#5 MANANSS: OUR WILD LOVE! (LAST EXCERPT -117) [COMPLETED] - Page 16

Originally posted by: daddysjaan

such a cute daddy daughter thing... extremely cute moments...

its reminds me of me nd mah dad's bond,I too do d same things till date.. waking up and d frst thing I ask my mom is. Whr is dad?? haha.. nd d same nagging whenever he go fr a tour..

nd same as my mom.. she always says u love ur dad more den me.. haha..

I can understand vry well..what bond a father and daughter share ..

Originally posted by: 591994

Don't say like this dear...we love ur stories so much n u know that too...n even i never asked fr pms also knowing how much u people make efforts in writing only...bt that also doesn't mean that i skip comments...i always write something...not bcoz i hve to comment...it actually comes automatically in stories that we just write the comment...plzzz dear don't feel like we don't like ur stories...n about my only love...i'm dying to read it further...even i usually open the link in the hope that u would hve updated something...even though i know it's on hold...
Will be waiting fr ur decision dear...
Cont. Soon...

Originally posted by: syami

awww such a cute update I loved it so
much
u jotted it so beautifully
the father daughters
bonding
seriously
as father is first love of a daughter
its wonderful to see
such a blessed relation

awww nandu is jealous of her own daughter
sometime
he he
they have a cute family
advia is a swthrt
her antics are juz like her mommy's
one

I will love to see the sequel
don't give up writing Alisha plzzz
it's a humble request
at least for ppl like us who
cmnt all time

tc

Originally posted by: LUCKYRICKLY

No no no Alisha
Please esa mat karo please
Kya huwaa?? 😕
Q ? Esi decision li aap ne?
Such mai aap ab se updates nai degi kya??
Abhi Abhi mai to Kush ho rahi thi
Mujhe regular updates mil rahi hai
Ab aap meri sur pe bafy bomb blast ki
Ok

If mai nai mili to kaha milegaa ?? Aap ki stories
Please updates band mat keejiye
Mereliye

Originally posted by: Staars_Firefly

Thank u for another shot dear..And as always it was awesome and please please dont stop writing You are a wonderful writer of this forum so plese dont take such heavy decisions in haste

..Keep smiling and may God bless you.

Originally posted by: MADHVIMADHU

U r amazing writer... Yaar... one of my favorite... Pliz my only love ko b update kro yaar... Bahut time ho gya... Tumhari woh story b bahut achchi lagti hai mujhe... Pliz... 👏update soon... 😛

Originally posted by: sneha_glamarous

<font size="4">thanks for the pm...

what...???why...???? u r putting ur stories on hold... no .No nooo u can't do this...

i toh read each n every update of urs n comments too...u can't do this...!!!!

I'm toh even eagerly waiting for your another story that when will u remove the hold tag from that n u will continue but here toh u r thinking to put the hold tag on other stories too... please don't do this...

anyways now coming to Excerpt... it was good actually very good... loved the adiva n his papa bonding...

adiva don't want to leave her papa n wants to go with him...this reminds me of my childhood... rather it must have happened with every kid...

"Manik, can u stop spoiling her so that she can be an independent girl in future?" I hissed.
"This is not spoiling but showering my love on my
child, my dear wife." He corrected me ......loved the way he defended himself...

pinki promise...awww how cute...!!!

adiva wants to hv chocolate...
when manik brought chocolate for her daughter only n didn't bought anything for nandu she was getting jealous from her own daughter... awww

but got excited when manik said he has bought something for her too...
You can just have me, wife." He chuckled cockily and
leaned even more, ruining my imagination. ...LOVED this scene too...

on whole entire chapter was good...</font>

Originally posted by: manancraze

Aww...😳...adiva is too much cute...☺️...loved this little MUNCHKIN...❤️.

MaDiva bond is purely blessed to read...I just love the way Manik is spoiling his little brat...😆...true signs of being a papa...😉.

Like it how two immature and bratty people began to act like mature person.

Lots of love to u and MaNaDiva...🤗.

Cont soon...😃

Originally posted by: KYYian

Awww soo lovely

adiva is really daddys lil princess..

she has her ways to get all d things she want..

n when manik went, she said nandini, I love u..hahaha..smart girl..

u wrote it very beautifully...

writing down a philosophy of a lil girl n her parents is not at all an easily thing..but u r doing it marvelously..

too good update

what a sweet manan family!!!!!!

Originally posted by: shalini16gupta

Hey Alisha don't say your gonna stop all your stories becoz they are my lifeline. They help me also to keep manan alive in my heart.
Your stories show me a ray of hope that love still exists n it still has its essence available in this world .
Becoz I have gone rough patch of my life loosing lot of things. Your stories provide my mind sanity to sail through thses rough patches of my life.
Plzzz plzzz I literally beg you to not to stop writing stories here.
I don't know about others but for me your stories are Truely a ray of hope in dark tunnel of my life.
Every day I wait for your updates n the moment I see I can't wait to read it.
I am always eager to know what will happen next in your stories.
I know you put in soo much effort to think about all these stories n then write them. I know it must be so painful sometimes when you get poor response.
But from my side I can give guarantee that already I will never stop reading n commenting your stories.

Sooo plzzz plzzz don't stop writing

Now about update it was a beautiful moment well written n loved the adiva way of loving her parents.

Plz Continue soon