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Posted: 9 years ago
I luvvdd d ring walaaa partt

Awessmmeee

Amazziinngg ch

Paraglidinnn

Amaszziinngg

N den nyt club

One heck of a day

Rishu ko trip pe bhj diyaaa

Woowww

Manik bdaaayyy
Bt wo sohaaa ne krna hi hta h kuch hmeshaaa

Jerkk


Nd finllyy they r onee

Soo lovellyyy

Amznngg

Awesmeee :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is seriously amazing mawara di!
I should sayyy aap se accha koi nai! Saccchii mein👍🏼
U always manage to blow me away!
This was soo damnn beautiful!
I am in love with the wholee❤️

My favourite was the ring scene!
Pataa nahi why i loved it to the core!
Nandiniii realising it before even touching it! Woah!

Firework!
That is supposed to be my favourite!
And now i will have greater memories with that song!

That paragliding wala scene!
Gawwwddd! Manikk is so cutee!
And so is nandini! She is soo innocent!

Manik ka bday bash!
Why is soha even invited?
Kisne invite kiyaa usse? She is🤬!

Last part toh waah tha!
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What happens when nandini comes to know maniks reality?
Will realisation hit her? Will she be broken?
Will she be able to accept that reality?
These questions are really eating me up!

Continue soon!
Will be waiting!

Lots of love
Zara😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update will wait for next update n thanks for pm🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear... sorry for late sweetheart... awsm awsm updates...rishab's pov well written... ...manan less part but I loved it... ... finally rishab agreed... mlove manik n rishab convo... So much was happening... And loved it how Manik was taking initiative to fulfil her wants her dreams... paragliding amazing...manik makes it all the more special... manik's bday... he introduced her as his girlfriend superb...ohh god this Soha poha yaha bhi... confession woww... romance to has to be the best as it was of manan... just mind blowing... loved it... ok now my favorite moment bohot badi list hai...the ring scene,paragliding, Manik backing of coz he doesn't want her to regret tomorrow morning... continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsme and suprb part

Nandu wants to fly like a bird with manik
Jab manik ne bataya she can fly

To nandu kitni happy th
Ek chotu se baby ki tarah excited ho rh th

Aww nandu ko ab darr rh ha fly karne se
Manik nandu ko kitna pyaar karta ha

Wow nandu kitni khush ha
She is flying like a free and happy bird

Manik usse khush dekh kar kitna khush ho rh ha
Wo nandu ki khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar skta ha

Nandu night club ni jana chahti

But manik usse le hi gy

Nandu kitna enjoy kar rh ha
Kitna khul kar dance jar rh ha

Nandu ni chahti manik jae
Rishab manik par kitna trust karta ha

Rishab is a swthrt

Nandu manik ki birthday party mai jana se ghabra rh ha
But manik chahta ha nandu ko lekar jana

Awww manik ne nandu ko mana liya

Manik ke frnds kitne ache ha
Cabir is so naughty

Oh god soha yaha par bhi aa gy
Manik ne kya jealous karwa soha ko 😆 😆

Chipkali manik se chipki ja rh ha
Manik ne kya mar usse sahi kiya


That bloody bitch kitna insult kiya usne na du ko

Finally manan confessed 👏

Manan romance is awsme

Nandu kitni happy ha apni mom ki ring le kar

My fav scene is confession

Waiting for the nxt part

Love u alot dii


Simran
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Posted: 9 years ago
UFFF !!!! HAYE !!!!!
Kya likhati ho Mawara .
Essa jadoo kardiya hai tumne ki tareef na kare honahi sakta..
Beautiful update .
So so so so so sooo lamba chappyy.
😳 ❤️

Dubara padha , phirse padha , aur ek baar phir padha... 👏

It's intoxicating story yaar..
U have spelled me with ur stories
And this one is just sooo hmmm !!!!!!!
U getting me , words have fallen short to praise.

Paragliding off course my fav scene
Awww !!!!! She was so scared, for obivious , but uske saath uska humsafar uska Manik tha na , usse sambhal ne ke leye.

How cute yaar 😆 Manik KESSE Nandu ko party main aane keleye mana raha tha ...

Wohoo !!!!! She knew he was staring her in that prom dress which she wore ...

Aagrrr !!!!! Yahan bhi Soha . 😡
Yeh Kabhi bhi Manik ka peecha chodegi ..
Manik should find out a permanent solution to get rid of that jerk once n for all ...
Mars par hi bhej do Soha ko waha uska hi raj chalega ... 😃

Hehe !!!! Manik was so embarass Nandu asking him to stay in front of RISHU ...😆
Nandu Manik ke saath rahete Khuch zyada hi bold hogaye hai.

