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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#881

Superb update
Y did those ppl tell her abt manik's reality
Nandu broken ;( ;(
Manik is letting her go to prove his love
That's not done
Too emotional
Thnkz 4 the pm

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#882

awesome update dear
very heart touching n painful
poor manik felt bad for him
i hope nothing happens to manik
n manan dont separate them yar 😒
thanks for pm 🤗

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01asdfg

@01asdfg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#883

Awesome update
Fabulously written
Loved it
I hope manik get a chance to explain
Waiting for next
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Prabhleen Arora

@7APK

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#884

Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😊

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Avneet kaur

@avneetkaur28

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#885

Sorry...

Kaan Pakad k sorry...

I am sorry ki m not able to cmnt on every update...

But now I'll b regular...

Pkka se...

N d update...

Ohh god...

M seriously crying...

Soo emotional...

Nandini got to know d truth...

N she wants manik to prove his love...

She wants him to let her go...

N manik is ready to do so... To prove his love...

N is broken...

Both will not b able live without each other...

Don't know what exactly is gonna happen...

N d end...

D darkness in maniks eyes n in his life too...

Hope everything gets well soon...

Stay happy...

Stay blessed...

Keep smiling...

Keep writing...

Continue soon...

AVNEET... (AVI...)

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mananluvpani

@mananluvpani

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#886

Awesome n emotional part...
Nandu ne manik KO ek chance dena chahiye explain krneka...
Waiting for the next part...

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#887

Fabulous update

manik begged nandini

emotional one

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syami

@syami

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#888

awww it was so so good
u jotted so beautifully!!!

the truth reveled
and it broke hearts
it was emotional one
made me cry
each and every word
are so beautifully
portrait ed

can visualize each things
both are equally hurt
both can't stay away from each other
but y ???? y???
such steps
can't wait for next part
update soon of possible
Tc
xozo

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iqra286

@iqra286

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#889

Awww mawara😭😭 yr dt was hell emotional😭 u cant seperate these two lovers yr😭😭 feeling really like hell😭 how she can say dt to let her go😭😭 aww cant c dm in pain😭plzzz update soon😭

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Garima

@Luving_Gari

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#890

Originally posted by: _Samthanian_
Resss...
Maine abhi tak last wala chappy bhi ni padha
UnRes...
Diduuu...
Sholly...Main late ho gyiii...
But Monday ko mera Xam hai...
So was busy with preperations...
Upar se my home has became Dharamshaala these days...
Koi na koii guest aa hi jaata hai...
So esiliyeee late ho gyiii...

Chalo now enough of my bak bak...
Lets come to the chapters...
Last chappy padhne ke baad mujhe samjh hi ni aa rha ki kya comment karu...
But as I have promised uh toh mujhe comment toh karna hi padegaaa...

Coming to Chapter 9...
It was...Ab kya bolu uske baare mei...
The way Manik handled Nandini...
N he made her understand About Rishab's dream was so cute...
N then Manik being with Nandu 24/7 juat like a shadow or shud i say her eyes...
N then the whole Cabir thinggg...
It was somewhat interestinggg...
Coz i luv these fights n all...
N then Manik's dream...
It wass sacchi mei horrible...
Horrible se mujhe apni kal waali dream yaad aa gyiii...
It was no less...
N then MaNan are always a treat...
N their romance bhi cute hi hogaaa...
Sholly i didn't read that part...
Coz Jab maine first time aisa kuch content read kia tha toh gave me shivers...
So uske baad se I never read such content...
Really sorry for that...
N aakhiri mei jab Nanduuu pleaded him for her eyes...
Sacchi mei it got too much emotional...

Now coming to the nexttt chappy...
Ufff...MaNan's morning was so peaceful...
But who knew after somedays it will become a disaster...
He wanted to tell her about his real identity...
But...Alas... He wanted to gain courage for it first...
Kassh uss time Manik ne Nandu ko bata dia hotaa...
Maybe woh samjh jaati...
I know how it feels when uh got to know something aboutt uh from the third person...
Aiyooo...Nandu was missing him so mchhh...
N finally...Like finally...
Nandu got to know the truth...
His Truth...
Pata nahi aur kitn bear karegi that little soul...
Vaise hi kya uski life mei probs kab thi...
I pityyy Aryamann...
Ek chooti si mistake ki wajase usse kitna sehna pada...
She thoughttt His Manik was Righttt...
He was her herooo...
N those goons were wronggg...
Buttt...The truth was out...
He was no more her Hero...
She was no more her Shimmer...
N she lefttt him...forevaaa...
Will this storyyy end here???
I guess not...
Abhi toh inke pyaar ka imtehaan hao...
I guess kuch time mei sab theek ho jayege...
N ofcouse I trust uh didu...
I know uh wont backstab us...
Continueee soon...
Thnkewww for the PM...
ohkyy...
Babyeee...
Tata...
Cyaaa...
Stay blessed...
Take care...

Luv uh,
Gariii...

PS - Hope the length of my comment vanishes all ur gussa for me...

PSS- Yey...Its my longest commemt in IF till yet...

Edited by _Samthanian_ - 9 years ago

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