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Originally posted by: aditimanan

Hii
Thnx for pm
Updates were damn good
Finally manan r coming close
Vry funny updates woth lots of masti


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Chapter 18 A (HOARSE RIDING)

Wait wait wait wait suddenly nandini shout and manikk jump on his place whattt!! He ask ...I wanna ride alone she said crossing her arm with attitude...than manikk said with smirk kyo mere sath baithegi toh CONTROL ni hoga kya he wink and nandini's jaw drop after hearing "the rocking reply " and manikk burst into laughter😆...he peck her nose tip u r the cutest he smile...she lower her face to hide her blush aam I kno she said trying hard not to blush and he chuckle...

Nandini pov.

So am going mr. prince see u later.i said to him who is smiling like idiot don't kno why..than i climb ohh sorry sorry tried to climb on hoarse bloody heckk handsome(she call hoarse handsome') tumhe itna lambu kisne banne bola tha huhhh I murmur to myself don't know why mujhe aise situation se kyo guzaarna padta hai ...suddenly I felt two hands wrapping around my waist and I m no more on my feet ...aarghh again this butterflies in stomach stop otherwise I'll cut ur wing... and now am sitting on this handsom's back...agar kisi ko embarras hone k claases chahiye plzz contact nandini murthy🤢..

Waise nandini tumhe hoarse riding aati hai I wish I could remove the smirk on his face waise he is right tujhe hoarse riding aati hai??? Aa afcorse afcorse aati hai koi shak he nod in no nahh no shak go go plzz carry on and he move aside..

Come on nandini u can do it I lightly tap hoarse back with my leg and he starts walking ohh I mean running aaa I shout in horror shittt ...handsom slow down ohh no manikkk I shout manikk ...

Suddenly I heard sound of hoarse I look back and there he was god why he always have to look this hot?? like a prince just like my dream one ...his hairs are flowing on air ...aaa I lost my balance and was about to fall but he held my wiast and pulled me toward him and I shift to his hoarse facing him wrapping my hands around his neck ...his cold hands touched my bare waist gosh it felt so good to be held by him ..i clutch his shoulder unable to contol my alredy tingling sensation .. our faces were so close that we can feel eachother's breath wowww what a feeling god manikkk dont look at me like this.. gosh his intent look makes my stomach flutter...

Manikk pov

i ran my fingers on her hot bare waist umm I think my fingers are cold.. her warm breath fanned over my face making me want to lean in more..ohh I wish this time can stop here...tingels run through my nerves ohh this is somrthing new ..ohh how I love when she is that closeee to me...

I wrapped my one hand around her bare waist and another holding the rope...she smell so good I feel like drowning in her silky hair,,suddenly she hug me tightly that I chocked a little ohh manikk thank god u came aww my baby got scared I hug her back and rub her back to say everything is fine...She broke the hug and kiss my cheek tightly and I felt that warm flutter in my tummy she smile and I also smile still in the hangover of the kiss" idiot" ...

I stop the hoarse soo my deary deary deary tweety tumhe hoarse riding toh aati thi na I ask with smirk..she flashes her teeth in sheepish smile aww my cutie I set her hairs and turn her ..now her back is facing me ...

Toh maine tujhe jaise bola tha waise hi chlaenge like and I completed like takbak takbak... yeah right she said and we burst in laughter whatever yaar she is my best best frind first than after something*blush*

No one pov

It is foggy and beautifull morning making the atmosphere more cozy and mesmerizing..theree was silence all over only the sound of giggle and cute talks of two JUST FRIENDS COUPLE ...they both were teasing eachother talking nothing jst stupid and cute things and their face is only reflecting one thing happiness and love ..

They stop near a lake watching the mesmerizing view of sun rise with smile in their face which is reaching to their eyes...they are still sitting on hoarse manikk slowly wrapped his both hand around her waist and nandini lean back resting her head in his chest feeling peace in eachother's arm...


