MaNan FF: Cant Let you go Part 57 updated Page 70 - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago
oh god now what harshad u are so dead
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 37. (Long one on so many requests!)

Everybody looked at Cabir. "How are you so sure?" asked Dhruv. "Because I know, Harshad has not done anything!" Said Cabir. Manik stared cabir for a while and then said, "I am damn sure it's harshad..Nandini can't just disappear like this..I will not leave this jerk.." Saying this Manik held Harshad's collar and said, "I'm asking you for the last time, WHERE IS NANDINII??" "NANDINI IS IN THE HOSPITAL DAMNIT!! SHE HAS HER RADIOTHERAPY!!!" Shouted Cabir. Mukti, Manik, Dhruv, Alya and Navya immediately looked at Cabir. Manik left harshad, went to cabir and said, "Hospital? Radiotherapy? What the hell are you talking about?" Cabir kept silent. "SPEAK UP CABIR!" Shouted Manik again. Mukti Alya and Dhruv were still in a state of shock. "Nandini.. she has..Brain tumour.." Said Cabir in a low voice. Hearing this, Manik's eyes became red. His hands started to shiver. "What? What did you just say? Cabir, I swear, if this is one your stupid jokes, Mae bhuljaunga tu mera dost hai.." Manik said. "Cabir please yar! Ye mazak ka waqt nahi hai.." Said Mukti. "Cabir sach kehraha hai, Nandu ko ..Nandu ko brain tumour hai.." Said Navya. Everyone was shocked hearing this. "Br..ain Tumour.." Said Dhruv. "NO! NO! Cabir.. Tu mazak karaha haina? Ye sab..Ye sab mazak haina? I know..tum navya or nandini sab miley huey ho haina.. Nandini yahhin kahin chupi sab dekhrahi haina.." Said Manik. He was smiling and behaving so weirdly that nobody was able to control him. He went smiling to Navya and said.." Bolo na navya, kahan chupaya hai tumne Nandini ko. NANDINI! NANDINI! bahar niklo. Mujhe pata chalgaya hai ye sab mazak hai.." Said Manik. Cabir tried to calm down manik but manik had lost it. "CONTROL YOURSELF MANIK! IT'S TRUE!!! NANDINI KO BRAIN TUMOUR HAI AND SHE IS IN THE HOSPITAL FIGHTING AGAINST IT!!!" Shouted Cabir. "SHUTUP! JUST SHUT UP!" Shouted Manik. Saying this, He fell on the floor. Tears came rolling down his face. His face was all red and his eyes were full of tears. Mukti, Dhruv and Alya were in a state of shocked. Mukti and Alya also had tears in their eyes seeing Manik's condition. **Ghair sa hua, khudse bhi, Naa koi mera.. Dard se, Karle chal yaari, dil ye kehraha.. Kholun jo baahein..bas gham ye simatrahe hain..Ankhon ke aagay, Lamhe ye kyu ghatrahe.. Jaane kaiseyy koi, Sehta Judaiyaan.. (Manik crying, and Mukti hugging him) Chadariya jeeni re jeeni, Chadariya jeeni re jeeni, (Cabir and Navya Crying) Ankhen bheeni re bheeni re bheeni , Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni.. (Alya hugged Dhruv and they had tears looking at Manik) Chadariya jeeni re jeeni, Chadariya jeeni re jeeni..Ankhen bheeni re bheeni re bheeni..Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni..** Manik Immediately stood up, went to Cabir and asked, "Which hospital?" "City Hospital" He replied. Manik left the farmhouse. Cabir, Dhruv, Alya , Mukti and Navya followed him. "Manik stop! Manik wait!" Shouted Cabir but Manik didn't listen to anyone and sat in his car and left for the hospital. On the way to hospital, There was too much traffic on the road and it was raining heavily! Manik was crying and was having flashbacks of the time when Cabir told about her tumour. He left the car and started to run crazily on the street. ** Ho..(oo) Ho (oo) Bheegi bheegi sarkon pe mae, tera intezar karoon.. Dheere dheerey dil ki zameen ko.. Teray he naam krun.. Khudko mae yun khodun..kay phir na kabhi paun.. Haulay haulay zindagi ko, ab teray hawalay karoon.. Sanam rey, Sanam rey.. Tu mera sanam hua rey.. Sanam rey sanam rey.. Tu mera sanam hua rey..Karam rey karam rey.. Tera mujhpe karam hua rey..**

Precap: Manik reaches the hospital and on the other hand, Cabir hears Nandini's doctor talking to someone.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Too emotional
Finally manik comes to knw about nandini's disease
Cont soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks and nice plz next update I could not wait plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it
Nice update
Kabul finally knows it
And I think nandini doctor is a fraud
Continue soon
Do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
I don't know why but I think nandu...anyways continue...and thanks for update...take care continue soon waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thankyou Guys! & NANOnikki, what do you think? :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome updates...
waiting for the nxt parts...
update soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow... This update seriously left me speechless... I mean the way u describe each and every emotion is commendable... Thank u for the long update... Finally manik ko pata chalgya... You know what this story is so good that I really check the forum after every half hour to see if its updated or not... I seriously love this story... Keep going girl ... Update soon
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Part 38. (Extended On request)

