manan ff- JUNOON -E ISH cha-8 pg 5 updated

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hey guya i know this story is already in the fan fiction corner but as i didnt know that kyy ka alag coner hai so i am repost the cappies her in kyy fourm...hope i get gud response...
HEY GUYS I AM NEW HERE AND WRITING FOR THE FIRS TIME THS IS MY FIRST FF SO HOPE U LIKE IT .IF U GUYS WANT ME TO CONTINUE SO PLZ COMMENT AND LET ME KNOW
CHARECTER SKETCH-
nandini-
fun loving and very positive girl lost her parents when she was 6 yrs old .

varsha- nandinis childhoods only best friend but she is like a sister to her

amms -nandinis grand mother loves her grand daughter very much...


promo-

a guy is ponting a gun towards nandini and is about to shoot when a man comes and punches him very hard ...nandini is hell scared but she gets up and hides behind the man
the other guy- tu hamse panga lega ab mein tum logon konahi chodunga tumhario sarkar humari mange pura karne mein jitna waqt zaya karege utne hi lashe bechte jayengi and then he again points the gun towards that man but he again starts fighting with them andd then suddenly the first guy stands and grabs him brom the back and the othe guy is about to shoot
in all these caous nandini sees a gun lieing on the floor...
nandinis prov- aiyappa ... mein kya karun wo log to isse mar denge isne mere jaan bachane ke liye apne jaan khatre mein dali ...nai mujhe isse kisi bhi hal mein bachana hoga...
she somehow grabs the gun and some how manages to gain the courage to point it towards the guy who was pointing his gun toward the man and suddenly bang bang ! two loud sound is heard and the guy who was pointing his gun towards the man falls down leaving the people in the bus and the man shocked...

MANAN FF- JUNOON - E - ISHQ




INDEX

CHAPTER 1 (a) THE UNEXPECTED MEET- PG 1


CHAPTER 1 (b)THE UNEXPECTED MEET- PG1



CHAPTER 2 (a)AIYAPPA !!!SAVE ME ... - PG 1



CHAPTER 2 (b)AIYAPPA !!!SAVE ME ... -PG 1



CHAPTER 3 BANG BANG !! - PG 1



CHAPTER 4 (a) ARE WE FRIENDS NOW ??-PG 1


CHAPTER 4 (b) ARE WE FRIENDS NOW ??-PG 2



CHAPTER 5 (a)THE UNREVEALED TRUTH-PG 2




CHAPTER 5 (b)THE UNREVEALED TRUTH-PG 2


CHAPTER 6 (a) JUST A COINCIDENCE OR DESTINEY ?-PG 2


CHAPTER 6 (b) JUST A COINCIDENCE OR DESTINEY ?-PG 2


CHAPTER 6 (c) JUST A COINCIDENCE OR DESTINEY ?-PG 2



CHAPTER 7 (a) HUM TUM EK STOREROOM MEIN BAND HO AUR COCKROCH DEKH JAYE... - PG 3


CHAPTER 7 (b) HUM TUM EK STOREROOM MEIN BAND HO AUR COCKROCH DEKH JAYE... -PG 3


CHAPTER 7 (c) HUM TUM EK STOREROOM MEIN BAND HO AUR COCKROCH DEKH JAYE... -PG 3



CHAPTER 8 RAMA RAMA KYA HAI DRAMA- PG 5



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CHAPTER 1 (a)-THE UNEXPECTED MEET


MANGALORE_5:00 AM


NANDINI - tujhe pata hai i am so excited today finally finally i cant believe we have got an internship in the largest music company Q LABELS u know what varsha it is the largest music company in Asia .finally i can prove myself though my singing .people will know me through my voice. i am so happy. you know varsha when amma and appa passed away na mein bohut restless ho gaye thi ... mujhe kuch samajhnahi aa raha tha ke mein kya karu ...(with tears in her eyes) i was lost ...i was lost in my own darkness but then amms introduced me to music ...music taught me to live... it helped me to overcome my darkness...(with a different kind of sparkle in her eyes)

VARSHA- ye lo madam ne phir se ganga jamuna bahana shuru kar diya...are nadu yanhan logonko peene ke liye pani nahi milta aur tuhai ke faltu mein waste kiye jarahe hai...(winked her and smiled)
NANDINI-(holds her one ear and pulls it) accha subha subha tujhe masti sujhrahe hai ...bohot shaitan ho gaye hai ruk tu abhi batati hun ...
VARSHA- aaa aaa kya kar rahi hai bacche ki jaan legi kya...(nandu leaves her ear and smiles)achha wo sab chod ...madam app ko yaad dela dun ke do ghanton mein hamein bus stop pahunchna hai aur bus board bhi krani hai remember???? warna mumbai kya sapnoon mein jayegi ...
NANDINI- (listning to this suddenly she widens her eyes)aiyappa!!!! mein to bhul hi gaye thi ...kya varshu tu phele nahi bata sakti thi...shit (and starts running every where in the room to collect her clothes and other things to get ready)


(amms enters the room with puja ki thali )


AMMS- nandu ...nandu... taiyar hui ki nahi kanna ...kya karun mein iss ladki ka...varsha beta nandu kanha hai ??
VARSHA- wo amms nandu taiyar hone gayi hai...bas abhi aati hi hogi...
AMMS- ayioo ...yeh ladki kab badi hogi...(when suddenly nandu comes from behind and covers her eyes with her hands )
NANDINI- (holding her ears )sorry sorry soory amms i am very very sorry wo batoon batoon mein na mere zeense nilkal gaya tha ke aaj ghar mein puja hai..i am solly
(seeing her apologising so cutely see melts)
AMMS-koi baat nahi knna ab jaldi bahar chalo puja ke mahut ka samay hogaya hai... aur han tum dono aaj janese pehele pandit vishwamitra ji se milkar jana wo ek bahut bade santh hai aur unke kahe hui har baat sach hoote hai mein chaate hun ke tumdono unse asherwaad lo teekh hai ...
NANDINI & VARSHA(IN UNISION)-
ji amms ...jaisa aap kahein..


