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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
IT'S VERY PAINFUL... WITHOUT ANY REASON NANDINI KI PARENTS NAE USSA PUNISH KIYA...
ASA KYU KIYA UNLOGO NAE???
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP...PRETTY PLZ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Who wants an update today??????

chalo update tak promo dekho...
if i get good response..atleast 2pgs comment i will upload next part till late night pakka !!!!!


PROMO:


Scene1:

Shekher: yess dad ... no dad... i'll see
on the other side of the fon...
"tmne abhi tk iss bare mein kuch kiya nai hai????
i told u ri8 our company needs a brand ambassador.. n
abhi youth ke liye tum nai
koi youth icon chaiye hame...
i told you to contact to Manik Malhotra..
uski abhi upcoming movie bhi n then a music album too...
he z really something...

Shekher : but dad...

shekher'sdad : shut up... shekher have u seen company's stock market position????
international market chodo v r lacking in india too...

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Scene 2:

Chaand Bi : nandu uth ja... school ka time ho gya
nandu [peeping from the blanket] :5 mins more chaand jaan... uske baad pakka...

till then both hear a voice...

"nandu...kaha ho miss Bak Bak"

hearing this she stood up on the bed

"chaand jaan im a sleeping?????? or what??" said a shocked nandu

chaand bi just smiled and said.."khud hi dekhlo"

***********END ************




So do tell me hoe was the promo..
and ye kon hai..who was calling nandu...
and Manik nandu ke dad ke company ka brand ambassador???
how will she react???????
chalo chalo comment n like fast if u want the update...

stay happiee
stay blessd

Okay Thanks Byee

Love Vidushi
Edited by chocopie26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33



SINGHANIA HOUSE

Guys plzz check the CHARACTER SKETCH once again i have made some changes..and added pics...so that u can connect to the characters easily
Edited by chocopie26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
AB KIS KA ENTRY HUA????
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP...
PRETTY PLZ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
nice promo
cabiraa toh nahi
nandu toh pagal ho jayega
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Interesting promo. Continue soon.thanks for pm
Keep smiling
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome promo dear...
Manik is going to be brand ambassador for nandini's dad's company..
She is going to be crazy hearing that...
Who is gonna take entry!?
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2

Recap: nandu slept after getting scolded from her parents...Chaand Bi left after seeing a sleeping nandu...


Nandini's POV :

Suddenly i started feeling something soft on my neck and my face...i shooed it away n try sleeping again ...again i felt some wetness on my cheecks...
and i quickly got the idea of who it was...

"urghhh...casperrr" i said all annoyed..n opened my eyes...
then i realised...i was sleeping on the floor in my school dress...

again casper "bhauu"
and i said " ok caspy i'm getting up first u get off me"
mst be thinking how i understood what he meant ...ofcourse he wanted me to get up..but he cudnt speak na it was his way to speak so i understood...

ok i for got to introduce Casper my dog
he is a Golden Retriever and very cute...i si love him...poore ghar mei he is the one who always listens to me...n never judges me




ok so now he was getting worked up cz he was telling me to get up n i wasnt so i rushed to my wardrobr took out my fav

cappery n crop top












My hair scattered lyk this n see the lazy me..i'm not gonna sttle it
I grabbed casper n went down...to see if the battle field was silent or something was gooing but to my surprise it was all clear...

i saw Chaand Jaan coming towards me so i asked her "Chaand Bi sb kaha hain"

to which she replied.."madam office gayi hain or sahab bhi unke saath gye hain"
then i asked " kya wo mujhse milne mere room mei aye thee???"

and she replied " nai unhone kaha hai apko ghar se bahar na jaane diya jae...ye apki saza hai"

"what!!! but mene kya kiya hai??" i asked out of shock...

"unhone toh yah kaha tha"...she replied looking into my eyes n coming towards me..
she cupped my face with he one hand n said "Nandu beta kuch khalo tumhe bhuk lagi hogi"

i was heartbroken..my own parents didnt care to check on their daughter who was crying...n left and added a punishment for the mistake which i myself don't knw...***sighs sadly**

"Mujhe bhuk nai hai Chaand Bi" i said sadly..

"ese kese bhuk nai hai..tmne subeh kuch dhang se khaya bhi nai..chalo khane betho" she argued...

