#5 MANANSS: OUR WILD LOVE! (LAST EXCERPT -117) [COMPLETED]

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Suma1973

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

We would love to read and ppl like you

keep this forum alive it means so much to me. Plz keep posting in the forum

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ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Such a cuteee update
She was soo happy that her daddy washed her face awww
Daddy's lil girl
Loved reading it
Plz continue writing
I love reading ur stories
N sorry for commenting so ..late exams going in
Thnkz 4 the pm

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sonali_mohapatr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

no no don't do this please continue... we really love reading your stories...seriously!!!

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divyagarg

@divyagarg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Very very nice part

Thanks for the pm

And don't do that yarrr, plz don't stop writing

We love u and all your stories

We are always there to appreciate ur writing

Plzzz plzzz continue sll ur stories including My Only Love

Will be waiting

Update soon

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Wow!!! Awesum update dear..

Vry vry sry dear 4 late commenting..

Update ws so fantastic..a nw version of manik..

Thnks so much dear 4 d pm..

Aw!! Manik aduva scenes ws so cute..

A diff version of manik..really surprised 2 c dis avatar of manik

Adiva s so cute..she s really daddy's princess..

Full of manan n their small family..

Fabulous one dear.. Lvd it 2 core...

Adiva's daily routine ws fantastic...poor nandu..

In donon baap beti ke beech phas gyi..hahaha..

Adiva bhi bilkul apne papa jaisi he...

Father daughter momnts r so spectacular..

D way u portrayed it na it ws mindblowing...

Adiva s so attached 2 manik..lvd their bonding...

Manan s njyin their dis phase of lyf wholeheartedly.

D way u depicted d family momnts ws so suprb...

Manik vil do anythng 4 his princess.. Lvd d carridin of full family

Awesum one dear... Do continue dear...

Yeah..pls continue my fan's love..i am eagerly waitin 4 dat dear..

Dat stry ws also one dat s close 2 ma heart..pls try 2 continue dear..

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Awww Alisha
This was beautiful !
Adiva is too cute by the way .
Bunny though :D

And yea , Nandini can have Manik .
For sure . Hahah ^_^

Thankyou for the message
-God bless

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shubha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

i couldn't keep track of this story cos i got busy but honestly this is like the best story i ever read on manan..even though i have a lot of favourites which incl our other works on them..but this is special..mainly cos manan here are unlike any other...mostly u will have manik the impulsive wild one and nandu the subdued version but here both are equally egoistic..impulsive..stubborn and yes wild...and the beauty lies in how they actually swallowed their pride...let their egos be broken into shreds just to be together...

i just loved the growth the characters had together and its an amazing journey really...esp loved the part towards the end where manik asks whether she wants him to stay..his breakdown and confession was so heart wrenching...loved the whole wedding thing. i liked nandu and her dad's bonding...and u also made manik and adiva's bond so beautiful...i esp loved the way u wrote the part when adiva was born..it was very realistic and well described...only thing which bugged me was manik forgot to cut the cord after he took out the baby..i mean he must have done it but since u didn;t mention it..it kept nagging me..lolz

the excerpts..both the parts is also so well written that i wish u would continue..i know it might be difficult but swear u can never get bored of this beautiful family:)...from the excerpt i loved the last part where manik says to nandini..u have me..kinda sums up their need for each other

at the end of the story u asked three questions abt the story...for me my fav part is always the beginning...this one story i have read countless times from the start and i seriously love the way nandu tricked him..lolz..kinda gives an insight into the people they both are and then manik blackmails her😆...its my fav part though i mostly love the entire story..every bit of it

i didn't hate any part though manik being married was def a shocker but i don't think manik cheated intentionally..he was just being a coward i guess..

so in all i loved it...and i think u have quite a talent ...keep it up!!