IN THE POOJA-

all vidhi were very nicely done .after that everybody was busy in asking their future and good bad ...
AMMS- pandit ji yeh meri poti nandini hai au yeh uske dost varsha hai lekin mein is bhi apne poti ke tarah nmante hun..appn in donoon ko appna ashiwaad dein aajse yeh appn zindagi ke ek naye suruaat karne jaa rahe hain...
(varsha bends down and takes his blessings and when nandini bends down ...)
PANDIT JI - beti tera zindagi ek naya mod lene wala hai...koi aisa tere zindagi mein aane wala hai jo tere zindagi ke maine badal dega ...kuch asa tere zindagi mein hone wala hai jo tere zindagi ka ek naya adhyay khol dega ...kush reh beti khush reh mera ashirwad sada tere sath rahega ...
(nandini was taken aback with this sudden prediction)
VARSHA- (came near nandini and wishpers in her ears)lagta hai time aagya hai ki humein hamare jiju ki shakal finally dekhne melegi...(and flashs her batesee)
NANDINI- he he he bohut hasi aa rahi hai ...bahar chal phir batate hun aur wese bhi yeh sab bakwass hai aisa kuch nahi hota...


BUS STOP


NANDINI- varshu tune mujhe promise kiya tha ke tu mere saath mumbai ayege ...this is not fair (and makes a angry pout)
VARSHA- i am sorry yaar wo darasal mom ne kaha ke pehele mujhe unke saath massi ke yanhan jana hoga god knows why ??? but tu tension mat le mein pakka parsoon tak wahan pahunch jayungi aur wese bhi hum office toh 4 din baad join kar rahe hain na...
NANDINI- ok fine bye (and hugs her)
AMMS- kanna apna khayal rakhna aur khana time par khana teek hai aur company flat melte h mujhe inform karna..thek hai ??
NANDINI-ya amms aap bilkul tension mat lo mein aapna khayal rakhoongi aur time par khana bhi khayungi and han apko har rooz call bhi karungi ok (and hugs her)bye...(smiles and goes inside the bus)


IN THE BUS -
NANDINI PROV-
aiyappa mein ek nayi shuruaat karne ja rahi hun plz mere madad karna ...(ans smiles)


ON THE OTHER HAND -
(on the deserted highway a white mercedese has broke down inside it a man is setting who is wearing a white t shirt with sky blue jacket and deep blue jeans with a pair of rayban shades and rolex watch)
MAN- kya hua gadi chal kyun nahi rahe...??( he asks angryly)
DRIVER- wo saab lagta hai engine mein koi kharabi aa gaye hai...(scared)
MAN-what the... iss chezz ki tankhwya lete ho tumlog ... gadi time se service kyun nahi karai tumhari wajhese agar mein latee hua na then u r fired ...
man prov -kisi bhi tareh se mujhe kal tak mumbai pahunchna hi hoga ...
suddenly his phone rings and he sees the caller id and without thinking kicks up ...
MAN- hi doll ... kaisa hai mera sweety...???
on the other hand of the phone- thek hai lekeen philhal aapse gussa hai... aapne kaha tha ke aap aaj aaoge toh phir kyun nahi aye ??? mein aapse baat nahi kar rahe...cutty
MAN- I AM SOLLY DOLL MUJHE MAFF KAR DE WOH FLIGHTS CALL SARI CANCEL HO GAYE THI AND MEIN AAJ SUBHA HI MANGALOR MEIN LAND KIYA SO... BUT YOU DONT WORRY DOLL PAKKA BHAI WILL REACH TERE BY 2MORROW

ON THE OTHE HAND OF THE PHONE -
ok bhai iss baar aapko maaf kiya leeken agli baar se mein pakka wala cutty kar dunge i am telling u...aur aap mujhe ghar pe doll bulate ho theek hai leekin bahar mujhe mere namse hi bulana kitna acha name hai mere MUKTI MALHOTRA .aur ab mein badi ho gaye hunna so ...
MAN- NAI ME TOH TUJHE DOLL HI BULAUNGA TU CHAHE JITNE BHI BDI KYUN NA HO JA MAGAR PHIR BHI TU MERE LIYE MERE CHOTI BEHEN HI RAHEGI SAMJHE...(AND SMILES)
MUKTI-oho bhai aapko kuch bhi kehena na bekar hai anyways mein chalti hun mere frinds bula rahe hain...bye
(and hangs up .at th same time a bus was passing from there he stoped the bus and enterd it )

to be continued...