"Pz na Chaand Jaan bilkul mann nai hai"i said i was really feeling low...

"thik hai toh main cheese pasta with red sauce..aur choco lava cake casper ko de deti hun" she said making a "what-else-can-I-do-look"

n i was like what i so love both of them...my fav they r ...

"nai nai mujhe boht bhuk lagi hai..khane chale" these words slipped my mouth

she gave a laugh and said "mujhe pata tha isliye toh saari tumhari pasand ki cheezein banayi"

aww she z so sweet...she cares so much...actually the real love a child gets from a mother i got it from Chaand Jaan ..she was my Nanny..

so i settled with casper on the table casper eat his dogg food n i ate my fav food...i shared my ice-cream with casper and Chaand Jaan

uske baad i went to the garden n sat on the swing... i was toking with casper till then my headaches entered

arrey my friends...

seeing them i sank in the pool of guilt cz of me they also lost the competition

"where the hell are u bitch" my bestiee Anji (anjiali) she bursted out...

" oh my god u r alive..mujh laga ye bandi gayi" anu said all dramatically

" pata hai tu apne "Manik Land" mei hogi...ri8" this tym it was aditi...she said teasingly

then i said

"will u speak cz u n silent z lyk me and poor" said shreya

"guys usko bolne doge tbhi toh bolegi na" manjari made snse


"sorry guys for everything..." i said with my eyes not meeting theirs

"for what" said anjali

"for being in Manik Land" said anu

"ajse pehle toh uske liye nai bola" said shreya n all laughed..

"guys be serious we have lost the competiton b4 it started...and all becz of me..i dint show up..we wanted to win this 1 last tym in this school it was our last year...i'm really very sorry " n a lone tear escaped my eyes..

anji side hugged me n said " shut up idiot ...i knw there z a reasn behind it..so spill the beans.."

"xactly we wanna knw aesa kya hua jiss se u missed it..."said anu

"sbse jada xcitef tu hi thi iske liye.." said manji

"infact meri neend ki band baja rkhi thi tune " this tym it was shreya

"wo mom dad ko pata chal gaya ki skipped school when tey were not here n got to knw that i did that for music practice..so they punished me not to go school for 2 more days...2 days i left from my will..and 2 days they will make me leave from their willl"

"iska mtlb poore 4 din ki chutti not bad" and here manjari is up with her lame joke
we all gave her a 'what-the-hell-are-you-toking-look

" i dont understand why they do that..." said shreya

"even i dont ...lets leave all this u all say how was day ??" i asked trying be cheerful...

"OMG nandu i missed u soo much today...esa hm mei so koi nai bolne wala hai.." that was my bestiee n our playing teasing and toking all sorts of shitt started...

in the evening they left...n i was again left alone i went up with a pizza i ordered n started reading my physics book as i have my 12th boards round the corner...

then my eyes fell on my tablet...ahh i dint used it today i opened it n boom so many notis on twitter insta hike ...uff i closed it n started studying...
now it was 10:00pm n no sign of mom dad...
i thot i'll wait for them n then eat..so i kept waiting in the living room with my concerntration on my tab n i was lying on the sofa...

after about 1hr i guess mom dad entered as soon as mom saw me she said

"dont u have manners how to sitt on sofa..?????" she said

n i was like plz not agaain so not adding much to the argument i said...

"sorry mom"

"what sorry..go to ur room n sleep"

"mom i was waiting for u all..lets have dinner together" i said really cutely

"we r systematic peole we had our dinner ...not lyk you no discipline at all" it was now dad

no way they ate n now scolding me

"Chaand Bi nandini ko khana de dijiye"mom shouted for Chaand Jaan

and mom dad left...

great whenever i try that everything will be fine to make it fine..sb spoil ho jata hai..i was standing in the hall disheartened..looking down..
chaand jaan was seeeing mei from the kitchen door with the dinner late...
she then came towards me caressed my head n said
"khalo beta"...

n my tears made their way
"Chaand Bi u knw na main toh unke saath dinner krna chahti thi...bs...maine jada manga kya??? why cant they be like normal parents... mo dad hamesha mujhe galat kyu samajhte hain??? kya maine sacchi koi galti ki hai... kya main itni buri hun...tht they find me worth their love??????"

i started blabbering i really needed to take this out i ran to my room..n crashed on my bed with tears all the time flowing from my eyes..i dig my face in the pillow i dint realised when sleep took over me




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NEXT MORNING



I woke up with Chaand Bi trying to wake me up

Chaand Bi : nandu uth ja... school ka time ho gya
nandu [peeping from the blanket] :5 mins more chaand jaan... uske baad pakka...

till then both hear a voice...

