Tera mujhse hai pehle ka naata koi- Manan SS Ch 10 Pg 55

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Annieeeeiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Oh my god!!!!

What did I just read???!!!

I am using red fint colour for the first time ever in a comment but I thought red should be it.

This ...this was freaking beautiful. Every wird every sentence was so well written!

Where were you? Why did I not read this earlier?? Why?!!

The description you gave us of their eyes...I was dumbstruck. It was so apt. Yes I have read Fan-Rockstar lovestory in the forum alot but this one has a totally different...umm special aura around it.

I literally imagined a little picture of the tiny shinning star of a keychain. Ufff.

WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE NEXT?

Pls buddy me I am unable to buddy you for reasons unknown and umm thanks.

Ciao

Annanya

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nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Awesome so different and lovely story u are really a awesome writer awesome continue soon...waiting eagerly for next update

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ruchi116

@ruchi116

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Awesome update n amazing story dear waiting for more manan scenes update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Kuushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

I'm the first to comment..yayy..
That was awesome..manan and their bechainiyan
Another apt song for the situation..he just want another glance of her
and she wanted to make sure his wish turned true..uff all the excitement
And suddenly the gun shot and a cliffhanger..so not fair now can't wait for the next chapter
Hope everyone is safe and Nandini and navya amongst the stampede that will follow hope they are safe
And you are having fun turning every story into a mystery/ suspense thriller but admire your writing skills you bring something unexpected with each update and that keeps us hooked to the story..please continue soonish and keep manan and all their friends safe..will be waiting for the next chapter and thanku for the pm :)

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Adeeba

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Awww
This part <3

Emotions described so well .

Friendship - I honestly adore the bond these five share . Lovely . They are always there through thick and thin .
Hate - Towards the so called mother .
Longing - For a love filled life .

He being her need to becoming his love .
Him trusting her so much to give away his prices possession : his star .
Her loving him so much to let him go , only to come back to her .
Bliss <3

I usually skip the songs part
But this song is so apt for the situation and Manik's condition described so well .
Nandini understanding him and his feelings .
Certainly , ' Tera Mujhse Hai Pehle Ka Nata Koi' <3

But the end ? :(

Girl , you write amazingly well .
Thankyou for the message .
-God bless