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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaykavi

Plz update new part plz


will try to update soon...😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey awesome story dear read it in a go and really loved it plz continue soon waiting very very eagerly for next update take care
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Beautiful updates .
Continue soon .
Thanks for the pm.
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nice story really loved it
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Plz update new part
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CHAPTER 8-RAMA RAMA KYA HAI DRAMA...!!

In the car-

Cabir is driving the car while manik is sitting on the front seat &the three girls are on the back seat...as it was already quite late at night hence cabir offered varsha and nandini a lift to their apartment...

Cabir is silent...and his this "manhoos"silence was totally like a 1000 tons on manik as cabir silent hota hai to samajho ki zald hi kisiki phatne wali hai...hu hu ha ha ha...!!!!!(evil laughter)

Maniks provo-

Yeh...kamina..itna chup chap kaise baitha hai...ab tak toh akraman hojana chaiye tha...ufff...!!jab bhi yeh silent hota hai...aise lagta hai mano tufan ke aane se pehele ka sannata ho...

At the back seat...

Varsha provo-

Aiyoo...!!!!Aiyappa!!!!plz tell me indono ke beech kuch hua na ho...kahin kiss wiss...nai nai nai...ai...aisa nahi ho sakta hand...nai...nai...aisa thodi na ho sakta hai...par agar..(bitting her nails)aiyappa !!!!help!!!!jald se jald amms se baat karni padegi...isse pehele ki koi aur gadbad hojaye...

While mukti and nandini were sitting talking slowly with eachother afterall they met after so long...

Soon they reach vanans(varsha & nandini)building...and after dropping them off they move for malhotra mansion...

MALHOTRA MANSION-

In maniks room-

Mukti-bhai...aapko kuch aur chaiye?

Serving his dinner...

Manik- nahi doll...buss I am full...

Cabir was still on silent mode...

Mukti-achha toh phir bhai mein apne room mein jaate hun...

Manik-(instantly)nai...!!!!aaree...me..mera matlab hai ke tu ruk na yahan pe...bhai behen milke batein karenge...kitne dino se nai ki na...

Mukti-(confused)par...bhai...kal hi toh ki thi...waise mujhe koi problem toh nai hai...but bhai aap thak gaye honge ma...

Just then finally breaking the silence...our shaitan dimang speaks...

Cabir- muku...yu ja...jake soja...mein mun na tere"pyaare"bhaiya ka khayal rakhne ke liye...(sarcastically).

Manik gulped scared to death...

Manik provo-

Beta manik...aaj toh tera jamm ke shikaar hone wala hai...

Mukti- ok bhaiyu...take care...gud nite bhai..

Before manik could say or call her cabir closed the door and locked it...

Cabir-(coming towards manik) toh...i think we need to "talk"...

Manik-ca..ca...cabir...me..mere bhai...(steping backwards)

Cabir- ya ya ...bol...bol na...salle ab bolti kyun bandd ho gayi...

Both were now standing on the bed..and soon the tom and jerry fight started ...cabir was throwing all the pillows on manik aiming at him perfectly...

Manik- abe...ruk...abe...chote se bachhe ki jaan lega kya...bata ta hun sab...ruk ja mere baap...

Cabir- achha ...ab suddenly you became a chota sa bachha...store room mein romance karte hua yeh yaad nahi tha ...chote se bachhe...
(again throwing a pillow at him)u had told me ke u will never hide anything from me...

Finally the war came to an end...with both of them breathing heavily as if abhi abhi summorestling kar ke laute hon...

Manik- wo...darasal...baat yeh hai ki...

And explained the wole thing to cabir...and cabirs reaction was shocking...

Cabir-thank god!!!(lying down on his back)thank god...ki hinally iss khule sandh kosambhalne wali aa hi gayi...

Manik hit him playfully...

Manik-salle!!mein tujhe kis angle se sandh dikhta hun...

Cabir- abet u dikhta kyat u hai sandh...haaash!!ab meri sari tension mit gayi...

Manik- kaminey!chup baith...!!jab dekho bakwass karta reheat hai...tu rehene de...mujhe tujhse koi baat hi nai karni...

And gets up tp go and freshen up in the washroom...while cabir shouts from behind...

Cabir- arre mere angry hulk...tujhe sandh se prem ka pujari banne mein zada der nahi lagegi...mark my words...

