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Manya

@manya_189

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

This whole update was my favourite !!
So so good ^_^

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591994

@591994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Loved every bit of it...u really don't hve any idea...how much excited i was in the whole update fr the happenings...just loved it n ofcourse the confession scene was beautiful... N my favourite scene would obviously paragliding scene...it was so serene...she was so excited n she was at peace after that...just loved it to the core... Cont. Soon...

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Dhingli44

@Dhingli44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#243

Amazing di.
I loved the scene of confession.
I loved the paragliding scene.
It was so beautifully penned...I was feeling that euphoria.
❤️
Manan k life mein villains ki kami thodi hai 😆
Soha ko acha thappad pada 😛
Rishu finally understood and now is with Manik.
Nandini's reaction on getting back the ring 👏
Loved ittt..
😊

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Sandhya098

@Sandhya098

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Posted: 9 years ago

#244

Hello manwara 😊...first of all sorry for commenting late but my migraine problem increases last night because of which I wasn't able to read but I read it n it was beautiful, awesome, amazing, mind blowing, superb,passionate n hot... Awww manik loves nandu so much... Yipeee they confess...

Soha aahhh accha hua manik slapped her... All the abusive words to her...night club scene was superb... Rishab is such a cool brother... Last part ke baare mein kya bolo OMG super hot😳😳...

Nandu ne manik ko provoke kiya haha 😆...finally manik gives back nandu Mom ring n she was super happy...

OK time for now my favorite scene...

The paragliding superb no words to describe that scene...

N my favorite dialogues...

"what if I fall? I can't see... "

N manik said "I will be ur eyes! I won't let you fall Bella "...dil choo liya wah wah 👏👏...

N also "fly nandini ! fly without any fear! I am watching ur back honey " superbly penned...

N love when manik calls nandu with loves name so cute...

Aww nandu is so sweet, cute n adorable...

N manik is no less he loves her for the way nandu is... He never compares nandu to other girls that is so cute n love the protective n caring manik or sabse accha whenever nandu or anyone else call her blind then manik become so angry n he don't take any nonsense about nandu...

Manik ne kitne saare jhoot bol diye hai nandu se n he is feeling guilty about that...

Loving ur story...

Superb...

Thanks for this awesome update...

Love u loads...

Sandhya098

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iqra286

@iqra286

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Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Yr mawara loot lya pura k pura😃😛 paisa wasool update😳 loved it to d core yr😃 making crazy by ur story😉😃 really really loved childish nandini n d way she was flapping her hands was adorable😆😃 really loved manik gesture of fullfilling her wish of flying😃😊 really loved d n8 club to😃😛 really loved their smooches really loved d way manik friends excepted her n bira😆😃 always no 1😳 really loved manik making soha d bitch jelous😆😃 n she deserve more dn one slap bloody rotten egg😡😡😡 grrr really loved d way nandu instgated him😆😃 n dy made love😳 plzz update soon janu

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payal94

@payal94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#246

Beautiful update

I loved it paragliding scene was nice

Manik confession was nice

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palak99

@palak99

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#247

thanks for the long and awesome update yaar

i also want to fly like a bird

i just loved the story

the confession is nice

continue soon

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nubula

@nubula

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Posted: 9 years ago

#248

first of all thank you sooo much for keeping your promise.

you are just amazing.love you very much.

about update i don't have any word to describe this wonderful and mind blowing update.it was just fabulous.liked every bit of it.and my favorite part was also paragliding and the best and my favorite dialogue was when nandini said"what if i fall.i can't see...then manik said"i will be your eyes and i won't let you fall".

i just can't express how much i liked this dialogue.and the confession part was also nice.liked the way manik confessed his love.and that bloody soha always manan ke bech aajati hai.i really felt so happy when manik slapped that soha.

and the last part was super hooottt.nandu challenged manik.not bad...hmmm.

really enjoyed the update.now waiting for next update.

update soon.

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rimi

@elsaanna

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#249

wonderful.

magical..

mesmerizing...

Hot..

mind blowing

kya bolu...

my favorite part was,after the night club,jab manik nandu ko ghar drop karke wapas jana wala tha and nandu said don't leave woh bhi rishu ki samne...thts cute...pata nei kyu i loved it..

loved it..every words,every situation..

paragliding part was awwwesome..

birdy nandu..cute..

i loved their POV all the time...

b*** soha..kamini kahiki...

sudden confessed...

and then ..wow..😳

I'm scared for manik...uske past and secret present...

anyway,thanks for keeping your promise maw..

for the beautiful update...

God bless you...