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CHAPTER -1 (b)

the man enters the bus and the bus starts moving meanwhile...
a child - didi didi ... aap mera toy neeche utar doge plz...
NANDINI-(seeing the child requesting so cutely she agrees )batao kahan hai i'll get it...( smiles and stands up)
the child -didi wanhan upper (shows her the rack on which it was kept )
nandini is trying to get it but somehow it is stuck and at that time that man is searching seat to sit when suddenly...scheeech...
nandini looses her balance and falls on that man who was passing by and he also looses his balance due to the sudden break and both together land up on the floor with the man totally on the floor and nandini on top of him ...
both her hands are on his chest and his hand are on her waist ...her hair is falling on his face lightly tickeling his facewith the wind when suddenly his and her eys meet for the first time...
(bg- baatein kuch ankahe si kuch annsune se honelagi...
kabu dilpe raha na haste hamare khone lagi...
wo wooo wo ooo...)
time stops ...every thing around them stand still ...they become lost in eachothers eyes ...but their trance was broken with the sudden honking of the horn ... they immediately come back to the reality and nandindi gets up followed by the man...
NANDINI- wo... i am sorry i didnt mean to...
MAN-no no you dont need to apologise its not your fault...so chill ...by the way i am MANIK MALHOTRA nice to meet you...(forwards his hand)
NANDINI- i am nandini moorthy ...nice to meet you too(and shakes his hand)
(and she goes to her seat and sits down...while he is still searching for seat and finally he sees that no seat is vaccant except beside nandini )
MANIK- may i ???
NANDINI - ya sure ...
(he settles down and becomes busy with his phone whn suddenly his phon rings and he picks up)
CABIR-(maniks best friend)saaley kaminey to india mein land kar chuka hai aur tun mujhe inform bhi nahi kiyaa ...(acks as if crying)han bhai ab to bada admen ban gaya hai ab doston ki yaad bhala tujhe kyun ayege...
MANIK- oyeee ...1950s ke ablanare ke tarah nautanki karna band kar aur apne jhutheb ansun apne pas hi rakh meri flight aaj hi land hui hai aur mein tujhe batane hi wala tha leken tune khud hi call kardiya...
CABIR- lekin yeh toh bata ke tu kabtak pahunchega ???
MANIK- mat bol yaar ...highway par gadi kharab ho gayi the aur wo toh achha hua ke tabhi wahan se ek bus guzar rahi thi toh meine lift le li so i guess kaltak pahunch jaunga...
CABIR- okey chal phir kal melte hain...bye
MANIK-bye
(he turns and is about to ask saomething to nandini but sees her sleeping ...god knows why but seeing her sleeping a smile creeps across his face)

afte 2 hours the bus reaches a dhaba

CONDUCTER- bus yahan adhe gante ke liye rukegi jisko chaye nashta ya jo bhi kuck karna hai karlijiye...
(and people start leaving one by one while nandini is still asleep )
MANIK- excuse me... miss moorthy ...
(nandini wakes up )
wo bus dhabe pe adhe ghantoon ke liye ruke hai nashte ke liye...
NANDINI- ya ya thanks for wakeing me...

and both come out of the bus to have their breakfast...meanwhile...
THREE MISTERIOUS MEN- aaj toh apun ki diwali sare ke sare maldar lagteinhai aaj toh maza hi aajayega...(and gives an evil smirk)

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CHAPTER 2(a) -AIYAPPA !!!SAVE ME ...


nandini goes and sits on one table while again finding no place manik joins her there...after 2 -3 mins manik excuses himself and goes to the washroom...meanwhile nandini receives a call...
N- han bol varshu...tu pahunch gaye apne massi ke yahan???
V-haan meri maa pahunch gayi aur tu bata tu kahan tak pahunchi???
N- adha rasta ho chuka hai lken abhibi mumbai pahunchne ke liye ek din lagega...shayad aaj adhe raat tak pahunch jayungi...
V -achha yeh bata ke kuch interesting hua kya ??(naughtyly)
N- han wo mein bus mein k bachhe ki madad kar rahi thi aur tabhi break laga aur...(she remembers the bus incident and stammers)aur..a..uuu..rr..
V- aur kya ???? bolo bolo ...bol kyun nahi rahe hai bbol ...bol na...
N-a...ba...baa... ku..kuch nahi ok bye mujhe breakfast karna hai...(and she disconnects the call)

ON THE OTHER HAND -
manik comes out of the washroom and out of nowhere a girl calls him ...and the girl is none other than soha khurana .mr. khuranas daughter who literally chipkofies with him and always tries to get clase to him while he was in college and he was not able to say anything to him because he was the daughter of his fathers best friend who was also his buissness partner..
SOHA- manik baby ...
M- (seeing her his eyes widens)yh yahan kya kar rahi he ...(and he panics)ab kya karun ...beta manik tu toh gaya ...
then suddenly his eys fall on nandini and an idea strikes his mind...he hurridly run twards her while nandini was waiting for her food ...
h all of a sudden grabs her on her waist and nandini becomes shocked..
N- excuse me yeh aap...
and before she could complete he gesturs a plz wala look and wispers in her ear...
M- PLZ PLZ KUCH MAT BOLO MEIN BADMEIN TUMHE SAB SAMJHAUNGA ...PHILHAL MER MADAD KAR DO PLZ
and before she could say something...soha comes ..
S- manik baby tum U S se aagay aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi so bad i missed you (and was about to hug him when...
M- (stoping her)soha soha soha...um meet my wife nandini...and hearing this nandini looks at him and..
N- what !!!
M-(with pleading eyes says) nandini this is soha my friend...
and nandini keeps shut seeing him pleading so much
S- ohh toh she is your wife (with a jelouse look on her face )so kitne sall hogaye tumhari shadi ko?????
M- do
N- ek
both look ateach other and manik says ...
M- wo actually ek sall leekin iss sal ko milake do sall (and smiles akwardly)
S- oh my god manik ...doo sall honeko hai and abhi tak junior manik ki koi news nahi ...( says sarcasticly)
M- ab...abbb.. hai na wo handini is 4 months pregnent ...
N- WHAT !! par mein toh...
befor she could say something manik pinches her and she shouts )ouchhh...
S- kya hua nandini baby ne kick mari ????(sarcasticly)
nandini glares at manik angrily and he again pleads her with his eyes to which she says looking at soha
N- han akhir manik par jo gaya hai papa jaise sabko tang karta reheta hai waise he baby bhi toh karega na...(and glares at manik)
S- awww...so sweet(faking a smile)
NANDINI PROV - AIYAPPA !!!!!!!HELP ME KAHAN PHASA DIYA...

