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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the pm
It was awesome
Thankfully they patched up
I think Nandu shouldn't have called aryaman in her room
Just scared that manik might misunderstand in the heat
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey dea... I started reading ur story but m not able to read second part plz pm me
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nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. loved it.. Keep writing! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
at last ua back..am so happy..update was super...manan started to fight oh god...waiting for next epi...n update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's such an amazing FF oh god I just can't stop reading it I want the edited parts too
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Amazing dear, so cute and naughty story...
I read it and laughed like hell on some jokes u added in the story...
Can you please PM me the whole story, as i read it, but because of edited sign i am not able to put all the things togather..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 11: Bherosa
Thank you everyone for your patience and wonderful comments! I read every comment!
Nandhini was waiting in her room for Aryaman to come. She didn't know where else to talk to him. The entire gang was spread out all over malhotra mansion.
She jumped a little when she heard a knock on the door. She wasn't even this scared when manik was outside the door on their wedding night.
"Come in" she says and sits decently on the corner of the bed. Aaryaman opened the door and walked in.
"Hey!" He said softly and walks towards nandhini and sat beside her on the bed.
"Hi betho" nandhini said.
"So what's up?" Aaryaman asks awkwardly and looks around the room.
"Dekho..." She says with a pause. And Aaryaman stared at her in confusion.
"I know you like me okay. And Aaryaman you are are really close friend of mine. After manik you are the person I am closest too. I love you, I really do but like a friend, like a brother. And I'm already married to a guy I'm madly in love with. All I want to say is please don't ruin our friendship , in fact pura group bhi toot sakta ha because of this. Manik will go crazy angry and this entire group will be shattered into pieces. Please get over me" she says in one breath. Aaryaman opens his eyes wide in shock.
"How do you know ...
That I like you?" He asks her in shock, not being able to look her in the eyes.
"That doesn't matter. But I know you do! You purposely missed my wedding and booked return tickets to India literally the next day after the proposal in paris. Aaryaman I am not blind.
You missed your best friends wedding! Do you know how hurt I was? Why are you doing this to our friendship and ruining everything?" Nandhini asks and her eyes get teary.
Aaryaman takes a deep breathe and holds her hands.
"I didn't come to your wedding because I couldn't see you marry another man.
I couldn't be in the same city where you and manik were on your honeymoon.
Couldn't imagine him touching you." he says softly and nandhini opens her eyes wide and stands up from the bed.
"Aaryaman! You can't obsess over me like this. Yeh theek nahi ha. Please stop this! Kissi ko bhi is sa faida nahi hoga. Na mujhe na tumhe! Please stop this!" Nandhini yells at him.
Aaryaman sighs.
"I know. Slowly slowly I will get over you I promise. Nandhini tumhari marriage mein problems create kerna ka koi irada nahi ha mera. Ager esa hota I would have stopped your wedding when I had the chance. I would have taken advantage of so many situations in collage when you and manik had your fights. I always supported you and helped you because I knew you loved manik so much. Yes mujhe hurt hota tha but tumhari khushi mein meri khushi ha. Just give me time to accept your marriage, I will get over it I promise." He says with a smile and holds her hand and makes her sit back down and sits down on the bed himself as well.

Just then the room door opened and manik walked in and halted as he saw Aaryaman and nandhini sitting on the bed holding hands.
"Hey?" manik asks.
Nandhini look at him and smiles.
"Manik" she says and gets up and stands by him and wraps her hand around maniks hand.
"Me and Aaryaman were just talking about old collage memories. Time kitni jaldi jaata ha na" she lies and feels awful.
"Ya seriously kitna kuch badal jata ha. Ek saal pehle we were in collage and look today nandhini is a married woman." Aaryaman says with a fake smile and nandhini notices the low key emotions in Aaryaman's voice.
Manik says nothing and simply nods.
"So umm manik where is everyone? Neeche let's go?" Nandhini says and walks towards the door but manik stops her.
"Everyone went home. Party is over" manik says and looks at Aaryaman.
"Mein bhi chalta hoon bye guys!" Aaryaman says and hi fives nandhini and hugs manik and leaves their bedroom and out the mansion.