After facing many difficulties, Finally Manik reached to the hospital. He went running towards the counter. "Nandini..Nandini Murthy! Where is she?" He asked the receptionist. "Wait..let me see." The receptionist replied. "MAKE IT FAST DAMNIT!" He shouted. "She is having her Radiotherapy, Go straight and turn right. The second room it is." The receptionist replied. Manik went running towards Nandini's room and finally reached. He saw Nandini from outside. Nandini didn't see him. He was staring her with teary eyes and broken heart. His heart beat..it was racing. He was still looking at her.. his eyes were blood red. **Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya..Ranjhan mileya naa ye...Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba, Laqeeran vich likh di judaai.. ** He couldn't see her like this. He turned around and sat on the bench which was outside Nandini's room. He closed his eyes and all he could see was Nandini. Her smiling face. Her eyes filled with love. His tears, they were just not stopping. "Manik! Manik!" Shouted Cabir. Manik looked at him and hugged him tightly. "Cabir.. Nandini.." He said with teary eyes. "Manik..Sambhalo khudko. You have to be strong okay? You cannot just give up like this. I am here. Infact, all of us. We are with you" Said Cabir. After sometime, The doctor came out. Manik rushed towards him. "Doctor Doctor, Hows she?" He asked. "She's okay but..Who are you?" The doctor asked. "Can I meet her?" manik asked. The doctor hesitated at first but then said, "Um okay.."

Cabir went inside. "Cabir..Tum yahan?" Asked Nandini in a low voice. "I'm sorry Nandini, I had to do this.." He said and left the room. Nandini was confused. "Nandini Murthy!" She heard. She turned and saw Manik. "Manik.." She said with a smile on her face and tears in her eyes. "Tumhe kia lagta hai han? You can do anything? How could you even do this to me.. How.." Manik asked. Nandini was silent. She kept looking at him for a while and then hugged him tightly. "I'm sorry Manik..I'm sorry.." She said. **Ho asmaan mila, zameen ko meray, Aadhay aadhay puray hain hum.. tere nam pey, Meri zindagi, likdhi meray humdum.. Haan seekha mainay, jeena jeena, kaisay jeena..Na seekha jeena teray bina humdum..Ho (oo) Ho (oo).. ** Cabir who was standing outside saw the doctor and went to him to ask about nandini's health. He saw the doctor talking to someone on the phone. "Jee sir, jee sir they have reached. No, don't worry, they don't know anything. Everything is under control. " Cabir was shocked hearing this. "Ye doctor kis se bat karaha hai?" He said to himself. "Cabir! Cabir!" he heard. It was Mukti. Mukti, Dhruv and Alya had reached the hospital. "Where's Manik? Where's Nandini?" Asked Alya. "Obviously..Together." He replied. The went to nandini's room and saw them hugging.*Cabir coughs* Manik and nandini looked at them. "Nandini, How could you.." Asked Alya. Nandini was silent. "Aray, We mean, How could you hug Manik only? Dont we deserve a hug?" Said Mukti. "Obviously. Why only Manik? We're all together! We will fight it together!" Said Cabir, "Aur nahi to kya." Said Navya. They all ran and hugged Nandini. **Yaaron, dosti..Bari he haseen hai..Ye na ho to, kya phir..Bolo ye zindagi hai..Koi to, ho raazdaar, Be garaz, tera ho yaar.. Koi to ho raazdaaar..** "Chalen phir?" Asked Cabir. "No, you guys move ahead, I'll come in 10 mins. I've to speak to the doctor first." Said Manik. Cabir smiled, looked at manik and winked.. "Take your time, Manik!" He said. Everybody left. Manik looked at Nandini and said, " Promise me, You'll Never hide something from me..Ever again." "Promise." Said Nandini. "Don't forget, Together, forever." Manik said. Nandini smiled, and said, "Hamesha." ** Tanman karay, tujphe fida, mehboob woh.. Palkhon pey jo, rakhay tujhey, mehboob wo..Jiski wafa teri liye he ho..(Mukti, Cabir, Dhruv, Alya and Navya were secretely looking at them. They were holding each other's hands and were happy seeing them together) Aray yaaron, Muhababbat..He to bandagi hai, ye na ho to..bolo kya phir zindagi hai..(Manik kissed Nandini on her forehead) Koi to dilbar ho yar, Jisko, tujhsay ho pyaar..Koi to dilbar ho yaar..**

Precap: Fab 5, Nandini and Navya hear a shocking announcement.

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