TO BE CONTINUED...

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CHAPTER 2 (b)


manik again keeps his hand on nandini's waist and pulls her close to his side to which she just glares at him and he asks faking a smile...
M- waise soha...tum yahan kaise ???i mean...tum toh kafi sallon se london mein thi na...so achanak aur woh bhi yahan...(sarcasticly)
S- haan wo men...

FLASHBACK
soha just landed in mumbai after that she immediately lands up at cabir's place...
ting tong...(the door bel rings)
C-kon kambakt savre savere meri neend kharab karnepe tulahua hai (says sleepiely rubbing his eyes ;again the bell rings) abe kyun mar raha hai yaar aarah hun ...ab bacche ki jaan loge kya (and opens the door and ius stunned to see soha standing there)
C- aare soha tum yahan !! tum toh london mein thina ...achanak yahan kaise ????
S- wo meri padhai puri hogayi na and waise bhi dad bahut din se mujhe visit karneko bol rahe the toh...waise yeh batao ...manik aajkal hai kahan ??(like she is investigating somthing)
CABIR'S PROV-
beta cabir toh yeh hai asle reason...agar ise pata chal gaya ki manik kal aanewala hai tab toh...nai nai mein aisa nahi hone desakta hun ...beta cabir tere dost ki izzat khatre mein hai you have to do something...
S-hello!!(clicks her finger infrontof his eyes) kuch bolo...kahan kho gaye???
C- han wo ...actually hamare 2 saal se koi baatchet nahi hui so mujhe nahi pata ke wo kahanpar hai...par tum kyun puchrehe ho ?????
(suspeciously)
S- wo bas aise hi ...acha cabir i need to leave ok bye(says nervously and se was lavng while cabir recives a call and he unmindfully doesnot close the door proprly and it remains slightly open...)
C-(on the phone)je uncle ...kya manik aane wala hai ...acha toh abhi woh mangalore mein hai isi liye shayad kal se uska phone nahi lagraha thai shayad flighht m tha ...tabhi mein ochu usne mujhe do din se call kyun nahi kiya ...
(meanwhile soha was evesdropping their conversasion..)
SOHA'S PROV-
manik baby ...i am coming...

she manages to reach mangalore within 2 hrs through flight aft6er that through her connections she finds out all the details about his hotel starting from its name to address and from that time she starts following him...

PRESENT-
M-hello! kahan kho gayi ???mein kuch puch raha hoon bolo...
S- wo mein mangalore kisi kaamse ayi thi aur aaj waaps laut rahi thi and dhabe pe brekfast ke liye ruke toh tumhe dekha to buss khud ko rok nahi payi...(and again tries to get close to him)

manik again stops her and says...
M- aare chalo khana bhi aagaya ..aur baby bhi bhoki hogi haina ...(and nandini gives him a fake smile and glares at manik but as usual manik again requests her to keep shut with is eyes)
S-manik mein tumhe kilate hoon...(and again tries to get closer to him but manik again stops her by saying...
M- wo kya haina mein sirf apne nandini ke hatse hi khata hoon...
(nandini glares at him and this time she is really angry ...she pulls him closer and wispers near his ear ...)
N- ab kuch zada nahi horoha ??
M-don't say anything now just go with the flow...
N- see agar mein tumhari wajhese phase na toh...(soha interupts)
S-kya khusurphusur chalrahe hai husband and wife mein???
N-(giveing a fake smile) kuch nahi wo bass(and takes a peice of roti with sabji and stuffs it in maniks mouth forcefully)wo bas aise he...

they have their brakfast and finally are ready to board the bus again...

M- so soha hum chalte hain aur waise bhi nandini pregnent hai toh uske yliye zada time tak khada rehena theek nahi hai...(nandini again glares at him angryly)so...chal baby
(and holds her hand and enters the bus unaware of what next destiney had in store for them...and with them the three mysterious men also enter the bus...)
meanwhile soha gives an evil smile seeing a photo of them together which she had taken without geting noticed...
SOHA'S PROV-
ab mein batate hun nandini ki meri jagha leneka kya anjaam hota hai...manik sirf mera hai aur mein use hasil karke rahungi...(smiles evily)