Manikk she said slowly he hmm lost in her hair fragrance manikk she said little loud and he came back to earth aa ha yeah what?? He ask she smile nothing I think we should leave now she said what itne jaldi he said making cute pout she laugh and ruflle his hair to which he cutely huff ...oyy mr prince only two days left and ab tak maine shopping bhi ni and u kno abhi bhi kitne jagah jaana hai do u even kno and u r saying ki ni yhi rukte hai how could u manikk she cutely scold him smile he was lost in her she shook him by hiss shoulder and he came back to earth she lightly smack his head and smile and he also smile sheepishly...😳

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Chapter 18 B (shopping and beach mastii)

Nandini look this one the evergreen shopping freak alya said jumping like a unicorn just like her shopping partner nandini who is is verge on shopping whole store...ohh wooww alya this is looking fab take it...she said and their lovely friends who are standing and some sitting on couch holding their head and cursing the person who made SHOPPING word and holding a bucks of cloth in their hand...🤢😆

Navya said holding her head aaaghhh I hate shopping this word irk me soo muchhh ...mukti fake cried meri footi kismet dekho meri behen and meri bff dono hi shooping freak hai aagh plzz koi mujhe mental asylum le chalo..

Abhi sat beside mukti and keeps his head on her shoulder ohhh baby plzz take me also with u mukti patt his cheek and give him look I -m -with - u - baby🤢

Seeing this navya shook her head and murmur hey bhagwan ji aapne bhi na chun chun k mujhe friends diye hai she fake cried..😭 dhruv said getting hell annoyed or in dono ko toh dekho(manikk and cabir) ek apne liye kacche kharid rha hai or dusra shopping aise enjoy karrha hai ki kali ski shaadi hai..kamineyy ..

Kya baat hai dhruv life m first time tune saahi baat boli navya patted his back and dhruv brightly smile and raised his coller thank u thank u he said and navya murmur idiot...

Or mukti tumm ..but she stop ye mukti kha gyi navya ask and dhruv said navya abhi dikhrha hai kya she nodded in no toh mukti kha se dikhegi she gave him sheepish smile and he shook his head..(crazyy siblings)

On the other side cabir is selecting shorts ..

This is polka dot shorts sir take this this will suit u the shopkeeper said to cabir in flirt tone amd cabir maintain a distance with him aahmm I tthink this will suit u more hee said and the shopkeeper blush while cabir tried to hide his laugh...waise I want spongbob shorts that one cabir said ..

Ohh that one u have awsm choice sir the shopkeeper said licking his lips and that's it cabir burst in laughter . manikk came from behind and wrapped his hand around cabir or bhai kya le rha hai ..cabir plainly answer bhai kacche le rha hu lega kyaaa.... And manikk smack his head than he notice that the shopkeeper is checking him out than he saw that his shirts 3 buttons are open so he quickly buttoned them ..cabir nandini and alya were laughing rolling on floor hehe aaww my poor manikk nandini said controlling her laugh chal tell me this one or this one nandini ask him showing two dresses he smile and said both she laugh haaha I kno both are looking awsmmm...

They came toward dhruv and navya wo were dozing of in sitting position aaa nandini manikk alya and cabir shout in their ears and they fall from couch and rest were rofling on ground,,,

What the fu*k yyaaar navya said hell annoyed and dhruv second her but nandini hug him awww sorry navu finnaly navya smile its ohhk ...waise mukti and abhi kha hai alya ask umm don't kno abhi tak nhi aaye dhruv answered ...

Suddenly abhi and mukti came inside hand in hand ohho the romeo and Juliet are here manikk sang abhi peck mukti cheek awww nandini exclaimed and grabb mukti's hand lets goo guyzzz beach time......every body left from shop after paying bill of more than half part of shop pheww...

They all again went to palace and left to their respective rooms and change their clothes... the beach is 10 steps far fromm palace so boyzz inform girls that they are leaving the girls agree and start doing there preparations...

Nandini wore a a orange color bikni ..looking extra cute aaaha hot also..mukti wore yeallow colour bikni which have smilies on it...alya wore her all time fav colour pink and navya wore red bikni shorts...they all wore a pull up dress upon it and left grabbing their bag ...

Nanidni pov..


I gulp my lump when I saw the super hottie coming out frm water totally wet...ohh gosh look at his muscles flexing god help me this stupid butterflies are not leaving me I said still lost in him ahm checking him in and out ..gosh I felt weak on my knees he is looking like handsom hunk in his sky blue shorts wooo ...my heart beat crossed his limits when I saw him walking toward me with smirk...I kno am hot he said to no were and passed by me while I stood there flushed and shocked...

I turn back and saw him drinking water the water droplets were flowing from his jawline to his neck to ohho nandini what's wrong with ..he smirk looking at me..and I caught red handed soo embarris but I m nandini murthy I have my own tricks I walked near the water and pulled my top in cheesy way ..i chuckle at my action and I can feel his gaze on me u became so shameless nandini ... I swim over the deep end and dived in with more grace than I thought I was capable..without coing back I swan more deep ohhh I love under water diving..


