#3 KHAMOSHIYAAN (Part:21A&B pg-12)(misunderstanding)1april - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Shocking promo dear...who aavwd nandu... Will be waiting fr update... Cont. Soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Thanks for promo
It seems really shocking
Let's see who saved her
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
KHAMOSHIYAAN


Part : 21A


Misunderstanding


"Manik.. "Nandini said when they were going somewhere from car n he is driving the car


"Hmm..."Manik just hmmed


"Plz.. abhi kisko humhri secret shaddhi ke bare mein mt btana mein janti sb bhut khush honge.. lekin mom dad uhai khi jada dil tutega. Vaise be i hide many thing from them"nandini said feeling guilty to hide the truth from them


"Relax.. mein kisko kuch nhi btaunga.. "manik said n say nothing more as he don't give her more tension


The reach at their destination it is old ware house manik called every one here as he wanna tell truth n something about guru truth from which nandini is also unknown


They come out of the car n nandini said "manik.. mujhe bhut dr lg rha hai.. mom dad pta nhi kaise.. react karenge.. after knowing the truth


"Jaan.. tum kitni tension leti dekho kon hua tumhse naraj sach jane ke badh mein hua yeh fir mukti hoe . Nandini ab sb thik we r together na.."manik said cubbing her face n peck her forehead


"Plz.. ab tum dono yha pr bhi mt shuru ho jana.."mukti said clearing her throat as the scene she witnesses in home she get licence to tease them on behave of it


Nandini after listening her face become like tomato n she ran inside


"Thank.. u mukti"manik said mukti looked at him confusingly


"For making her smile in whole way she remain stressed n i tried to realised her tension but tumhri ek bt se.. "manik said n mukti laugh


"I hope ab tumhe smj mein agya wht u have to do.."mukti said n manik nodded


"Vaise.. u r lucky to get her she can do anything for u.. "mukti said now seriously


"I know.. "manik said n lost in her thought


"Aur mein abhi janti jitne tum lucky uthne hi voh lucky to have u.. tum kabhi uska sth nhi chodhoge.. itne toh mein jan hi gye.. hn"mukti said n than they both get inside the warehouse which having full security


When they enter all were waiting for manik setting on couch alia cabir manik n nandini's mom dad n navya manik looks nandini n smiles n mukti eyes were only finding cabir


"Manik.. yeh sb kya hai.. tumhne hum sb ko issi jagha kyo bulaya hai"neyonika asked worriedly coming toward manik


"Haan manik.. bt kya hai.."cabid asked n mukti is just n looking at him n cabir also looked at her but looked away


"Mom dad uncle aunty ab jo mein aap so btane wala uske kiye u all have to promise one think u all don't get hyper "manik said n all become more worried


"Beta bt kya hai.. u r making us more worry"Mr.Mahlotra said


"Voh.. jo kl engagement hoe that was fake "manik said this all looked at him with shocked expression


Than manik tell everything how nandini met with guru n he blackmailed her to marry mukti n about that also that he love nandini but he didn't tell about their secret marriage becoz of nandini after listeing this cabir got relaxed but shocked also after knowing reason of nandini silence


"Aur.. jo kuch guru ne apne bare mein nandini ko btaya voh sb glt hai uska toh ek criminal record tk nhi hai toh voh itna gangster kaise ho skta.. hai.. kehr voh ab tk itne kuch kr chuka hai toh i have planned something jb tk voh nhi milta we all have to live in my goa farm house we can live safely there as there is full security "manik said last line there was silent for sometime


Than nandini's parent looked at nandini by seeing this manik said"Uncle aunty nandini ko yeh sb chupna padha becoz voh majbor thi ismein uski koe glti nhi hai.."


