#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1 - Page 67

Awesome update

And that was wow
Superb update gal
Take a bow
I'm just loving the way u taking this story fwd
Good job done gal

Awww superb update like I don't feel emotional reading but I felt all awww coz the best part I love in all your updates s haaq jathana n tat u showed it jus awesome lovely...
The morning s jus blissful the way nandu exolained how manik snuggling more into her jus wow awww manini bichari but still she s loving it too much too much awww moment
Hehe manik jus kw nandu so well in one sec he vkcatch her but nandu at least shud talk to him n clear uska maan me rakhna se she s hurting herself n manini manik too...
Father n daughter duo was blissful hehe best art was when manini ask shall i shave hehe n manik hilarious evn u wanna barber like ur mom Hahaha hilarious tat was
How much eve nandu s angry she still cares awww too good
Mitin Gaya seriously monster ke punch zyada dur nahi hehe
Manini s best the way she trouble rose n rewa s Rolf superb tat was
Awww I love manik haaq on nandu yup after all she s only his hehe too good
I was expecting him to come back but woh aake kiss karegi not expected
Best dialog no one tel me my right on my wife superb it was
Jus wow update loving it too much can't wait for next update to see nandu reaction
Ur best n evrythinh u wrote so perfectly jus wow dear

Lots of love
Pravallika

thanku for the weekend dose

Its awesome... I read it twice... Manini want to shave her daddy & she did it but manik got hurt but still he want his bet... Angry nandu is so cute... I always love jelous manik... Noone should questions manik right on his wife not even nandu this was best... Will be waiting for nxt prt
Thanks for Pm

Awesome...

awesome update...

Finally u update

Awseome...
Mazza aa gya...
Morning part loved it...manik & his tatics to draw nandu's attention...
Awww...manini so cute...always trouble rewa & his chamchi rose...
Jealous manik loved it...aaisa hi hona
chaihye iske saath always chipkta ratha hai rewa ke saath 😡 ...
Swimming pool part loved it...
Manan ka tashan 😆 ...aur bechara mitin...
Faltu me bechare ko apne jaghde me phasa rhe manan...
Uff...manan fight in their room...
I think nandini is right at some places...becausre he
tries to justify his relation with rewa whether she is s frnd or collugue...
Now monster manik is back...nandu ne bahut gussa diliya hai...
Hamesha nandu hi jealous kyu hoye,make manik jealous wo bhi bahut saara...
Continue soon...
😊 😊 😊