IN THE BUS -
everybody sit at their respective places..
N-excuse me... ab hum bus mein hai ab toh mera hath chod do...
(immediately manik leaves her hand )
M- oh hello...mujhe bhi koi shauk nahi hai tumhara hath pakadneka ...and stop giving yourself so much superiority ok...
(now nandini becoms very angry)
N-what the hell !!!! help ki zarurath mujhe nahibtumhe thi ...bhool gaye ho toh yaad diladun...and instead of thanking me you are shouting on me ! like seriuosly !!!!(saye making an irritated face )
M- help ki hai koi pahad nahoi toda hai ...and now just shut up ok... mujhe tumhari chabad chabad aur nahi sun ni...(showing attitude)
N- fine !!!!! waise bhi tumse bat bhi konkarna chahata hai...(and turns her face to th other side angryly)
M-good!!!! finally (behaves as if thanking god )

NANDNI'S PROV-
aiyappa !!! aajke liye itna drama kafi hai ...plz ab aur koi drama nahi ... mujhe aur koi drama nahi chahiye ...buss shantis mumbai pahunchado plz...!!!!

and thn suddenly...
man 1- oye gadi ok !!!!(and points the gun on the drivers head) rok warna bheja udadunga...
man-2 - chalo sab jaldi se apne saari zebar ,paise, aur jo kuchbhi haoi sab khali kako ...apoon ko sab mangta hai...(showing the gun)
man 3- jaldi jaldi...
they tie the driver and the first man starts driving the bus ...they stop the bus at a point and three more man wearing masks enter the bus with guns .they are the other gang members)
everybody become scared and nandini is hell scared seeing all this...

to be continued in the next chapter...


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CHAPTER 3 - BANG BANG !!

Man 2- chalo jaldi jaldi sab kuch khali karo warna... idharse koi bachke nahi jayega ...(and fires the gun in the air)

Nandini was sitting with manik .she was on the window seat .hearing thebullet fire she gets scaredand unintentionally holds maniks hand tightly...and manik stares at her and gets lost in her...

Bg music-

Tere sansoon ki saans mein

Jo hun toh mein hun..

Tere khwaboon ki aanch mein

Jo hun toh mein hun...

Tere hone se hi mera hona hai...

Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona hai...

Tu jo hai toh mein hun ...

Tu jo hai toh mein hun...

how cutely she closed her eyes and like a small child babbling ...aiyappa save me !! plz plz ...then hearing the caos in the bus he came back to reality and made the grip on her hand tight to which she looked at him .he just nodded his head giving her assurence and don't know why but she felt a different kind of satisfaction that yes she is with him...she is not alone in all of this ...for the fist time in her lifetime after her amma appas death she felt the same trust,securence that she felt with them but to her surprise ,in reality he was just a mery stranger whom she just met a few hours ago then why was his presence feeling so familier ...why ??? she was still confused by her feelings ...

Man 3- ohooo!!! Dekh toh yahaan toh leela majnu ka scene chal raho hai ...(laughs in a very dirty manner)vise maal toh kafi dhasu logyo hai...(and gives a dirty look on nandini checking her out from top to bottom )

Nandini makes her grip tighter on maniks hand and tries to hide...but in vain .she is hell scared and is felling disgusted by his dirty look on her

Manik - listen you...(angrily grinning his teeth together)

Man 3- eee ... Angrejeee zyada shaanpati nahi... Chup chap baithare warna (forwards a hand towards nandinis face)thare leela ke liya thik na howego...

And that was it for manik ...abd befor he could touch her manik atopped his hand and glared at him as if telling to back off ...seeing this nandini becomes more scared ...

Man 2- laundiya dekhi nahi ki kahin bhi suru hojata hai...eee jis kaam ke liyr aaya hai pehele wo kar...

Man 3- jee boss...ee ladki jo bhi gahene zewar ho bhi hai sab khali kar ...chal chal mhara tame khote na kar... Chal chal phata phat aur tu hero ...thare ko kya especial invitation dun ...(sarcastically)chal tu bhi khali kar...

Manik and nandini both give their rings ,bracelet,watch wallet etc to him and he was about to leave when he sees a small heart shaped diamond pendent whixh is studded in platinum with a silver chain in nandinis neck..

Man 3- ee ladki ...tu mhareko ullu samajhti hai...yeh bhi nikal chal chal jaldi (showing her the gun )

Nandini- mei..mein...ye ..yeh nahi de sakti...plz uncle aap sab lejaeeye leekin mein yeh nahi de sakti...(a lone tear escapes her eyes) yeh mere amma appa ki akhri nishani hai...

Man 3- thare ko ek bar kahe hui baat samajhna aave hai ka ???...lagta hai tu aise na manegi abhi thareko mein aapne bhasa mein samjhata hun...

Before manik could react ...he grabs the chain in her neck and pulls it with so much force that nandini gets a deep cut on her neck ...as it was not any ordinary chain but silver chain ...and cries in pain and blod starts oozing from the cut...and that was it for manik seeing her in pain ever though she was a mery stranger for him god knows why but his heart literally shattered into piceses...it felt as if someone has put a dagger though his heart...and in those fraction of seconds he stood up and started punching him...

And he starts to bleed...

Man 3- thare himmat kaise hui mhareko marneki ...ab tu dekh (angrily)

In an instance he drags nandini by holding her from her hair ...she screams in pain butt he is least bothered and makes her kneel down on the bus floor and points a gun towards her)

Man 3- aab mein thara badla isse lunga (smiles evily)

He is just about to shoot when manik kicks the gun and it fallsdown onder the seat .he starts punching him with full force when the other three men come from behind and hold him from behind so that he is not able to move ...