"Manik tumhne humhai kuch smjne ki zarrorat nhi hai mujhe pta hai apni beti ke bare mein.. uske jinta bhi kuch ho voh kabhi kiske sth share nhi karegi taki kisi ko tension na ho.."Mrs. Murthy said n nandini having tear in her eyes after listening this


"I m sorry mom dad.."nandini said crying coming toward both of them


"Nandini u don't need to be sorry.. becha.."Both her parent hug her together n mrs. MURTHY SAID


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After sometime manik explain his whole plan to them n they talked

"Navya kha kekr ja rhi ho mujhe.."nandini said as navya dragging nandini takes her at corner


"Mujhe tumhe kuch btana hai"navya said with excitement

"Acha.. relax.. bolo.."nandini asked her controlling her


"I love cabir.."navya said n nandini looked at him shockingly


"Kya.. mtlb.. kb kha kaise"nandini asked confusingly


"Hum ek adventure trip mile thai.. haye mein isse kb se dundh rhi thi.. aur yeh manik ka bhai hai "navya said


"Yeh.. tum kya bol rhi ho cabir kya voh bhi.."nandini said n navya cutted her said "vohe toh jana hai kya tum ushai bt karo na.. mere liye "


"Mein... kaise.."nandini said navya pleaded she agreed


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"Cabir.. today i Will express my every felling "mukti thinks looking toward cabir who is busy talking to manik


"Manik.. Tune humhai phle kyo nhi btya.. u know kitna stress thai hum tere liye"Cabir said


"Haan bhai.."Alia said


"Cabir.. Alia nandini bhut dari hoe thi.."manik said n they both looked toward nandini


"Chlo finally yeh toh pta lga she loves u.. tere 10 saal ka intzar.. waste nhi gya "cabir said putting hand on manik's shoulder


"Cabir mujhe tumhse kuch bt krni hai"nandini said coming b/w them manik looked at him she give him smile


"Haan bolo.."cabir said


"Yha nhi akele mein.."she said


"Nandini kya hua sb thik hai.. na.."manik asked worriedly


"Manik.. sb thik hai bs mujhe kuch bt krni hai cabir se.."nandini said n than cabir goes wid nandini


"Nandini.. seriously tumhne hum logo bhut preshn kr diya tha.. uske liye pay toh krna padhega"cabir said when they were going toward room


"I m sorry.. "Nandini apologised


"Hey relax mein toh mask kr rha tha.. i understand u forced to that.. acha leave bolu tumhae kya bt karni thi"cabir asked


"Kya tumhai kabhi pyaar hua hai"nandini said taking a breath n cabir become shocked of her question


"Why nandini is asking me like this khi isse pta toh nhi that i loved mukti"cabir thinks in his mind


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"Yeh.. cabir abhi toh yhi tha kha gya.. "mukti thinks in her mind n get up to find him


"Aaj.. toh meine cabir ko apne man ki bta hi dungi.."mukti thinks


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Part : 21B

"Nandini how do u.. know"cabir asked confusingly


"Iska mtlb u love her"nandini asked her


"Hmm.. i love her i love yr sister"cabir said shyly looking down thinking that nandini is talking about mukti


"Really tum ush pagal se pyaar hai"nandini said laughingly


"Nandini don't say like that"cabir said as he felt bad that nandini called her mad


"Are mein masak kr rhi thi.."she said


"Wait mein ushai adhr bhejti hn all the best.."she said before going


"Navya he also love u.."nandin said to navya


."Really tum apri ek achi dhost ho.. thank.."navya said jumping on her happily n hug her


"Relax.. navya voh adhr tumhra wait kr rhai hai.. ab jldi jao.."she said n navya go inside n she also left from there


"Yeh nandin yha room ke bhr kya kr rhi thi.. khi inka romance fir toh.. shuru nhi hogya let me check"she said n go toward the room


When navya enter into the room cabir is standing at his backside n navya happily hug him about say something but when he listen his voice


"Pta nhi kb kaise.. but hogya.. seriously i never think that love mein aisi feeling hi hoti hai.. manik bhut pyaar ki bate krta tha but i never believed that but believe krta hn becoz now i love u.. i really love.. u"cabir said as he thinking that she is mukti


And the whole seen is witnessed by mukti and she take everything as wrong she left from there in shock without listening their whole conversation she feeling so hurt feeling like betrayed