Suddenly I felt warm large hands wrapped around my waist and someone's lips near my earlope I let out a small moan I kno who it is the boy who always drives me crazyyy.. . I gulped and turned around to face him. I could feel his warm body on mine as his skin was making me feel flushed. He wrapped his hands around my waist more properly and I close my eyes ...but I back off a little this is first time whwn someone is that close to me aaha not someone my manikk is that close to me I gave him flushed smile.. and he also smile lovingly ohhh my manikkk...


He held my hand and we dive there were lots of fishes which are passing by us causing me tickle ...they tickle me we both were playing fish irritating them and giggling he make some bubble with his mouth I make me smile and I pop them we chuckle ...that was ahhmazing everything is soo beautiful...

He hold me from my waist and we swim upward holding eachother ... We came breathing heavily getting oxygen ... we have content smile in our face smile of love happiness in eachother arms...we smile looking at eachother and join our forehead...ohh I love u manikkk yess I really do my eyes got teary ..tears of happiness I'll confess him soon I smile brightly and blush...

Manikk pov

I love her I really love my tweety soo much I just love her..she is pure soul I feel so protectic about her .. she is my jaaan and I love my jaan I blush at this thought looking toward my tweety who is playing with dhruv abhi caabir and navya... The smile is not fading away from my lips I bit my lip the thought of loving ur best friend always made me blush goshh I love her...the diving was soo blissfulll..i closed my eyes smiling thinking about our underwater moments...

Why are u smiling like a idiot meri jaan suddenly someone patt my back uhh muktii kya baat haii naya naya boyfriend ila hai toh zyada ud mat she smack my head and we laugh..mukti she is like a sister for me the tom boy with a girl girl hehe she is like my sister she always pamper me like a elder sis but heyy she is of my age... we laugh and I aagain got lost in my tweety meri behen ko dekh rha hai she ask and I hmm lost inn tweety wo teri best friend haii she again ask I again hmm toh u love her ...yes I replied still lost in my tweety and reality hit me I widen my eyes and she was about to shout I palm her mouth oyyy chup mai toh yuhi bol rha tha but she started laughing oyy kiddo I huff in kiddo name baap hu mai teri tujhe inside out jaanti hu she chuckle and I hug her suddenly abhi came and held mukti and and drag her forcefully and I laugh.. crazy beautifull weird couple I chuckle..

My tweety came running to me I smile brighty and she drag me inside water water and we enjoyed a lot in the water splashing water on eachother and I must say cabir is looking cute in his spongebob pants hehe.. and our all time lazy pets sleeping lazily I mean like srsly they should enjoy in water huhh..and we create another awsm day of our life...

No one pov

It was dawn evening so they decided to left.. as they got soo tired ..bubbly and froggu are also tired by sleeping all day lazy ass...

They all were walking toward palace but suddenly nandini shout ohh shitt guyzz I forgot froggu's home(he boots) amm coming u guyzz carry on..everyone nodded but manikk said wait I'll also come but she stop him no u guyzz go am jst coming they all nodded and left frm there..

Nandini again came to beach and saw her boots are lying on sand she picked it up and turn back but she losse her balace by a tight hug she got startlet nandini some one shout loudly than she broke the hug ohh my god jasyyy nandi hug her tightly how came u here nandini ask than she slap her forehead ohh I forgot u stay here right aww I missed u jassy jassyy again hug nandini...

(jassyy (jenifer swift) she is another good friend of nandini she met her in a ballet dance workshop in newyork and there they became good friend like really good friend)

Ohh jassy I missed u nandini said maine bhi tumhe bohot miss kiya and nandini eyes buldge out what the tumne abhi hindi bola.. jassy gave her sheepish smile yaah wo mere boy friend ne mujhe sikhaya she blush awww u r soo cute..so who is ur boyfriend she ask excited umm u remember siddharth ...he that flirty haha u guyzz are made for eachother nandini laugh and jazzy lightly push her and laugh soo there is beach party here from 9 pm onward and I want u here that's my order she said in bossy tone and nandini smile ohh can I bring my friends too she ask afcorse baby ..ohh bring that hottie too the prince hehe they laugh and chitt chatt for sometime and left frm there...