And starts singing like a shameless creature...

Cabir- prem ki naiya hai ram ke bharose...apni tu naiya ab paar toh lagahi de...

And due to his bullshit bakwas of his ...hell frustrated opens the washroom door and throws the mug on him but he bends down and manik miss it...

Manik- salle...tu jata hai yahan se ya ab bucket bhi phekun...

Cabir-don't worry my boy..."pyaar deewana hota hai mastana hota hai..."

Angain starts singing laughing like a mad person making manik more angry and irritated...

Manik-(giving a stern look)dafaa...!!

IN KHURANA MANSION-

Soha is sitting on the sofa with a wine glass ...when her p.a comes and...

Soha- wo kaam jo meine kaha tha wo ho gaya...

p.a- ji mam..bilkul jaise aap chahati thi...

soha- gud!ab dekhna kalki subha kya tufaan lekar aata hai...soha khurana apna badla lekar hi reheti hai...by hook or by crook...ha ha ha ha ha...
(laughs evily)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 9-ayelo ! syappa...!!

Next morning as usual routine unaware of the maha kaand which is going to happen in her life nandini wope up and got ready to go to her office...

Standing infront of her aiyappas photo she prayed...

Nandini provo-

Aiyappa...today is a new day...practically the second day of my office please aaj sab kuch achha ho and from today I want a fresh start...lz...apni blessings mujhpe banaye rakhna...

Finishing her prayer she turned around only to find her kumbhkaran friend sleeping full on "ghode beechke"... Snoring and mumbling in her sleep...

Nandini- ufff!yeh varshu bhi na...kabhi nahi sudhregi...varsha uth ja...dekh its already 7:00 am humein 8:00am tak office pahunchna hai yaad hai na...

Varsha- (mumbling in sleep)I luv u shahid...ooo shahid...

Nandini- yeh aise nahi manegi...

She looks here and there and then finds the jug full of water kept on the side table...and she smiles naughtily...and the next thing which was heard was varshas panic wala scream...

Varsha- aaah!aaah!bachao...bacho..!!tusunami aagayi...flood ...bacho bachao..!!

Nandini-ooo...toh finally varsha rani ki need khul hi gayi...(smiling naughtily)

Varsha- nandu yaar!!koi kisiko aise gud morning wish karta hai kya...uff...!!mera shahid mujhe I luv u bolraha tha aur tune...(pouting in frustration)

Nandini-(giving a phir se nahi wala expression)issmein nayi baat konsi hai...yeh toh tera rozz ka hai...tera buss chalet oh tu sapne mein hi usske saath shaadi,bachhe sab kuch karle...!

Varsha-(thinking)waise idea bura nahi hai...

Nandini- ufff varsha tera na kuch nahi hone wala...

Varsha - hand hand...zada udd mat aur mujhe na badi strong feeling aarahi hai ke bahut jaldi yaha mere jagha tera pati hoga aur jab tu usse aise uthaigi tab dekh mere honewale jiju tera kya karte hain...sudh samet mera badla bhi lenge wo tujhse...

Nandini- kuch bhi hand...abhi sun tera breakfast meine table par rakh diya hai...kar lena aur jaldi se ready hokar office aajana ok...mujhe der horahi hai so bye...

Varsha-ok dhyan se jana..!!(shouts)

Varsa gets up and goes to the washroom then after a few minutes comes out all ready wiping her face with the towel...then keep the tpwel aside sits on the breakfast table...

Varsha- ummm...nahi yahan nahi aaj tv dekhte dekhte khayenge...zara hum bhi toh dekhe ki bahar ki duniya ke kya hal hain...

She picks up her breakfast and sits on the couch in the living room switching the tv on ...she takes a bite of her toast while sipping her juice and keeps changing the channel...when...she frezzes on her place watching the news flashing on the tv screen...

Varshas toast falls of her hand and only one thing escapes her lips...

Varsha- oh boy...!!(shocked)

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Nandini enters the office entrance and watching her the receptionist stands up and wishes her good morning nervously...

Receptionist-goo...gooo...good morning mam ...

Nandini becomes shocked for the moment that she doesn't wish her then how come this parivartan in nature all of a sudden...but shooing away her thoughts...

Nandini- gud morning...(smiling politely)

And walks past her in a hurry...