Manik slowly closes the room door and locks it with the kundi.
"Nice get together today right?" Nandhini says all happily and she heads to the bathroom to change but manik stops her and holds her hand.
"Listen nandhini, next time don't bring a guy in our bedroom alone okay." He says seriously.
Nandhini looks him in the eyes.
"Manik it was just Aaryaman! Our friend! My best friend! I love him like a brother and you know that! Esi ajeeb baatein nahi kero please bahot cheap lagta ha. Mujhe dirty feel horaha ha tumhari baton sa" nandhini says seriously.
Manik rolls his eyes.
"I know but tumhara usko bhai kehne sa won tumhara Bhai ban nahi jaata!" Manik says in anger.
"Manik how many times have you slept over at mukti and Aliyas house? You don't care if they are girls. All you know is they are your best friends just like dhruv and kabir.
Even though you and Aliya are Ex's have I ever said anything about your friendship with her? Ever? If you don't want me to be alone with Aaryaman then theek ha but you are not allowed to be alone with mukti or Aliya! Don't be a sexist pig! " Nandhini says in anger.
Manik is speechless for a while.
"I trust you dammit! But I don't trust Aaryaman!" Manik yells in anger.
" Manik if Aaryaman even showed 1% interest in me I would straight up tell him to back off. Zerorat paregi toh I'll break my friendship with him.
I know what to do! And I know that I am your wife! You need to trust me, I would never let anyone come in between us.
Mene tum sa pyaar kiya ha shaddi ki ha. Mera pyaar KO kamzoor mat samjho manik! Duniya sa ristha tor doongi tumhara liya! You have to trust me!" Nandhini says softly and finally heads to the bathroom.
Manik rolls his eyes. He just hated the idea of nandhini alone with Aaryaman. He trusted nandhini but he loved her to much to even take a chance of risk.
Manik pulls out his clothes from the cupboard and changes his clothes. After a while nandhini walks out in a long sleeping suite. Manik knew looking at her nightie that nothing was going to happen tonight.
Nandhini quietly lied down on the bed and turned off her table lamp.
"Nandhini?" Manik says and sits besides her.
"Hmm?" Nandhini says with her eyes closed.
"Tum mujh sa kuch chupa toh nahi rahi na" manik asks. Nandhini opens her eyes and gulps. She sits up and holds manik's hand. She knew that hiding the truth from him could later cause an issue.
"I can't lie to you. There is something I am hiding from you. But I can't tell you what it is right now. I'm trying to handle the situation myself. Please just trust me manik please!" She begs as she holds his hand.
Manik looks at her in shock and pulls back his hand.
"Tell me nandhini!" He demands in anger.
"Manik please I can't. Its not the right time. Let the situation die down I will tell you promise! Jaan please I'm handling it!" Nandhini says with a smile.
Manik looks at her in anger and gets up from the bed.
"I am asking one last time! Are you telling me or not?" He asks and takes a deep breath.
Nandhini stays silent
Manik gives her a disgusting look and opens the lock of the door and dashes out of the room.
Nandhini immediately started crying and cried herself to sleep.
In the morning:
Nandhini woke up because of noise that was being made by manik in the room. She sat up and saw him in a black dress shirt with black dress pants. He was looking for something around the room like crazy.
Nandhini gets up and gestures him to calm down. She then gets up and walks towards the cupboard.
She pulls out his tie from under her clothes and walks towards manik with it.
Manik avoids eye contact with her but nandhini grabs his collar and puts the tie around it and starts to tie it.
"Aj tumhari meeting ha na producers ka saath? Good luck! I love you!" She says with a smile.
Manik continues to ignore her.
"Mujh sa naraaz ho ke soye tha mujh sa naraaz ho ke office mat jaana please" nandhini says sadly.
Manik takes a deep breath.
"Tell me the secret then" he says .
"Okay, I'm pregnant" nandhini says with a serious expression.
Manik opens his eyes wide and was about to fall but nandhini pulls him back by pulling his tie.
"I was joking chill!" She laughs.
Manik looks at her in anger and tries to leave but nandhini pulls him back.
