#2//Dirty Deals//Chapter 9 on Pg 45 updated on 28.08.2016

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wonderstar13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Kids these days!☺️😆

No matter the story I just love your version of Manan...now eagerly waiting for pregnant Nandu...

As much as i loved jealous nandu I absolutely adore jealous and possessive Manik😃

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A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

It was awwweesssooommee Suuperbb Luved it Too good

I just luvv this story too much

Kabse new update k wait kar rahi thi finally lyk finally azz mill gaya just luvv it the way u always explained everything bit by bit. .

Mostly at the end lines when Nandu innocently blaberd everything and the best one when Manik asked Now can i kiss you? Just Luved it Luved the way Nandu reacted n jealous Nandu was awwweesssooommee

But who is that girl Jesse Manik itna chipak raha tha? ?

Desperately Desperately Waiting for next parts Please update next asap please please please Update Next ASAP Please please Desperately waiting for next parts

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A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Please please Update Next asap please please please Update Next asap

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A12609z

@A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

And yes luv thr impulsive fights and then impulsive kisses intimacy romance everything

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@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Finally after so long.. Update aa gyi.. But Update was total worthy .. Amazing Marvelous update. totally mind blowing... Manan ko goons follow kr rahe the. n nandu gave his watch vo bhi without his permission.. Navya came up wid nice solution .. Haww. nandini seriously brought watches of him ... Nandini is feeling so restless.. she is feeling soo restless because manik nhi h na.. But how sweetly she is asking for apolozy.. but but jealous n possessive nandu oh god..its a treat to read. but who is that girl ?? jiske saath manik tha ??. I seriously love manan's wild side. they are amazing .. Its Mind Blowing ... Ohhh... Finally nandini open up thoda thoda hi shi... Haww. awww. at last how sweetly manik asking permission for kiss. but ye kb se hone lga.. hmm. Waiting for next update eagerly.. !! Stay blessed !! !! Keep Smiling !!

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chinnichitti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

woww! Superb jealousy nandu. I love your pov's sooo much.. The way you expresses. 😛

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gauriangel

@gauriangel

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Sumana

I waited for this update for so long..and finally u updated.

This was awesome chappy.

The last bit was too good..such a cutie is Manik..when he asked for the permission..when both know..he doesn't need permission to kiss her.

So happy to see them after a long time..hope we get regular updates.. atleast 2 week mei ek toh..please...

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Deepam.Shetty.3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

at last after so many days..it was superb...hw nandini is possessive towards manik...so nice...can't wait for next episode..plz plz plz update soon...don't take much time plzzz...

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luckysahanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

loved it...
it was a cute update..

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OhMeriJaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Wait did the Sun rise from the West today?!😲😆 That was a pleasant surprise to see an update for this story! And how AMAZING was that! Loved it totallyyy!! ❤️

Ouch Nandu does mess it up always. Lol. But I am totally loving the changing equations between them. Even if slowly but its very nicely being done! I am just becoming a bigger fan of ur writing! The way u transition the story is lovely!

Also the oldie so needs to die! Uff what a ... ummm.. well whatever😆 I can't wait for the day when Manik will take Nandu with him rightfully n in front of that oldie! I know it might take a longgg time but hoga toh hai nah😉 I shall wait but that wait will be tough😆 But yayyy I am excited!!

And and and! Who IS that mystery girl?! The nation wants to know😆 Well atleast we all wanna know😆 Let it be Manik's sister😆 Any other possibility would be difficult to digest but I am guessing and hoping it won't be that way or I doubt he would ask for a kiss again😉😆 But wow that site wala scn was rlly nice! And the way Nandu blabbers😆 That was cuteee! Hehe! And the watch gift was so sweet!!

Ok now I rlly can't wait for the next update n iss time thodu sa jaldi plz or I need to read the previous chapter again to remember where the story stopped like I did today😆

Thanks a lottt for this fab update!! Keep rocking with your words!😃

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