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Chapter 18 C (party and *blush*)

Nandini pov

Only half an hour left and my all friends are sleeping wo kya kehte hai ghude bechke hehe may be they are soo tired ohh my poor friends but but they have to come with me..i huff...I got redy and wnt to mukti's room were everybody is sleeping except manikk I tried everypossible thing to wake them up but all in vain I huff fine mat utho jokers I murmur and left to manikk room..

I peep inside and saw him sleeping like a baby messy hair open mouth lying on his stomach...I giggle and went inside manikk I called him softly manikk this time little loud and he smile in ssleeep aaww baby prince I chuckle baby u have to come with me I force fully pushed him from bed and he fall with omph'

Manikk pov..

I was watching a beautifull dream of me and my tweety kissing eachother but suddenly omph' I fall from bed on my but I turn and saw her laughing sitting on bed she is looking jst like a princess my princess shee is looking like tinker bell sassy like her I chuckle😆 ..she is wearing white one piece dress heyy I selected it today for her her arm chain wing tiara my tinker..

heyy!! Wait one sec is she going somehere I came from my lalala land and she said ohh am so sorry manikk but tu uth ni rha tha soo am really sorry ..that's ohhk but where are u going I aask curious aaha were are we going... chal redy ho ja party m jaana hai I look at the watch raat k 9:30 baje party m jaana hai wow madam fool day gya I said while she select a red vest and black jeans with a locket for me ye le she throw the dress on mmy face ye le change it and get ready fast and she sat on bed I gave her ohhk look and pull my t shirt her eyes widened and I smirk aarghh manikk washroom m jaake change kar and she push me inside washroom and I chuckle

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No one pov

Whose party is this nandni manikk ask as they went to beach party ...he half corner of beach is fully occupied for jassy's party which is looking beautifull it have bar in one corner Chinese lantern colourfull ribbon balloons everywhere...

Manikk u remember my ballet dance workshop of 1 week there I met jassy are I told u na she said he nodded ohh yeah .she continued.so so yha rehti hai aaj jab mai beach m aayi mere bbots lene there I met her and she invited me he smile chal lets go she hold his hand and they eneter inside party..

Heyyy guyzzz nandini shout when she enter inside everyone is siiting on floor and on couch hiii everbody exclaimed jazzy sttod up and hug her u r late missyyy nandini sheepishly smile well jazzy he is manikk and manikk she is jazzy nandini introduced them they both side hug eachother hii manikk said pollietly what hii yaar u r the prince I mean wooo mannn jazzy said and they laugh..😆

Nandini someone said loudly from back ohh siddhu nandini sang and they hug eachother and manikk face fell down how are u and uuu jazzy ko aakhir m apni girlfriend bana hi liya na she smack hi head he laugh😆 manikk he is siddharth jazzy's bf they both hug eachother and manikk brightly smile knoing he is jazzy's bf...(silly boy)

And nandini he is mac my friend mac smile looking toward nandini nandini side hug him heyy mac u have sexy body she compliment him ...mac said thanks smiling and left from there and the other burst in laughter becoz mac is a sukda(slim) boy...nandini u r too much jazzy comment and she wink...

Suddenly jazzy's friend shout from back jazzy start the party plzzz they laugh and was about to proceed but nandini stop her heyy guyzz wait I have better idea .. what manikk and siddharth said in unison ..lets play some Indian music yesss we will rock it manikk said yeah dude Indian song it will be awsm ...the trio like the idea and they took one one vodka shots and the party started...

The music started and they were moving with rhythm standing near bar..suddenly nandni jazzy manikk and sid saw that mac is looking toward nandni with idiot smile they agan burst in laughter ..ohhk guyyzz watch me nandini said and took a vodka shot in her hand...

Nandini came on center hoding a vodka shot on her hand jazzy's friends were hooting for her and manikk sid and jazzy they were laughing standing on one corner😆

She took vodka shot in one go and throw the glass on somewhere she move her hips and hands in rhythm

yeah...

Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
(chull chull...)
Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
(chull chull...)
(she jump on her place and everybody hoot for her..)