She lightly kisses his jaw bone area.
"Good luck" she says.
She then pulls his face towards herself and gives a light peck on his lips.
"I love you so much! Jaana do na please" She says with a smile.
Manik finally smiles.
"Ek condition pa I will let it go" he says.
"Ya?" Nandhini asks.
"You know babe" he says with a smirk and leaves.
Nandhini giggles. She knew exactly what would cheer him up.

At the studio:
Fab 5 reached the location of their meeting. They were waiting inside the huge meeting room. The producer companies manager, Mr. Shuresh walked in.
"Morning humari CEO aati hi hongi" mr suresh said.
"Aati? Don't you mean aata? Mr. Mehra ha na CEO?" Aaliya asks in confusion.
"Mr mehra sold the company and now our new CEO is Mrs. Malhotra" mr suresh says.
And everyone looks towards manik.
"No no it can't be younika guys. Pure Mumbai mein there must be thousands of Mrs. malhotras" manik whispers to everyone.
"From those thousands 2 tera ghar ki ha" kabir jokes.
"Nandhini kyew hogi ceo? She isn't even qualified" dhruv states the obvious.
"Mazzaq tha bhai, literally mat le!" Kabir says.
"Shut up guys. Stop stressing me out!" Mukti yells.
Just then the door of the meeting room opened and unfortunately younika walled inside.
She was wearing a blue knee length dress.
"Morning fab 5, let's get down to business!" She says as she sits down on the main front chair.
Manik stands up from his chair.
"We Are not interested in doing business with you" he says in anger and stands up.
"Really? Your Album launch is in 4 days and you already signed a legal contract with the company that if for any reason you back out. Your band is responsible for all the money invested by our company." Younika says.
"How much would that be?" Mukti asks.
" 2 core rupees with interest darling" younika says in her husky accent and everyone looks at her in anger.
"Or vesa bhi manik you need this. Kub tak upne dad ka paiso pa ayaashi keroge?" Younika says to manik with a smart look and mani sits back down.
"You are such a bitch younika! Pehle you tricked me into attending space academy just so you could have your eye on me now when I an finally going into the music industry you bought the company that is producing my song. Why can't you just f*cking leave me alone?" Manik yells in anger.
Younika gives him an evil look.
"Paisa and power makes anything possible beta" she says.
"Let's just have the meeting okay!" Kabir says in anger.
"Fine let's carry on " younika replies back.

Meanwhile at kabir and navya's house:
Nandhini was visiting to help navya plan for the baby shower.
"Okay so what is going to be the theme. Do you even know the baby's gender?" Nandhini asks as she was lying on navya's bed.
Navya was pulling out a few supplies she already bought.
"Yup. Lekin kabir KO nahi pata. I want to have a gender reveal at the baby shower. Or isi waja sa the theme has to be a gender neutral color" navya says and sits on the bed as well.
"So yellow color?" Nandhini asks and navya nods her head.
"Yaar do you think Hume Aliya ka wait kerna chaya. She was the most excited. After me she is the closest blood this baby has" navya says.
"Haan let's wait for fab 5 to come back" nandhini says and puts the little notepad she had on the nightstand.
"I just hope the meeting goes well. Kabir thora nervous tha subah KO" navya says.
Nandhini looses herself in remembering what happened between her and manik last night and today.
"Hmm manik toh vesa bhi gussa mein tha, bus yeh meeting smoothly ho" she says .
Navya looks at her in a funny way.
"What why?" She asks.
"Yaar navya you know about Aaryaman right? Pretend nahi kerna.I know everyone knows " nandhini says.
Navya looks at her in shock and jumps.
"Tumhe kisne bataya Aaryaman ka bare mein? We all promised to keep it a secret!" Navya yells.
"Navya group sa Jo promises hoti ha woh alag but our girl secrets are alag. All of us girls know that Aliya kissed Aaryaman when Aliya and dhuv were fighting. None of the guys know that.
Wese hi one of the girls told me that Aaryaman has been crushing on me" nandhini says.
"So either Aliya or mukti told you? Hmm Aliya thi na?" navya guesses immediately and smiles.