"I love.. u.. too.. cabir.. "navya said happily n after listening her voice he immidaitly comes to know that she is not mukti so he removing his turns


"Navya.. tum.. "cabir said shockingly looking toward her


"Haan.. toh.. cabir seriously i m so happy.. tumhai pta nhi.."navya saying happily but cabir cutted her


"Wait.. wait.. navya there is misunderstanding i don't love i love mukti"he said n navya happiness flew away n her face become pale


"I m sorry.. but i love only mukti"he by saying this left from there


"Cabir doesn't love me.. he loves mukti i hate mukti ushe humsha se dushro ki khushiya chini ati hai.."navya thinks as from starting hate her becoz he always made nandini crys


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All left from there as they have to leave for goa at night when nandini was doing packing her phone rings n a smile came on her face after seeing the caller id as it was of manik


"So meri jaan.. kya kr rhi hai"manik asked lovingly


"Packing aur tumhne phone kyo kiya"nandini asked


"I missing u.."manik said n nandini smiles


"I m coming to pick up u all.."manik said

"Manik it's okay hum ajaege"nandini said

"I said na.. so i m coming.."manik said stubbornly n nandini agreed


"Manik.. ek bt puchu hum aise dr bhagh kr thik kr rhai hai"nandini asked


"No.. we r not running we only saving all life as we don't wht he want n wht he will do next n nandini voh bhut jld humhre hth mein hoga don't worry.. we together nthng will happened"he explained her everything


"Manik u know u r tension reliefer.. i love.. u.."she said lovingly as she feel so great to have him


"I love my jaan more.."he said n both smiles

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On the other hand mukti is packing her bag n the today scene again n again revolving in her mind n tear unknowingly falling from her eyes as it's hurting her badly as she thinking the Person she loves that person loved someone else n same condition wid navya

"Mukti packing hogye.. manik is coming to picking us.."nandini said entering in room n mukti immidaitly wipes her tear


"Bs kr hi rhi.. hn.."mukti said without looking at her


"Mukti looked at me.. kya sb thik hai"nandini said holding her face asked as she feels something fishy


"Mujhe kya hona hai angel i m f9 vaise tumhra ashqui full on fida hai tum pr hai tumhai ek sec. Bhi akela nhi chodhta tha hum flight mein ek sth hi jaoge.."mukti said to divert her mind n she blush after listening her


"Mukti.. "nandini said playfully hitting her shoulder n mukti sign relief that she further asked anything n start laughing to act normally n nandini also start laughing


Sometime we have hide her sadness infornt of her smile becoz we don't wan't bother our love ones here mukti having same situation n now she comes to know why nandini done this why she didn't tell the truth to anyone



Likh liya half part again omg part kyo delete ho jate hai sorry for late of my mistake

So.. here is next part i know less manan but meri ek yhi story hai jishme manan kam dikte hai aur baki meri sari story mein manan hi hote hai bs.. hope u like the part n guyz.. plz
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Love Mehak
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Posted: 9 years ago
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why so much confusion??????/


navya likes kabeer
kabeer loves mukti

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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Lovely update
So now everyone knows that the engagement was fake😃
Oh no Mukti misunderstood the situation
Now Navya is going 2 hate her more
Hope soon this clears soon😃
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
nice update...
after reading the part's name i thought that the misunderstanding will b2in manan,,,bt thanks to god that is not the true...
sad fr mukti n navya...hope this misunderstanding will solve soon...
tysm fr the pm...waiting fr the next part...now i think the person who will save nandini it will be mukti aur navya...not sure,,just guessing...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Awesome update
Loved it
Clear the misunderstanding
Between mukti and
Cabir plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Wow awesome update...
So misunderstanding happened...
Jst hope mukbir will clear it all..
Manan were soo caring..
Just hope navya won't do anything stupid...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...
Will be waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Awesome update
But so sad for mukti and Cabir
And even Navya is misunderstanding Mukti
Hoping they sort their problems
And thank god Manan told the truth
Beautifully writtrn
Thanks for the pm dear
Continue soon..
Take care😃

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