Yeah..
Dekh tera rang saawla hua baawla
(she move her legs in rhythm and the others were doing their own moves)
Ladki nahi hai tu hai garam maamla (She shake her waist and move her hands toward her self)


Bolti bandh meri, kahun kya bhala (she signal manikk to join her but he denied)
Kuchh bhi kahaa nahi jaaye

Kya naache tu Dilli, hile hai London (jazyy join her and they both rock the floor)
Matak matak jaise Raveena Tandon (nandini shake her waist putting her hands around her waist)
Kya naache tu Dilli, hile hai London
Matak matak jaise Raveena Tandon
(manikk and sid they both were enjoying seeing there girl dancing crazily they both wibk eachother and jump on dance floor)
Aag lagaane aayi hai ban-than
Goli chal gayi dhaayn
(manikk and siddharth made a gun with their fingers and blow it on air and girls laugh)

Nakhre vilayti
Ego mein rehti
Nakhre vilayti, ego mein rehti
Tashan dikhati full
(manikk nandini move their hand and hip in same way dancing happily while the others were doing their own step)

Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull (everybody (Indians or who kno this song) sang together and the other only shout wooo)
(chull chull...)
Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
(manikk and nandini did the signature step of this song and the other follow them)
(chull chull...)

Arey daayein, baayein (manikk and siddharth they both were dancing with others girls)
Kaise kamar tu jhulaaye
Physics samajh nahi aaye
( and nandni and jazzy join them and they did same steps tottalyy enjoying the atmosphere)
Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
(means Beautiful girl has teased me OR turned me ON.)

Arey daayein, baayein
Kaise kamar tu jhulaaye
Physics samajh nahi aaye
(manikk and nandini dance closely but at last nandini push him and ran from there giggling)

Sandal mere cham cham karde (nandnini jump in the center of dance floor again..seeking everyones attention )
Hege high brand de (she move her legs showing her branded samdle and chuckle to herself..her hairs are flowing on air)
Airplane mundeyan de (suddenly mac came from behind and started dancing with her and she made "bhai mera picha chod de" expression)
Mere heel pe honde land ve (she sang and dance looking toward manikk with smirk while jazzy sid and manikk were rofling in floor )

Saari kudiyan haaye desi chidiyan (jazzy also came on floor and dance with nandini)
Saari kudiyan desi chidiyan (boyzz came beside them stood with smirk on their face)
Club ki main bulbul... (nandini move her hip and they laugh)

Main ladki beautiful kar gayi chull (everyone shout woo and nandini sang and they again did that signature step of this song)
(chull chull...)
Main ladki beautiful kar gayi chull
(chull chull...)
Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull

Arey daayein, baayein
Kaise kamar tu jhulaaye
Physics samajh nahi aaye
Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
(nandini sat on manik's back and they were dancing crazily like really crazily)

Dekh tera rang saawla hua baawla
Ladki nahi hai tu hai garam maamla
Bolti bandh meri, kahun kya bhala
Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull

Kya naache tu Dilli, hile hai London
Matak matak jaise Raveena Tandon
Aag lagaane aayi hai ban-than
Arrey ladki beautiful, kar gayi chull
(they all again did same moves laughing enjoying)

Koi bacha lo (manic sang with smirk and nandini run behind him to beat him)
Mujhe sambhalo (sid sang and jazzy punch him)
Arrey isey utha lyo
Arrey ladki beautiful
Kar gayi Chull..
(atlast they all hug eachother and shout wooo)

At last they all clap and laugh crazily jazzy and sidd both were full on tuun so they slept on couch ..manikk and nandini they both are not that tunn a little🤢..

They both walk near water hand in hand singing ladki beautifull kar gyi chulll...ohh I luv u baadshaah nandini shout loudly and chuckle and manikk also chuckle than they saw the beach wooowww their face shine becoz of neon pearly water which is shining she picked some water on her palm and took in near her face her face shine like a firefly they stood near water and their foot print on sand...


Nandini pov..

Today is something new in this cool breeze something really special something really good I smile..we both stood near water closing eyes feeling the moment the cool breeze hit our face..and the cold water toch our legs causing tingling frell on our leg... It was all dark by now. The day had ended but we were still together. I didn't know when our palms joined together and our fingers found way to each others' entwining our hands together. If anyone can really explain this feeling, I'm definitely not that person. The only word I could use was, heavenly. I kno I love him and he also may be

He began caressing my skin by his thumb, drawing circles, making my heart rush! We turned to look at each other.the cool breeze again pass my me making me shiver no no not becoz of cool breeze becoz of manikk's intence look Our eyes met and my heart stopped beating. We flew to whole new world. Our world. Just ours.

