#7//The Ex's At War//Ch21-Pg116 n NOTE-Pg144 n LINK FOR THREAD on PG-1

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#1061

Hi,

The update was really nice, infact the edited version was better 😊... so finally the air was cleared and they are together. I quite enjoyed the teasing session by Manik specially when he talks about Rewa... I was giggling all the time...

Thanks a lot for all the stories. If you remember i had sent you a message writing about how much i liked the Impulsive Soulmates. I think it will always be my favourite story here on forum coz that was the 1st one i had read on forum. I would again take the opportunity to say that you are an amazing writer and i hope you keep writing ahead always.

Thanks for the PM.

Take care.

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Atharsha

@atharsha

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1062

Sujal Y did you edit it the previous one was very good😭😭😭😭 i liked the first one.

Coming to the update first i liked the reunion of manan coz it was perfect according to the time it was not too early nor too lagging. was missing manini anyway the chapter it self was ex's make love which was perfect as always. In future updates i want manans family🤣🤣🤣🤣 time like manik nandini and our own manini. I m not saying that before there was nothing like that, its just that i felt like it would more fruitful with these three alone.

Loved the chapter to the core👏👏👏👏. Manini wala big kisshey and huggie🤗🤗🤗 to you for giving the lovely update. The more i learn the chpters the more i m falling in love with your story just loving it to the core.

Keep updating. want a promo for the next part pleashhh😆😆😆😆😆

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Starwillshine

@Starwillshine

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1063

Reunion of manan is always amazing. I lyk both post. Thanx for this post. Hopefully they r together now. In next want to see manan n manini scene. M missing kaddu baby. So plzz update soon with bang.

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nita24

@nita24

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1064

Thanks for this
Awesome and lovely
Continue soon
Tc

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1065

wow so hot and awesome update completely enjoyed reading
fabulously written loved the fact that finally manan r together
plz dont separate them now
thanks for pm 🤗

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1066

love the manani baby cute moment part thanks for writing that too 🤗

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LUCKYRICKLY

@LUCKYRICKLY

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#1067

so!! aap such mai saari comments padte he ,,nice

baat eh he ki last post bhi achi he,, kuch emotions mis huwa bus

aap every emotion bahut achi se describe karte ho,,

romance,ya, fight, scene koi bhi ho, beeh mai kuch words use kartha hai, ki hum ko thodi smile aate hai, o miss ki last part mai

6 months mai ek doosereki akela pan,, pass honeka chahat,, o sub is part mai bahut achese describe kiya aap ne

make out scene koi bhi lik sakta heji,, o padneke wakth body mai kuch hoja hai ( mai itny besharmi kab huyi hu ,,chi),,

but is mai DIL ko kuch ho gaya,, mai is keliye aap ko kaha, level vagairaa sorry ji

is part mai saari emotions hai ,,kuch high nai kuch low nai,, ab mai kush hu

saari emotions ki perfect mixture hai ye , bahut achi he

mere kona aapki writing skill bahut acha lakta hai so please keep writing😃

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monstermanik

@monstermanik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1068

wow...awesome update..
loved it a lott...

finally nandini vent out her frustration ...
manik came to know abt d misunderstanding abt rewa...

chiggy wiggy was beautifully penned down...

cont soon

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aarvi-manan

@aarvi-manan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1069

that is really awesome...or pehle wala b bahot acha tha...both r wonderfull... manan cleared their miss-understanding...thats all...

n manik's heeling therapy 😆 just waooo...nice dear...

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Farhin Lamisa

@FarhinLamisa

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1070

Commenting for the second time..Bada wala..ek hath de Ek hath le..lol 😆

I toh liked the chapter's name a lot..he he...cho romantic!

I think Nandu should join the kusti club or something ..ba ba ..she literally managed to turn her 6'2 monster husband down. But that fight was indeed needed.. Emneo Manik the bolod er ektu mar khaoa uchit chilo..shoptahe at least ak din mar khaoa shasther jonno valo. That too from ur wife..lul..

But I also have a lot of valobasha for Manik. Though he is kinda modon n idiot type..but at the same time he is GOALS...amr kobe or moto akta boyfie hobe..? Cry

Hehe..Lol..kidding. So just realize api,ur writing is so good I mean u potray Manik's character so beautifully that even done unintentionally u make all the singles out there feel miserable that they don't have a Manik in life who will love them unconditionally r free bou er Mair o khabe..As example me..Lol..🤣(i mean that single thing)

Life e akta Manik thakle r ki lage ?! Obossho amr life e thkle Kobe je mere mure chele ta k bhorta banai feltam.

Only Nandu can handle her monster..

I lub these impulsive idiots so fooking much! Finally they r like together. Mishti bilano uchit amader khushi te..and thanks to u a lot j tmr finally amdr upor rohom korar iccha holo..

Anyway jokes apart,the whole update was beyond amazing n beautiful. The healing session was so bissful n hot ..hehe..Cool..amr toh mone hoi ei chapter 20 bar er upor pora shesh.

Abr pore jokhon edit korla..ahahahaha.

Sone pe suhaga...bhala ho unlogo ka jisne bhi kaha ki thora rushed hogaya healing session.. Cz we got to read more..Yay!

Anyway the main thing is...they are together! Er thke valo r ki hote pare .

N the best thing is they sorted out all their silly misunderstandinds..

Thanks a lot api for this chappy! All the love for u..