"Whatever that doesn't matter. Point yeh ha ka mene Aaryaman KO samjha diya ha. He is getting over me" nandhini says.
"Obviously. Werna woh shaddi nahi rukwaata tunhari? Idiot he has been trying since he realized that you were in love with manik. Bichara na foran back out kerdiya. He is a nice guy nandhu, no wonder he likes you. Bus Devi maya usko koi achi so lerki Dede, he deserves it" navya says and walks towards her little table with pooja stuff and starts praying. Nandhini giggles.
"Yes he will one day. Mera best friend ha akhir. Solid girlfriend hogi uski. Saara Mumbai dekhega! Or Space academy ka Alumni hall of fame mein naam hoga uska." Nandhini says and starts to giggle. just then nandhini's phone rang and she saw it was a call from chachi. She smiles widely and picks up
"Omg chachii chachii I love you! Sorry sorry I didn't call after coming back please daantna nahi" nandhini yells.
"Nandhu ek problem ha" chachi says softly.
"Kya huwa chachi??" Nandhini yells in panic
"Rishaab..." Chachi pauses.
"Rishaab kya? Rishaab KO kya huwa? I'm coming there abhi! I'll call manik too!" She yells and was about to cut the call.
"Ruk jaa! Pagli Rishab misses you and wants to talk to you!" Chachi says and giggles. Nandhini sighs in relief.
"Kya Chachi! Jaan nikal diya!" She yells at her.
"Kaisi ho beta . Honeymoon kesa tha? Tum log toh 3-4 din baad aane wala that na? Aaryaman na bataya tha mujhe" Chachi asks.
"woh Chachi Fab 5 ka album launch ka liya meeting thi Aj. Manik thought he could skip it isi liya he planned the Switzerland stop but apparently he couldn't" nandhini says sadly but then smiles.
"Koi baat nahi beta. Aj nahi toh kal the vacation had to end. Now you are married and back home. Beta bahot responsibilities ha, ub tum or manik college jaate huwa teens nahi ho. Samjhi" Chachi says in her friendly voice.
Nandhini thinks for a while.
"Kya chaachi! Mein wohi nandhini, or manik wohi ha, nothing has changed! Bus ub hum saath rehte ha that's it" nandhini says all jolly.
"Pata chalega nandhu! Kal jub bache honge ehsaas hoga zimidaari ka" Chachi says.
Nandhini gasps.
"Haww Chachi. Bache kaha sa aage?" She shouts and navya gets interested in the conversation and runs next to nandhini.
"lo bacho ka kya? Honeymoon pa makhiya maarne gae thi kya? 2-4 din lagte ha fertilization hone mein" Chachi says and giggles.
Nandhini raises her eyebrows.
"But Chachi we are going to wait. Abhi possible nahi ha okay app faltu ka yeh sub nahi socho. Mein app sa baad mein baat kerongi bye" she says in anger and cuts the call.
Navya raises her eyebrows and smiles widley. Nandhini rolls her eyes and hits navya on the shoulder.
"Shut up! Don't even go there navya! I'm on the pill okay!" She yells and goes back towards the bed and gathers all the baby shower things.
"I wish me and harshad used contraceptives" navya says looking towards her baby bump. Nandhini puts her finger on her lips.
"Shh don't say that. Agreed ka harshad was an ass but we all love this baby and he or she deserves to come into this world. Or vesa bhi is baby ki waja sa Aj tum kabir ki biwi ho and I know how happy you two are! Mera bhanja ka against khabadar kuch kaha okay!" Nandhini says and pats navya's baby bump.


"We are homeee!" Kabir yells from the door and navya and nandhini walk outside and see fab five walk in.
"How was it manik?" Nandhini immediately asks.
"F**king hate that woman!" He shouts and runs toward the bathroom and slams the door close.
Nandhini just stood there shocked.
"What the? Aliya?" She asks.
"Younika bought the producing company." She says and sighs.
"God why is mom doing this! Unka maqsad kya ha akhir" Nandhini says sadly.
"Mom?" Dhruv asks surprised.
