MaNan SS||*New Life with Shrink*||Chap 14:pg 85(22-04) - Page 12

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bangfarju thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow

amazing

superb

fantastic.

how could u imagine such type of concept
u girls just rock it yaar.
the way u write it touch's my heart.

nandini's thought ,her mental situation, her emotion
is not a cup of tea to write.u amazingly penned it.
hats off to u yaar.well research nd well imagination.

thnx for giving us such a realistic but uncommon story
plz plz pm me from next.
continue ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear friend,
You had written very beautifully about the state of mind tht she is feeling about him. To write this without skills no one can write it so keep writing.

Now about the story it's really interesting part going. Gamyu ho...!!!!


Drashtiii thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Okay guys i heard i am giving long updates, i am so sorry. Next time i will try my best to give short ones. I wont disappoint you. .

PROMO

Manik's pov

"okay angel lets go to beach" i said and she clapped her hand excitedly.

Nandini's pov

"no idiot its not that" i said and leaned forward towards his lips and pressed with mine. And we kissed
.
.
.
On the beach
.
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"I LOVE YOU NANDINI" he said

A voice echoed in my ears, between nerve wrecking sobs laced with utter sadness"NEVER BELITTLE LOVE"

I was silent for a while.

"I LOVE YOU TOO" I said to him

************

Okay do let me know what is this?what do you think?
All of a sudden kiss and a confession!!

And ya plz suggest a name.
I have got a few suggestion and in the next update i will finalize the name.
Enjoy.
Drashtiii thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: wonderstar13

Firstly you're doing an amazing job with this story so don't get disheartened if you don't get the desired response here.

Secondly I love the fact that it is an original plot and so well researched.
Lastly don't give up cause this story has huge potential and you know it.



well, thank you so much and keep supporting. .
Enjoy
Drashtiii thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bangfarju

wow

amazing

superb

fantastic.

how could u imagine such type of concept
u girls just rock it yaar.
the way u write it touch's my heart.

nandini's thought ,her mental situation, her emotion
is not a cup of tea to write.u amazingly penned it.
hats off to u yaar.well research nd well imagination.

thnx for giving us such a realistic but uncommon story
plz plz pm me from next.
continue ASAP
.



Well thank you so much. .
Your comments really motivate to write
Drashtiii thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: davebhavik93

Dear friend,

You had written very beautifully about the state of mind tht she is feeling about him. To write this without skills no one can write it so keep writing.

Now about the story it's really interesting part going. Gamyu ho...!!!!




Dear friend,
tne gmyu to mane pan gmyu. .
Hwe interesting part awse. .
I hope u enjoy the ride. .
Keep supporting. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
I guess that's flashback! 😛
And name..for the story?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhingli44

I guess that's flashback! 😛
And name..for the story?



su che e to na kav. .
Pan ha mari nani nani dhingli mare name change krwu che
something catchy u know
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Posted: 9 years ago
Is it kinda hallucination? Or sth where ahe imagines about it!

Uhmm where you think in your head that it happened once but it actually never happened!
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Drashtiii thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Is it kinda hallucination? Or sth where ahe imagines about it!

Uhmm where you think in your head that it happened once but it actually never happened!



No it is real. .
And what about out of the blue confession?
Lol
keep guessing

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