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591994

@591994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#851

Loved the update dear...it was so heart wrenching...i'm really not able to gather to myself completely...i mean u r superb... Will be waiting fr next... Cont. Soon...

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Swift007

@Swift007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#852

God such an emotional one

Heartbreaking update

😭 Crying...

The happy scenes were good but

Nandini leaving Manik...

Plzzz continue sooon

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

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Posted: 9 years ago

#853

It was too emotional
But cliff hanger pe chod diya
Update next part soon...

Keep smiling always 😊

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Aakifa Hussain

@Aakifa_Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#854

Hey..! sorry 4 being late..!

God..wat an updt..!

Morning ws Superb..!

I loved dat wen Manik ws explaining her..
"Main jo hoon, jesa bhi hoon, mera pyaar tmhary liye bht sacha hai, Pakeeza hai"

So touchy lines..!
Loved them..!

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Aakifa Hussain

@Aakifa_Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#855

Part D

My heartbeats wr beating so fast while readng dis part..
It ws so emotional..!
Touched my heart Mao..!

Nandini shldnt hv insulted his love, bt cnt blame her either.. even she wsnt in a condition 2 think straight..!

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Aakifa Hussain

@Aakifa_Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#856

Feeling bad for Manik,
Feeling bad for both of them,
For their love..!
A love so pure..

Dis is d nly story which makes me laugh, cry n touches my heart at d same tym..!

wat wil happen next..!?
wil b waiting..!

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rohu27

@rohu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#857

It was too emotional... Uff... Feeling really bad for manik. His deeds are like payback.

But she also is not at fault. She trusted him n he broke her trust. What else she could do.

Now whts gonna happen.. God

Eagerly waiting dear... Hope all will be fine.

Loved the update..

Pls continue soon

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Dolly91

@Dolly91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#858

Jst wow..!!
Full emotional
U nailed it
Plss update soon

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vani

@knfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#859

This story is beautiful.. Loved it too much .. I really liked how Manik made nandini understand about let going Rishab for his dreams.. N lil nok joke on whom Manik loves more .. Such a cute moment .. MaNan were magic as usual .. So beautiful,
Romantic and magical .. Felt bad when nandini cried coz she wanted to see her love .. Manik's dream was scary ..
This update was so emotional .. Nandini asking Manik to prove his love by letting her go .. How are MaNna going to survive this ? I had goosebumps reading the update .. Hats off to you .. So nicely penned down.. Waiting to see how the story progresses from here on..
Sorry for such late reply.. Was little busy..