Shots pe shots not bad haa...
Awww !!!!! Manik kitna control kar raha that, par Nandu toh aur bhi mani, ko instigate kar rahe thi...
He was scared he might hurt her, but she is a strong girl ...

Last part was very sensual, hot .
Too good.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!! Mawara u rckd it...👍🏼
Both updates read in a go...
Awesum n u nailed it...Lvd d update so much...
Thnks so much 4 d pm 4 last prt...

cuming 2 updates both were awesum...
6th prt really rckd..U presented d stry in a diff way..
Rishab's pov u penned well..Rishab s so shckd on manik's truth..
Rishu nandu talks ws so suprb...
Hahaha...😆😆 Rishu s shy on asking nandu abt manik...Hahaha
Lvd dat scenes so much..Rishu cme 2 understand abt nandu's feelings...
Rishu dnt wanna destroy nandu's happiness...
Rishu analysing manik's efforts 2 make nandu happy...
Dat was so awesum...Rishu made his decision wisely n maturely...
Rishu 4gv manik 4 his sister's happiness..Lvd it so much...
Rishu decided 2 gv manik a chance...Fantastic update dear.
Manik pov...Manik rishu convo was fabulous...
Manik opening up his past infront o rishu..He s begging 4 a chance..
Manik s vry much excited n happy on rishu's decision...Fantastic dear..
Hahaaha..😆😆😆Cabir paid double 2get bck nandu's ring...
Suprb..jeweller ko galliyn de rha tha..Hahaaha🤣🤣
Mindblowin update Mawara..Lvd it so much..👏👏👏


Cuming 2 second update...It was marvellous...
Such a long update...It made ma day dear mawara...😳
Almost full of manan scenes..U nailed it dear...👏👏👏
Manan talks was so cute..Promo wala prt..Nandu wanna fly in d wrld...
Manik fulfilling his bella's wish...Dat was suprb scene dear..
Paragliding..Manan on paragliding..Dat was extremely cute n nice prt..
Afraid nandu... Manik supporting nandu was so fantastic...
Lvd d way manik became d support system of nandu...
I lvd d scenes of paragliding d most...Nandu s njyin her fullest..
She s enjying forgettin d wrld...Without any fear she s flying...
Dat scenes was mindblowing..Carefree nandu ...Vidout any tension she s flying...
U penned well d scenes perfectly mawara...👏👏👏

WoW!!!Manan on night club..Suprb...Manan dancing crazily..
Suprb...Manik s giving nandu all happiness..Fantastic...
With manik..Nandu s becoming carefree,...Hahaha😆
Nandu dnt wanna manik 2 leave...Hahaha😆😆
Manik s shy on nandu's demand infrnt of rishu..Hahaha😆😆😆
Rishu trusts manik so much...Lvd manan scenes so much...
Awesum dear...👏
Manik introducing Nandu as his girlfriend 2 evryone on his brthday...
Nandu s nt comfortble on going infront of manik's friends bcz of bno sight..
Lvd way manik make her understand his importance in his lyf...
lvd d way manik introduced 2 evryone,...Lyk manik evry1 make nandu comfortble vd dem...
So awesum frnds...Manik s really hpy on having true frnds lyk dis...

OMG!!! Dat bitch Soha...Humesha manan ke lyf min aate he pblm create krne...😡😡
feeling 2 kill her..😡Lvd d way manik shut her mouth first...
Manik s so honest n sincere 2wrds nandu,...😛😛😛
Phir aagyi us chudail..😡😡😡Nandu ko insult kr di...😡😡
Manik had a tough task 2 manofy nandu..Agn her insecurities over powered her.
Manik confession...dat was spectacular...well done dear..
Nandu wanna manik 2 prove his love..Nandu calling him coward..
Finally manan consummation...So romantic...Manik s still nt ready on dat..
But nandu s adamant..She s afraid of losing manik...
Lvd d updates so much..It was fantastic..U penned well dear..
U r awesum writer mawara...Agn u proved it,...
Do continue dear..Waitin 4 nxt updte...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesomeee update loved it...

Rishab's pov was discribed properly...

Rishab n nandini bond was awesome...

Finally rishab agreed too give manik a second change...

Manik was sooo shy to say dat he loves nandini sooo cute..



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Posted: 9 years ago
Everything nandini felt while paragliding. ...was so much alive.. ..fun.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome superb mindblowinggg...
The update was really upto mark n i loved it...

Indeed it was a vryyy long update n u kept ur promise now our time too comment long one...

In dis update there r two fav part one in which manik proudly introduced her to his frnds n second how nandini provoked him to do that she actually got what she wanted...

Todays update was my fav..

Plzzz update nxt part soon...

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