#2MaNanSS:The Mafia And His Shimmer LinkToThread3/5th-May

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Iqra

@Iqra1309

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Posted: 9 years ago

#861

loved the awesome update
fabulously written
loved manik-kavya thing
rishabh-manan bond
hope manik get a chance to explain
yaa I too feel sad for nandu
poor soul
waiting for next
continue soon
thanks for pm
take care
may God bless

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Ash1117

@Ash1117

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Posted: 9 years ago

#862

Awesomeee mindblowing update...

Too emotional part i was literary crying will reading d update...

Manik was begging in front of her to stay with him bt she didnt she walked out without giving him any chance to explain anything from his side...

Plzzz update nxt part soon eagerly waiting too know whats coming next plzzz post it soon...

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#863

Awesome update. Way u penned it was commendable. Hats off. Was too emotional. Manan's moments before manik's leave was amazing. Nandini got to know the truth. Manan's moments were heartbreaking and emotional. Well written. U nailed it. Hats off. Both got hurt badly. Manik's words of will u live without me and won't u come back were too emotional and superb. Hats off. Manik's self thought was well penned. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.this story is getting interesting. Love to read further

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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vinitamakhija

@vinitamakhija

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Posted: 9 years ago

#864

that was heart touching update really loved it and update soon dear and love you

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ky2manan

@ky2manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#865

Such a lovely update
So beautiful
So heart wrenching
Manik wanted to tell her the truth once he was back
But fate had other plans
Nandini got to know the truth
Arya was damn scared to tell Manik
Nandini was disgusted with him 💔
Manik tried to explain her
Manik begged her to stay but 🥺
She wanted him to let her go to prove his love
Manik was totally broken
Cabir asked him to stop her
But he wanted to prove his love
Manik fainted
I was crying reading this
Update soon

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aditimanan

@aditimanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#866

Ot waa so emotional yr i m crying no words
Both manan r in pain feeling vry bad for them bt i m xcited for nxt part coz somethimg good will be there
Hatsoff to u for this chappy i guess its the best ipdate till now
Love u