Tera mujhse hai pehle ka naata koi- Manan SS Ch 10 Pg 55

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Awww so lovely update...but gunshot..omg...waiting eagerly for next update continue soon waiting eagerly

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Kiran

@kk.4

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Beautiful update dear... Loved it👏⭐️

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ishikaaa

@ishikaaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

So beautiful.. And the selection of song was fabulous it was clearly depicting their state of heart.. 😊
And manik he s behaving lyk a love sick puppy who just want to get one glimpse of those pair of mesmerizing eyes.. 😛
And nandini was about to make his wish complete 😃
But that sudden gun shot ruined it 😡
Cliffhanger..
U know what I have a gut feeling that nandu belong to some gangster's family..and that gun shot was to find nandu only 😕
Well I guess my confusion will gonna clear in next update right... 😊
Waiting fr d next update dear..
Update soon.. 😊

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Sumaiya

@Poushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

GUNSHOT???!!!!
KYA MANIK KI UPAR HAMLA HUA???
IS MANAN ALRIGHT???
PATA NAHI MANAN KASA EK7 HOGI????
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP...

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ankita627

@ankita627

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Awsm story yar...u nailed it..u r superb writer...plzzz PM me if possible...
i hope manan thik ho or manik nandu ko dhund nikale...hope...

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Uff mannn, I must say you are something, I mean wer do you get such ideas and you express dat beautifully.

I only started reading it after getting ur pm and I completed it in a go. So I will start from the first chappy.

I loved d way you explained fab4 ,and der tension for Manik not reaching on time and care for his speed driving.

Nandini, she z adamant to see her rock star rushing to reach der.

Loved the way nanya support her friend, and der idea to jump through the backside wall.

Den dey met, she n secure hands. You really penned it beautifully both of their pov's. Her trust for him, der untold words.

He z ready to give his star to her, and she kept it.

Manik sings a so for her, awe. I loved it.

But wat was dat happened at the end, I hope manan are safe.

Please continue soon.

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rockstarlover

@rockstarlover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Its so beautiful
Manik started 2 love Mumbai 4 Nandini so cute😊
Cabir understood😉
Manik literally expressed his feelings in his song
Loved it dearly
But at the end what was that?😕
Continue soon

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ruchi116

@ruchi116

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Awesome update who has been shot waiting for manans scene

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vsk29

@vsk29

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Beautiful... It was soo ecstatic! You write sooo well n I really hoped that manik would see Nandini!! N the gunshot😲who was it plz update soonish n let us know!! Thank you so much for the pm