#5 MANANSS: OUR WILD LOVE! (LAST EXCERPT -117) [COMPLETED] - Page 17

Originally posted by: sadiya51

After I don't love u today I'm reading ur other stories that is those three little words which I finished reading it today and I have just read these 2 excerpts with ur note...I'm going to read it from the starting now

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Hey Sweety pie Alisha

Thks for the PM

Don't take a break dear

Plz cont keep going ...

This one was adorable so cute...

Manik has actually spoiled ADIVA to no extend

And he is continuing more...

But ADIVA is such a sweet heart...

Manik loves her so much that he can do anything to make her smile

It goes. Same with Nandu too.

But AFTERALL she is the mother, a woman ... Who has the responsibility to teach her daughter to be discipline ...

Fathers r only for spoiling his daughter...

Adiva's demands r becoming unpredictable

Driving car with his dad ...OMG...

OHH HOOO !!!! Princess slept before Daddy was back from office

Aa HHHAAA !!!!! Manik giving ideas , hints to Nandu about having him ALLL of it... Naughty

Originally posted by: MSIKura

That was such a cute excerpt... Please continue all your stories. There are ,many people liking your stories including me. So please for the people who support you. ,

Thanks.

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_

Read all parts in a go...
N damnnn...
This was tooo hot to handle...

Originally posted by: lovePANI

Thank u so much for every pm
N u r one of the hell amazing writer
I loved ur every stories from my heart
Thnx for bringing those stories in ur reader life...:)
N so sorry i have leave the forum on the middle way...

Thank u
Take care
Lord bless u...

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Forum is really low these days.. Plz don't get demotivated.. U r a fabulous writer the best actually ? All ur stories are exceptional.. The concept ur writing style everything...

I'm ur fan sachiii...

The part was amazing awesome just way too cute.. Perfectly penned

Thank u for continuing

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

NOOO!!
Don't stop god no.
This forum might be dormant but trust me, we visit it to read your stories, although not very regularly but we are there and waiting for your updates.
Ask for all the motivation you need and we'll give it. But if this becomes stressful for you, then don't force yourself even though we'll be heartbroken.

Originally posted by: Sonalmanan

Amazing !! I liked the father daughter bonding,nandini being a caring mother doesn't want to spoil her 😳 It feels really nice to see once a cold hearted manik being all lovey dovey n caring for his wife n daughter ❤️ Pls continue soon... Don't stop writing, I really love ur ffs,they are one of my favorites... I don't visit the forum regularly, I agree,but still I read ur all updates n comment too... Pls do continue for ur regular readers at least... * puppy dog eyes* Thanks for the pm 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Wow!!! Awesum update dear..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Vry vry sry dear 4 late commenting..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Update ws so fantastic..a nw version of manik..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thnks so much dear 4 d pm..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aw!! Manik aduva scenes ws so cute..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">A diff version of manik..really surprised 2 c dis avatar of manik</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Adiva s so cute..she s really daddy's princess..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Full of manan n their small family..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Fabulous one dear.. Lvd it 2 core...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Adiva's daily routine ws fantastic...poor nandu..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">In donon baap beti ke beech phas gyi..hahaha..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Adiva bhi bilkul apne papa jaisi he...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Father daughter momnts r so spectacular..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">D way u portrayed it na it ws mindblowing...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Adiva s so attached 2 manik..lvd their bonding...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Manan s njyin their dis phase of lyf wholeheartedly.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">D way u depicted d family momnts ws so suprb...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Manik vil do anythng 4 his princess.. Lvd d carridin of full family</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Awesum one dear... Do continue dear...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Yeah..pls continue my fan's love..i am eagerly waitin 4 dat dear..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dat stry ws also one dat s close 2 ma heart..pls try 2 continue dear..</font>

Originally posted by: FateBeChanged

i couldn't keep track of this story cos i got busy but honestly this is like the best story i ever read on manan..even though i have a lot of favourites which incl our other works on them..but this is special..mainly cos manan here are unlike any other...mostly u will have manik the impulsive wild one and nandu the subdued version but here both are equally egoistic..impulsive..stubborn and yes wild...and the beauty lies in how they actually swallowed their pride...let their egos be broken into shreds just to be together...

i just loved the growth the characters had together and its an amazing journey really...esp loved the part towards the end where manik asks whether she wants him to stay..his breakdown and confession was so heart wrenching...loved the whole wedding thing. i liked nandu and her dad's bonding...and u also made manik and adiva's bond so beautiful...i esp loved the way u wrote the part when adiva was born..it was very realistic and well described...only thing which bugged me was manik forgot to cut the cord after he took out the baby..i mean he must have done it but since u didn;t mention it..it kept nagging me..lolz

the excerpts..both the parts is also so well written that i wish u would continue..i know it might be difficult but swear u can never get bored of this beautiful family:)...from the excerpt i loved the last part where manik says to nandini..u have me..kinda sums up their need for each other

at the end of the story u asked three questions abt the story...for me my fav part is always the beginning...this one story i have read countless times from the start and i seriously love the way nandu tricked him..lolz..kinda gives an insight into the people they both are and then manik blackmails her😆...its my fav part though i mostly love the entire story..every bit of it

i didn't hate any part though manik being married was def a shocker but i don't think manik cheated intentionally..he was just being a coward i guess..

so in all i loved it...and i think u have quite a talent ...keep it up!!