"nandu...kaha ho miss Bak Bak"

hearing this she stood up on the bed

"chaand jaan im a sleeping?????? or what??" said a shocked nandu

chaand bi just smiled and said.."khud hi dekhlo"


i ran down n what i saw made me fly in the air...

"Naina Di!!!!"


i xclaimed happily n ran towards her n hugged her tight...

"kesa hai mera chatter box???" she asked hugging me

"ekdm awesome!!!" i repleid

"di tum yahan achanak???" i asked breaking the hugg

"kyu nai aa skti" she said

"ab behen ke ghar aao toh sunn ne ko milta hai" she said dramatically

"Naina di tmko ni lagta..drama queen title mujhse hata ke Dadu ko tmhe de dena chaiye " n we both laughed...

then mom came out ... "Aa gyi Naina .." she said

"Ji ...hello chachi"...she said going towards mom n touched her feet for blessings...

"jao fresh ho jao then we will have breakfast together" she said n Naina di left for her room..


after di left i was also going back to me when mom stopped me

"Nandini" she said n i turned... an kya kiya maine

"yess mom" i said

"Naina jb tk yahan hai plz koi tamasha mt krna...warna tumhare dramas wo agar Papa ko jakr boldegi toh tumhare Dadu tumhe toh kuch nai bolenge but hume judge karenge so plz no nonsense"

n again i felt bad really bad.. how can she say that but controlling my emotions i said "okay mom" n she left from their

when i turned Naina Di standing on near the railing upstairs carrying a sad xpression...she heard everything ...i gave a faint smile to her and left

"What a start of my day...Good Morning Nandini" i said to myself while walking towards my room



@Naina's Room :

Naina Di's POV :

Chachi nandu ke saath ese kese behave kr skti hain...she z still the same...bechari meri chutki ... Mom Dad aplog kyu chale gaye ...but i'm glad mujhe hamesha apka love mila...i'm sure agr aplog hote toh Nandu ko bhi boht love dete n Chachi aur Chacha ko esa nai krne dete ...
she said looking at her parent's picture in her room...


@Study Room of Singhania House :


Shekher: yess dad ... no dad... i'll see
on the other side of the fon...
"tmne abhi tk iss bare mein kuch kiya nai hai????
i told u ri8 our company needs a brand ambassador.. n
abhi youth ke liye tum nai
koi youth icon chaiye hame...
i told you to contact to Manik Malhotra..
uski abhi upcoming movie bhi n then a music album too...
he z really something...

Shekher : but dad...

shekher'sdad : shut up... shekher have u seen company's stock market position????
international market chodo v r lacking in india too...

Shekher : okay i will tok to him...

after disconnecting the call Shekher called his manager to contact Manik Malhotra...



after sometym Shekher's manager told him that the meeting has been fixed after 2days cz only 30mins can be given by Manik as he has many commitments...getting necessary infos
Shekher diconnected the call ..


" Time to meet you Mr.Youth Icon"



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how was it?????????
yukkk...ri8???
long and boring...but seriously
merte dimag mei or kuch nai aa rha tha..
i'm really sorry for late n upar se
bakwas update...
plz like or comment kr dena...
write down kitna torture mila isko padhke i'm waiting...
n yeah next update Manik's Entry!!!!

Finally hero will be coming!!!!

All joote chappals tamatr ande..gaaliyaa accepted wholeheartedly

Stay Happie Stay Blessed

Okay Thanks Byee

Love Vidushi





Edited by chocopie26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
nice update
poor nandu
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. Nandini's hurtful state was emotional and well penned. Hats off.chaand bi and Caspar are the best. They know how to make nandini laugh.loved their part.nandini and her friends part was blissful. Wow new intro naina.her pov was amazing. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
Edited by archu_asok - 9 years ago

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