#2MaNanSS:The Mafia And His Shimmer LinkToThread3/5th-May

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neeharika__

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

it was all so beautiful n amazing

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ac2000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Paragliding scene and confession scene I liked most .Nandinis emotions while paragliding was beautifully shown 👏 and the confession ,the rain reminded of KYY rain confession 😊. Looking forward for next update.Stay blessed.

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Somya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

amazing update
loved the bond of rishu n manik
pls update soon ab aur wait nhi ho paye ga
fantastic...

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fireflies333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

First of all hats off for such a long update!!!!!👏U have portrayed each and every part sooo good!!!!most liked part is manik nandini conversation when they r lying in the grass...and also nandini moans 😳😳keep writing such an awesome story😊😳👏

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syami

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

awe loved it

fire work is my favorite song too
and paragliding
was awesome man

u penned it so beautifully
her dream was fulfilled
by her love
what will be more happiest thing than that??

awww manik is such a swthrt
he want to do everything possible for her
though it was her dream or
introducing her to his frnds

awww tat soha
have to iritate everytime
but it helped them to
come
and realize n confess love

it was so cool
tc

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VipriNM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

"Shim! If someday you will come to know what I am in real tou will you forgive me?" I asked softly and waited for her answer. "Bolo na baby!" I said raising a little to look at her and to my luck she was fast asleep. Maybe some other time. I pecked her hair and closed ny eyes.. I love you Nandini..
awesome
lovedit
update soon dear

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Aakifa Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

It ws a Dhamaka updt..
Totally loved it..!
My favourite line..- 'I will b ur eyes'..
touchd my heart Mao..
Not nly dis.. Evrytym Manik's feelings wenever he sees her sad bcuz of her inability..! + ur way of writng emotional things..
I love dat d most..!:)

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Aakifa Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Party wala part ws superb..
How his frnz made her comfortable.. N dint judgd her.. I lykd dat..!

Soha has to b a bitch, its her janam siddh adhikaar..
Bt she hs cum in a good way..
Unintentionally she alwys brings dem close :D
n Slap ws defntly needed..

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Aakifa Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Confession was Wow..!

Their love is so pure dat for him; her disability is not even worth consideration..!
hats off Mao to write sch a b'ful story..!

Haww..! Naughty Nandu..!
Romance was Superb..!

Thanx 4 sch a long n b'ful chaptr.!

Keep smiling..! :)