MaNan FF: Cant Let you go Part 57 updated Page 70 - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part!!..loved it
But plz give longer update..hope u don't mind!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update... Just luved it...i hope its manik who heard the conversation ... In luv with ur story. Update soon and give lamba update 🥱 🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
Actually guys the reason I don't give longer updates is that I post my story on insta too and there's a world limit and also because short updates are more fun and thrilling. The suspense is fun to feel😉 Ps, Thankyou for liking my story and please keep the feedbacks coming as they make me realise that I'm doing justice to this story and I shall continue it.
God bless you all.😆😉
Edited by Mananstories - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update ..
where did nandani go?.
this is first story that i have check like several time ...to know whether it is updated or not .
it is like perfectly awesome.
plz plz plz update next one jaldi jaldi se ..
plz plz plz big wala PLZ 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 35.

Navya was worried as Nandini had not reached for the performance. Mukti went to her and asked, "Kia hua Navya? Itni pareshan ku ho? Don't worry, I know you two are gonna rock the stage.." Navya looked at her and said, "Humen performance ki nahi, humen nandini ki tension horahi hai.." "Nandini ki? Kyun? Usaay kia hua? Is she fine..Hai Kahan wo?" Asked Mukti. " Hum nahe jaantey wo kahan, performance shuru honey me kuch he der rehgai hai or Nandini abtak nahi ai.." Navya replied. "Aisa kaisay hosakta hai, Call her..Text her?" Mukti said. "Uska phone bhe off hai.. Hum kia karain mukti humen kuch samjh nahi araha.." Said Navya. :Navya Navya Navya, Calm down! Chill.. Me dekhti hun.." Said Mukti and Left.

Mukti went to Fab4 and said, "Guys! There's a problem." Hearing this, everyone was shocked. "What? What happened?" Asked Cabir. "Nandini.. She is missing.." Said Mukti. "What? Missing?" Manik said in a tensed way. "Han wo.. Her phone is also switched off. Navya searched her everywhere..but she is no where to be found." Said Mukti. hearing all this, Cabir was shocked. "Nandini is missing.. how is this possible. Wo to Manik ko sab batanay wali thi aj and abhe thori der pehle tak to she was with us..Then suddenly..how.." He said to himself.
Manik Immediately went away to find Nandini. Mukti , Dhruv and Alya followed him while Cabir went to speak Navya.

"Navya! Abhe thori der pehle tak to Nandini yaheen thi, Achanak kahan gayi?" Cabir asked Navya. "Pata nahe Cabir, usney kaha ke wo Amms se bat krke aati hai phir wo nahe ai.." Said Navya. " I hope she is fine!" Said Cabir.

Manik was extremely worried for Nandini and was searching her everywhere in the college. Alya Dhruv And Mukti looked for her on the rooftop and the canteen.

Principal went to Navya and said, "Navya! This will be the last call for you and Nandini after this, you two will be disqualified!"

The last call was also made but Nandini had not reached and Navya and Nandini were disqualified. After sometime, Cabir's cellphone rang. It was a text message. The message was, "Hey Cabir, It's me Nandini. I suddenly got a call from the hospital and I had to come here for my radiotherapy. Please make Navya Understand and don't tell anyone. Please. I'll come back and tell Manik myself. Please sambhal lena sab.." Cabir was stunned to read this. While Manik was crazily searching for Nandini everywhere, Cabir was in a battle with his heart and mind that whether he should tell Manik or wait fot Nandini to come back. "GUYS!!! Did you notice something?" asked alya. "What? What are you talking about?" asked Manik. "Aryaman.. wo bhe gayab hai. Apni performance ke foran bad.. wo bhagta hua kahin chala gaya. Kahin isme uska to koi role.." Replied Alya. Hearing this Manik became angry. "WHERE ARE YOU NANDINI!!" He shouted and sat on the floor. His eyes turned red.

" Manik, Manik we are next.. Manik control yourself.." Said Cabir. Manik pushed him away and said in anger "What do you mean we are next?? Yahan Nandini nahi milrahi and you guys are concerned for the performance DAMNIT!" "No Manik, It's just that, Humara nam call hora hai, lets just get done with this and then we all will go find Nandini.." Said Cabir. " Manik was so much angry and worried that his face turned Red and his eyes were full of tears. Cabir was seeing this..He took a deep breath, and said, "That's it.. This is going too far.. I need to tell you guys something.." Everyone looked at him.

Precap: Harshad is back!!


Edited by Mananstories - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago




Awesome awesome and amazing story dear...

Read all parts in a go ...

Looking forward to seeing more soon. ..

Stay blessed dear..






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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it
Amazing update
Suspense soon will be opened
Contour soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Can't handle the suspense

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awssmmm

Coun siooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Harshad has done
Something for sure
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
waiting for the nxt part...
update soon...

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