"She is manik ki mom. Mein manik ki biwi hoon. Guys its not that hard!" Nandhini says and everyone laughs at her.
"Manik hasn't accepted her as a mother for as long as I can remember. Bachpan sa yeh Mahabarat on ha" kabir says and grabs a bottle of wine from the fridge.
"I need like 3 shots man!" Mukti says as she stretches her neck.
"Guys! Baby shower ki planning kerni ha! Please don't get drunk now!" Navya begs.
Just then the doorbell rang and kabir opened it. Aaryaman smiled as everyone annoyingly looked towards the door.
"Did I do something wrong?" He asks as he stands outside the door.
"Nahi yaar andaar aa. Just had a bad day because of younika!" Kabir says and pulls Aaryaman in. Nandhini and Aaryaman awkwardly look at each other.
"Mera business join kerlo. No more Younika!" Aaryaman jokes and winks.
"Wahan bhi ponch jaegi kutti" mukti yells.
Nandhini hits her.
"Meri saas KO kutti na bolo!" Nandhini yells.
"Abha saas ki chamchi chup kero!" Kabir yells.
" I have a plan to get rid of her guys" manik says and everyone looks towards him as he comes out of the bathroom.
"Kya?" Aliya asks.
"Just trust me this will destroy her. Enough is enough!" Manik says in anger.
"Manik! Maa ha tumhari!" Nandhini yells.
"Bullshit! All she did was have s*x with a very rich man . Us sa koi maa nahi ban jata. Maa ban na ka liya ehsaas hona chaya. And younika was nothing but a temporary baby carrier. Unfortunately that baby was me.
She should have just killed me if she hated me so much" manik says in anger.
Nandhini holds his hand and rubs it to calm him down.
"Esa mat bolo please. That baby is now my entire world. And There has to be a reason for this manik. Koi maa itni kerwi( bitter) nahi hoti. Trust me I know because I am a women myself. A women loves her child from the day she learns that she can have a child one day" nandhini says and continued rubbing manik's hand.
" yaar manik Teri biwi 1950's ka drama/serial sa nikal ka ae ha kya?" Kabir asks and everyone laughs.
"Kabir, nandhini is a very humble and sweet girl and she is right. Manik you are lucky. Most girls want their husbands to hate their mother but nandhini wants there to be peace and love". Aaryaman says with a smile.
Nandhini gulps and pretends to smile. She didn't want Aaryaman commenting about her.
"Aryaman I know nandhini more than you! Mujhe mat batao. Biwi ha woh meri! And younika is my mother. If I hate her its none of your business okay!" Manik says in anger, pointing at himself and storms out of the apartment in anger. Nandhini watches him walk out of the apartment in shock.
"Roko manik!" She yells but he had already left.
"Aaryaman khuda ka liya stay out of mine and maniks life. Seriously! She says in anger and Aaryaman was hurt by her bitterness.

He looks at her in anger and holds her arm and makes her face him.
"ESA kya boldiya mena? Tumhari tareef hi ki thi na? Am I not your friend like everyone else in this room? Am I not nandhini?" He yells and she just stares into her eyes.
"Jis dosti sa meri shaddi jeopardize ho, esi dosti nahi chaya mujhe!" Nandhini yells back in anger.
Everyone looks at her in shock.
"Kya hogaya ha tumhe nandhini? Manik ki toh purani adat ha bila waja gusa kerna ki. Tum esa kyew kerahi ho?" Mukti asks.
"Bila waja? We all know that Aaryaman has been crushing on me since college. Isi liya who meri shaddi mein nahi aya. Or isI liya Paris sa jaldi chala gaya! Sub KO pata ha. Do not pretend guys! I know that you all know!" Nandhini says as she looks at Aaryaman in anger.
"What?" Nandhini hears a manly voice. She recognized that voice more than her own voice. She opened her eyes wide and turned around and saw manik at the door. She could see anger build up on his face. He looked at Aaryman with eyes full of hate...

Precap: :p

will update in a few days i promise! PLEASE LIKE AND COMMENT! BIG COMMENTS! PLEASEE!

Edited by mebigirl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very well written!
Nice👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow .
Exciting drama
Excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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