cant go back...(at least manan fans wouldnot want that!!)

Varsha- nandu...!!!

Then they not to make them feel akward change the topic...but how can cabir baba leave manik after watching them as in manan inthat state...so now basically a bigger toofan to come for manik only as he is going to have a really hard time making him shut up...

Mukti on hearing the name nandu looks at her and becomes so happy that in an instance she hugs her tightly...

For once nandini also becomes surprised...but then realises that is is none other than MUKTI MALHOTRA...her muku...

Nandini hugs her back manking everybody confused including manik...

Mukti -omg!! Nandu tu yahan...oh god I am so happy...so tune bhai ka office join kiya hai...I and very happy yaar...now we can meet regularly...

Nandini-(confused)bhai ka office??

Mukti- (breaking the hug)aarre pagal yes mere bhai yani manik malhotra...mere bhai...

Nandini- ohhh...(surprised)

Manik- muku...mujhe kuch bataegi...

Muti- arrre bhai she is the one remember meine jiske bare mein aapko bataya tha about the camp thing jab mein bimar thi...isse hi toh mein aapko milana chahati thi...

Manik- ohhh..(surprised)

Cabir prov-

Wah!!!indono ka yeh accha hai...kya connection hai...

Varsha- par nandu tu yahan pahunchi kaise???

Mukti- han bhai...yteh sab kaise hua ...how come aaplog store room mein...

Manik- long story muku ...ghar jake bhataun...

Mukti nods...

Varsha prov -

I just hope ...ke kuch hua na ho in donon ke beech as nandu aisa nahi karsakti...kahin aagar usse manik sir se pyaar wyaaar hogaya toh bahut mushkil ho jayegi .,...jaise kismat inhe bar bar mila rahi hai...plan toh kuch aise he lag rahe hain...mujhe jald se jald nandini se iss baare mein baat karni padegi...hey wait manik ...inka bhi naam manik hai and jiju ka naam bhi manik hai what a coincidence...

Mukti- achha fine...chalo now lets leave already bahut raat ho chuki hai...

Everybody agrees...and they leave but manik finds cabir very silent...he hasent said a single word since then...

Manik prov-

Yeh kamina itna chup chap kyun baitha hai...hmmm...yeh itna chup baitha hai matlab manik beta...aaj toh tu gaya...yeh toofan ke aane se pehele ki khamoshi hai...zarur isske demag mein kuch khichdi pah rahi hai...arre khichdi kya am sure pasta ,lasania,chocolate mousse sab kuch pakraha hoga...

Writers prov-

Boss...you r absolutely right...cabira jab silent hojata hai tab samajh lena chahiye bhi wo bhaut jald violent honewala hai...no no mar pitai wala violent nahi...tujhe taunt mar mar ke tere le lene wala violent...so bete manik...be ready...kyun ki ab jo goga...wo kisi ke haath mein nahi yaha tak mere bhi nahi...

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Hehehehe Manik Ki life mein toofan ane wala hai ...cabir toofan 😆
Cabir ke dimaag mein kuch toh chal raha hai...
Please update next part soon...it's been a long time since u updated...
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Keep smiling
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Aayat23

@Aayat23

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Nice story so far...

very well done👏

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