Suddenly everything canhed I got lost in his deep dark brown I eyes..I found myself leaning in. As was he. His hands arapped around my waist tightly and mine was on his chest. My eyes began to close and I could feel the electric hum on my every damn nerves. His lips pressed softly against mine, and it was like my body was vibrating with a sense of pure pleasure.its beautiful its heaven my hand slowly went to his hairs and I ruffle his hair...

Aah this feeling is soo magical ..he pull me more into himself and we deepen the kiss...the kiss was soo passionate that he broke my arm chain and I let out a small moan in his mouth...ohh I love u manikk..

Manikk pov

I just want to kiss her her face is twinkling like a star ... our eye got locked with eachother and slowly our lips met I kissed her passionately and tightly hold her waist. She moan and began to kiss me back. I pulled her more close to me and titled my head to gain more access. i started to kiss her more deeply pulling her more to myself..she wrapped her hands around my neck and one of her hand played with my hair. I began to trail my hands feeling her every curve. Our lips moulded with each other perfectly. Then tingles i felt when kissing her magic. I mean I never felt ticklish but I felt kissing her it is heaven...

We broke the kiss her hands wrapped around nape of my neck and mine around her waist we have content smile on our face we join our forehead smiling I love u nandini I said smiling breathing heavily becoz of passionate encounter I open my eyes and saw her flushed face and shy smile she replied I know I smile and I hug her tightly and lift her little up from floor and twirl her she laugh...

(yaahuuu..ho gya half confession ho gya ab nandini k confession ka wait karo..sorry guyzz maine ek part skip kar diya usme prank tha but i'll add it in nxt chappy soo howzz it phewww ..kaash whwn they were kissing wha par mai bhi hoti hehe enough of my stupid talks .and yeah that song kar gyi chull thats my fav song:) trust me guyz that underwater diving is the best experiance of my life wuuu 😆ohhk thank u ..)

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ohh and yeah sorry for late update
love kyara:)
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OMG... manik confessed. .. yeayyy!!
jst loved it...hot manan were superb. .
I was also blushing. ...
awesome it was...
and thanks for the pm dear... 😊
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Originally posted by: Ky21

OMG... manik confessed. .. yeayyy!!
jst loved it...hot manan were superb. .
I was also blushing. ...
awesome it was...
and thanks for the pm dear... 😊


thank u so much..and heyy same pinch i was also blushing☺️😆 hehe
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Yay Yay Yay
Confession ho gaya from Manik's side 🥳

All the three parts are soo gud

The shopping scene 🤣🤣🤣

The beach scene 👍🏼❤️

Underwater ... hayee

Manik caught red handed by mukti that he loves Nandini 😆😆

The beach party

The kiss and finally manik's confession and nandini saying " i know" 😳😳😳



such a beautiful update it was

Thankz for the PM

Update soon ,
Love,
Prerana 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
😉👏😳😃
hayeee,such an ahhmazing update yaar...
kio,hats off to you re...
kya bolu...full update hi mind blowing thi re..
horse riding wala moment was sooo good...kya save ki aapni princess ko prince malhotra ne..woah..
sach mein Hero hein..
and then shopping wala part..navya and uski dukh bhari dastan..do shopping freak ke bech mein phass gaye..
mukhbhi shayed chuke se romance karne gaye thi..he he he..
manik baba aapne shaadi ki shopping aur cabir baba chaddi ki...hilarious yaar..thts too funny..
aur dono shopping freaks to aapne dreams pe shopping karti hogi..
beach moment was WOW...
underwater manan moment was just magically awesome re..loved it..
i loved their bonding..
manik baba mukti se bach ke kaha jaoge?pakade gaye..
and my favorite song..kar gaye chul..i just loved this song yaar.
and you used it perfectly...thts moment was amazing..
coming to my most favorite moment..Ahan..hayee..i was blushing like a tomato...so beautifully written..
manik confessed...hayeee,shooo romantic...perfect place,perfect moment..just magical...
so i loooved this update so much..
thanks for this superb and awesome update..
and thanks for the pm kio..
God bless you...
keep writing..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yiipppiiieee

Confession ho gaya from Manik's side

All the three parts are soo gud😊

The shopping scene

The beach scene

Underwater ... hayee

Manik caught red handed by mukti that he loves Nandini
😊
The beach party

The kiss and finally manik's confession and nandini saying " i know"



such a beautiful update it was
😊
Thankz for the PM

Love u sissy

Vidhi

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