Manik- aabe tujh jaisa datrpook meine aaj thak nahi dekha ...huh...kaise gidadoon ko pal rakha hai aur tu saale humein lutne aya hai ...abbe apne shakal kaBhi aine mein dekhi hai ...abe tujhse ache to wo chote bachhe ache hain jo bus mein logon ka pocket katte hain...apne aap ko choor kehete ho ...aabe gadhe tu toh dhangse dhamka bhi nahi paaraha hai aur sabse amazing baat toh yeh hai ki tujhe ek aurat ka sahara lena pad raha hai appne baat humsab se manvane ke liye... ha ha ha...(and gives a u -r -so -useless wala look )

Man 3- thare zuban bhi thare hath paon jaise bahut zyada chal rahe hain ab tu dekh ki mein thara ke hasra karta hun...(with a evil smirk)aakhri baar aapne leela ko dekh le ...

he points the gun towards him and is ready to shoot ...all this while nandini was in a state of shock when suddenly she comes back to reality and she sees that the man is about to shoot...suddenly her eyes falls on the gun which had fallen under the seat and in that moment of instance she thinks...

Nandinis prov-

No no aiyappa ...no no mein aisa hone nahi de sakti usne meri jaan bachane ke liye apni jaan khatre mein dali ...nai mujhe kisibhi hal mein use bachana hoga ... No I cant let him die...no no ... aiyappa ! help me ...

And without being noticed she some how manages to pick up the gun and gaining some courage she poins the gun towards the man who was pointing his gun towards manik ...her hands start shaking but still she had to do it aany cost...

Nandini- chodo usse ...i said leave him ...(she shouts with full force )

(her hands were again shaking)

All the men together start laughing ...

Man 3- tu goli chalave gi ...ha ha ha thare mein itne himmat na hai ...chal idhar de ...ee chori yeh khelne ki chiz na hai...(and starts walking towards her)

Nadini - mei.. mein.. kehe rahi hun mein goli chala dunge... pass mat aana...wahin ruko warna mein sachmein goli chala dungi...(but he still ncomes towards her)

Manik- eee ...dur reh usse ...ladki ko kya darata hai dam hai toh mujhse akele baatkar naki tere in paltu kutton ki madad se.l...

The other man who was holding him punchesd him in his stomach and blood comes out of his mouth...

Man 3- (angrily goes to him andholds him by his hair and...)ooo... hero ..filmy dialoug apne ghar pe... ab tu dekh me thara ke hal kartahun (and he again points the gun towards him and he is ready to shoot... he was just about to pull the trigger when...)

Nandini prov - no ...!!!!aiyappa... help..(and closes her eyes tightly and

BANG ! BANG!

Due to sudden firing everybody becomes scared and and they all look towards the direction in which the bullet was fired and soon the man who was pointing a gun towards manik falls down on the floor And the floor gets filled with his blood ...meanwhile nandini also freezes at her place ...she is in a state of shock ...and who wont be ...for a girl who never even killed a fly had shot a man,a living man just a moment ago...at that very moment maniktakes the advantage of this situation gets free of their grip and starts fighting the shit out of them seeing his courage the other guys present in the bus also gain some courage and start to fight back they manage to get the driver free and tie them with the help of the rope and all this while nandini was still in a state of shock and she did not realise ...that one of them was going to stab her with a knife when...manik came and held his hand and pushed him with so much force that he fell down.. all this while they did not ralise they were standing right at the door ...and before he could ask any thing to her tha guy again came to attack but this tme he pushed nandini and she couldnot withstand the force and lost her balance and the bus door opened with a thud and she would have fallen out of the bus but manik held her hand they had and intence eyelock ...

Bin tere mera kya hai
Jisko sunu jisko kahun
Bin tere mujh mein kya hai
Jisko jiyun jis mein rahun
Tujh mein hi duniya meri hai
Tere ik pal mein sadiyan meri
Bin tere main sehra saa hoon
Bin tere main qatra bhi nahi

meanwile the others had managed to capture the guy who pushed nandini ...nandini was gasping heavily when manik pulled her in and again she fell in his arms and they share an eyelock...

Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hain toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hain toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon

And with the sudden claping sound they come back to reality...and.. she was still shivering ...

Manik- umm umm...miss moorthy ...r u all right ?? (concerned)

Nandini- (no reply)she is still shocked

Manik-miss moorthy ??are you ok ??(now worried)

Nandini- (finally speakes and tears start rolling from hers eyes )I ...i I killed someone...(says in a state of shock)

Manik- hey hey its ...its completely fine ...whatever you did was just a step taken in defence...everything is fine shhh...its ok now...

Nandini- (now she starts panicking)OMG!!!!!! I ...I actually killed someone (freaking out)... ho..how can I kill someone ??? no... no no no...I have become a muderer..me..mein aisa kaise karsakti hun...

Manik -hey noo just listen to me(but she was not ready to listen anything)

(first hehesitated but finally he kept his hands on either side on her shoulder)miss moorthy !!!miss moorthy look at me ...( but still she was not ready to listen to him she was just going on babbling on her own and crying continously..)NANDINI look at me !!!!( and instantly hearing her name she looked at him )its ok now everything is fine...you are safe now...we all are infact you saved all of us today you are not a muderer ..do you get me???you are not a muderer ...and they diserver it so theres nothing to fell sorry about it you did the right thing...(assuring her)

Finally she calmed down and realised he was holding her from her shoulder..she just looked at him akwardly..

