#2MaNanSS:The Mafia And His Shimmer LinkToThread3/5th-May

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manan_0711

@manan_0711

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Posted: 9 years ago

#291

Ty for d pm...

OMG dat was a beautiful update...

Loved d update to d core...

Loved manan moments to d core...

Manan moments were beautiful n blissful...

I really loved der flying moment...

Hehe cabira...

Plz continue soon...

ll' b waiting for d update...

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VshitsDISHOOM

@VshitsDISHOOM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#292

okay sorry I'm.late was busy 😊 ...
ammmaaazing update I loved it to the core...
the scene I.love the most is chotu sa scene ...
where he picked her up taking her home and she don't wana let him go ...nandu was so cute there and I love rishab in that scene leaving his sis and jiju ...and yeah I.loved rishab's pov and the thing I love the most in his pov was his warning to.manik that he better tell his sister soon about his work or gunda gardi 😃 and the "love making" scene errrmmm...you know na why am.I errrmiiing :-) ...

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LUCKYRICKLY

@LUCKYRICKLY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#293

Hey
Bahut dinoke baad bahut bady update 😊
Humm, mujhe Mandi, maanik ko baga rahi thina vus ki dream,
Kitny exaitedly bata rahi thi!!! O mujhe achha laga
Then dono milkar soha ko tang kar raha tha na 😆 😆 😆 , o bhi
Next last scene bhi, ring wala
Mujhe laga o propose kar. raha!!hai

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Sunshine2604

@Sunshine2604

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Posted: 9 years ago

#294

Very nice update.
I loved the part where manik takes nandini's for paragliding.
I completely loved the entire update.
I just can't wait to read the next part.

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Love_Queen

@Love_Queen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#295

Fantastic update dear

Really really loved it

Firstly d paragliding den night club scene were mind blowing

Aww nandu don't want him to go away from her so cute

Nd den d bday fun was awsum cavya want manik to propose nandu dats why dey arranged dis party but dat soha she just spoiled everything

But finally manik confessed dat he love her nd d bold nandu was treat to watch

Superb

Waiting for the next update
Update soon dear
Thanks for this long long chappy

Take care and God bless u