sorry,as i commented that too so lately...so,forgive me...
I read the prologue ...it was brilliant...though i wasn't a fan of kaisi yeh yariaan...but still i enjoyed every bit of it...because of ur brilliant writing skills i didn't get a single chance to get any boring feelings within me...so,all credit goes to u...
This is an outstanding piece...for the very first time in my life i was enjoying while reading about a wedding...as i don't like to read about any wedding...i donno why...but yeah,i like to attend wedding function...
Trust me or not i'm amazed right now...
Chapter 1-brilliantly penned down by u...girls teasing the bride...elders emotional...bride & her bro moment...everything was perfect...
Manik made me laugh...this guy...uff...how can he say such thing...even i'm shocked..."nandini aj agar tumhe nahi ana to it's okay"that was truly adorable...
Boys teasing manik & girls teasing nandini...was too good...liked their convo...
Manan scene was outstanding...acche khase hot moment k bichme agaya sherwani aur jhumka...this part was romantic,hot...n at the same time hilarious...
Really brilliant...but now chappy 2... oh no...as i said earlier that i'm stuck with my e-mail address problem...& also my exams r hanging on my little head that's why i can't do anything about that...as i'm too busy...
& also i can't move further without reading chappy 2...
Donno what should i do now...
But lemme tell u 1 thing u written it brilliantly...
Edited by Aparikshita - 8 years ago