Manik- (realising)ohh!! I ..i am sorry ..i didn't mean to... I was just...

Before he could complete...

Nandini- thanks for saving me fom them ..and thanks for being there...

Manik- its fine... afterall you saved my life today thanks toh mujhe tumhe kehena chahiye...come lets sit ...I don't think ke we can reach mumbai by midnight we may reach by morning only...

Nandini nodes and they proceed towards their seat..


to be continued in the next chapter...


plzz plz guys waiting for your comments jaldi jaldi karo and agar spelling mistakes ho toh maff karna...😳

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CHAPTER 4( a) - ARE WE FRIENDS NOW ????

They reached their seat...nandini sat down and she moves her neck as it was paining and she hisses in pain...and instantly manik looks at her ...seeing her in pain god knows why but he fells like sombody had thown a lot of stones on it...he looks around and he finds an uncle and auty are still awake it was already midnight and everybody had already gone through a lot...so everybody were dead tired hence all the others had already asleep so without wasting any time he went to them and...

Manik- ummm uncle aunty... I hope I am not disturbing you ...(they look at him )

Aunty- nahi nahi beta tumhari wajhese toh hamari jaan bachi hai... bolo beta kya baat hai ???(politely)

Manik- wooo actually aunty wo she is hurt (pointing towards nandini)so kya aapke pass kuck fist aid karneke liye hoga...

Aunty- itne si baat ke liye itna hesitation...(smiles) abhi deti hun...

And gives him some bandages,cotton and antiseptic ointment...and he happily goes to his sit..and forwards his hand towards her..

Manik- umm.. here...(giving her the things)

Nandini just looks at him ..and..

Nandini- thanks...(smiles)

And he sit down beside her ...and she starts appling the ointment on her wound with the help of a cotton..and again hisses in pain...unaware of the intence gaze on her...mean while manik is busy in gazing at her...he is busy adoring her innocence ...how can someone be so pure ,so innocent...her face reflects her purity... her dough shaped eyes act as crystle which shows that she has no selfish feeling in her ...

Tu mere chehre pe hai
raahat saa jo thehra huaa
Main bhi tere haathon mein
kismat sa hoon, bikhra hua

His trace was broken with and nandini calling him...

Nandini - mr. malhotra...?? Umm I think aapko bhi iski zarurat hai (and pointing towards the bleeding spot.. and frwarding the cotton to him)

Manik- umm thanks (and takes it and starts cleaning his wound)

After a while unknowingly both fall asleep and they didn't realise that when nandini keep her head on his shoulde and manik resting his head on the seat...the whole night they sleep in the same position...

In early morning manik was the first one to wake up...and he was about to move when he realise the situation ...nandini was sleeping on his shoulder just like a two yr old snuggling close to him...all of a sudden a smile creeps on his lips ...for him the world stops right there ...the innocence on her face was beyond defination...

Tu meri rooh saa hai
Tujhko chhu ke main zinda lagun
Jab bhi main mujhko dekhun
Mujh mein bhi main tujh sa lagun

Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon

He was busy in adoring her when she wakes up after a peaceful sleep and reality stikes her she realises in what position she was in...and she stratens her self and and akward silence bettween then...

Aftef sometime...

Nandini- uum uumm.. look I...I am sorry ..i seriously didn't mean to..

Manik - its fine... I know you didn't do it intentionally...so chill and yesterday everybody were very disturbed after what all happened so...don't worry ...( gives her an assuring smile)

She smiles back...

TO BE CONTINUED...

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CHAPTER 4 (b)-

IN THE BUS -

After a few minutes of silence...manik takes out a small medium size chocolate bar from his blazers pocket ..he opens it and breaks half of it and...

Manik- umm.. (nandini looks at him and manik forwards the half chocolate to her)u ..must be hungry...here..

Nandini- (she just gives a affectionate smile and takes it)thanks...

Manik- hum...(nandini looks at him) hum adhe ghante mein mumbai pahunchne wale hain and mere thodi der pehele he cops se baat hui thi unhone kaha that they want bot our statement so...

Nandini just noded in return with a smile ...

MANGALORE -

Amms- (watching the news on tv)varsha! Varsha!

Varsha- jee amms... (seeing her so worried she rushes to her side and..)amms kya hua aap itni worried kyun lag rahi hain ???

Amms just points towards the tv screen..

Varsha - omg ! amms aa..aap tension maat lo nandu theek hogi ... mei..mein usse abhi call karti huin...

(she calls her)

ON THE OTHER HAND-

Nandini - (picks up) hello! (before she could say anything else)

Varsha- nandu tu theek hai na??is everything fine?? ...yeh news pe kya aaraha hai ??..aur mujhe sab kuch details mein bata ke yeh sab kaise hua ???

Nandini- omg varsha tu toh bullet train se bhi jada speed mein bhag rahi hai...ruk ja yaar ...thodi saans lele meri maa breath ..!!!aur agar teri sawalon ki rail gadi khatam ho toh tab mein kuch bolungi na...(hearing this manik just smiled )

Mean while amms asks varsha to put the phone on loud speaker...

Amms- kanna ... tu theek hai na...??? (asks worriedly)

Nandini- amms don't worry ...app bilkul bhi tension mat lo ...I am perfectly fine.. mein bilkul yheek hiun..and ya mein adhe gante mein mumbai pahunchne wale hun... so chill

Amms- teek hai... tum pahunch ke mujhe call karna ok ...bye kanna

Nandini- bye amms... love you...

