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Originally posted by: ankita_t
Hi,
For the first time on the forum i had commented on someone's story as an individual who has some experience as a professional creative writer in the past... Someone who knows atleast a bit more about the preparation required for writing a story.And, yes that someone is you and this is not coz you are my younger sister. Your work compelled me for the first time to be more precise about my views and have an exchange of thoughts as 2 adults... Well, on the forum i don't write as an experienced person for a reason and that's coz the audience out here is quite young. That was my decision as an individual.However, i feel content to read some good piece of work which is fresh and yet has a unique style of narration. I pointed out the research thing coz i could clearly see what efforts you have put in with adding the details of every possible nuance... Perfect!!!It's a very known yet unknown fact i must say- life is like a wave, with its crests and troughs indicating our different phases of life. Some people in a lifetime can't understand the basic core of living and some do. Your characters somehow are in a phase of reaching from a crest to its next trough.What's more interesting is that you tried to depict a picture for your readers as a guide with every stroke of your brush and we follow the arcs painted... What i like most as a reader is when i am completely aware about the entire role play and the background set-up done by a writer. And, you fairly succeed in doing it.I feel 'the descent' of an individual starts with warning signs and i could feel this motion from your words... the vulnerable emotional anxiety of such a character 'Nandini' gave me an insight to what might follow ahead and made me more curious.The 'HIM'- i guess the rational thoughts behind adding your own inputs to his character through Nandini's words gave me a slight glimpse of what kind of person he would be... the situations in past and the human connect to it.Everything was beautifully narrated, yet i'll say to you- don't think people won't accept and just write. Remember when i started Humsafar i hardly got any response till almost i completed 11 chapters i guess. I knew people take time to understand and comprehend such subjects, though my story is a simple one nothing amazing lol, nor my writing is that good.So, please don't say you won't get response or the topic is not appropriate for forum, i am sure you will and see slowly everyone is picking up😳... have faith and just narrate the story and yes i am there with you always.Lots of LoveAnkita
hi di,
how are you?
I am glad to have such a great comment from you. .
But di i am no great its just the words i am pouring. .
And 'him' will be revealed jaldi. .
And about the 'descent', it had just begun. .
She is still at the edge
and yet she will experience the worse. .
Pati Patni Aur Panga
Jaane Anjaane Hum Mile
Tum Se Tum Tak
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
Vasudha