Nandini- oo gosh I am late ...shit shit...aaj toh manik sir meri jaan lelenge...puree 1min late hun...(talking to herself)

As soon as she was going to enter the door of the office the watchman seeing her gives her a salute...and nandini looks behind her to check to whom he was giving a salute but finding none she gets to know it was her only to whom he was saluting...

Nandini- aaj sabko ho kya gaya hai...(mumbling under her breath)

As soon as she enters the office area...she walks u=inside in a hurry but as she walks past each staff everyone stands up looking at her like she is some alien and is here to eat them while some stylish bimbo type girls of the office with her chanchies pass her a jealous look...

Looking at everyone nervously she reaches her desk ...and waching vidhi pass by her she stops her...vidhi is nandinis office friend now...

Vidhi-maa..maa..mam ...aapko ku..kuch chahiye...(nervously)

Nandini- oye...teko kya hua...and tu mujhe maam kyun bula rahi hai...

Vidhi- maam...mei..mein kaise ...aapko aapke naam se bula sakti hun...

Nandini- hain...?tu kya bol rahi hai ...meko kuch samajh nahi aaraha vidhi...plz saaf saaf bata na...

Just then varsha enters the office running like a maniac...with a newspaper in her hand ...

Varsha- nandu...(panting heavily)

Nandini- varshu...tu aise ...kya hua...aur tu aise ...why u running like a maniac jaise koi tusunami ane wali hai...

Varsha- tusunami anewali nahi tusunami agayi hai bahar aur wo bhi reporters ki idiot...

Nandini- matlab...?guys plz tumlog mujhe clearly bataoge ki ye ho kya raha hai...

Varsha - ye dekh...(showing her the front page news paper)

Nandini takes a look at it and her eyes pops out in utter shock

Nandini- what on earth...!

The headlies said the following-

"TOP BUISSNESS SENSATION MR. MANIK MALHOTRA &MISS NANDINI MOORTHY'S SECRETE MARRIAGE REVEALED!

The great buissness man manik malhotra son for legendary buissness man shekhar malhotra is officially tied to miss nandini moorthy.according to our sources their marriage is 2 yrs old...and they are expecting ...this is a utter shock for all the girls who thought of him as the most eligible bachalore as now there are many broken hearts in our country...

(with their photo at the end manik holding her from her waist in the dhaba)"

Anger aswell as and earge to murder him rushed through her veins and she was totally burning in the agony to literally chock him to death...because of one lie now her personal life is on public display...and now it has become a hot gossip subject for the people of our country...in utter rage she asks...

Nandini-vidhi manik sir kahan hai...

Vidhi-maam...wo...

Nandini- vidhi where is he..?

Vidhi-co...co...conference room...(stammering badly)

Nandini- manik malhotra you are so dead...!

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Manik in the conference room explaining a presentation to the associates when the door bangs open...and nandini enters fuming in anger...

Manik- miss moorthy ye kya batamizi hai...(angrily)

Nandini- oh just shut the hell up...aap toh tameez ki baat kijiye hi mat...it doesn't suit you...

Manik- how dare u talk to me like that...u know I can fire you for this...

Nandini- fire me...right ...so plz do the honours and do so...go ahead and fire me ...

Manik gestures everyone to leave...and everyone leave the room understanding the situation...

Manik- what the hell is wrong with you miss moorthy...!!!(griping her arm tightly)

Nandini- what the hell is wrong with me...what the hell is wrong with you...!!how dare you aise chezein chapwane ki...for you these things may be doesn't matter but for me and my family it does...aapki dhabe pe help kya kardi...apne toh uss cheez ko sachai bana diya by making a scandal out of it...

Manik-(confused)wait what...?what are you talking about...

Nandini- yeh (moving the news paper in front of him and then throwing it forcefully on the confence table)what is the meaning of this shit...!!!

Manik picks up the newspaper and watching is headlines...

Manik- what the f**k!!!!(shocked)

precap- omg ye kya ek aur naya syappa...hmmm so age kya hoga...socho soch ...!!keep thinking...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update

awesome twist

may be now they will get to know abt their real secret marriage

bang on

plz update soon

and plz keep updating
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oo to Soha poha ka ye plan tha ab agge ayega Maza
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow amazing superb update

Plzz continue soon
Egar to know

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