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aishubangia

@aishubangia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#251

Aww... such a cutee update... well mera best ws of course paragliding... n jb rishabh trusted manik... seriously... luved it.. update soon

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rupmanan1

@rupmanan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#252

yes u r ryt no manan bt still its the best chaptr...

hahaha tu to joke bhi kr leti ho mawara ... what was that u r very evil ... haha i knw i knw you r 😛 cabir found the ring ohhh me bhi yhi chahti thi ki nandu ki ring use vapas mil jaye coz vo uski mum ki last memory hai ...

rishu is cute uska pov imp tha ...

oh m late next update 7 ka comment badme abhi pdha hi nhi

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Swagatika

@sws2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#253

My God the paragliding just took away my breath ❤️ ❤️

How beautifully u wrote, giving one more reason to go crazy about this story

Loved the way Manan became one. Both deserve so much love coz they have suffered a lot in their past.

Song choice was just awesome.

Fabbb update

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Vidhiarora1

@Vidhiarora1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#254

Wowww

Tys for such an amazing n long wala update yr

Beautifully penned nandu's feeling

My favorite scenes were
Manik nandu paragliding
Hayeee

N then after soha incident
Finally lyk finally manik confessed Yeahhh

N best part

No rishu at home
Sooo no disturbance at all
N thy finally bcame 2 bodies 1 soul

N fireworks is my one of favorite song

Love you sissy

Vidhi

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khushboo24

@khushboo24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#255

Paragliding and night club i like both of the scenes and whole update was awesome

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Sofiafarooq

@Sofiafarooq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#256

Amazing update.
Very hot rumantic sweet.
Nandu is blindly trusting manik.
I will wait when Nandu will get back her light of eyes.
Next part soon plz.

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nilisha-kunnu

@nilisha-kunnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#257

awesome...loved it...

their little moments...sweet talks...cute fights ...

paragliding and love making amazing yr...

soha poha...one slap wasn't enough fr hr...she needs some kicks on hr ass...

cont soon

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nilambariya99

@nilambariya99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#258

The night club scene was awesome...

I loved it when manik protects her ...❤️

plz come with next update soon dont take forever ...hahhahahah

just kidding...

continue soon...

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#259

woww.. wowww.. woww.. First of all thank u for keeping ur promise... Itni fast update .. thanku. I really like this story... Oh God if u asked me my favourite part. I really can't choose it.. Because for me whole update is mesmerizing n beautiful. . I just love whole update. it was so amazing n mindblowing. . . Wholee update is so beautifully described n very beautifully penned. . thanku for thiss... Paragliding scene was really really lovable. n dialogue was soo amazing. .. N manan r amazing. n ThaT soha na hmesha beech me aa jati h. huh.. accha hua manik slap her... wow. manan confessed. . ThaT too so so amazing. Finally they confessed their love. Last Part. was damm hot n romantic. I just love it. they r together. . wow.. m soo happie while reading this... Will wait for next update. . Stay blessed Take care keep smiling. ...