Amms- love you too kanna...

(and hangs up)

Manik - (smiles and says) bahut pyaar kartin hai tumse...

Nandini- han bohut zada...(and smiles back) she is the best amms anyone can have...

Manik- she is your ??

Nandii - she is my grand mother but more than a mother to me...bachpanse he mein unke saath mangalore mein reheti thi...

Manik - ohh so tum mangalore ki ho...

Nandini- yup ...

Manik- tum mumbai kyun ?? just asking casualy if you don't mind...

Nandini- no its ok (gives hima polite smile )actually mujhe mumbai mein internship mille hai sooo...

Manik- internship ??kis cheez ki internship ??

Nandini- woo.. actually mein mumbai singer banne aye huin so meine apply kiya tha to join a musical company ... but they said first they will test me till them I have to work as an intern so here im am...

Manik- ohh really ... so tumhe singing pasand hai ( excitedly)so ... kya naam bataya company ka ??

Before she could ans the bus stops and conducter announces that they had reached and everyone including manik and nandini leave the bus ..as soon as they step down the cops arrest the culpits and they give their statements ...meanwhile media rush towards them aiming them will lots of question but before the media could reach manik the body guards cover him up ...

Body guard 1- sir we have to leave ...its getting unsafe...

Manik-( with his famous glare) listen not now I have some unfinished work ...(looking at nandini who is standing at some distance who did not notice all this bodyguard stuff...while cops are talking to her and taking the details...)

Bodyguard 2- sirt we can risk your like or break the protocal its your dads orders (hearing this he had to give in as he can never disobey his dad )...so he proceed towards his car ..

Meanwhile nandini after answering the questins of the cops she thinks of thanking manik a final time for saving her before leaving ...but to her bad luck she doesnt find him anywhere so dissapointed she hires a taxi and sits in it to leave ..

INSIDE THE TAXI-

Nandinis prov-

He seems to be a nice person but sometimes acts really dumb and always hots but any which way he saved my life so I owe him...I don't know why in these few past hours ...I felt a different kind of connection with him...like theres something ...is this the start of a new friendship???

ON THE OTHER HAND IN MANIKS CAR-

She is different from the girls I have met... she is simple yet so pure ...there is nothing fake in her...she is pure ...I wish I got the chance to thank her afterall she saved my life... I owe her...she seems to be a nice person ...I don't know why but these few hours with her ..it felt like...there was some kind of connection between us... she felt very familiar...is this a start of a new friendship ???

The screen divides into two with manik and nandini smiling in one side each...

to be continued...
precap- get rady cause the secret is going to unfold...in the next chapter THE UNREVEALED TRUTH...
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Amazing update
Continue soon
Nice start manan secret
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CHAPTER 5 (a)- THE UNREVEALED TRUTH

MANGALORE-

amms- aiyappa ka shukar hai ki meri nandu bilkul sahi salamat hai...
varsha- (to cheer up her mood) aare amms aap bhi haad karte ho...hamari nandu ko kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta ...(amms looks at her confused) aare mera matlab hai ,apko toh pata hi hai humari nandu kitne rondu hai ki pura ghar pani se bhar jata hai (giving a naughty smile all along)aur i am toh damn sure tab bhi wo panik kar ke rone lagi hogi jiski wajha se bus mein baad aagaye hoge aur isse liye wo chor bhi uss baad ke sath hi behe gaya hoga...mujhe toh taras un bicharoon par aaraha hai...(faking a sad face)wo bhi soch rahe honge ki kisse pala pada hai...(and again gives a naughty smile)
amms- (hits her playfully)haat!! badmash!!...achha aaj tujhe 4:00 baje mumbai jane ke liye nikalna hai na...toh nandu ka kuch files and papers mere cuboard mein rehe gaya hai shayad use zarurat pade toh tu ja dekhle le aur sara zaruri saman apne saath le ja...
varsha- jee amms...(smiling)
she entered the room and opened the cuboard and started to empty the drawer when suddenly an old file fell down which was kept... actually hidden beneath the cloths ...it had no name on it...so she out of curiosity just to check out ...if it was something important to nandu ...she opened it... and she got the biggest shook of her life wich shook her from the core...it felt like the ground had slippet from beneath her feet... just when amms enters...
amms- varsha..var...(she s stunned when she sees that file in her hand...)yeh tumhe kahan se mille??(in all this caos she had forgot that she had kept the file inside the cuboard ..and now she had sent varsha here and she saw thw file now no one can stop the truth from coming out...)
amms prove- aiyappa yeh kya ho gaya sachai aise bahar niklege meine aisa kabhi nahi socha tha meine toh socha tha ke sahi samay anepar nandu ko aur sabko sab bata dungi lekin...
varsha - amms kya yeh sach hai !!!!!( shoving a photograph which was inside the file)
amms had no answer.
varsha- amms mein aapse kuch puch rahe huin...kya yeh sach hai...???am,ms kya yeh sach hai???
amms- han han yeh sach hai ...yeh sach hai ki ..ke NANDINI KI SHADI HO CHUKI HAI !!!!!!!(and she sit on the bed crying)



to be continued ...
i am sorry guys i know ke this is a little chotu update but cant help it as i am out of town so could type this much onle on my cell phohe ok ...but i will complete this capter soon hope u guys dont mind by the egarly waiting for your comments...😆

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