MaNan FF: Cant Let you go Part 57 updated Page 70 - Page 14

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Thanks for the pm
Loved the update
Emotional one
Pls jaldi se samne le ask
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Amazing update...pls post next update soon
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Part 33.

" So this is the reason of you pushing Manik away from you.." Cabir said with teary eyes. "I can't see Manik breaking.." She said in a low voice. " And you really think he's okay without you? He's breaking everyday. Not because of your illness, but because of this distance..these barriers between you two..They're breaking him.." Cabir said. " The more I'll be closer to him, the more it will be difficult for him to forget me.." She replied. "Nandini Nandini Nandini, kabhi na kabhi to Manik ko pata chalna he haina about your illness, Then why not now?" He asked angrily. "Cabir pleaseee...I beg you. Don't tell Manik please. Once this Music Gala will be over, I'll tell him, Infact I'll tell everyone.." Nandini said to him. Cabir looked at her, smiled and said.." I can't believe this.. All this while, you've been fighting with this illness of yours, alone..or hum me se kisi ko bhe pata nahi..Why Nandini..Kamskum mujhe to bataya hota.." Cabir said. His eyes turned red. Nandini Hugged him. Both of them were crying. **Teri har ek burai pey, Daantey wo dost.. Gham ki ho dhoop, Saya banay..tera wo dost.. Naachay bhe wo, teri khushi me..Aray yaaron, dosti..Bari he haseen hai ..Ye na ho to, Kia phir..bolo ye zindagi hai..**

The Next Morning The principal gathered everyone, for an announcement. " So, tomorrow, The final round of Music Gala will take place! best of luck to all the bands!" "Just a day more, and I will tell you everything Manik..Just a day more" Nandini said to herself. Cabir looked at her and smiled. "Comeon guys, we need to rehearse!" Said Mukti to the rest of her band members. "Yes, lets make some good musicc!!" Said Cabir. They went to reherse. "Tomorrow is the day!" Said Manik. "whats on your mind? Manik? What are gonna do? "Asked Cabir. Manik smiled and said "Nandini Murthy! She says we are impossible to be together. I'm gonna do something impossible to prove her wrong." Cabir, who knew everything about Nandini was shocked hearing this. "No Manik! Tum kuch nahe karogay..What are you upto man?" Manik looked at him, smiled and said, "Chill!"

Precap: Nandini goes missing before her performance. Manik searches for her everywhere, but doesn't find her. Cabir Mukti Druv and Alya convince him to go to the stage as their performance was next and after that they will go find Nandini.

What will happen now? Where is Nandini? And What is Manik going to do?
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Nice part
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Cabir know it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow update 👏 it was so emotional... The way in which u portrayed cabini's relationship is awesome.. You are now seriously torturing me by creating this suspense... Dont u know its so difficult to wait for next part... But the wait always prove to be worth... But Now dont let us wait longer and update jaldi 😳 🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh god u write so well.
awesome awesome awesome.
plz update jaldi se na...
plz plz plz i can't wait now. 😭
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Awesome update u nailed it plz update next part soon take care
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Amesome amesome
plz update soon
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oh manik ji ab ki kitta tussi
glad cabira know everything now
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Part 34.

The next morning, everyone was gearing up for their performances. While Fab 5 were rehearsing for the final time. Cabir messaged Nandini, "Today is the day! You have to tell Manik or else I will..Be strong, you have to do this.." To this, Nandini replied, "I remember..I will"

While Nandini and Navya were rehearsing, Nandini was very tensed and Navya noticed this.."Kia hua Nandu? Tum bohat pareshan lagrahi ho, sab theek haina? Tumhari tabyat to theek haina?" She asked. " Navya .. Cabir ko sab pata chalgaya hai.." Said Nandini. "Kia? Kaise?" She asked in a state of shock. "Aur aaj sab Manik ko bhe pata chaljaiga.." Said someone. Navya and Nandini looked back and it was Cabir. "Cabir..tum yahan?" Asked Navya. " Bol to aise rai hun jese kisi maray huay insaan ko zinda dekhlya ho..zahir hai, mae yahan nahi asakta?" He said. "Nandini, you don't have to worry about anything.. Mae huna..Or ye Madhubala..ye kis din kaam ayegi.. We are with you..Just be strong.." He said looking at Nandini with a smile on his face. "Pehli baar kuch achi bat ki hai tumne, isi khushi me hum tumhe jalebi khilayenge aj" Navya said in a funny way. Cabir stared at her for a while and said, " Kisi mahaan admi ne kaha hai, Kuttay ki dum kabhi seedhi nahi hosakti.." Nandini had a huge smile on her face hearing this. Cabir and Navya looked at her and were happy seeing her smile. " Jab tak hum tumhare sath haina, tumhey kuch nahi hoga.. " Said Navya. "Han..hum kuch honay he nahi dengay.. Ye brain tumour to maamuli si cheez hai.. " Said Cabir in a funny way but yet had tears in his eyes which he was trying to hide but Nandini noticed. She Hugged him. "Hum bhe hai bhai" Said Navya and joined them.

** Yaaron, dosti..Bari he haseen hai.. Ye na ho to, kia phir, bolo ye zindagi hai.. Koi to ho raazdar, Be garaz tera ho yaar..koi to ho raazdaar..*


They had no idea that someone was hearing their conversation. Just after listening to their conversation, the person took out their phone.."Hello, City Hospital?" *Scene ends*

"Bas bas, ab rulaogay kia?" Said Cabir. Nandini and Navya smiled. "Nanduu! Chalo bas iske baad humara performance hai." Said Navya. "Han chalo, Bye Cabir.." Said Nandini. "Bye, Best of luck! Aj pata nai kyun, Fab 5 kay jeetnay se zada, tum jeetjao..aisa dil chahra hai.." He said.

"Umm Navya, tum chalo.. Mae Amms ko phone krkey ati hun.." Said Nandini to Navya and left.
Suddenly, her phone started to ring. She picked up the call, "Hello?" She said. *Scene Ends*

Navya was waiting for Nandini at the backstage. Their performance was about to start in just 5 minutes and Nandini had not reached.

Precap: Cabir gets a message from someone and is stunned to read it.

Where has Nandini gone? What will Manik do? What Message did Cabir gett?
Edited by Mananstories - 9 years ago

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