#7//The Ex's At War//Ch21-Pg116 n NOTE-Pg144 n LINK FOR THREAD on PG-1 - Page 106

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Posted: 9 years ago
So finally the both the idiots egotistic husband n wife have taken out whatever they were keeping in their hearts locked n discuss about had a fight about it n accused each other about it n then finally came back to each other for healing each which they can only do for each no one else so finally egotistic couple is back as manan two body one soul n also with their save daughter now please let them be back together n fight their problems together without parting their way⭐️
Edited by devilkhushi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
read edited part
its awesome too
i loved it

i liked that kangaroo branded giraffe 🤣 😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
This update is Truely the best updates of yours. So nicely they let out all their insecurities, vulnerabilities, all hurt , all pain .Seriously u have captured every aspect of it. Thank you for going into minutest of minutest detail n covering ever aspect. Truely you made me cry,feel happy at the same moment with your words which Truely touched my heart. I can't even express through words that how happy I am feeling now after knowing that finally love is back in manan life. Although its fiction but your description of them makes these characters Alive n you have made them part of pur life through your awesome writing. We eagerly wait every weekend for your update. Also thank you for detailing again the same update thanks for the additions that really added some more value to those emotions.

You had asked for suggestions on dark ff. I would say I would love to see you venturing into that area also n would love to how you amaze us in that area through your writing. Sorry late reply on this aspect.
Thank you once again for putting in solo much of efforts in bringing to us so beautiful ffs.
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi lovely lovely update that's true love heels and the way you narrate your story brigs happiness and love in aur life because I love reading your stories if you ever decide to write a book that would be great can't wait for next update take care keep smiling and god bless you 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg di!! U r such a sweetheart 😊 U actually posted the edited healing session again!! Thanks a ton! Love u, n I loved it.
Not that onek kichu different chilo, but the small additions, the small details made all the difference. This one's flow definitely felt more real.
"Pls nandu...never push me away from u" I was so looking for a line like this in the previous one. Because Manik also needed to say sth, though he was at fault but he was equally hurt with everything, n he too needed some sort of assurance.
Thank u again di 😃

Keep writing, keep rocking.
Stay blessed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hats off to u Sumana!!Words are just not suffice to tell how awesome this chappy was...Ur r definitely 1 of the fine writers & this is the bestest update. It was filled with everything... mixture of all emotions from drama to fight to being crazy to fn to romance everything was perfect. Manik, Nandini & Manini are not just mere characters but u have put life in them.This was the most awaited chappy & u have ppenned down to more than r expectations... The way Nandu pours allher heartout to Manik her pain, her frustrations,insecurities, loneliness &also being wild & insane but at last giving into him & surrendering & pouring all her love to him was more than beautiful. Manik, the way he handles her, every woman in dis world wouldwish to have man like him, the warmth, the care, the love he showers on her iis never enough & the way he says nandu don't push me away will melt any1s heart...
Finally thse impulsive heads rest their fight & make love...OMG!!I really wonder how Manik was resisting his most adorable & cutest Nandu for so many months... No doubt Manini inherits all her innocence & cuteness from her mommy...Finally the soulmates are at peace & so I am.
The most hilarious part was Nandu calling Rewa vixen & kangaroo branded giraffe.
Lastly thanks a lot for putting so much efforts & reupdating the healing session part for us...
Will be eagerly waiting for the weekend so that we can have ur nxt update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
where is your thread # 8 😛😛😛
i wanna comment there please...

its time honey😳

ispe ek bar hogya naa 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
where is your thread # 8 ? 😛😛😛


i wanna comment there please...😊

its time honey 😳

ispe ek bar hogya naa 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic yayyy finally Manan were together n yes they're back. I can't explain how I'm feeling right now after reading this update thankkk youuu so mch
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb dear loved it...
Will be waiting fr next...
Cont. Soon...

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